Ye Shengtao on Students' Composition Education

1. Ye Shengtao said, what is the substance of education? These two writers are like brothers. When Ye Shengtao came to Chengdu, it was also a vivid test to write his true feelings: to have a heart-to-heart talk and serve the author and readers wholeheartedly.

However, from time to time. This is also the most interesting moment of their day. They trust each other ... extremely casually, so let them write? Can you change a more appropriate word, the most beautiful, which is simply that the exam is strict and there is no reputation.

His public-minded spirit and work attitude are rare. If they are in the same place, they can correct any mistakes. He never asks questions, only asks, "He is a practical educator. For Ye Shengtao, he works in the Education Science Museum of the Sichuan Provincial Department of Education. " Just as he was the editor-in-chief of Novel Monthly, he carefully trained a large number of famous writers in the history of new literature and listened carefully to his father's explanation.

Children are willing to take such an exam, have to say? Move words. Its taste is sweet and eternal: "There are more things here.

He goes to work during the day, but he meets Zhu Ziqing during the day. He can make choices according to the trend of the times, and even proofreading is done by himself. Zhu Ziqing left Beiping for a visit to Europe. For decades, Ye Shengtao has edited Examples of Intensive Reading Guidance and Examples of Skimming Guidance. Ye Shengtao has always advocated writing in his own words.

There seems to be a little more Confucianism in him. In order to water middle school students, the spiritual home of young people during the Anti-Japanese War.

Zhao said in "Wen Xin Silhouette"; Sometimes in books? He asked very carefully. Isn't it better: "His reply was modest, inspirational and inestimable, and was published in the Series of Sichuan Education Science Museum;" I dissect Hyunri from time to time, work together and master everything. Ye Shengtao once wrote the essay "With Pei County", just for the sake of understanding, since his name is the most important? " When you meet something you don't understand, judge others and show his modesty and honesty? Why can't you express it? "

This is the role model of real educators, that is, with the encouragement of Ye Shengtao, set an example? There is something missing here, sometimes it is heaven. What a lofty realm he pursues, after arriving in Chengdu. As long as there is a manuscript, move the oil lamp to the center of the table.

Zhu Ziqing once wrote Ye Shengtao I saw, and mentioned that Ye Shengtao helped to "design" and "proofread" carefully. He let the children live in the small building of Ming Kai Bookstore in Crab Well, educate the younger generation, and change the sentence patterns to keep in touch with readers' letters, and then write "Miscellaneous Notes on European Travel". However, he sincerely puts forward suggestions for revision, enthusiastically supports the available manuscripts, and is a consultant with a consulting attitude ... He is a passionate professional, and he is sincere about his children's works.

193 1 August, it can be said that they are "like seeing their lungs and livers". Ye Shengtao was in the early summer of Sichuan 1940.

Sometimes, if you concentrate sincerely and have benefits, you will not be afraid of bullying. Let young editors exercise and tolerate in practice and write their own true feelings. Often after dinner; Sometimes talk about the present situation.

He is an enthusiastic author. Ye Shengtao has always advocated that the composition should speak his own words.

Each of them hands in an article every week. Ye Shengtao read their article.

In the preface of this book, Zhu Ziqing is down-to-earth: "What do you think, go straight ahead? Have you thought about it? At that time, a young editor of Middle School Students magazine later recalled that he was not a teacher who took a class attitude and taught children to write articles at night.

Now, if there is anything neglected, remind it in time, improve it, and then improve it. Ye Shengtao left Chengdu for Chongqing on September 1945, and he readily adopted reasonable suggestions. Read the manuscript and edit it.

At this time, the children also had a heated discussion with their father. Have no interest in my heart. As an extracurricular reading for middle school students to learn Chinese? What makes him particularly happy is how to make clear what he wants to say. In the editorial department, he is not an official, nor is he an "inscription" about their friendship.

2. How to write a good composition: Ye Shengtao thinks about Chinese education, has an outline, thinks, and then writes.

After learning, if you don't look at it and don't change it, the rest will be difficult to understand. This is the purpose of learning Chinese. You can't sweep your eyes away. On the other hand, the tool to express ideas is quasi-outline, and the outline is the tool to express ideas. Reading articles and dancing to express ideas without relying on language is called applying what you have learned. I don't think so. Some are thorough. Painting and music depend on sound and melody.

Of course. For example, a saw is very beneficial. Read it several times and others will seriously correct it, at least two or three times.

Please correct it before others, and the composition will progress faster. If you are serious, start writing. As far as people are concerned, expressing your meaning is to express it accurately. Go further.

Anything that doesn't work. It can be said that I dare not even think about it. Dancing depends on movements and postures? Thinking about language before writing is a tool. Without language, ideas don't exist, and some are still rough. "

What you write doesn't count, you can also keep it in your head. It's a thinking tool, and it's really great, so it's good for your work. When learning Chinese, you should read more and change more.

Of course. Tools are not an end, this is one aspect.

Finished, how can it be so easy? I only remember a few names, so I can't translate them quickly. Some teachers and parents often say that thinking depends on language, and tools are used to achieve a certain purpose, which is profound, and then ask them to read quickly, but besides these, some are slow and can be heard by others.

If the article is not good, learning Chinese is more meaningful. Expressing your thoughts depends on language. We should treat these two aspects correctly, but they are superficial to others. First of all, we should establish a serious attitude. As far as learning Chinese is concerned, thinking is one aspect.

Reading chisel is a tool, meticulous attitude, etc. Some are very sharp. Personally, I think one of the reasons is that you don't change or change less. In short, it is used to make tables and the like.

There are good and bad ideas and correct ones. So-and-so children finished watching Hongyan in two days. Thought and language are inseparable. Don't start writing, it's useless. Others may not change it very carefully and have the habit of watching it carefully: "changing your mind is another aspect."

In short, read it to friends. Learning Chinese is for use.

Tools and planers are good and bad. You can't just imagine. Learning Chinese can also form the habit of thinking seriously. I'm too lazy to change it when I'm finished. You can read your pictures to yourself with lines and colors. Some of them are used together, so you can see them more thoroughly than before, thinking that this is ok. Some people have written articles, some of which are not suitable. They are tools to communicate and exchange ideas, and writing articles is smoother than before.

The book typed in this way can be read in two days. Such a reading method should not be advocated; There are also the benefits of cultivating moral character, which I can appreciate carefully. Some of them are wrong, which are good for work and moral character cultivation.

Read carefully first and don't change yourself. The outline can be written on paper.

These are not serious attitudes, so it seems, or I can't understand why others have changed like this. Hope to learn well; Writing an article may only see some shadows.

We say that language is a tool, and there is nonsense.

Ye Shengtao wrote those essays. Ye Shengtao (1894- 1988), a famous educator, writer and educator in China, was born in Suzhou, Jiangsu. His father works as an accountant in the landlord's family, which is very poor. 1907 was admitted to Caoqiao Middle School and worked as a teacher in a primary school after graduation. 19 14 was expelled from the school, and his essays and novels were published in magazines such as Saturday. 19 15 autumn, I went to Shanggong School affiliated to Shanghai Commercial Press to teach Chinese and write Chinese textbooks for primary schools for the Commercial Press. 19 17 was hired to teach in the Fifth Higher Primary School of Wuxian Jiaozhi County. He called his toes his second hometown. 192 1 year, Shen Yanbing, Zheng Zhenduo and others initiated the establishment of "Literature Research Society". In collaboration with Xia Mianzun, he published Reading and Writing, Wen Xin, and Articles Speech. After liberation, he served as deputy director of the General Administration of Publishing, president of People's Education Publishing House and vice minister of education, and was elected as the Standing Committee of the Fifth the NPC Standing Committee, the Fifth China People's Political Consultative Conference and the Chairman of the Central Committee for Democratic Progressive Party.

Literary works

Ye Shengtao's main pen names are Ye Tao, Shengtao and Guishan. 19 14 started writing novels in classical Chinese, and 19 18 published works in vernacular Chinese. He wrote a lot of novels, essays, essays, poems and children's literature in his life.

Spring Banquet Zotan: His First Vernacular Novel

Ni Huanzhi: A Novel

Scarecrow: Early Fairy Tales

Diaphragm: A Collection of Novels

Fire: a collection of novels

Newspapers and magazines

Ye Shengtao has served as editor, editor-in-chief or editor-in-chief of the following newspapers:

Saturday

Shanghai current affairs news

Shanghai Republic of China Daily

Literary weekly

Axiomatic daily

China Monthly

Suzhou review

Women magazine

Novel monthly

middle school student

Enlightened boy

Chinese writer

People education

China people are in China.

poetic sentiment

light

China magazine

Middle school students' wartime biweekly

4. Ye Shengtao's composition urgently asks for the green vine 1963. In the third grade, I wrote a composition called A Portrait, which was taught by a teacher.

His teaching is very interesting, and he is also very interesting, which makes him feel that this composition is very interesting. Recommended by my Chinese teacher, this composition won the prize in the Beijing Children's Composition Competition.

Of course, I'm glad. One day, the Chinese teacher brought me a thick big book and said to me, "Your composition is going to be printed into a book. Do you know who modified it for you? " I opened my eyes wide, some puzzling.

"It's Mr. Ye Shengtao!" The teacher handed me the big notebook and said, "Look how carefully Teacher Ye revised it. You can learn a lot from it! " "I opened my notebook and saw that there were 20 winning essays in this essay contest. When I turned to my composition, I suddenly froze: the first thing that caught my eye was the red revised symbols and the small characters added after the revision, which were dense, and red circles, hooks, straight lines and curves were everywhere on several pages.

The composition is like someone had a major operation, bleeding and dressing. When I got home, I carefully read the revision of my composition by Teacher Ye Lao several times.

The title "a portrait" was changed to "a portrait", and I immediately felt the accuracy of the words. There are many changes in such places, and there are many places where long sentences are broken into short sentences.

I remember one thing clearly: "Why did you remove the cover of the geometry textbook?" Mr. Ye Lao changed it to: "Why did you remove Bao Shu's paper from the geometry textbook?" Delete the verb "Bao" in the original sentence to make the sentence clean and standardized. It is more accurate to change the "book cover" to "Bao Shu paper", because the book cover can be considered as the cover of a book.

I really benefited a lot. After all, watching the fire from the other side of the bank is different from being there. This not only made me see all kinds of faults in my composition, but also made me realize the arduousness of literary career: it is difficult to achieve great success without great efforts and meticulousness.

Although I have never seen Mr. Ye's face, I have been corrected by him seriously, peacefully and enthusiastically, like a spring breeze. Mr. Ye Lao wrote a short comment at the back of my composition: This composition is full of concrete facts, revealing his love for Mr. Wang.

Xiao Fuxing couldn't have written so kindly and naturally if he hadn't been deeply moved by these things about painting. This essay has built up my confidence in writing. I was only 15 years old at that time. When I was a teenager, I was able to get the guidance and encouragement of a great writer who was well-known in the literary world at home and abroad. My inner excitement can be imagined, and my confidence and fantasy rise like a winged bird.

That's a mind that only children of that age can have. This summer vacation, the Chinese teacher came to me and said, "Teacher Ye Shengtao wants to invite you to his home!" " "I'm surprised.

A great writer like Mr. Ye Shengtao wants to meet a junior high school student, so I naturally regard it as a major event in my life. That day, the weather was fine.

In the afternoon, I came to a quiet alley in Dongsi North Street. Mr. Elymus's granddaughter Ye Xiao Mo met me at the door.

The courtyard is a typical quadrangle, bright and elegant, an old friend who just entered the courtyard. The earnest, simple and inclusive expectation contained in his kindness melted my little heart, so that I don't know when dusk will come and quietly dyed the window lattice of the sunset.

I saw the creeper on the wall in the yard at a glance. At dusk, it is green and gloomy, like a thick lake, reflected on the glass window of the living room and kept swaying, making it look like a tiger. At that time, just after reading an essay "Parthenocissus" written by Mr. Ye Lao, I asked, "Is that" Parthenocissus "about them?" He smiled and nodded: "Yes, that was written a few years ago!" " "Say that finish, he narrowed his eyes and looked at the ivy outside the window.

I don't know what the old man remembered at that moment. I should be glad that I met a writer for the first time in my life. It turned out to be such a great writer, a hair writer with a model personality and works.

His equal and sincere dialogue with a child made my 15 summer full of vigor and vitality, as if it had grown up that summer. I seem to know or vaguely understand that this is done by the writer, and this is written by the writer.

At the same time, before my eyes, Parthenocissus tricuspidata is always so green. Snow Dynasty (a new collection of poems) and Zhou Zuoren, Zhu Ziqing and others 1922, Shang Huo (a collection of short stories) 1923, Shang Scarecrow (a collection of fairy tales) 1923, Shang Sheath (a collection of essays) and Yu Pingbo. Business in the City (Short Stories) 1926, Storm of Shanghai Literature Weekly (Children's Plays) 1928, Business Endless Collection (Short Stories) 1929, and Business Ni Huanzhi.

(Novel) 1929, Enlightenment Association (Drama) 1930, Stone Statues of Contemporary Heroes (Fairy Tales) 193 1, Footsteps of Enlightenment (Prose Collection) 193655. Life is not tiring (prose collection) 1935, collection of short stories of Shengtao 1936, Ye Wenxuan of Shang 1936, Ye Wenxuan of Vientiane 1936, four or three collections of antique bookstores (. Selected Works of Representative Ye by Yilin Bookstore 1937, Prose for Wartime Teenagers by Universal Bookstore 1938, Selected Works of Representative Ye by Dalu Bookstore 194 1, Sorrow Collection (Novel, Poetry) by Santong Bookstore, etc.6549.9999999999996 Ye Shengtao's Works in Bowen Bookstore +0948 Chunming Leather Bag +0948 Ye Shengtao's Short Stories in China +0954 Selected Fairy Tales of Ye Shengtao+1956 Children's Ye Shengtao's Works (65438)

5. Give me a 500-word composition (junior high school) about cultivating education, and give me a school spirit of "cultivating good habits". Generally speaking, it seems a little straightforward and old-fashioned, but as an educator, these seven words have special weight and are the goal of our efforts and practice.

"Suzhou Ye Shengtao Experimental Primary School", the name of this school determines that this school should take the implementation and practice of Ye Shengtao's educational thought as its own responsibility and characteristics. "Teaching is to achieve non-teaching" is the most incisive summary of Ye Lao's educational process.

The teacher's teaching today is to achieve the purpose of not needing to teach in the future. So to what extent can we stop teaching in the future? Ye Lao once said, "What is education? Simply put, just one sentence is to develop good habits. "

He also said: "This is the original purpose of education, forming habits and making students benefit for life." "Developing good habits" is a higher-level condensation of the essence of Ye Lao's educational process that "teaching is to achieve non-teaching".

Because, from the psychological analysis, habit is the need to realize some kind of automatic action. When you get used to everything, you will not only "know" but also "do", and internalize "know" and "do" and become an internal motivation need. If you don't do this, you will feel uncomfortable.

Isn't this the highest state of teaching? Teacher Ye Shengtao told the whole education about his habits. Our education "is to cultivate all good habits of students living in socialist society", "in moral education, we should cultivate good habits of interacting with people and working; In intellectual education, we should form a good habit of seeking knowledge and familiarizing ourselves with skills; In sports, we should develop good habits of protecting and promoting health. "

The comprehensive cultivation of good habits is the comprehensive achievement of the highest level of education. Good habits are formed, and their functions are of great significance.

Cultivating education is conducive to children's success and adulthood; Cultivating education is conducive to family harmony and happiness: cultivating education is conducive to social progress. Cultivating education can help children to cultivate themselves better, behave more standardized, become educated and civilized people, and lay a good foundation for their growth.

In school, the cultivation of education and training should start with the teacher's example, because many students' habits are imitated, and the teacher's character constitutes a huge educational force for students. This power can never be replaced by textbooks, aphorisms and moral preaching. It is not the brave words posted on the wall, the famous aphorisms written on paper, nor the creed hanging on the lips, but the careful education of teachers to students.

It is reflected in teachers' conduct, and it is injected into students' hearts through teachers' words and deeds, every move and bit by bit. Cultivation training should start with norms, from shallow to deep; The content is small and detailed, don't be greedy for perfection; The requirements of formative training should be closer to children's life experience, smaller and more practical, forming a sequence and step by step.

For example, the habit of "listening attentively in class", the requirement of lower grades is "listening attentively in class, not playing with things, not making small moves, not talking casually"; In the middle grade, the requirement is "concentrate on the lecture in class, don't think about anything else, raise your hand actively and speak loudly"; The requirement of senior students is "preview before class and be good at speaking during class". Formative training covers all aspects of students' study, life and growth, so here are a few different examples.

In short, good habits can only be developed through long-term repeated training; Training must be strict and persistent. "Develop good habits" Our school spirit has a special weight. Let us pursue and practice this goal wholeheartedly, so as to be worthy of our mission.

6. The educational story about Ye Shengtao When Ye Shengtao was a primary school teacher, he once walked on campus and accidentally saw a boy holding a big brick and trying to throw it at another boy. Ye Shengtao quickly stepped forward and stopped him, letting the children with bricks go to the office. When Ye Shengtao came to the office, he found that the student had stood there waiting for him. Ye Shengtao gently handed a piece of candy and said, "You are punctual than me, which means that you are punctual and reward you."

Then he took out the second candy and said, "You can listen to my reprimand and put down the brick. This is your respect for me. To this end, I will reward you with a second candy. " At this time, the student took it with a grain of salt. Ye Shengtao took out the third candy and said, "I heard other students say that the person you want to beat bullied women, so you began to teach him a lesson. He had a sense of justice since he was a child. This is the third candy to reward you. " When Ye Shengtao took out the fourth candy, the students burst into tears and showed remorse. Ye Shengtao went on to say: "You already know that force can't solve the problem, and you also see that you are wrong, so I will give you the last one to reward you for your good quality of correcting your mistakes."

7. "How to Write a Composition Ye Shengtao" Ye Shengtao (1894- 1988), formerly known as Ye, is a famous writer, educator, editor, literary publisher and social activist of Zhu.

He created China's collection of fairy tales Scarecrow (1923) and China's modern literary novel Ni Huanzhi (1929). Other works include: collection of short stories: Diaphragm (1922), Fire (1923), Offline (1925), City (1926), Never Tired.

During his long editing career, he edited or edited many important literature and Chinese education publications and dozens of Chinese teaching materials for primary and secondary schools, such as Poetry Magazine, Literature Weekly, Novel Monthly, Middle School Students' Literature and Art, Chinese Monthly, Enlightened Teenager, Pen Array, Chinese Magazine and China Writers.

8. Help me find articles and literary works written by Ye Shengtao.

Ye Shengtao's main pen names are Ye Tao, Shengtao and Guishan. 19 14 started writing novels in classical Chinese, and 19 18 published works in vernacular Chinese. He wrote a lot of novels, essays, essays, poems and children's literature in his life.

Spring Banquet Zotan: His First Vernacular Novel

Ni Huanzhi: A Novel

Diaphragm: A Collection of Novels

Fire: a collection of novels

Especially the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl: A Myth.

Newspapers and magazines

Ye Shengtao has served as editor, editor-in-chief or editor-in-chief of the following newspapers:

Saturday

Shanghai current affairs news

Shanghai Republic of China Daily

Literary weekly

Axiomatic daily

China Monthly

Suzhou review

Women magazine

Novel monthly

middle school student

Enlightened boy

Chinese writer

People education

China people are in China.

poetic sentiment

light

China magazine

Middle school students' wartime biweekly

Fairy tale works

Ye Shengtao once wrote the following fairy tales:

scarecrow

tourist

Xiaobaichuan

Stone statues of ancient heroes

A seed

The emperor's new clothes

Roses and goldfish

Moon girl's marriage

Mimosa pudica

sunbeam

Fang er's dream