Master, help me write an English message.

You are the first foreign friend I have made. I think God let me know you, because I am glad to have a friend like you. I am not an English expert, so I may make some mistakes in our further communication. Please tell me, so that my English will be improved. Don't ask others to forgive you, you should ask others to point it out so that you can make progress. Foreign friends especially like people who are willing to make progress. )

I live in Nanjing, which is a city in Jiangsu Province. Now I am studying skills in a technical college. I have a small and warm family, including my parents and grandma. We live a comfortable life because my parents are businessmen and work very hard.

Usually, I spend my spare time surfing the Internet, listening to music and writing. Besides, computers occupy most of my working days. However, I will go shopping and hang out on weekends and buy some books. Like other young people in China, my life is full of happiness, and at the same time, I realize something valuable, not through books. Chinese is a bit stiff. When I translated it for you, I artificially added some ingredients to make the behavior more vivid. )

Erika, I have told you about me, and I want to know you. I believe we will become best friends.

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(Write down your name)

I hope you can give it to Erika and I hope I can get the reward points ~ hehe-