How to write a static descriptive composition

1. There are two directions for how to write the technique of "grasping the static state" in the composition describing the static state. One is the "quiet" scene, which is itself a landscape. When writing, it is mainly to grasp the obvious characteristics of the scene, such as shape, color, posture, luster, smell and so on. The second is the "moving" scene. Any moving scenery has its quiet moments, such as the silence of "birds" and "big banyan trees" in Bird Paradise.

Write a good static scene, mainly from three aspects. First of all, to grasp the overall impression of a static scene, we can start with modeling and color. Secondly, we should grasp the main features and use comparative methods to make them more prominent, such as the writing of the Great Wall. Thirdly, in order to highlight the main characteristics of "static", you can also use the contrast hairstyle (with "dynamic" lining "static"). When describing scenery, the method of "grasping silence" can give readers a warm and quiet enjoyment.

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2. Write still life or still life 800 words to appreciate the lotus flowers in the wind. After autumn, the weather is getting colder. Today's weather is particularly cool, and the breeze echoes gently in the air, making people feel very comfortable when blowing on my face. Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I decided to take advantage of the cool wind to see the lotus, which came out of the West Lake in June. Bus No.809 passed through the tunnel at high speed, and soon we were safely sent to the West Lake. Standing by the lake, looking into the lake from afar, all kinds of lotus flowers are so beautiful that people can't help but want to see them. I came to the lake with a brisk pace, trying to get close to the lotus. Only heard a faint fragrance, refreshing, refreshing. White, pink, blossoming, clusters of lotus are supported by green calyx, and bright petals are more beautiful. Lotus has different shapes, like a beautiful girl. Next to it is a lotus flower with unfolded petals, which grows on the green lotus leaf. From a distance, it looks like a girl in a long pink dress dancing gracefully on the green carpet. In the distance are clusters of budding flowers and bones, which look like a shy girl sitting on the grass, shyly covering her cheeks with her hands; Next to it, the lotus flower is like a small drum inlaid with precious stones. Lotus girls are singing and dancing on this green stage. Accompanied by a small drum, they are holding a small concert. Lotus leaf is big, round and green, like a green jade plate; It's like putting a big umbrella in the water, one after another. No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet in the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus in "Seeing Lin Zifang at Dawn in Jingci Temple": "Lotus leaves are infinitely green in the sky, and lotus flowers are of different colors." Under the sunshine, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful. How beautiful that lotus is! Everything in nature is really full of vitality! -the second article: the campus spring girl is coming. She sent away the cold air in winter and walked into our campus with warm wind, rain and sunshine. With her dexterous hands, she decorated the campus like a paradise, which was beautiful. The grass on the playground, nourished by the spring breeze and drizzle, raised its childish little head and greeted with a smile: "Aunt Spring is good, Sister Chunyu and Spring Breeze are good!" " "The sound of reading came from the classroom, accompanied by continuous drizzle, which made people feel particularly comfortable. At noon, Grandfather Sun sprinkled warm sunshine on the earth and mapped the school garden community into a kingdom of heaven, which was very beautiful. Set off the luxurious school science building next to it like a palace in the sky. Look, pairs of butterflies are in the bushes in Qi Fei, fly with me, and flocks of dragonflies compete in the air like aeroplane stunts. Listen, "Haw", who is calling? Oh, it's a group of lively and clever birds, singing in the long jump and competing in the big tree that bid farewell to hibernation and grew small buds. After school, the students strolled in this environment with flowers and birds, enjoying the warm sunshine. In front of the teaching building, some students have taken off their thick clothes and started to play sandbags. In the evening, the sound of reading on campus, the spring breeze blowing on the face and the intoxicating fragrance of flowers are intoxicating. Hundreds of swallows lined up neatly on the cable, as if holding a swearing-in meeting for the mosquito fighting. The small trees on the roadside, holding the gifts given to him by the spring rain, miss the time when they met the sun during the day and thrive in the night fog. The spring breeze caresses the flowers. The flowers got carried away with joy and danced the soft waltz "Song of Spring Breeze", which was extremely beautiful. The princess star in the sky flashed her little eyes as if to ask, "Are they having a party? Why not invite me? "ah! Campus spring scenery, what a beautiful and charming landscape animation! -The above are examples found for you on the Internet for your reference:

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3. Write the static scene first, and then write the dynamic scene. Spring has come, the grass is green and the flowers are red. Grass grows quietly from the ground. In the spring breeze, the grass wavers. From a distance, a large area is beautiful. The grass climbs hard, and you won't let me. When you are tired, drink a little dew that has just rained. As long as a drop of dew can moisten the whole body of the grass, the grass climbs desperately, and leaves the ground early to breathe the fresh air of this bright world, sighing: "Ah, what a splendid world, I want to grow up quickly!" "

Flowers are also growing hard, and two wildflowers bloom early. Are those spring eyebrows? Lovely grass holding beautiful flowers, grass everywhere, flowers smile in the wind. How beautiful! There are different kinds of flowers in different places, such as peach blossom, pear blossom and apricot blossom ... Their colorful cheeks attract many children.

4. How to write a composition about Gulangyu Island?

Gulangyu Island is a pearl embedded in the South China Sea, and is known as the "sea garden". I also went to this beautiful place on National Day.

Why is it called Gulangyu? It was originally named after a momentum called Gulangyu Island, which is located next to the 44th Bridge in Longzhuang Garden. From a distance, you can hear the waves beating rhythmically against the rocks. There are many good places on Gulangyu Island, such as Sunlight Rock, Longzhuang Garden and so on.

As soon as we got on Gulangyu Island, we went straight to Sunlight Rock, which was "a trip to Xiamen without going to Sunlight Rock". On closer inspection, Sunlight Rock is magnificent. Although it is only 92.7 meters high, I still think it is very high. In the process of climbing the mountain, I looked up at the top of the mountain and thought it was hanging. Then I looked at the steep hillside and the first stone steps, which made me regain my courage and climb up step by step. It's almost time to reach the summit, but the steep stone steps turn left and right, as if climbing a mountain of 300-400 meters. Someone shouted: "Come on! Young man! Almost to the top! " Finally, I reached the top. I looked at it from a distance. The beach is crowded with people and there are many European-style buildings. Looking from a distance, Kinmen Island is staring at us in the distance, and there is a slogan: "Three People's Principles, unite with China"; On Xiamen Island, far from Kinmen Island, there is also the slogan "One country, two systems, reunifying China". We took some photos at the top of the mountain and then slowly descended the mountain.

We walked along the beach to Xinzhuang Garden, where there is a piano museum. I saw the twelve caves first, and there were stone carvings carved into the zodiac. If you can find all the animals in the zodiac as quickly as possible, please go up. Go straight along the path on the hillside and walk past the piano museum for a long time. From the earliest pianos to the modern ones. My favorite is the automatic piano, because people used to worry that only nobles could buy it. It plays a decorative role, but some people can't play the piano, but they can play wonderful music by stepping on the two pedals below. Out of the piano museum, we went to Bridge 44, probably because it has 44 piers. After walking the 44th Bridge, we saw a big stone, Gulangyu Island. Now the tide is high, and the waves are beating on the stones, much like drums.

Hao Yue Park is a theme park to commemorate Zheng Chenggong. We climbed Zheng Chenggong's sculpture, which is 15.7 meters high and weighs 16 17 tons. It is the most magnificent sculpture in China at present. We boarded Zheng Chenggong's sculpture and looked up at it not far away, as if it were looking at us.

Gulangyu Scenic Area is the pride of Xiamen people.

5. How to write a landscape composition is to describe all kinds of natural scenery that people see, hear and come into contact with in a concrete and vivid way, so as to set off the environmental atmosphere, highlight the center of the article or set off the mood of the characters, and express the author's thoughts and feelings. Landscape narrative is a narrative that mainly describes natural scenery, and it is one of the important composition types that primary school students often practice and master its methods.

Writing a scene is mainly to highlight the characteristics of the scene, write the difference between this scene and other scenes, and describe a unique landscape painting for readers. How can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery?

First, pay attention to observation. After determining the observation object, it is necessary to observe it for a long time, comprehensively and deeply, not only to observe the whole, but also to observe the part, not only to observe the static state (color, posture, etc. ) and its dynamics (growth process, seasonal changes, windy and rainy, etc. ); We should also be good at observing from different angles and strive to be vivid, vivid, clear and distinctive. It is also necessary to compare with other scenery to find out their similarities and differences. Only by comparing and grasping its distinctive features can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery.

In addition, the observation points should be selected and written in a certain order. Some write the whole picture first, then the parts, some from top to bottom, some from the inside out, some from far and near ... In short, there must be a basic point to determine the order of observation.

Furthermore, writing scenery is inseparable from lyricism. Scenery is the means, and lyricism is the purpose. There is no article about scenery simply for the sake of scenery. Express your feelings through vivid and detailed descriptions. Only by infiltrating the author's true feelings can we better express the center of the article and play its due role.

Then, how can we pin our feelings on the description of scenery and combine the description of scenery with lyricism?

First of all, we should find the scenery that suits us to express our feelings. The scenery of a scenic spot is rich and colorful, so you can't "grab your eyebrows and beard" and write it all in, so the article will be very miscellaneous and unintelligible. It should be based on the need of emotional expression, and treason can be written with emotional scenery. At the same time, the author should have rich associations, adopt personification, metaphor and other writing techniques, so as to make the scenery described vivid, full of humanistic characteristics and feelings, and make the article integrate with the scenery, scenery and emotion.

6. How to write a composition describing the scenery?

Generally, we write scenes by changing scenes, which can make the scenes move! Landscape description is more common in narratives based on people's narratives. These scenery descriptions are generally used to explain the background, time and place of the story, and play a role in rendering the atmosphere, setting off the characters and showing the center. There is also a kind of article in the narrative, which specifically describes seasonal solar terms, mountains, rivers, lakes and seas, the sun, the moon and the starry sky, cloudy eyes, rain and snow, flowers and trees, living environment, customs and habits, and so on. How to write a good narrative about scenery?

The first thing is to grasp the characteristics of the scenery. The scenery in the world is very different, and each has its own attitude. Only by grasping the uniqueness of the scenery can we draw its special image and write its inner charm.

Zhu Ziqing's prose "Spring" describes all kinds of scenery in spring: mountains, water, grass, flowers, rain and so on. For spring grass, the author has grasped the following characteristics: first, the budding bud is exposed to the ground because of the obstruction of squeezing through the soil; The second is the tender mind of the newborn grass; Third, the color of spring grass is "green"; Fourth, human touch is "soft". For the spring rain, I wrote about the fineness of the rain, "such as ox hair, such as needles, such as filaments", the obscurity of the rain, "there is a thin layer of smoke on other people's roofs", the role of the spring rain in nourishing everything, and "the leaves are light green and the grass is green enough to stare". In the last three sentences of the article, spring is written as "newborn doll", "little girl with beautiful flowers" and "robust youth" with vivid metaphors to praise the vitality and vitality of spring.

How can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery?

The only way is to observe more. Only by observing, comparing and thinking more, can we find the feelings that others don't have, and can we describe the characteristics of the landscape in a novel and unique way. The second is to deal with the relationship between emotion and scene, so as to blend the scene. Natural scenery itself has no sense of color, but once written into the work, it will be branded with the author's emotional imprint, showing a distinct tendency.

Therefore, before writing this kind of article, we should have a clear writing purpose, which determines the choice, details and order of scenery materials. For example, the same story is about mountain climbing. If it is to express the title "Only if you are not afraid of difficulties and dare to climb, can you reach the beautiful peak", the article should highlight the dangers and dangers of mountain roads, the great difficulties, the firm will, and the lofty sentiments that "other mountains are dwarfed under the sky". After climbing to the top. If you are expressing your love for the mountains and rivers of the motherland, you should focus on depicting the beauty of the scenery and expressing the truth of your feelings. There are two ways to deal with the relationship between emotion and scenery in this article. One is to describe the writer's feelings while writing scenery, that is, to borrow scenery to express feelings and reason; The second is to completely integrate the author's feelings into the scenery described. On the surface, it seems to be an objective description of the scenery, but between the lines, it is the author's deep affection, which is called affection in the scene. The Japanese essayist Dev Lu Hua's "Chao Frost", which was selected as a textbook for the first grade of junior high school, belongs to the first case. This paper not only describes the characteristics of Chao Shuang, but also directly expresses the love for Chao Shuang at the beginning and end. Mr. Zhu Ziqing's Spring is different. The author did not express his thoughts directly in the article, but between the lines, he was filled with thoughts and feelings of cherishing spring and being positive.

In addition, although the narrative of scenery is not written for scenery, the scenery must be written well, so as to make the feelings in the text rely on it and lay a good foundation for lyricism and clarity. To write a good scene, we should not only grasp the characteristics mentioned above, but also use a variety of descriptive methods and rhetorical devices to make the scene concrete, true, vivid and vivid.

7. Describe a static composition and learn some landscape sketching methods of about 200 words. In composition teaching, we often ask students to describe the scenery, and some fragments practice writing the scenery; Travel notes such as spring outing and autumn outing should write scenery; Some propositional compositions also require the description of scenery ... Most students can only state stories abstractly, but can't write the scenery tangible, colorful, tasteful and emotional, which is often "difficult to get together".

So, how to learn landscape painting? In this paper, taking the lesson "Seaside Town" as an example, several methods of landscape sketch are discussed: 1. Close-up and long-range display level. When describing the beautiful scenery of the seaside town, the author carefully observes and grasps the characteristics, from far to near, step by step and orderly.

For example, in section 1-3 of the text, we first talk about the scenery of the sea, then talk about the seaside scene in the morning, and finally talk about the shells on the beach and the return of fishing fleets. As can be seen from the article, the distant view plays a foil role, but it is only roughly outlined, while the close-up view is the main body and plays a major role, so it is described by the close-up lens.

2. The static scenery and dynamic scenery are ingeniously coordinated. In this paper, the combination of dynamic and static descriptions is adopted to make the dynamic and static scenes set each other off.

For example, in the third part of the text, the author wrote about the beach. First, he wrote that there are beautiful shells everywhere, and people turn a blind eye to them, so the shells have to lie there alone. This is a description of a still scene; Then, with a stroke of a pen, the description of static scenery was changed to that of dynamic scenery, and it was written that as soon as the fleet returned to shore with full loads, the beach became noisy, forming a sharp contrast, static and dynamic, highlighting the beautiful scenery of the seaside. 3. Real scenes and virtual scenes are always suitable.

While describing the real scene, properly introducing the virtual scene can cultivate students' ability of association and imagination, make the artistic conception enter a high realm and add magical colors to the picture. For example, writing words in the yard of a small town, grasping the characteristics of "many trees are planted in every yard", wrote "The phoenix tree is in bloom, so lively, the town seems to be shrouded in red clouds".

Among them, the word "lively" vividly depicts the scene of the flowers of the phoenix tree competing to open, giving people a sense of beauty. "Small town seems to be shrouded in a red cloud", which gives people a vague meaning. The flowers are in full bloom, and they are connected together, just like red clouds, which are full of small towns. This virtual description adds a bit of beauty to the beauty of the small town.

4. Scenery and characters are harmonious. A good landscape article cannot be without people and their activities.

In the article, the author expresses his thoughts and feelings of loving his hometown by describing the scene. The author wrote in the article: "When people walk to the end of the street, they can see the vast sea." "The fishermen on sailboats and the soldiers on warships are plated with gold on their faces and arms."

"Every rest day, the stone bench is always full of people." "People cleaned the streets so clean that there was not a leaf left."

All the lines are filled with the breath of peace and quiet life. To sum up, if you want to make the scenery tangible, colorful and tasty, you should not only see it with your eyes, hear it with your ears and smell it with your nose, but also feel it with your heart to improve your language ability.

8. How to write and cut the description of the scenery in the composition is still chaotic. It is a kind of sadness, especially a taste in my heart. "

I don't want to sing on the green flag, because the rough surface is as devastating as the confidence I lost inside.

I failed the monthly exam this time. After getting my grades, I walked alone in the desolate street. The chirping of birds in the trees on both sides made me feel very upset, but after listening carefully, these birds seemed to understand my sadness like bosom friends and cried with me.

The shoulder strap of the schoolbag draws two thin marks on the shoulder, which is very painful and heavy. Looking at the drooping sunset, close at hand, it seems to melt, and tears will fall. Are you crying for me?

It's quiet at night, and everything is in my sleep. I sat by the window alone, looking at the bright moonlight, not lacking a little haggard, but also evoking my heavy sadness, but the arrival of a heavy rain seemed to wash away my sadness.