A new pattern of mass cultural activities that conveys red information through the creation of Cat in Church Story is taking shape in our city.

(1) First, the semantics of "new pattern" and "situation" are repetitive, so just remove one.

(2) Second, the backbone of this sentence is "culture is the source".

(3) Third, this sentence is incomplete, and "activities" should be added at the end of the sentence.

(4) Fourth, culture can only develop after inheritance, so inheritance and development should be interchanged.

Answer:

(1) Delete "Situation" or "Mode" first (only "Mode" can be deleted).

(2) Secondly, the word "source" should be changed to "source"

(3) Third, we should add "activities of" at the end of the sentence.

(4) The fourth place "development" and "inheritance" should be reversed (65438+ 0 point for each place).