Analysis, Practice and Analysis of Ill Sentences in Senior High School Entrance Examination

Sorting out the Chinese test sites for the senior high school entrance examination: the relevant requirements for modifying the test sites and teaching materials by experts are: discriminating and judging the right and wrong sentences; Modify the sick sentences from the aspects of incomplete components, improper collocation, incorrect word order and chaotic structure; Correct the words and phrases with obvious mistakes in the exercise; Find out the sick sentences in the paragraph and make corrections; Use symbols to modify sentences with speech disorders. The principle of modifying sick sentences is to change fluency and correctness, not to modify language and not to change the original meaning of sentences. The questions are mainly multiple-choice questions. Correctly grasping the sentence structure and understanding the types of common ill sentences and their modification methods are the basic coping strategies. When reviewing, we should pay special attention to four aspects of language diseases: incomplete components, improper collocation, incorrect word order and chaotic structure. Typical example perspective example There are language errors in the underlined part of the following paragraph, please correct it. ① Our city is forming a new pattern of mass cultural activities of "singing red songs, reading classics, telling stories and spreading proverbs", and creating and sending red short messages has become a common practice. ② Bayu culture and Hongyan culture are the sources of creating red short messages, and the purpose of encouraging Chongqing people to create is to stimulate Chongqing people's recognition of their own culture. ③ By sending red short messages, we can further improve the quality of Chongqing citizens while developing and inheriting culture. (l) First, the redundant word _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ should be deleted. (2) The second improper collocation should be changed to _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _. (3) If the composition in the third place is incomplete, add _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ at the end of the sentence. (4) The fourth word order is improper and should be adjusted to _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _. A: (1) Delete "situation" or "mode" first (only "mode" can be deleted). (2) Secondly, the word "source" should be changed to "source". (3) Third, we should add "activities of" at the end of the sentence. (4) Fourth, the position of "development" and "inheritance" should be changed. Perspective: This is a test to modify the sick sentences in the paragraph. There are four underlined sentences in the whole paragraph. At the end of the paragraph, the proposer lists four common reasons for the candidates to modify them respectively. Because the reasons are listed in the test questions, the review difficulty is reduced to some extent. Therefore, to solve this problem, candidates only need to modify one by one according to the reasons. Analysis of Common Mistakes One of the following sentences without swearing is () A. Maoming in midsummer is a harvest season. B. whether students' thinking ability can be cultivated is an important criterion to measure the success of a class. C. By studying "Fire Safety, Caring for Life-A Letter to Parents" issued by the school, all our parents received an education. D During May Day this year, there were too few trash cans in some scenic spots in our city, which led to tourists littering. In this regard, we believe that the scenic spot management department is not without responsibility. Answer: b analysis: this is a multiple-choice question, which requires candidates to choose one without speech barriers. The proposition sets up language barriers from three aspects and requires candidates to analyze them. Sentence a is not collocated properly. "Maoming" is not a "season" but should be changed to "Maoming's midsummer (season) is a harvest season" Sentence C is incomplete and has no subject, so "pass" or "make" should be removed. If sentence D is incorrect, we should remove "not" or change "not without" to "not without". Candidates may lose points because of the wrong choice when they don't know the cause of the sick sentence. Ability improvement exercise I senior high school entrance examination 1. In the following sentences, there is no language defect () A. Students are full of confidence in whether they can get good grades. As soon as he walked into the playground, he felt a warm atmosphere and a happy smile. Third, thoroughly implement the spirit of central decision-making and accelerate the construction of the economic zone on the west side of the Taiwan Strait. D. the information on the internet is not only rich, but also convenient and fast to find. (Fuzhou, Fujian Province, 2009) 2. Among the following sentences, the one that is not badly chosen is () A. Through thirty years of reform and opening up, our life has undergone earth-shaking changes. B according to Xinhua news agency reported on June 13, the number of patients with influenza a (H 1N 1) in China decreased by 1.2 times. C. food safety has become a major issue related to the national economy and people's livelihood. D. Affected by the financial crisis, about 20,000 to 30,000 large and small factories closed down in Guangdong alone. (2009 Hechi City, Guangxi Province, senior high school entrance examination questions) 3. One of the following sentences is () A. Seeing graduation photo in front of him, Xiao Xin can't help but think of the three years when everyone played together and studied at the same table. B in the face of influenza epidemic, governments at all levels take timely preventive measures to ensure the safety of people's lives. C. Being able to choose a suitable destination after graduation is a sign of a person's maturity. Without the help of air, no matter how perfect the wings are, birds will never fly to the blue sky. (Liuzhou, Guangxi, 2009) 4. There is a language defect in each of the following two sentences. Please modify them in your own way and keep the original intention. (1) Qigong in ancient China has been used in competitive sports, which can adjust the nervousness of athletes before the competition. (2) Sincerity is not only as real as bread in life and truth in thought, but also breeds nobility and simplicity. (Fuxin City, Liaoning Province, 2009 examination questions) 5. Modify the following sentences. (1) We should carry forward and inherit the perseverance and pioneering spirit of Emperor Yan of Shennong. (2) Paying attention to reading in and out of class is the key to learning Chinese well. 6. There are two ill sentences in the following paragraph, please find out and correct them. In July this year, there will be a total solar eclipse in the middle and lower reaches of the Yangtze River in China. The total solar eclipse lasted for more than two hours. (3) The astronomical spectacle of total solar eclipse will have a certain impact on the natural environment and social life. To this end, Jiangsu is carrying out a series of popular science publicity activities for the total solar eclipse. Sentence _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ During the May Day holiday, we went for an outing together. Green fields, green willows, colorful wildflowers and other plants deeply attracted us. We ran and danced, and laughter spread far and far ... This outing brought us closer to nature and increased the fun of life. Modify the sentence: (Qingdao, Shandong Province in 2009) 8. There are two underlined sentences in the following paragraph. Please correct them one by one. You can adjust the word order, add, delete or replace words, but you can't change the meaning of the original sentence. (1) Yanhe River is not only the sea route of Huai 'an, but also the main waterway of northern Jiangsu. In recent years, Huai 'an has accelerated the construction of waterway regulation project along the river and opened a high-speed waterway connecting Huai 'an and Lianyungang. (2) With the official navigation of Yanhe waterway, it will greatly promote the regional economic integration in the Yangtze River Delta. Revision ①: _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ China is a country with a cultural tradition of 5,000 years, and the Chinese nation has been a "harmonious" nation since ancient times. (2) It can be said that China's philosophical wisdom is concentrated in one sentence. ③ It is not only the basic spirit and characteristics of the Chinese nation, but also the highest value standard of China's philosophy and China's culture. (1) Please choose one of the three words given in the first sentence and write it on the line below. (2) The second sentence lacks punctuation. Please write the punctuated sentences on the horizontal line below. (3) The third sentence has language defects. Please write the revised sentence on the line below. (2009 senior high school entrance examination questions in Shaanxi Province) (2009 senior high school entrance examination questions in Xianning City, Hubei Province) Second special simulation training 1. Among the following sentences, the one with clear meaning is () A. She made toys that two children like from waste. B: I'll persuade the teacher to go with you this time, so that you can play better. C. striding towards a prosperous hometown. Scientists in China have made use of the scientific data detected by the Chang 'e-1 satellite's flight around the moon, and have made many achievements. 2. Among the following sentences, () A. Qu Yuan's spirit of "loyalty to the monarch, patriotism and perseverance" was passed down through activities such as dragon boat races and dumplings. B. What a beneficial influence my first teacher has had on my approach to and love for literature! C. the vitality of a literary work lies in whether it can provide readers with rich, novel and high-quality spiritual food. D. Now that medicine is developed, it may not be possible to transplant memory. 3. Among the following sentences, the one that is not badly chosen is (). 4. The following sentences are wrong, please correct them. (1) Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses were unearthed in Lintong, east of Xi, which has been more than two thousand years. Correction: (2) In order to prevent such air leakage accidents from happening again, we have strengthened safety education and management. Correction: (3) Since June 1 2008, the sale, use and production of ultra-thin shopping bags with a thickness less than 0.025mm are prohibited nationwide. Correction: 5. Please point out the mistakes in the following advertising words. (1) Everything is smaller except the function. (Copier advertisement) (2) Moisturizing day cream is especially suitable for any skin. Below is a short message from a student to his teacher. There is something wrong with this letter. Please help me correct it. Carnation in May, without the elegance and holiness of peony and the reputation of lotus, just silently exudes a refreshing fragrance, just like your love. (1) The word "elegance and holiness" fails to capture the characteristics of peony. Please use idioms instead. (2) There is something wrong with the underlined sentence, please correct it. 7. The following is a passage from a junior high school student's exercise. There is an error in the underlined part. Please correct it as required. However, who has seen the true nature now? In the Arabian Peninsula of West Asia, A is full of gunfire; On the Loess Plateau in China, the Yellow River water rolling eastward is mixed with thousands of sediments and rushes to the Bohai Sea; In the Amazon plain of Latin America, tens of thousands of trees fell peacefully under the chainsaw ... who saw nature crying? (1)A mismatch, please correct it. (2) The language in place B is not concise, please delete the redundant words. (3) There is a word in C that is not used properly. Please replace it with the right word. 8. The following four slogans were collected by students in the street during comprehensive learning activities. One of them has a poor language. Please find and correct it. A. Cultural milk nurtures new seedlings on campus, and artistic spring water nourishes the flowers of the motherland. B. The standard language is the through train of the information superhighway. C. Warmly congratulate Qixing Restaurant on winning the title of "China Famous Hunan Cuisine Store". Let the ideal and kite Qi Fei, let the hope be with the spring. 9. There are errors in the underlined parts of the following paragraphs, please correct them. Daya Bay in winter is a season of blooming flowers and beautiful scenery. It was born in the spring after 30 years of reform and opening up, and it embodies the hard work of several generations of nuclear power people. At this time, Daya Bay nuclear power base is full of vitality everywhere. (1)(2) 10. The following paragraphs are wrong, please correct them as required. (1) The Journey to the West is shooting a new version of the TV series, and I'm a little worried. (2) There are several versions of The Journey to the West, some of which can only watch science fiction films and even romantic films. I'm really worried that I'll make a common fault this time, but I'd better treat the classic works as science fiction again. (3) I have seen many new TV dramas with classic works as their themes. They often have an unbridled understanding of the original works and pursue modernity excessively, but they have dispelled the cultural charm and value of the original works and lost the profundity of the cultural connotation of the famous works. (1) The word order of the first sentence is incorrect, so it should be changed to: (2) The second sentence is mixed, so it should be changed to: (3) The verb and object in the third sentence are not properly matched, so it should be changed to: Reference answer: 1. Intensive reading compilation of senior high school entrance examination questions 1.D2.C3.A4.( 1) will be 5.( 1) Swap "carry-over" and "inheritance". (2) Delete "whether". 6.② Delete "two" or "left and right"; ④ Delete "series" or move "series" after "publicity"; 7. Green fields, green willows and colorful wildflowers deeply attracted us. 8.① Salt River is not only the sea route of Huai 'an, but also the trunk route of northern Jiangsu. (2) (Delete "He Sui") The official navigation of Yanhe Waterway will greatly promote the regional economic integration in the Yangtze River Delta. 9.( 1) Advocating (2) It can be said that China's philosophical wisdom is embodied in the word "harmony". (3) It is not only the basic spirit and characteristics of the Chinese nation, but also the highest value standard of China's philosophy and China's culture. 10. After three years of junior high school life, (plus "we") have some initial life experiences, which can arouse many beautiful memories in our hearts and inspire us to constantly improve ourselves and know ourselves (transposition). What is particularly unforgettable is the inculcation of those old teachers. (1) "we" can be inserted before "three years" or "already"; (2) You can delete "old" or "old". (2) Special simulation training 1.D2.B3.B4.( 1) "More than 2,000 years ago" should be placed before "cultural relics". (2) Remove "none". (3) It should be changed to "production". (65438+) Changed "relaxed and happy" to "refreshed". 7.( 1) The smoke of gunfire is everywhere. (2) Delete "scroll". (3) Change "calm" to "miserable", "sad" or "helpless". 8. Warmly congratulate Qixing Restaurant on being re-elected as "China Famous Hunan Cuisine Store". 9.( 1) Daya Bay in winter is full of flowers and beautiful scenery. (Or: Daya Bay in winter is a place full of flowers and beautiful scenery. ) (2) It was born in the spring of reform and opening up, and after 30 years of wind and rain, it embodies the painstaking efforts of several generations of nuclear power people. 10.( 1) "TV series The Journey to the West is shooting" was changed to "new TV series The Journey to the West is shooting". (2) "Only for classic works" was changed to "Only for classic works to be re-sci-fi". (3) "But it eliminates the cultural charm and value of the original" is changed to "But it loses the cultural charm and value of the original".