Senior two Chinese lotus pond moonlight teaching plan.

First, the analysis of teaching materials and teaching objects

Moonlight on the Lotus Pond is not only a landscape prose, but also a lyric prose. The author is characterized by simplicity and elegance.

Poetic language skillfully combines the description of the lotus pond with the description of the moonlight, highlighting the beauty of the elegant, hazy and quiet physical environment and expressing a touch of sadness and joy in the description of the scenery. It is easy for students to enter the scene, but difficult to enter the artistic conception, and it is difficult to understand the nuances of language and scenery. Therefore, in teaching, we should first describe in detail the situation of the writing era and the author's complex mentality, so that students can generate historical imagination through association, and then try to figure out the beauty of language use and artistic conception that closely follows the author's emotional changes.

Second, the teaching task

1, understand the author's thoughts and feelings;

2. Learn the author's language skills.

Third, the focus of teaching

1, try to figure out the meaning of words and sentences in combination with the context, and appreciate the concise and beautiful characteristics and expression effect of the language of the work;

2. I feel the beauty of scenery language and love integration of language.

Fourth, the teaching procedure.

Before class: ① Students refer to the information about the background of the times;

② Students read the article carefully and think carefully about the reading training questions assigned by the teacher.

Classroom: ① Discuss reading training in groups (one class).

(2) according to the order of writing articles, combined with reading training questions (two class hours)

After class: ① Organize class notes.

(2) Do a good job in the training of innovative thinking in a limited time.

(3) Imitation: Write a paragraph describing the scenery according to the metaphor in the fourth paragraph of the text.

Verb (abbreviation of verb) teaching process and reading training materials

I'm very upset these days. What is the reason for being "quite restless"? Analysis: 1927 After the failure of the Great Revolution, the author was anxious and depressed, hoping to seek relief in a quiet environment but unable to get rid of it. Sitting in the yard enjoying the cool tonight, it suddenly occurred to me that the lotus pond passing by every day should look different under the full moon. The moon is fading (if the word "fading" is omitted, what is the difference in expression effect? Analysis: "Gradually" describes the slowness of time flow and space transfer, which adapts to the tranquility of the environment and the rather unsettled state of mind. If omitted, it can't describe the fluidity of time-space transformation, and it can't reflect the tranquility in slowness and the quite unsettled in tranquility. The children's laughter on the road outside the wall can no longer be heard; My wife is patting and skipping in the room, humming a sleeping song in a daze. I slipped on a big shirt. What's the difference if I change the word "belt" to "cover" or "close"? Analysis: "cover"-going out/turning around/pulling the cover, the action is cumbersome and has a certain purpose; "Guan"-the action process is similar to "Yan", with strong purpose, dull and pale language and emotion, and lack of expressiveness; "Belt"-cover the door gently from behind, move softly and casually, keep the environment quiet, and go out at home.

(1, in this natural section, what are the three-dimensional spaces of the author's environment? Analysis: yard, night sky, outside the wall, inside the house, outside the door)

(2) What reduplications did the author use in this paragraph? What's the role? Analysis: Day after day, gradually, in a daze, quietly; The reduplicated words used in this paper not only vividly describe the scene in front of us, but also have a rhythmic beauty. Reduplicated words generally read in a soft tone, which is consistent with soft scenes and can render an elegant but not vulgar language atmosphere. In the extension of pronunciation, meaning and emotion are endless and memorable. )

Along (why not "lead"? Analysis: "Yan" is a detour, so you can see the scenery around the lotus pond, while "Yin" means that you are still on your way to the lotus pond, so you can't see the scenery around the lotus pond. ) The lotus pond is a winding little cinder road. This is a secluded road; Few people walk during the day, and it is lonely at night. What is the connection between the three scenes of "tortuous seclusion and loneliness"? Analysis: twists and turns lead to seclusion, and seclusion leads to loneliness. ) Around the lotus pond, there are many trees and lush. On one side of the road, there are some willows and some trees with unknown names. On a moonless night, the road is gloomy and a little scary. It's fine tonight, although the moonlight is still very weak. What overlapping words did the author use when describing the scenery? Analysis: lush and gloomy; What is the hue of this scene? Analysis: faint; What kind of feelings are revealed? Analysis: a touch of sadness. )

I was the only one on the road, walking around with my hands behind my back. If you use the word "go", what is the difference in expression effect?

Analysis: "Walking": Walking slowly, unhurriedly, leisurely and orderly, thinking and feeling in my heart, in leisure and detachment, the faint sadness looms. If the word "go" is replaced, it will lack the charm of scene fusion. ) The world seems to be mine; I also seem to be beyond my normal self. (What is the "normal self" in the context? What is it like now? Analysis: depression, hesitation, trying to escape, difficult to escape; Free man) to another world. I love excitement and peace; Like to live in groups, like to be alone. Just like tonight, under this boundless moon, a person thinks about everything and thinks nothing, and feels like a free person. What must be done and said during the day can be ignored now. This is the beauty of being alone, and I enjoy it (the words beauty and enjoyment can show how the author's mood has changed? Analysis: From a touch of sadness to a touch of joy) If only this boundless moonlight had lotus fragrance. What is the role of the last sentence of this paragraph in the context? Analysis: the transitional sentence before and after the connection)

What is the explanation of Wang Mi (Wang Mi) on the winding lotus pond? Analysis: It is the leaves of Tian Tian that are full of vision and eyes, such as "spring scenery". The leaves are high above the water, like a pavilion (which word echoes pavilion, which is to decorate "dancer" or "skirt"). This sentence is used figuratively. What are ontology and carrier respectively? What are the similarities between them? Analysis: ontology-leaves; Metaphor-graceful dancer skirt; The dancer's skirt is similar to the natural extension of leaves. In the cascade of leaves, ("Tian Tian" and "layer" are the specific explanations of the previous words? Why? Analysis: twists and turns; "Tian Tian" is described continuously, "layer by layer" is described methodically), and sporadic embellishment (which word does "embellishment" echo? Analysis: some white flowers are scattered, some bloom gracefully, and some bloom shyly; What rhetoric is used in this sentence? How about using other rhetorical devices? Why? Analysis: personification; You can't use other rhetorical devices, because personification can respond to the "dancer" above. Lotus stems are like dancers, leaves are like dancers' skirts, flowers are like dancers' faces, like pearls, stars in the blue sky, and beautiful women who just came out of the bath. This sentence uses a figure of speech. What are ontology and carrier respectively? What are the similarities between them? Analysis: ontology-white flowers; Metaphor-a pearl, a star in the blue sky, a beauty who just came out of the bath. 1, the lotus under the moon is white and bright, showing "sporadic embellishment", similar to "bright" pearls; 2. White flowers are "dotted" among layers of leaves, flickering faintly in the green bushes, similar to the "stars" in Blue Sky; Lotus is graceful and shy. It is white and bright, and its expression and color are almost the same as those of a beautiful woman who just came out of the bath. ) the breeze blows, bringing a faint fragrance, as if it were a faint song on a distant building. Here we use the method of "synaesthesia" to describe the scenery. What is "synaesthesia"? What is its biggest feature? What are the similarities between a wisp of fragrance and a faint song from a distant building? What is the use of this description? Analysis: "Synaesthesia" refers to "one feeling transcends its own limitations and understands the impression belonging to another feeling", that is, the method of transforming one sensible image into another. Its biggest feature is "the transfer of feeling". Similarities: intermittent, as if nothing had happened, unpredictable. Function: Singing is more vivid and novel than using lotus fragrance. Lotus fragrance was originally a perceptual image of the sense of smell, but the author compared it to "a faint singing voice on a distant building", which transformed it into an auditory image, interwoven vision, smell and hearing, and stimulated readers' deeper imagination and association. At this time, leaves and flowers also have a slight tremor. What is the reason for the "tremor"? Analysis: Like lightning, the breeze suddenly swept across the other side of the lotus pond. The leaves are close side by side, so there is one piece (why only one piece instead of several pieces? Analysis: a little tremor, like lightning) condensed wave. (Why are the ripples bright? Analysis: Tian Tian, layer by layer, side by side, next to each other) What are the characteristics of the running water written under the leaves? Analysis: silent, implicit) running water, covered, can not see some colors; Leaves are more exposed to the wind.

Can the order of scenery written in this paragraph be changed? Analysis: no, because leaves are high in moisture and belong to fields, so leaves must be the first thing you see; Because there are white flowers dotted, white and bright, it is natural to continue to write flowers; Because the flowers are sporadic, there is a fragrance in the breeze; Because there is a breeze, there are ripples; Because of the wave marks, I saw the running water below; Because of running water, leaves are more likely to be blown away by the wind. The author's eyes returned to leaves and flowers, which led to the following description of moonlight quietly pouring on leaves and flowers. The sequence of scenes is highly contextualized and hierarchical, which can never be mobilized)

Moonlight, like running water, pours quietly (if the word "drop" is used instead, what is the difference in expression effect? Analysis: Xie shows that the moon is in the middle of the sky, and the moonlight is from top to bottom, which has a stronger sense of movement and three-dimensional sense; Although "dripping" also means flowing downwards, it generally means that water, tears or sweat flow downwards along or attached to something, while moonlight shines from the air and is not attached to anything. ) on this leaf and flower. Thin blue fog floats (if it is changed to "floating", what is the difference in expression effect? Analysis: "Floating" describes the layering and movement of green fog and leafy flowers, which are close to each other and close to each other. It can also describe the gentle and implicit state of green fog. Gone with the Wind echoes Thin, but gone with the wind is scattered and easy to escape. Although it is gentle, it has no subtle and quiet beauty, and the reason why "fog" is "green" is because it is close to the field and has dense leaves, so it does not feel "green" when it is high and far away. ) In the lotus pond. Leaves and flowers seem to have been washed in milk; Like a dream in a sarong. What are the noumenons of "milk" and "light yarn"? What is the noumenon of dreams? Analysis: Thin blue mist; Although it is a full moon, there are faint clouds in the sky, so it can't shine; But I think this is just a benefit-deep sleep is indispensable, and nap is unique. Moonlight shines through the trees, and the bushes at the height cast uneven and mottled shadows, which are as steep as ghosts; The sparse shadows of curved willows seem to be painted on lotus leaves. What are the characteristics of two kinds of tree shadows described in this sentence? What role does the word "painting" play in expressing these characteristics? Analysis: Shrub-jagged mottled shadow; Willow-a sparse and beautiful image; "Painting" shows that the shadows of the trees are scattered and harmonious, just right, like being written by a famous artist, and it is easier for readers to associate and imagine the poetry of the moonlight in the lotus pond. But light and shadow have a harmonious melody, such as a famous song played in the Vatican. This sentence uses metaphor and synaesthesia. What are ontology and carrier respectively? What are the similarities between them? From which do the two senses communicate with each other? Analysis: ontology-moonlight; Metaphor-famous songs; Similarities: harmony; This is visual and auditory communication. )