I want to edit a short message to pay a return visit to a client. Who can make it better?

The content is as follows: Thank you for your continuous support to XX. I am the front desk account manager of XXX, XX. This is my phone number. Please keep it. In order to book a comfortable and satisfactory room for you, you can contact me directly if you need to book a room in the future. I will arrange it for you. I sincerely wish you XXXX, XXXX! Added: Did I mention that I am a hotel? This is KTV. Thank you. I reserved a private room. You think there is only one account manager? Many people have business cards, and you have received them. What is your final solution? I threw it away, or lost it, and I couldn't find it. It is a better way to call back by SMS, which can send the call directly to the customer's mobile phone. Now I'm just asking experts how to edit short messages, and I won't tell you anything else. Supplement: I just want an answer that can edit my short message better now, and I don't need anything else, thank you. Anything I think is better than what I said can be the answer.