Composition about the Spring Festival.

Spring Festival composition (1)

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Selected Comments: Jiangxi Wanzai Long Yongzhong

There are many research articles on topic composition at present. Based on this consideration, this paper specially selects 13 good compositions from about 5 test papers in grade two, and comments them from as many angles as possible, in order to inspire the idea of topic composition. I sincerely hope that after reading the following wonderful articles, the conception of topic composition will make a qualitative leap!

1. One day's experience

Zhong Shihong, Class 4, Grade 2

Amid the sound of firecrackers, we ushered in the biggest festival in China-the Spring Festival. Everyone was beaming, hung up red lanterns and posted red Spring Festival couplets, and were busy ...

On the first day of the first month, it was another happy day.

I used to be the last person to get up, but today I won the first place because I really want to smell the fragrant firecrackers. Strings of firecrackers are lit in people's hands, and the sound is really loud, splashing everywhere, as if to send every blessing to thousands of households. The sound of firecrackers is continuous, crackling and lively.

after the firecrackers, there is nothing interesting. Let's have breakfast and go out to play later!

After dinner, I invited some friends to play together. The firecrackers lit in the street produced beautiful flowers on the ground. They were so beautiful. The pocket money given by my parents was in my bag, so I was so happy. Today's birds also come out to join in the fun, and probably they are also very happy.

the street is really a street, with everything to play and eat. Most of the people I saw were children. I took a look and counted the spicy food stalls as the best business:

"I want a string of rice cakes!" " Cried a fat child.

how about going somewhere else? In front of a stationery store stall, I stopped again. There are all kinds of fun things there: airplane models, binoculars, electric cars … all fun things. I find that the most popular things are those for fun.

In other places, I also saw some selling balloons, pistols, skipping rope, others selling snacks, snacks and fruits, all kinds of clothes and food are available, which is really amazing.

After playing all morning, I'm going to visit relatives and friends to celebrate the New Year in the afternoon, which is undoubtedly a happy thing.

I really had a good time today! It's a feast for the eyes, a feast for the mouth and a feast for the hands. The luckiest thing is those vendors, but business is booming today!

I sincerely hope that today's children all over the country will be happy and have no troubles in the new year, but don't "play with things"!

Comment: This paper writes the festive atmosphere of the Spring Festival based on the day's experience. Playing firecrackers, shopping, and writing all the way, wrote people's happy mood during the Spring Festival in a lively atmosphere. It can be said that the "happiness" of this article can be regarded as the eye of the whole text. Taking the day's activities as the perspective, it reflects the excitement of the traditional Spring Festival and people's infinite happiness, and grasps the key features of the topic "Spring Festival".

2. Happy Spring Festival

Tang Yungen, Class 1, Grade 2

Hope! Looking forward to it, seeing that the Spring Festival is coming soon, I can't help laughing at this. Before the Spring Festival, people were all beaming and full of energy. There is an endless stream of people shopping, some are buying New Year pictures, some are buying new year's goods, some are sitting in a fire box watching TV around the stove, and some are playing mahjong and poker, and so on.

Anyway, the streets are colorful, there are all kinds of people, and all kinds of goods are complete and dazzling. I'm afraid people can't choose what they want to buy!

Before the Spring Festival, every household was brightly lit, and every family dressed their houses in a unique way, each with its own personality. They put the new year's goods they bought all over the floor. How to paste the bought New Year pictures depends on their own styles and preferences. Some are sticking, some are sticking backwards, and some are sticking askew, each with its own merits. People have prepared all the dishes they have bought, and only when the Spring Festival comes, they can have a good meal. Every family has firecrackers, and people put on new clothes to welcome the new year. Before the Spring Festival, when people go out, if they meet good friends, they always say, "Go to the streets!"

People kill pigs and sheep and are busy preparing for the Spring Festival.

When the Spring Festival comes, the children get up early and go to their parents' rooms to start the traditional New Year greeting ceremony. The children said some auspicious words to their parents, and their parents took out lucky money to make the children happy. Everyone hopes that this year will be auspicious and lucky.

Some relatives and friends got together, sipping wine and delicacies, and talking about some happy words. The happiest thing is that we can save a lot of lucky money, and then go to the street to buy many interesting things, such as cars, four-wheel drive cars, toy guns, football, etc., and we can make a lot of money as long as our mouths are sweeter and we say more blessings!

People have been playing until late at night, chewing delicious fruits in their mouths and setting off firecrackers and fireworks in their hands ... Adults and children are singing and dancing, enjoying themselves!

Comment: This article always writes about the atmosphere of the Spring Festival first, and then divides it into two scenes before and after the Spring Festival to show people's various activities before and after the Spring Festival. The structure of the total score is extremely rigorous. Preparation and enjoyment are like two beautiful scrolls, which are displayed in front of people's eyes, and all of them take the title "happiness" as the full text, and the whole text is a string. In a word, this article is exquisitely structured.

3. Writing couplets

Wang Dunyong, Class 2, Grade 2

The Spring Festival is coming, and I know everyone must like it very much. Because people can post Spring Festival couplets, watch the Spring Festival Gala, and visit relatives and friends ...

I remember last year when the Spring Festival was coming, I learned to write couplets at home. I stood by and watched the adults write couplets, only to see that they had a brush in their hands, dipped it in ink, and then wrote a few big characters on red paper. I can't remember the specific content. That couplet was very neatly written. When I saw it, I said to my uncle, "Can you teach me to write couplets?" I clearly remember my uncle asking, "Can you use a writing brush? Do you know how to write couplets? " I shook my head and said, "No." So he added, "You are one year older this year, and you can't even use a brush. Take this opportunity, I will teach you a few tricks." After listening to my uncle's words, I jumped with joy.

My uncle told me to sit up straight when writing, and not to lie prone on the table. Then tell me in detail how to use the brush. After listening to my uncle's words, I finally learned some basic methods of using a brush. Then my uncle asked me to write a few words to show him. I wrote five words: "I love China best". It's crooked, probably just using a brush! Uncle smiled: "The handwriting is good, but the strokes are not straight."

Then my uncle taught me: "You don't have to use the same strength when writing every word. When writing every word, the strength you use should be changed, so that the written words will be more varied and look more beautiful. Uncle also wrote a few words for me to imitate. Looking at my uncle's handwriting is just very comfortable. I tried to write a few words like my uncle, and it really made progress. It looked much better than what I just wrote. I was very happy.

My uncle also told me to practice writing frequently and imitate famous stickers more. The more you write, the better your handwriting will look.

In this Spring Festival, I learned some skills of writing brush characters, which is more enjoyable and more affordable than getting lucky money.

Comment: This article focuses on writing Spring Festival couplets. The full text uses fine brushwork to write a very small event with nose and eyes, and the characters are vividly on the paper. If this article has a characteristic, it is that the angle of material selection is small, and the full text only shows the life of the Spring Festival by writing the Spring Festival couplets. Don't cover everything, and use it well in a small way.

4. Photographing

Xin Yuyun, Class 1, Grade 2

"You can't change the hook for a hundred years!" Nursery rhymes are ringing again, and we remember our agreement before the Spring Festival: to take pictures during the Spring Festival.

I ate delicious snacks and strolled to Lido Photo Studio. I'm so happy! It is still open. We took action, each wearing a festive red coat and holding bright red flowers, and took many photos. Wow, not bad! This pose is good! There was the photographer's approval. Indeed, I'm not bragging. Lily's pose is really wonderful. What a beautiful girl! Look, the second one is playing again, only to see his ass twist, his right hand on the back of his head, and his left hand posing as a boss to us! Followed by the third and fourth, it seems that you are fighting for each other and don't give way to each other. It's really enjoyable!

is it more exciting than them this time?

I saw Huamin dressed as a woman, having a full house of laughter, laughing incessantly, and walking on the catwalk and twisting the yangko. Also popped up a foreign language: "Happy new year!" And made everyone burst into laughter. Not wanting to lag behind, I walked out wearing a wedding dress. As a result, they were shocked. After a short silence, they suddenly burst out laughing and laughed. But I tried not to laugh and made a few poses that I thought were cool. Ha! See their eyes, also with envy! Of course, I was a little embarrassed at this moment, blushing and running into the dressing room.

listen, they are still laughing! Alas, it's really "a short step makes a long regret!" Why should I wear a wedding dress?

wow, on the way home, we are still immersed in the good memories just now. Walking and talking, the people who talk are eloquent, the people who listen are interested, and the people who watch are confused. I really don't know what medicine we are selling in the gourd. At the thought of this, we laughed and laughed.

Laughing is so brilliant and intoxicating, leaving laughter all the way ...

Comment: This article shows the happiness of the Spring Festival from a small matter, and uses the technique of seeing the big from the small. The more prominent feature of this paper is the humor of the language. For example, the description of hilarious scenes in the text, the combination of local culture and foreign culture, and the combination of whole sentences all put a dazzling colorful coat on the language. It seems that language is indispensable if you want an article to be fascinating.

5. Look at the lights

Zhong Lu of Class 2, Grade 2

Look forward to it, look forward to it! I finally look forward to the day of the Spring Festival. We'll have fun! The new is here again, and the past is like the wind, taking all my previous memories away. This year, I started my new life again.

"When the New Year comes, when the New Year comes, we all set off firecrackers ..." This is what we sang ourselves. Look, what a happy Spring Festival! Every household is a piece of red, putting up couplets, hanging lanterns and wrapping jiaozi, and the whole family is too busy.

after dinner, I took my sister's hand and ran to the street in one breath. "How beautiful!" I can't help exclaiming. The street is imposing, packed with people and traffic. Let's wander around the street. What? Here comes the lion lantern charmer! You see, the lion's head swings left and right, which looks very fierce, but when it drills around, I'm a little worried. What if it falls? Then I thought about it, how could such a clever lion! So I continued to calm down and look at the lights. There were so many people that we had to jump up and watch.

"elder sister, elder sister! Here comes the lantern again! Look at the lanterns! Let's go there and see! " Sister shouted. "Lantern? Lantern! I finally saw you. " I thought there were fewer and fewer lights now, so I may not see lanterns this year. This makes me overjoyed! I am happy to respond: "Let's go! "Sister listen to me say a sentence in a foreign language, or, is really a monk, scratching their heads, I conveniently pull, went to see the lanterns.

colorful lanterns are so beautiful. The lantern is changing in the hands of men and women, and four big characters are suddenly discharged: "Happy New Year", and suddenly it is "Happy New Year." I can't remember how many words were lined up. Anyway, I only remember that the gongs and drums were loud and the melodious sound of suona flute was sent to the eardrum. Not to mention the singing voice of those men and women, "Come in the first month, it's the New Year ..." The voice is sweet and the graceful dance dazzles people. We enjoyed it to our heart's content, which was better than the confusion of a dream. There were many programs below, and the clown with a big face made people laugh from time to time.

it's full of laughter.

It was late at night, and there were fewer and fewer people in the street. Even so, I was reluctant to leave, and my sister took me, so I reluctantly left. My parents had already gone to sleep, and they were brought into a sweet dream by the joy of the Spring Festival ... < P > My sister and I were talking about the interesting things about watching lights in bed today, and then we drifted into the dream.

Comment: This article is still trying to dig from the perspective of minor incidents. Of course, this article makes a fuss from the traditional customs of China, which is also a unique perspective. There is a joint custom, and it also has local customs in China. Now, although fewer people play with lanterns during the Spring Festival, there are still some people who play with lanterns stubbornly continuing the beautiful customs left by China ancestors.

6. Sad Spring Festival

Class 2, Grade 2

The Spring Festival is supposed to be a joyous day, but I look like it, but I don't smell like it. Originally, our family should have a good time, but a sudden accident ruined our good mood.

During the Spring Festival that year, we happily prepared to welcome my uncle back for the Spring Festival, but we waited for a long time at that time, but there was no sign of my uncle. I thought he had something to do temporarily and put off the date of going home. But when a phone call came back, my grandparents sat there sighing, and my aunt secretly wiped her tears. I guess my uncle must have had an accident outside. As I expected, my father came to my grandmother with clothes in the early morning of the first day of junior high school and was still talking, which happened to be seen by me when I was getting up to go to the toilet. I was still in a daze, and I suddenly woke up a lot.

I crept by the door and put my ear to eavesdrop on their conversation. It turned out that they were talking about my uncle. When I heard this, my curiosity increased, so I kept hiding outside the door to listen to them. After listening for a long time, I finally understood the cause and effect of why my uncle didn't come back.

It turned out that my uncle bought a ticket and was about to come back. Suddenly he met gangsters at the station. Moreover, these gangsters were very fierce. They took my uncle to a forest. Because my uncle resisted, they beat him up and took all the money. This is my uncle's hard-earned money. I can't help but feel heavy when I think that the money will go up in smoke.

This kind of thing happened in my own home, even though it might only be seen on TV!

Every time it comes to the festive day of Chinese New Year, I will think of that sad Spring Festival, and I also hope that this kind of thing will never happen in any family. After all, it is a sad thing!

Comment: This article is quite unique in conception. When writing the Spring Festival, I think of happiness. However, this article is innovative from the opposite side. Therefore, reverse thinking can often win by surprise.

In addition, this paper is also very successful in the application of suspense. Why didn't my uncle come back? What was the reason? The article didn't tell the reader at once, but told the truth.