How to edit exchange messages?

1. Introduce yourself. My name is XX. I am an undergraduate student in XX College of XX University, and my major is XXXX. I got XX on my first test.

2. Seeing the transfer information released by your school (or you), I hope to have the opportunity to get this transfer, so I take the liberty to write to you.

I study hard and practice actively. Under the influence of the teacher's careful training and the good academic atmosphere in the university, I have accumulated some experience in basic knowledge, design experiment and operation ability, which has laid a solid foundation for graduate study. I am very interested in the subject you are studying, so I really hope to study for a master's degree in your research group. I believe that through my own efforts, I can complete the master's task well.

4. Make a short ending.