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In study, work or life, everyone has written a composition, which can be divided into narrative, explanatory, practical and argumentative according to different genres. I believe many people will find it difficult to write a composition. The following is an excellent greeting composition compiled by me for your reference only. Let's have a look.

Greetings to excellent composition 1 One day in May, it is warm and comfortable. After school at noon, my mother smiled and said to me, "Shunshun, you see the weather is so good today. We haven't seen bask in the quilt for a long time. Let's take the quilt out to dry! " I nodded. Yes, the weather is very good today. Grandfather Sun generously dropped the gorgeous sunshine from the sky, and everything seemed so clear and bright. My mother and I are holding the quilt on the clothesline outside the building. Think about the fluffy and soft quilt at night, and the warm greetings from Father Sun, not to mention how comfortable it is.

The afternoon was sunny and cloudless in Wan Li. However, after the second class, I saw a big dark cloud floating from a distance. Although not thick, it is very threatening. Before it completely blocked the bright sunshine of the sun, I couldn't wait to show my strength and blew a cool breeze. In a short time, in the whistling wind, beads of rain as big as beans were scattered. Although they are not dense, they are like summer characters-simple and clear. It suddenly occurred to me that my quilt was still outside. At night, won't it be a drowned rat?

When the rain didn't stop after school, as soon as I got on the bus, my mother frowned and sighed: "Alas, Shunshun, I really shouldn't have been in bask in the quilt today." I quickly asked, "Are the quilts all wet?" Who knows my mother looked angry: "it's worse than this, I lost my quilt!" " "It turned out that my mother went home to collect the quilt after watching the weather change in the afternoon, only to find that the clothesline was empty. I don't understand: "Who will get our quilt? "Mom frowned and said," I heard that someone stole clothes to dry, but I didn't expect the thief to greet us this time. " I shook my head helplessly: "What bad luck! "My mother comforted me:" Nothing, let's go home and use a new quilt. The old ones don't go, and the new ones don't come. "Speaking of which, I can see that my mother is still very angry and didn't speak all the way.

When I got home, I really saw the clothesline soaked by rain swaying in the wind and rain. Shortly after I entered the room, I heard a knock at the door. My mother opened the door and saw Grandma Wang standing at the door holding my quilt. My mother understood at once: "Aunt, you help me put away the quilt. Come in and sit down. " Grandma Wang is still standing at the door, handing the quilt to her mother and saying, "I thought you were all at work, so I took it back for you." Mother said shyly, "I thought it was a little sneaky." Thank you for your family, thank you very much. " Grandma Wang smiled and said, "How dare a thief steal under my nose in broad daylight? I am at home every day, and I am a neighbor. Let me know if there is anything. " Mother said gratefully, "You usually help enough, thanks to your neighbors."

Yes, thanks to Grandma Wang, the neighbor. Every time we go on a trip during the summer vacation, she helps us watch the door. We don't have a mailbox at home, and she always takes the trouble to help us pack up newspapers and magazines for us. Sometimes when you cook delicious food at home, you always bring us a bowl to taste. Sometimes when I come home from school without my key, she will enthusiastically let me go to her house to do my homework. ...

Greeting excellent composition II. I haven't been home for another week, and my homesickness is overwhelming. By the way, when I left last time, my mother caught a bad cold and had a bad headache. I don't know if it's good now. Let's call and say hello during the break. The school is far from home, so I can only call.

"Hey, Mom! I am happy, are you at home? "

"Well, what's the matter?" Hearing my voice, my mother's thick nasal voice was full of joy.

"Nothing, just a little homesick ..."

"Your voice has changed! Have you caught a cold？ Look, I told you to be careful. Take medicine quickly! " Mother interrupted me in a reproachful and nervous tone.

"Nothing, nothing."

"Mouth shut! How are you? If something happens, it will be late! It's getting cold, so put on more clothes and thick clothes. Just wear the red coat you bought last autumn, which is the one where you have worn out the cuffs and I embroidered a butterfly on it. Remember? You still say it doesn't look good, so what's the matter? Just wear it, whether it looks good or not! Our family can't compare with other families, so it's better to learn. You can live up to your expectations! "

"I ... I will ..." My heart was sour.

"Do you still wear those green sandals? Don't wear it. It's no time. Put your feet on first in case you catch a cold. Put on those new shoes. Also, soak your feet with hot water at night. It was good on TV, remember? "

"I see, I'll buy medicine right away."

"Know what medicine to take? Just eat that ... what? "

"Amoxicillin."

"yes! Amoxicillin. A cold can cause a sore throat, so eat quickly. And that scalper ... Niuhuang Jiedu Pill. Let's eat together Remember to take medicine after meals to avoid hurting your stomach. Bring some boiled water. Don't you have a thermos? Pour it into a cup to dry, and then drink it when it is cold. Don't burn it. Don't drink cold water either. It's bad for your stomach. Buy medicine according to the date, don't buy expired ones. Are you listening? Go to bed at night and tuck in. You are dishonest and always push the quilt. By the way, the weather forecast says it will rain these two days. Don't run around. It's not the same time that you caught a cold in the rain! Hey, do you remember? "

"Remember."

"All right, call again. I'll cook you good food during the holiday, greedy girl! Ok ... "

Put the phone down. Oh, I forgot to ask my mother if she has recovered from her cold!

Simplified translation

In this paper, the dislocation method is used in writing, which makes the article produce excellent expression effect. Dislocation, as the name implies, is the mutual error of position. For example, according to the plan, we should get some results, but the final result is not what we thought in advance. When writing an article in a wrong place, there will be waves, which will generate great interest.

The title of the article is "Greeting Mom", which should be written as "I care about my mother", but the main idea is maternal love, and the emotional flow is misplaced. The subjective "greeting my mother" was mistakenly changed to the objective "my mother cares about me", which made my mother's concern for me occupy the main space. The inversion of purpose and result can highlight the mother's love for me. This dislocation makes the highlights of the article sudden and surprising.

(Recommended by Teacher Wang Haiyan)

Greeting excellent composition 3. Everyone in the family is asleep, lying in bed, but they can't sleep at all. I picked up a book and read it, but the more I read it, the more energetic I became. I just got dressed, got out of bed and came to the study. Picking up the phone, my friend sent a short message and decided to write an article about it.

Nowadays, few people write letters. Almost everyone who earns money has his own mobile phone, and some people have two or more mobile phones. At present, mobile phones are carried with you, and it is difficult to receive greetings from relatives and friends except work letters. While the mobile phone brings convenience, it also gradually takes away the feelings of missing people who are far away, as well as the feelings expressed with pens.

Just in the Spring Festival of 20xx, I wanted to call my relatives and friends to pay a New Year call, but because the line was too busy, many calls could not be made at all. I used SMS to pay New Year greetings, and I also received many messages of blessing. So the news almost got out.

I remember not long ago, during the Dragon Boat Festival, at 4 o'clock in the morning, I received a message of blessing from my friends, and then I received some one after another, and some were from other provinces. I am very happy to receive short messages from my friends about saving energy. At the same time, I also sent some messages of blessing, including friends and relatives. In fact, it is a feeling, a concern and a nostalgia.

Some friends, for one reason or another, have to leave their hometown and make a living alone in other places. For such friends, I have been keeping in touch with them by short messages, paying attention to their lives and sending them blessings, wishing them all the best and peace.

I remember that whenever there was a meeting or it was inconvenient, I would set my mobile phone to vibrate, and some calls could not be answered or could not be answered at that time. When a short message came, I understood each other's consciousness. The latter knows what he wants to know, which is really convenient, without trace, and everyone is very happy with each other.

There are also some friends around me who send some funny news from time to time, which makes me feel happy and happy after my busy work. I feel that short message has become a literary expression in the new century, and a greeting fashion in the new century is sweeping in an irresistible trend. Affect society and everyone. Short message literature is approaching everyone. Like the Internet, it has merged into a new social trend, which is impacting everyone.

In addition, there are some quiz messages, interesting messages and work messages. It seems that short messages are accompanying you, me and him, gradually replacing letters and sometimes telephone calls. Now, the convenience of short messages is gradually accepted and enthusiastic by everyone.

This friend who sent me a text message is currently working in other places. I know he misses his family and friends. Finally, I use the short message sent by my friend as the end of this article: no matter how gorgeous the flowers are, they will eventually wither, and no matter how beautiful the sunrise is, they will eventually fall. However, friends are eternal, green mountains are laughing and green waters are affectionate. No matter how the world changes and how far away it is, the word "brother" will never fade.