The following is a text message sent by a senior high school graduate to his class teacher. There are many inappropriate things in the language. Please find them and correct them.

(1) The word "build" has too strong a meaning and is an inappropriate word choice. It should be changed to "improve".

(2) "Defending" refers to retaining the last championship title in the competition, which should be changed to "admitted to college."

(3) "Knowing Gold with a Wisdom Eye" calls himself "gold", which is inappropriate. It should be changed to "don't give up" (as long as the meaning is correct).

(4) "Being extraordinary and becoming a saint" describes the peak of knowledge and accomplishment. It is too exaggerated and should be changed to "beyond others".

(5) "Admired" is inappropriate, so change it to "very respectful".

(6) "A farewell is like rain" describes that it is difficult to see each other again after separation, which is inappropriate and should be changed to "parting".