Original, translation and appreciation of Su Shi's two "Huanxisha"! !

The abbreviation of Suzhou/Jiangsu Province/Soviet Union/a surname

A crossbar used as a handrail at the front of a carriage (ancient times)

Clothes and towels rustle with jujube flowers, and cars ring in the south and north of the village. Cow clothes and ancient willows sell cucumbers. The road was full of wine, but he was sleepy. Sun was thirsty for tea and knocked at the door to ask the savage.

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This article is about the author's feelings on the road of thanking rain. The first one is about scenery, and the second one is about lyricism. It should be pointed out that the scenery written by this word is not a unified picture composed of visual images in the general sense, but a series of continuous images reflected on the poet's consciousness screen through various sounds introduced into the eardrum. Now, let's follow the author's conscious activities to experience the conception process of this word.

The author walked a long way on Xie Yu's way, tired and still drunk. Suddenly, there was a rustling sound in my ear, as if something had hit me and my headscarf. At this time, he realized that it was the jujube flower that fell on him. Then there was a creaking sound in my ears. The farther I go, the stronger it becomes. It came from all directions, from the south and from the north, without looking or asking. This is the car sound that the author is familiar with. From the sound, the author realized that he had entered the village. At this moment, suddenly came Hawking's cry, which was introduced into the eardrum. Looking intently, it turned out to be a farmer wearing a "cow coat" sitting in the shade of an ancient willow tree with a pile of cucumbers in front of him. In short, the seasonal characteristics of the countryside, the working life in the village and the poverty in the countryside are all related to each other to varying degrees, which is vividly reflected.

The writer's feelings and conscious activities in the next film. Sleeping after Drinking is a supplement to the previous work. Structurally, this sentence is flashback, indicating that the first three sentences are written from the auditory aspect, mainly because the wine is still unfinished, the road is long and Xiu Yuan is slow, and the human body is sleepy, so what is written down is only fragments heard in sleepy eyes, rather than a complete and unified picture of visual composition. Although the sentence "The Sun is Thirsty" is written about the conscious activity of farmers who are eager to find water at home because of thirst, it also reflects the author's informal and carefree personality. It seems that Su Shi doesn't seem to have too many defensive shelves, and the distance from farmers is not too far. Reading such words will make people feel real and cordial, and they can smell the breath of rural life at that time. This word is different from the previous one. It mainly focuses on the writer's emotional fragments on the road, and the focus is not on reflecting the poverty in rural areas. Because of the relief of rain and drought after the disaster, the author's joy is much stronger than before.

This word pays attention to the tempering of words and sentences, and does not show traces. For example, some critics think that putting the word "Sasha Vujacic" at the beginning of a sentence is "syntactic inversion". In fact, the author's purpose is to emphasize the sound of "jujube flowers" falling on "clothes towels" and meet the requirements of plainness, rather than writing the form of falling flowers. Just because these two words are placed at the beginning of the sentence, it shows that the author knows from the sound of "rustling" that jujube flowers fall on him. In addition, the words "falling", "ringing", "scattering" and "knocking" are also used flexibly and appropriately.