Chinese to English: I would like to hear Professor Wang’s advice on my composition. (ASK)

If possible, I want to ask professor Wang's advice to my essay. He is sick and has no appetite for super. Upon arriving Australia, he called his parents to inform them of his safe arrival If you can help me with my English, I will appreciate you a lot. Students are anxious to know the result of the final exam is very good, you can try it

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