The teacher asked us to write a slogan for the college entrance examination. .

First of all, I really can't see the rhyme. . . Road u, force I, crazy uang. . . Your dialect does not rhyme. . . If so, I suggest you think in Mandarin, which is good for Chinese learning and language expression. Secondly, if we must change it, we should change it to "work together to create better results" or "work together to surpass ourselves". .