Variant rhetoric short message

Nowadays, SMS has become an important communication means for people to exchange ideas, greet each other and express various friendships.

The biggest feature of short message is its simplicity and strong situational, which requires that the language must be concise and meaningful, and convey the most information with the least number of words, which can directly examine students' language application ability. In addition, when writing short messages in the same situation, you should have creative thinking ability and be good at using novel forms and unique words to express your true feelings, which can better reflect the writer's language application ability and creative thinking ability.

Because short messages come from life, close to life and show life, compiling short messages can well test students' language application ability, which belongs to the category of "concise, coherent and appropriate" language, and the ability level is D. Therefore, in today's college entrance examination Chinese proposition is becoming more and more life-oriented, compiling mobile phone short messages has become the choice of many provinces and cities. For example, a topic in the Chinese exam of the college entrance examination is: "Please send a blessing message to your classmates. You need to use a myth or fairy tale and use personification or figurative rhetoric. " This topic not only connects with real life, but also examines students' rhetorical application and imagination, and students like it very much.

This paper discusses the characteristics of short messages and how to use them, hoping to help teachers and students hone their language.

First, the characteristics of SMS:

1, the theme is prominent: greetings, blessings, confession and other purposes are clear.

2, concise: SMS does not exceed 70 words, generally 35 crosses. In addition, both sides should pay attention to being concise when understanding things.

3. Appropriate language: The language and content of SMS must pay attention to the occasion, the identity of both parties, general courtesy and civilized language.

4. Unique conception: A wonderful short message should be exquisitely conceived and unforgettable. For example, let peace take the subway to winter, let happiness be with you, make health and auspiciousness indispensable, and make warmth and happiness endless. Happy New Year!

5. Rich literary talent: A good short message should pay attention to literary talent, and pay special attention to the use of rhetorical devices (antithesis, metaphor, parallelism, etc. For example, the wind is soft and rainy, the flowers are full of branches, and the winter is gone and the spring is like water! Happy life is accompanied every day, and its moments of beauty are expected every year! Time flies! Life needs happiness! Say take care, say peace! I wish you a happy New Year!

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Second, the general method of writing short messages

1, the metaphor is reasonable

Metaphor is also a common method when writing short messages. Using metaphor can make language lively and interesting, give readers more imagination and enhance aesthetic effect.

Example: You are the kindling, igniting the students' hearts; You are a stone step, bearing the footsteps of my steady upward climb; You are a candle, burning yourself and illuminating others.

The highlight of this short message is that it uses three metaphors to express gratitude to the teacher on Teacher's Day, which is very creative and literary.

2. The contrast is clever

Contrast is also a method that should be paid attention to when writing short messages. By using contrast, two different sides of a thing can set off each other and complement each other, thus leaving a deep impression on readers.

Example: A meteor streaked across the sky, and I missed my wish; The waves beat against the rocks, and I missed the blessing; The story was told once, but I didn't listen; There is only one life, and I'm glad I didn't miss you as a good friend! Invite you to enjoy the moon tonight!

This short message first uses three "misses" to create momentum, aiming to show their deep friendship by comparing with the latter "no miss".

3. Duality is very good

Duality is also a common rhetorical device in short message editing. If used properly, it will definitely make literary talent brilliant.

Example: The Yellow River is rolling and the Yangtze River is surging, with a long history. Walking in the waters of Qian Shan, experiencing bumpy mileage, creating brilliance and breath. Touched! Moved by this, so far, the whole country in Qi Huan is celebrating and sharing happiness.

In this short message, from the "Yellow River" and "Yangtze River" into the topic, the use of duality, so that the sentence is neat and decent, open and close naturally, very literary.

4, parallelism shows momentum

Parallelism is one of the most commonly used rhetorical methods in short message writing. Using parallelism, the sentence pattern is neat and symmetrical, the rhyme is powerful and the rhythm is strong, which can produce a rainbow-like momentum.

Example: the bright moon, twinkling, hangs on the horizon; Miss, a little bit, connect into a line; Memories, scene after scene, unfold before us; May people get together every year!

This short message successfully uses parallelism, and through the use of parallelism, it expresses the thoughts of friends during the Mid-Autumn Festival. Reading in one go really increases motivation.

5. Levels convey profound meanings.

When editing short messages, layered sending is also a common method. It can express progressive things by using sentences with similar structure and rising or falling content.

Example: My romantic heart, full of blessings, is quietly sent to you. I wish you peace every minute, contentment every moment and happiness every day and night! Whenever and wherever, don't forget that my blessing won't go far.

This short message extends the time range in turn through "every minute", "every moment" and "day and night", subtly expressing endless blessings to friends.

6. The gyro is really great.

Real skills are also one of the most commonly used methods to edit short messages. In one go, people feel the feeling of short messages in a very short time.

For example, there are faint poems in the long clouds, endless joy in the faint poems, and my gentle greetings during the Spring Festival!

This short message, in the most authentic way, is wonderful and unusual, light and affectionate, and it is a pleasure to read. This is the beauty of a real technology.

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7, overlapping words to increase color

Using reduplicated words is also a common way to write short messages, which can naturally express meaning on the basis of concise overlapping.

Exodus: The long road cannot change Kuafu's determination to chase the sun; The vast sea can't destroy Jingwei's will to fill the sea; Shallow bays can only add deep homesickness, but they can't shake our belief in unity. Taiwan Province Province, come back!

In this short message, three overlapping words "long", "boundless" and "shallow" are used to express the good wishes of Taiwan Province Province to return to the embrace of the motherland at an early date.

8. See the truth again and again

Repetition is a common method of short message editing. It can play the role of emphasizing emotion, so it is widely loved by people.

For example, the Mid-Autumn Festival is full of flowers, your home is round, my home is round, and every family is reunited; National Day is a festival celebrated by all ethnic groups, including Jiangnan, Jiangbei and the whole country.

This is a typical short message, written in a repetitive way, expressing the national reunion and celebration during the Mid-Autumn Festival.

9. Rhyme endows literary talent

Rhyme is also a skill in writing short messages. Rhyme makes short messages catchy to read, produces a strong sense of rhythm and music, and often achieves unforgettable results.

Example: smile at night and have a good sleep; Smile in the morning, and life will be full of emotions; Laugh after work, and the room is full of joy and excitement; Smile when you are upset and forget all your troubles!

This short message rhymes with the words "laugh", "sleep", "tone" and "drip". It is touching to read and expresses good wishes to friends in a relaxed and lively atmosphere.

10, reversing and adding humor

The reversal of language is often the solemnity of the previous language, which seems to describe a topic that most people can think of, but in the end, it suddenly turns and has a hilarious ending.

Why did you leave without telling me? I can only dream until dawn with you every night. The night without you is long and bleak. Come back, dear! ..... my quilt.

This short message uses the technique of inversion and has achieved unexpected results. Similar to "How painful it is to leave. Your leaving will make me feel at a loss. I really want you to live with me, but ... Mom said,' There are no pigs at home!' ""After reading it, it really made people laugh.

1 1, the story tells the truth.

Sometimes it's more touching to make up a unique story. It integrates some special emotions into a detailed description, which is easy to move people.

For example, if there is an afterlife, let's be a pair of little mice, love each other foolishly, live foolishly, snuggle awkwardly and be together foolishly. When the mountains are closed by snow and ice, we nest in the warm hay, I hug you and feed you the stolen food.

In this short message, a pair of lovers are compared to a pair of mice, and their love is written by some cute actions of the mice, which is touching.

12, pun intended

Homophonic pun is also one of the methods often used in short message compilation. It looks atmospheric and cultured, so it is often unforgettable.

For example, the New Year is the hope in my heart; A new beginning, a spiritual harvest; A new starting point, happiness in my heart. May happiness and wealth be with you forever. Happy New Year!

In this short message, "heart" and "new" are mainly homophonic, so as to make puns, draw inferences and emphasize repeatedly, thus expressing the blessings of the Spring Festival incisively and vividly.

13, clever use of digital series

Sometimes using numbers correctly and arranging some numbers in a certain order will also produce unexpected results.

For example: a cold and warm sentence, but a noisy line; A reminder, a passing note; A lovesickness, looking forward to it with one heart; A friendship, a lifelong concern.

This short message uses the number "one" to express the yearning for friends and the persistence of friendship, which can be described as ingenious and natural.

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Third, the exam questions should be practiced first.

1, it's Mother's Day. In order to express my gratitude to my mother for her hard work and wish her a happy holiday, please send her a short message, which should be concise, coherent, literary and creative, with no more than 60 words.

On the occasion of the Double Ninth Festival, please send a short message to your friends for many years, asking: ① sincere feelings; ② No more than 60 words.

Please send a short message to your relatives or friends on the occasion of Christmas. The requirements are: ① Suitable for specific situations; 2 sincere feelings; ③ No less than 40 words.

Your classmate is a senior 3 student in a foreign school. He sent you a short message saying that he/she was depressed because he/she was facing the college entrance examination and lacked confidence. Please send him (her) a short message to encourage him (her) to overcome himself, face the college entrance examination bravely, and wish him (her) good results in the college entrance examination. Language should be concise, coherent, literary and creative, with no more than 100 words.

Reference answer:

1. Looking at my mother's white hair and wrinkled face, please accept my deepest blessing to her mother, who has worked hard for many years to bring me up.

It's autumn, the weather is cool, and Hongyan is moving south. Red flowers make the cold rise. When it is cold, put on a thick coat. Look at the yellow chrysanthemum with melancholy, and the cream is thicker and more fragrant. Send good luck, reward hard work and help health. May people be healthy every day!

3. Every snowflake falls, every firework is lit, every second flows, and every miss is delivered. Represents every blessing I want to give you!

4. Without the wind and waves, the strength of sails cannot be demonstrated; Without twists and turns, you can't taste the joy of life; Throw away those unnecessary laments, take a man's heart and walk down-to-earth through these bumpy and changeable years, and you will find the rainbow more charming after the storm!