Narrative is an environmental description composition.

1. Narrative composition with environmental description There is a clear river, and groups of lovely and clever fish often come and go. They swam around in the clear river, living happily and being extremely happy. I don't know when, people built a chemical plant by the river and directly discharged the chemical wastewater into this crystal clear river. From then on, this crystal clear river became turbid and gave off an unpleasant smell. One day, a mother goldfish took two lovely little goldfish out to play as usual. They swam and swam. The little goldfish saw many dead friends along the way and asked her mother, "Why are all her friends dead?" Mother told them that the water in the upper reaches may be polluted, so let's leave the river quickly! How terrible that is! The little goldfish said, "We have to tell everyone to get out of here." So, all the living fish in the river swam away one by one, leaving the polluted river. From then on, the river can no longer see those lovely little fish.

Teacher's comment: The little author conveyed to us the theme of such an essay with the story of a group of goldfish moving-we should protect the environment and can't destroy it any more. The plot of the little author is well shaped, although it is relatively simple, but this plot arrangement can directly reach the theme, so that our readers can quickly understand the writing intention of the little author. The author's composition language is unpretentious. When describing goldfish, the little author's description is vivid and vivid, which highlights the little author's writing intention from one side. Very good. Keep trying!

2. Narrative composition with environmental description There is a very clear river, and groups of cute and clever small fish often come and go. They swam around in the clear river, living happily and being extremely happy.

I don't know when, people built a chemical plant by the river and directly discharged the chemical wastewater into this crystal clear river. From then on, this crystal clear river became turbid and gave off an unpleasant smell. One day, a mother goldfish took two lovely little goldfish out to play as usual. They swam and swam. The little goldfish saw many dead friends along the way and asked her mother, "Why are all her friends dead?" Mother told them that the water in the upper reaches may be polluted, so let's leave the river quickly! How terrible that is! The little goldfish said, "We have to tell everyone to get out of here."

So, all the living fish in the river swam away one by one, leaving the polluted river. From then on, the river can no longer see those lovely little fish.

Teacher's comment: The little author conveyed to us the theme of such an essay with the story of a group of goldfish moving-we should protect the environment and can't destroy it any more. The plot of the little author is well shaped, although it is relatively simple, but this plot arrangement can directly reach the theme, so that our readers can quickly understand the writing intention of the little author.

The author's composition language is unpretentious. When describing goldfish, the little author's description is vivid and vivid, which highlights the little author's writing intention from one side. That's good. Keep trying.

The earth is our home and the mother of mankind. We rely on it and explore it. How beautiful this blue planet is, but you know, there is only one earth!

Regrettably, many people turn a blind eye to this simple truth and continue to do whatever they want, regardless of the safety of the earth's homeland. Qu, an environmental scientist, once said: "Only change can save the fate of mankind, and only change can make our descendants survive." One of the "changes" is environmental protection. That's right, so now many people are holding slogans and shouting empty slogans in the street, but they don't see much action. Will the pollution get better? Don't!

You see, the rivers in our city are black and smelly; Long queues of cars emit a lot of exhaust gas; A piece of green land has become a "stone forest"; The crisp birdsong disappeared without a trace. In this way, China will continue to be short of water, the air will become more and more turbid, and 10% of bird species will disappear in this century. The above things, we humans are the culprit!

Everyone knows that trees can absorb carbon dioxide, release oxygen and purify the air, which is a necessary condition for our human survival. However, some people cut down trees for money, which leads to excessive soil erosion, serious damage to the earth's vegetation, and desertification of oases and cities, threatening our human survival. As for the disposable chopsticks we usually use, it consumes dozens of acres of forest every day. In the eyes of those people, trees seem to have no value except for furniture and building materials. Does anyone not understand what trees mean to us? Our living area is already very small. If we go on like this, we may even lose our only land. In addition, the Yellow River, our mother river, has become one of the most polluted rivers in China in recent years. We can't watch the Yellow River dry up from our hands, so many environmentalists have studied plans to control the pollution of the Yellow River and tried to improve its water quality. However, without our participation, the Yellow River, the cradle of our life, will run dry and die.

If we destroy the environment again without restraint, we will naturally be punished. Those catastrophic floods claimed countless lives, and due to the greenhouse effect, glaciers in Antarctica and the Arctic melted, resulting in rising water levels and seawater flooding coastal areas, which caused great economic losses. Isn't this the best proof?

My hometown Guangning relies on Zhuhai eco-tourism to develop its economy. Now the environment of some bamboo forests is so chaotic that people complain. Eco-tourism in Zhuhai is the foundation of our development in Guangning. When the roots are destroyed, how can we grow lush branches and leaves and produce beautiful flowers?

Let's be kind to human beings and nature! I wonder if you have read the article 100 things you can do to protect the environment. In fact, there are many things we can do. For example, plant a pot of flowers and a tree on Arbor Day; Protecting wild animals is the balance of ecology; Cherish water resources and don't dump garbage into the river; Being a little environmental guardian, using every green anniversary to publicize environmental awareness, so that green mountains are always there, green water is always flowing, and the soil is always fragrant ... these are all things we can do. Why don't we want to practice?

Now, the ecological environment of the earth is getting worse and worse, and the environmental alarm has sounded. Let's join the ranks of environmental protection, create a bright future in which man and nature live in harmony, and let man and nature live endlessly.

4. The narrative composition car with environmental description at the beginning came, but it didn't stop. With great strength, several young people got into the car directly.

A few quick boys jumped left and right like monkeys, jumped up with a whoosh and blocked the car door. Many people are desperately squeezing, only seeing white hands, bronze hands, rough hands and soft hands, instinctively reaching forward and waving, all hoping to catch the door.

"Cyclops" may be a "battlefield" and take the lead. Just as the door opened, his right hand grabbed the handrail on the door and jumped up. People are already standing on the doorsteps. His left hand slammed the crowd in the car, his right foot pushed back and his left foot quickly lifted. Pushed by the crowd behind him, he finally got on the bus as he wished.

A fat sister-in-law just stepped on the steps with her thick and short right leg, and her left foot kept pushing outward. She twisted her fat body with all her strength, and her bloated hands clung to the armrest of the car door. No matter how hard she tried, * * * was squeezed by the car door, making her shout "My God!" " "Crowding cars is really a battle of different pursuits.

5. The 800-word note environment of senior high school composition describes whose flute is getting louder and farther away, instead of wandering and waiting in broken walls.

Where is the dwelling place of Western jackdaw in the west? He doesn't look at Lao Teng's next long-lost old friend. The sand of time has buried everything in the past, and only a sigh still echoes in my ears.

Ups and downs, the ancients went further and further. When shall we meet? I'm afraid it's blue sky, but it's hard to find two places. Whenever I play chess, I always choose the black side, deploy troops on the chessboard and be the king of this small world.

The confrontation between the Rossoneri seems to reproduce the battle between Chu and Han thousands of years ago. The cold chess pieces in his hand are full of the unyielding soul of the overlord, and the resentment and unwillingness in his heart turn into the sound of the chess pieces falling off the plate.

Every time I move, my mood is very complicated. I don't know why the overlord refused to cross the east of Wujiang River.

I wonder how overlord felt when he entrusted his beloved war horse to him. I don't know if overlord understands the sadness and despair hidden under her delicate makeup when watching Yuji dance.

The dead rest in peace, while the living mourn. That endless hatred and helplessness, across the river of time, is rolling in my heart.

I still remember how I felt when I first heard the story of Xiang Yu when I was a child. Since then, my admiration for overlord has increased day by day, but with the growth of age, I have a deeper understanding of overlord. He is arrogant and arrogant, and he respects the overlord and seals Hou everywhere; His heroic feelings, national hatred and family hatred must be reported; His cruelty burned Fang and slaughtered the whole city; His courage, cross the rubicon, broke the chi; Short-sighted, angry at Fan Zeng, died in u. 99 Zuo Wen's encirclement.

These intertwined things exist in my heart, but the heroes in the hearts of teenagers can't tolerate any flaws. Gradually, I began to hate him and resent him, and a feeling of being cheated deeply occupied my heart.

Deep respect, deep hatred Stubborn that he deserved it.

Lock him and his reverence in a cage of inner darkness. When playing chess, although I still hold black chess, I am full of disgust.

The image of hegemony and invincibility in my mind has collapsed. I thought everyone in the past had gone and would never come again.

After the song, the wine wakes up first, and the sleeve dance is fleeting. Singing the broken string of Jinse, I started the cold building in the west wind.

Time is always the most exquisite transvestite, turning people into one different appearance after another. A few days ago, when I was reading historical records in the warm sun, I happened to see Xiang Yu's notebook. I paused, thought about it, and looked at it carefully.

Black handwriting glides through your fingertips. Spectacular scenes flooded into my mind.

Close the book, and my thoughts are myriad. Xiang Yu, what kind of person are you?

Mixed feelings are rolling in my heart. Those dusty days and nights came to my eyes.

Needle-thin pain spreads from the fingertips to the heart. Xiang Yu, the overlord of Chu, is really straightforward and difficult to understand.

Although you are cruel, you take care of people around you. Although you are overbearing, you are affectionate and interested.

Although you are reckless, you are considerate. For a long time, I thought you had long been forgotten by me, but I didn't expect you to stay quietly in the corner.

Never far away. It suddenly occurred to me that you are also a flesh-and-blood person, not a fairy who doesn't touch any secular dust.

Who has no shortcomings? Who does not make mistakes? A strong sense of shame gripped me deeply. What qualifications do I have to ask others? Moreover, he is such a hero with two eyes. The old man is still here. He just changed himself.

6. You need a good beginning and ending. (Narration) It is best to describe the environment, and don't copy 0 1. Balzac said: "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak." After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim. Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. In this world, a star has fallen, nor can it dim the starry sky, nor can a flower wither and ruin the whole spring. We should try our best to go through every level in life, and we can't give up easily no matter what difficulties we encounter. Standing on the coast of history, it can be traced back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu thinks about rivers, and he does not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming leisurely Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums? They chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow it, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor all day, you are willing to take pleasure in yourself and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow, you will reap. Only when you pursue it can you taste decent people. ● Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, you will eventually occupy the blue sky as long as you are ambitious and fall a few times. ●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing at any time, blooming at any time, decorating this long journey with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians wearing branches and brushing leaves can step on thorns without feeling pain and tears. An optimist conquers himself before conquering life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future. An optimistic person has suffered a lot and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible. In the eyes of optimists, the impossible may become possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From excellent people, it is not difficult to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows. Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success. ●08. If you only see the black spots of the sun, then your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish has really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings. ●09, the Himalayan mountains go straight into the sky, but there are climbers' flags on them; The Sahara desert is endless, but there are footprints of hikers inside; There are thousands of cliffs in the Alps, but there are explorers among them; The Yarlung Zangbo River is swift and mighty, but there are stories of brave people in it. ● 10. Gone days are like withered leaves and petals, but the innocence and romance of youth are gone. I don't remember how much rain floated in my chest and how much wind rang in my ear, but I only know that vicissitudes of life have already climbed my face. When a person walks with the pursuit, ups and downs are companions, and hardships are also companions. People have joys and sorrows, and life is ever changing. Every year, there are four seasons. In the long night, you can see the dawn, suffering and happiness. After the cold winter, you don't have to squat and you can look forward to the Spring Festival. ● 12, without the depth of the blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass. There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own position, our own light source and our own voice.

7. The environmental description in narrative 1 renders the atmosphere.

2 Contrast the characters' ... moods.

3. Promote the development of the story.

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On a bright morning, the sunshine wrapped in morning fog quietly falls in the room and classroom through the window ... The soft golden sunshine makes us feel fresh, warm, happy and bright. Sunshine is with us every day. Get up in the morning and say hello to the sun; After school, I waved goodbye to the shallow sunshine. Life is full of sunshine everywhere.

Sunshine is everywhere in my life. Sometimes, sunshine is a kind word, seemingly small, but warm people's hearts. Once, a classmate in the class was not feeling well. When other students saw him, they all came to care about him and asked him for help. A small greeting brought endless warmth like sunshine to others.

Sunshine, or blessing. Whenever there is a festival, we all send sincere wishes to each other, "Happy holidays! Good health! Learning progress ... "These seemingly useless, but give people a sense of satisfaction, a joy, a warmth, just like the soft sunshine in the morning, so comfortable, so happy.

Sunshine is still a "thank you". Every time someone helps me, or I help others, I always say "thank you" from my heart. Whether it is me or others, when I hear this sentence, there will always be a satisfied, sincere and cheerful smile on my face, and I feel so happy and happy! Just like the sunny sun in winter, the sunshine falls gently on the body, which is enough to give people a good mood for a day!

8. My mood composition is more narrative in 700 words. If all the pain can be turned into tears, I will definitely cry, but sadly, tears can't flow down. Sometimes the reality is really cruel, maybe I am running away, so I believe in angels, so I am obsessed with the legends of angels, so I pursue their dreams. Although unrealistic, some sadness is really only known to yourself. So some feelings can only be said to themselves. So I just tell others my happiness and show my smiling face. The sunset has lost its helplessness, but it can cover up its sadness with the sunset glow. May I? Sometimes it is really helpless. Just like yourself, tell him that you are happy when you are unhappy. Obviously very sad, but still have to coax him to make him happy; Obviously sometimes annoying, but still shake your head and say it's not annoying; I didn't want to talk to him, but I turned around and smiled at him. Because I know he gets angry too easily, because I know he will be sad, because I don't want to hurt him, because I don't want to lose my friend ... because I have suffered, I am afraid of losing it, so I know how to cherish it. Even if I know you are sad, even if I really don't want to make you sad, what can I do? This is the reality. Many things can't be changed, you know? My heart is bleeding, crying and breaking ... I know you will understand.

9. Narrative composition with environmental description Ding "After school started, I walked briskly along the embankment of Freedom River on my way home.

Listen to the sound of the river beating against the riverbank and watch the old man and children playing on the riverbank. From time to time, I heard the chirping of seagulls and looked up at several seagulls flying in the blue sky, which brought me into a world of reverie.

Suddenly my head was hit by a foreign body, which pulled me back from my reverie. What do I want? Is it space food?

Out of curiosity, I touched it with my hand The weather is very warm. At first glance, there is green in black and black in green. A foul smell went straight into my nose.

"Gull shit!" I gave a cry. I quickly took out a wet towel to wipe my head, but the stench didn't mean to leave my body. I picked up my schoolbag and rushed home with my head covered for fear of being seen. I rushed into the bathroom and washed my hair four or five times before the stench completely dispersed from my head.

After a while, dad came back. I quickly introduced this seagull to my father and told him all kinds of crimes, but my father said, "This is not a bad thing. Seagulls are particularly clean animals. This river used to be a stinking ditch, and there were no seagulls at all. Now seagulls come to show that the environment is getting better. There are 8 narrative compositions with environmental descriptions. "

For a better environment, I generously forgave this seagull.

10. At the beginning, a narrative composition car with an environmental description came, but it didn't stop. With great strength, several young people got into the car directly.

A few witty boys jumped from left to right like monkeys, jumped up with a whoosh and blocked the door. Many people are desperately squeezing, only seeing white hands, bronze hands, rough hands and soft hands, instinctively reaching forward and waving, all hoping to catch the door.

"Cyclops" may be a "battlefield" and take the lead. Just as the door opened, his right hand grabbed the handrail on the door and jumped up. He is already standing on the pedal of the door. His left hand slammed the crowd in the car, his right foot pushed back and his left foot quickly lifted. Pushed by the crowd behind him, he finally got on the bus as he wished.

As soon as a stout right leg of a fat eldest sister-in-law stepped on the steps, her left foot kept pedaling outward. She twisted her fat body with all her strength, and zhidao grabbed the armrest of the car door with her bloated big hand. No matter how hard she tried, * * * was squeezed by the car door, making her shout "My God!" " "Crowding cars is really a battle of different pursuits.