Shortcomings of composition evaluation's brief teacher comments

Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation. However, the article has a clear point of view and a clear position on likes and dislikes, which makes people clear at a glance.

through rich language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other means, through the disparity and differences between things, strongly support the center of the article. The imagination of the article is reasonable and the narrative is natural and vivid.

the center is not clear enough and the idea is not clear enough. However, the content of the article uses parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.