Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition.

In daily life or work and study, everyone often comes into contact with composition. With the help of composition, we can improve our language organization ability. How to write a composition to avoid stepping on thunder? Here is my dad. I want to tell you an excellent composition. I hope it will help you.

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 1 Dad, although we get along day and night, I still want to tell you something from my heart when I am writing my homework.

In my mind, you are a good father. Although you are a township teacher, you are busy at work every day, but you can always be seen after school in the afternoon. You know I study hard, so every weekend you will take me to beautiful scenic spots to enjoy the scenery; You know I don't like secondhand smoke, so I'm determined to give up smoking. You know it's inconvenient for me to go to school by bus, so you will come to see me off every time I go to a meeting in the bureau or study in a school in the city. Even if the company arranged a working meal, you wouldn't pick me up. You care about me in every way. In my mind, you are a "four good fathers" who don't play cards, smoke, drink or lose their temper.

But you know what? You also have a fly in the ointment: sometimes you don't pay attention to what I say.

Dad, you know what? When you are thinking, talking to others and watching the news on the computer. I'm sorry that you ignored me when I was talking to you. I remember once, my family of three went to see a new car. After reading it, I expressed my opinion. I told you several times, but you ignored me. Finally, I got impatient and shouted, "Dad, will you listen to me or not?" "Don't listen!" I didn't expect you to answer me like this. At that time, my eyes were full of tears, and my heart was pricked with thousands of needles, and I was bleeding. Another time, one of your colleagues asked me to bring you something. You were watching the news on the computer. I called you several times to no avail, so I shouted at you, "Dad!" " "ah!" You finally woke up, and I don't want to tell you, but I can't, so I have to tell you again.

Dad, in order not to break my heart, get rid of this bad habit! Try to be a good father, okay?

Dad, I want to say to you: Mom and Dad, first of all, I want to thank you for bringing my sister and me to this beautiful world. You gave us life and let us grow up healthily.

Mom and Dad, you always let my sister and I eat better and sleep better than you. Once, you came home from work and bought eight baked wheat cakes to eat with us. Our sisters each ate two biscuits, while you each ate only one. I asked you to eat another one, but you said sadly, "Yin Yin, Yiyi, each of you has one of the remaining two baked cakes!" " We're not hungry, let's eat while it's hot! "Also, the bed you sleep in is always so hard, and our sister's bed is always as soft as cotton. How comfortable we sleep, how uncomfortable you sleep.

Mom and dad, you are so cute. Every Friday, when we come home from school, you always put delicious snacks in front of us so that we can eat enough. At this time, you always stand quietly, staring at my sister and me. That look is undoubtedly saying: as long as the daughter eats well, mom and dad are the greatest comfort.

Mom and Dad, although you usually nag, I know that every nagging is a kind of love.

Every day when I come home from school, I always ask us, "Is there much Chinese homework? Is there much math homework? " When I brought my schoolbag into the room, you said, "Go and do your homework!" " "I took out my exercise book and you said," Write neatly and hold your head high! " "In the middle of my writing, you said," Have you finished your homework? Hurry up! "

Mom and dad, at ordinary times, there will inevitably be some small frictions between us, but these will not affect our love. Mom and dad, I want to say to you: "I love mom and dad!" " "

Dad, I want to say excellent composition 3 to you. Dear dad, you have worked hard! Today, I want to tell you something from my heart.

Dad, you are usually so busy that you don't even have time to rest, let alone accompany me. As soon as you get up in the morning, you run to the company. You have to talk to many clients about the house and train employees. In the evening, you need to have a meeting with the uncles in the company. It will take two or three hours to start. When you got home, I was already asleep. Sometimes it's too late and you have to sleep in the dormitory. If you are hungry, you can eat in any restaurant outside. You can't go home if you have social intercourse. Sometimes I envy my uncles in the shop because you are with them every day.

One day, when you dragged your tired body back, I said sadly, "Dad, you are so busy every day, you must be very tired." Why not take a few days off to work? " Stay with me for two days. "But you said," I'm not tired. I'll accompany you when you are free. "Hearing this, I was sad and distressed. I am sad that my father can't accompany me, and I am distressed by my father's hard work. I made up my mind that when I grow up, I must repay my parents and let you live in the best environment, wear the best, eat the best, live the best, and everything is the best. I will study hard in the future, so as not to let you worry about me and be an excellent student.

Dear dad, I want you to have a rest and not be so tired. Dad, my biggest wish is to see you every day, so that the family can have dinner together and you can play with me for a while. Dad, stay with me. If you don't, I'll grow up.

Dad, I want to say to you: Dad, you are like a big tree to shelter me from the wind and rain. You should work hard for us every day. I want to say to you: thank you! In addition, I still have a lot of heartfelt words to say to you, but I haven't had a chance to say them. Let's take this opportunity to take them off my chest today!

Dad, I want to say to you: stop drinking. Long-term drinking will anesthetize the brain, and the alcohol contained in the wine is not good for the body. Do you remember our neighbor who lives next door? It was he who drank ten Jin of wine and died suddenly in his sleep. And every time you finish drinking, kind-hearted you will scold me and hit me inexplicably. Do you know how much this hurts me? I hope you don't drink any more!

Dad, I want to say to you: stop drunk driving. After drinking, I feel dizzy and can't walk steadily, let alone drive. That time, you drove very fast in the street. It didn't take long for you to rush to a big truck. I was scared: I was dead. What should I do? Fortunately, you turned the steering wheel to the right in time to avoid the big truck, so there was no danger to your life. Dad, for the sake of life safety, stop drunk driving, okay?

Dad, I want to say to you: you must wear a seat belt when driving in the future. I still remember that you showed me a video in which a bus suddenly stopped without wearing a seat belt and everyone on board flew. Because of this, someone was injured. After watching that video, I realized that the role of seat belts was so great. So, you promise to fasten your seat belt when driving!

Dad, I know this is not easy for you, but you must take care of yourself.

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. Dad, you have a high position in my mind. However, I still want to give you some advice. Do you mind?

Dad, in recent years, you often go out to eat and drink at night and come home very late. But you know what? This not only affects your sleep, but also many cars run red lights at night! Seeing this, you must be thinking: the police just detained those drivers who ran red lights! But, you know, people who run red lights happen without the police!

Also, once I cut the sofa at home, I know you like that sofa very much, but you must understand your daughter's mood! I know, dad. Next time, it won't scratch the sofa at home or damage other furniture. Here is another view. Dad, since I learned calligraphy, you have often read my handwriting. When I come back, you write some examples and draw some legends. I have no problem with which words should be written properly. But, dad, I want to tell you that now that I'm writing, can you write examples instead of legends on my working paper?

Ok, dad, now that I'm grown up, such as drawing a sofa, I won't do it anymore, and my pen writing has made great progress. When I win the prize, you can teach me to write Chinese calligraphy. Can you make a deal? Dad, I hope you can do as I say. When you correct my opinion, I have grown up!

Mom's comment: This is a composition that the child learned Chinese test questions a few days ago. First of all, thank the teacher for giving the child a chance to express his love to his father. After reading this article, my father was deeply touched and wanted to "repent". I didn't expect the child to talk and laugh with him all day, and there are so many opinions, all of which are very pertinent and worth thinking about and correcting.

Dad, I want to say excellent composition 6 to you. Dear mom and dad, thank you! Thank you for raising my sister and me. You are a towering mountain peak. You are a big umbrella to shelter us from the wind and rain. In my heart, you are the greatest, and there is no greater person in the world than you.

In retrospect, I was always disobedient and gave you a lot of trouble. I remember that time, my family went to climb the mountain, and the mountain road was very steep. When I climbed halfway up the mountain, I accidentally stepped on it. I was very scared at that time. Seeing that the stone at the foot is about to fall, at this moment, a pair of big hands hold up the stone at the foot. Look, it's dad! Dad told me to slow down, but because of that stone, my father's hand was cut, and I was very sad. Finally, we reached the top of the mountain, and our family sat in the open space to have a rest. I saw another beautiful wild chrysanthemum, ready to pick one. Father said, "It's too steep there. You'd better not go, or I'll go with you." Say that finish, dad got up and left with me. I walk in front and my father protects me in the back. Just as I was happily picking chrysanthemums, a mosquito flew over and I reached out to fight. As a result, I lost my other hand and fell. My father hugged me at once, but the wild flowers were gone, and I was very sad. My mother comforted me and said, "Life is more important, or wild flowers are more important?" I said life is important, so I'm not so sad. Down the mountain, my mother said, "You go down first, and I'll go down later." After a while, my mother came down from the mountain, but she brought me a bunch of beautiful wild chrysanthemums. Look at mom, her face and legs are cut by weeds. I hugged my mother and cried and said, "Thank you!"

Mom and Dad, I love you forever!

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. Dad, I want to say a thousand words to you, but I'm too nervous to talk to you every time. Today, I want to tell you something through this composition.

Dad, you are a good father and you are very patient. Whenever I talk to you about the Olympic math problem, you won't be angry because I don't understand or disagree with your point of view. You will take the trouble to teach me until I fully understand.

Dad, the wrinkles on your face are the traces left by years and the testimony of your efforts. Therefore, your temper will become irritable from time to time. A grumpy mood can make people irritable. I'm in grade five. Whenever I try to finish my homework and want to talk to you, you always say, "Can't you see I'm busy?" Or "leave me alone and go away". At this time, I miss you so much! Companionship is the best gift. Dad, I will go to junior high school in two years. At that time, our communication time will be greatly reduced. So, please spend more time with me now, and don't always work overtime, ok?

It is a well-known truth that driving without drinking and drinking without driving. Although you have done all this, Dad, there is still a basic principle that you haven't done, that is, don't get angry while driving. Anger is the taboo of driving. I remember once on Gongruishan Road, you flew into a rage because the other side almost wiped our car, and rushed out of the car with a Swiss army knife on you, as if you were desperately looking for each other. This scared me to death! It's not worth being so impulsive for a little thing. The cause of this incident is actually road rage. Road rage will endanger each other's safety and affect the safety of the whole family. Peace is bliss! So, dad, please try to correct it. Long live understanding, okay?

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. 8 Dear Dad:

Hello!

Dad, I have a lot to say to you, but I dare not tell you. This time, I will explain it to you in words!

Dad, I'm here to thank you for raising me.

Dad, I want to give you some advice now. I hope you will listen. Dad, I wish you would smoke less and stop thinking about smoking all the time. I remember once, my mother and I begged you not to smoke several times, but you just wouldn't listen; On that occasion, my mother forbade you to smoke. Although you agreed at that time, after a while, I smelled smoke again, so I walked over with it. "ah! Why do you smoke in the toilet? Aren't you afraid of smelly? " Just then, my mother came over and scolded you angrily: "What do you want? All you can think about is smoking, don't you think about the health of the whole family? ..... "At that time, you were scolded by your mother as" dog blood dripping on your head ",so you had to surrender temporarily and give up smoking very reluctantly.

Dad, I hope you can not only quit smoking, but also spend more time with me.

Dad, please don't turn on the TV as soon as you get home from work. Sit on the sofa and watch TV while smoking or drinking tea, and spend more time with me. On holidays, take me out to play when you are free: play basketball, badminton, and go to the mall to buy snacks; Take me to travel more in summer vacation or winter vacation, go to other cities to see the scenery and eat delicious food.

Dad, I hope you can take my advice and be the greatest, best and best father in the world.

Wish you all the best.

Smooth work and good health!

Dad, I want to say excellent composition 9 to you. Dad, I love you very much! In the process of learning, it is you who have been encouraging me up to now, it is you ... I have grown up gradually, but I used to indulge me and encourage my father to become very strict, even the gadgets I cherish especially won't let me play. Why?

Once, I was doing my homework. Suddenly, my sister came in and accidentally knocked over my little box. "Sorry, sister." Hardly had she finished eating when she ran out to play. "It's really true that you don't take away the things that hit me," I said as I put the box away. "Hey, what is this?" I was attracted by a shiny thing. I picked it up and saw that it was a small piece of iron that I had never found. This is part of my toy go-kart. I put a small piece of iron on my toy car and began to play. After a while, my father came in, and only then did I know. But I feel a cold wind blowing on me. At this time, my father shouted, "Why don't you do your homework?" . ""Dad, I was playing before I wrote my homework. "I said to my father in a coquetry way." No, do my homework quickly. Dad, it sounds like the roof is going to be torn down.

Dad, I know you are doing me good, and I also know that students should focus on learning, but I don't want to study all the time. Dad, I want to say to you, "How I wish to have a happy childhood, can I?" "Dad, you are very kind to me. You are one of the people I trust most. Dad, please allow me to open my heart and listen to my heart!

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 10 Dear Dad:

Hello!

How time flies! In a blink of an eye, you are thirty-nine years old. In recent months, I have seen that you have aged a lot. What happened? Every morning, I see you go out after four o'clock. I don't know what you did. At about half past six, you go to the kitchen to make breakfast. There are all kinds of breakfasts every day, including egg noodles, rice cakes, fried eggs, longan egg soup ... delicious! At seven o'clock sharp, you woke me up. I got up lazily, washed, dressed and had a big breakfast. After dinner, you drive me to school, and when you come back, you bury yourself in selling money. At noon, you give the children in kindergarten a meal, and the children eat by themselves after eating. Come and take me home after a rest. You have to take the people who study here back. One batch, two batches, three batches ... I see you are exhausted and dozing off from time to time. I really sympathize with you! Unfortunately, I can't help you with these things. You can cook dinner for us as soon as you bring the children here. When we finish eating, you take some children home who have finished their homework. When they are all gone, you have to pull down the iron gate, lock the glass door, and then go upstairs and tell us to sleep. We are asleep, but you are still working downstairs ... Early in the morning, Dad, come and see if our quilt is covered, and then go back to sleep. Dad, I thank you for your love for me. Although I think you are usually fierce, now I know that you are actually very gentle. You are the most handsome in my mind!

Best wishes: happiness forever!

Love your daughter: xxx

20xx year x month x day

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 1 1 Dear dad, I am very grateful that you have always cared about me, but you have a bad habit of wronging me without knowing what happened, which makes me very wronged and sad.

I remember it very clearly. The math teacher assigned little homework that day, only three questions. However, every question is a problem for me. I thought about every question for a long time before I did it. Half an hour passed and an hour passed before I finished those three questions.

"Dad, I finished my homework!" I'm glad to report my achievements to you.

But there is not a smile on your face: "Isn't there only three questions in today's homework? You have been working on three questions for an hour, and the bad habit of muddling along will never be changed. "

"no, dad."

"Stop talking, you are always finding fault."

At that moment, I want to say to you: "Dad, I am very wronged."

Sometimes, I want to do some housework as much as possible. Go home from school, no one at home. Looking at the messy home, I quickly mopped the floor, washed dishes and washed clothes, thinking that I would be very happy if you came back to see it. However, when I got home, I said, "Why is the floor wet? What if someone slips? " ? The collar of this dress is still black. Why is it hanging? "At that moment, I want to say to you, Dad, I am very sad. "

Dear dad, did you hear my heart?

Dad, I want to tell your excellent composition 12 "I looked at you for nothing, and I made a mistake in such a simple topic!" " How did you learn ... "This sentence by sentence reprimands my heart for a long time.

I only got 86 points in this math exam. The teacher asked the students to take the test papers home for their parents to sign. After receiving this "order", I am really scared, so scared, because this score is still four points short of my guaranteed score. What should I do? What should we do?

After school, I came home worried. I don't want to show it to my father. I want to imitate your handwriting and sign your name. I didn't expect to be stopped by you as soon as I entered the door: "Bring your test paper." "I ... I ... I ..." I don't know what happened, but I dare not take it out. It seems that a little man in my head said to me, "You can't take it, you can't take it, and you will be beaten if you take it out." "Take it out! How many points did you get? "

I faltered and said, "I got eight points ... ten points ... six points."

"Miss you, such a simple topic is wrong! How did you learn to ... "Dad, you immediately face down to scold.

My heart ached faintly, as if there were countless ants biting. Dad, I know you love me very much. You want me to remember this lesson and not make such a mistake again. But, dad, love is not like this. My grades are not ideal. You have to explain it to me slowly until I understand. Dad, can you encourage me more and be patient with me?

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 13 sunshine and rain, the air nourishes us all the time, and the father's love is always by my side!

Dad, you love me the most. During my growing years, you gave me meticulous care. Every day you will wake me up at six o'clock and take me to the school gate before going home.

Now when I grow up, I will have my own hobbies and ideas. But now my heart has added a lot of troubles, that is, my father loves to oppose me in everything. Are you that addicted? I feel bad for a long time!

I like all kinds of small toys very much: robots, cars, transformers and so on. I often play with them after finishing my homework. I remember one Sunday night, I was playing with my toys in my room. You see my room is a mess, full of toys. You said angrily, "How old are you? You are still playing with these toys. It's better to read after finishing your homework than anything else! " After that, you locked all my toys in the cupboard and gave me a bad look. Dad, you know what? They are not only toys, but also my good friends! How many happy times they spent with me, when I was sad, when I laughed, they laughed with me. No, dad, you don't understand!

Dad, I know you love me very much, and I'm doing this for my own good. I also know that students should focus on learning, but I don't want to die studying and be a nerd! I hope my life is colorful. Dad, how I want to say to you: "how I long for you to really understand me!" Dad, please give me a childhood that really belongs to me, my dream! Can you understand? "

Dad, did you hear my heart?

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 14 Dad, I want to tell you that I love you very much! But there are one or two things that have been hidden in my heart, and I want to tell you, but I want to stop. But today, I want to take this exercise as an opportunity to tell you some of my inner thoughts.

Dad, I want to talk to you about some of your behaviors. Please take a look at my suggestions below.

People say, "Smoking is harmful to health." Dad, why do you always smoke? Smoking is really harmful to your health, especially to your lungs. If your lung is broken, it may cause difficulty breathing. Which animals and plants don't need fresh air? The gray smoke you exhaled also made me feel difficult to breathe for a while. My mother and I both hope that you can quit smoking, but also for your own health!

Also, you always like to play with your mobile phone. In recent months, you feel shadows under your eyes. The doctor estimates that you play with your mobile phone too much. This is always a very big lesson, but you still always play with your mobile phone while walking. You always tell me, why do you say you can't do it? You also find an excuse to say, "I want to reply to someone who is looking for me." I hope you don't have to be a low-headed person.

Dear dad, I hope that speaking my mind this time will help you correct your bad habits. Less shortcomings and more advantages, so that our family can live a healthy life, ok?

Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 15. I have a strict father. He is thin and tall. He is usually warm to his friends, but he is very strict with me, especially in his studies.

Dad, there are some things I have been reluctant to tell you, and now I take the opportunity to tell you.

Dad, you have always been very strict with me. After I finish the homework assigned by the teacher, you have to leave me homework. It's not a lot, but do you think I'll like it? Whenever my friends come to ask me to play outside on weekends, you always ask me to review my English before going out. Have you ever thought about my feelings with my friends?

I remember once, I was worried about what to write, so I read the model essay. My father also urged me several times to tell me some writing methods, but I just couldn't write them. And looked around and did a little trick. Dad was anxious and strode up to me and asked, "Why didn't you write a word?"

I said, "I haven't decided yet." Dad suddenly became angry, his eyes widened, his face turned red and his hands were raised high. I was scared to tears. But dad's slap never fell on me.

Dad said, "You still have 30 minutes. You must write it well. " I wrote and revised the article with tears in my eyes. I always write three times and write a good article praised by the teacher.

I wish my father wouldn't be so hard and strict with me. I want a kind father.