How to send messages to graduate tutors?

Dear Professor xxx:

Hello, I'm glad you can read my letter in your busy schedule.

My name is xxx, and I am a student of xxx. This year, I got a master's degree in Baoding (thermal engineering), North China Electric Power University. I really want to apply for your graduate degree. Through all aspects of understanding, I know that you have made great achievements in the theoretical research of integrated automation of large units. I really want to complete some research on xx-related topics with your guidance and help.

Candidate number xxx

Initial test results:

English xx? The total score of political xx mathematics xx professional course is 353.

I look forward to your reply.

Students who want to be your students *

20xx year x month x day:

2. E-mail format for graduate tutors.

Dear Professor xxx:

Hello, I'm glad you can read my letter in your busy schedule.

My name is xxx, and I am a student of xxx. I took the Master of Science (Thermal Engineering) in Baoding, xx Electric Power University this year, and I really want to apply for your postgraduate. Through all aspects of understanding, I know that you have made great achievements in the theoretical research of integrated automation of large units. I really want to complete some research on xx-related topics with your guidance and help.

Candidate number xxx

Initial test results:

The total score of English xx political xx math xx specialized course is 353.

I look forward to your reply.

Students who want to be your students *

20xx year x month x day