Too many words were deleted from the purple banner ~ ~ to the middle ~ ~ now flirting with the sunshine.

It seems to be the personification technique used by junior middle school students.

The whole sentence is on a big purple banner with a little silver light, just like splashing water. When you look closely, you know that it is the lightest part of each purple flower, flirting with the sun.

The specific meaning is that

the depth of different parts of each flower is delicately written, which is bright and lovely, exquisite and penetrating, dynamic and interesting.

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Text discussion

First, grasp the whole

At first, anxiety and grief "have been pressing on my heart". In the light purple brilliance and light purple fragrance of the blooming vines, "I" was quiet, happy and refreshed. I realized that "flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless." We can't let yesterday's misfortune crush people. Everyone should, like wisteria flowers, devote themselves to the long river of life with full vitality and sail on the river of shining flowers.

The wisteria Waterfall is a portrayal of the dead wood in spring at the beginning of the new era, and the author's heart song is the voice of people at that time.

Second, research on the problem

1. Why did the author's feelings change like that in the face of Wisteria Falls, and how did he feel about life?

To study this problem, we should pay attention to the writing time-in 1982, the article mentioned a large wisteria plant "more than ten years ago". Later, the wisteria frame was torn down and fruit trees were planted, on the grounds that "flowers and life are inevitably related", which sounds ridiculous today. This is a very "left" argument.

According to this clue and the historical background, we can understand the thoughts and feelings of this essay. From 1966 to 1976, it was a decade of catastrophe. The smashing of the Gang of Four, bringing order out of chaos, ushered in a new era of socialist modernization, and the land of China is thriving again. With such a historical background, we will understand that the fate of wisteria, from the scarcity of flowers to the destruction, is a portrayal and symbol of the fate of the whole country in the past ten years. Looking back on the fate of flowers and people, the author realized that "flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless", that is to say, when they encounter misfortunes, they should not be overwhelmed by bad luck, but should maintain a firm belief in the long-term life. After bad luck, you can't always let your grief weigh on your heart. You should face a new life, cheer up and devote yourself to great cause with high morale. The author understood it thoroughly, so "in this light purple brilliance and light purple fragrance, I unconsciously accelerated my pace." From the footsteps, we can feel the author's new mental state.

In studying this problem, we should also pay attention to the six words "life and death mystery, brotherhood". Brothers, brothers. What I'm talking about here is the author's younger brother, who is three years younger than her, who is terminally ill and dying, and is anxious and sad to be a sister. Now, in the face of wisteria, I am "immersed in the glory of this dense flower, and nothing else exists for the time being, only spiritual peace and joy of life". It can be understood that "all kinds of misfortunes" also include death. So, why do you say that "the long river of life is endless"? Individual life is endless, and the long river of human life is endless. That is to say, we can't be trapped in personal misfortune, but share the same fate with the people of the motherland.

2. "In addition to the brilliance, there is a faint fragrance here, and the fragrance seems to be light purple, and the dream gently covers me." How to describe smell as color and dream?

aroma, resorting to the sense of smell; Color, resorting to vision; Dreams are brain hallucinations. People's feelings can be communicated. Rhetorically, it is called synaesthesia.

3. How can there be such a fallacy as "what is the inevitable relationship between flowers and life corruption"?

It sounds incredible now, but this was the era when the ultra-left trend of thought was rampant. They have a very narrow understanding of the thoughts and feelings of the working people. They think that flower viewing is not a hobby of workers, but a petty-bourgeois sentiment and bourgeois sentiment. They even think that loving flowers will corrupt.

4. "The long river of life is endless" is followed by the sentence, "I touched the little purple flower cabin, which was full of wine of life. It was full of sails and sailed on the river of shining flowers. It is one of the ten thousand flowers, and it is a flower that makes up a beautiful flowing waterfall. "There seems to be symbolic significance and philosophy here. If this is the case, what does it symbolize? What philosophy does it contain?

It is indeed symbolic. At the beginning of the new historical period, the people of China are full of vitality. At that time, there was a very popular saying, "Let go of your arms and do it". The enthusiasm for doing it came out of generate like a volcano, and it was like a thousand boats competing to join the torrent of socialist modernization. These two sentences are another philosophy. Everyone is a part of socialist modernization. Only when everyone works hard can the great cause of the four modernizations be brilliant. After understanding this philosophy, it is not difficult to understand why the author "quickened his pace".

5. What are the implications of the text for our writing?

This kind of article is called "expressing one's will by supporting things" or "expressing one's feelings by taking advantage of scenery". You can get a lot of enlightenment from the text if you want to write this kind of article.

first, writing scenery is the basis of expressing one's will. First, we should write the scenery well, and we should be full of feelings in writing scenery, and then we should express our feelings or comments directly when it comes to fruition. Love comes from the scene, and discussion comes from the scene, which is a good article.

emotion and reason, if there are two or three layers, it is better. This essay, after talking about "spiritual peace and joy of life", has a new meaning and is rich.

second, the whole and every part of the scene should be carefully observed. We can see that the author writes a tree as well as one ear and one flower. We can imagine how thoughtful and meticulous she is in observing the whole and the parts.

Third, you should have feelings for the scenery. If the scenery is like the person you like in your mind, it will be vivid and cordial to write.

personification, metaphor, etc. are not written with the rhetorical devices in mind, but the image and feeling of things in mind. A wisteria flower, in the author's mind, is like a waterfall, like a person, it is flowing, it is laughing, it is flirting with the sun, and when written, the wisteria flower is particularly beautiful and lovely. When writing, you must have imagination and association in order to be brilliant.

Fourth, we should have a feeling and extract incisive sentences. With the finishing touch, the full text will be spiritual.

exercise instructions

1 read the full text. Use your experience or knowledge to prove the sentence "Flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless".

In addition to practicing reading aloud, this topic is intended to further understand the main philosophy of the text in connection with life experience. This topic advocates personalized reading. Everyone has different experiences and experiences, and their understanding of this sentence can be profound and shallow, with their own emphasis.

try to figure out the following sentences and realize the beauty of writing scenery.

1. I've never seen a vine blooming like this. I only see a brilliant lavender, like a waterfall, hanging down from the sky, without its beginning or its end.

2. On the big purple banner, there is a little silver light, just like splashing water. When you look closely, you know that it is the lightest part of each purple flower, flirting with the sun.

3. Every blooming flower is like a small white sail with a sharp bottom under it, and the cabin is bulging; It's like a smile that can't help laughing, and it's about to bloom.

4. The purple waterfalls cover the thick branches like the Wolong, and they keep flowing, flowing and flowing to people's hearts.

In essence, trying to figure out the scenery description in this topic is mainly to figure out the effect of rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification, so as to enhance the sense of language and understand the skills of scenery writing. It is not easy to answer these questions well, so students should carefully feel the expressive effect of metaphor and personification on the basis of grasping the meaning of sentences. For example, in sentence 1, when you write about the flourishing vines, you should imagine the image of the waterfall, think about its momentum and brilliance, and appreciate the beauty of this landscape.

Reference answer:

1. Compare a blooming wisteria flower to a waterfall, which looks extraordinary and brilliant.

2. The depth of different parts of each flower is delicately written, which is bright and lovely, exquisite and penetrating, dynamic and interesting.

3. With the metaphor of sail and cabin, the blooming state of wisteria is described in detail, which is full of vitality. Compared with a smile, it is more beautiful and lovely, and it also expresses the mood of joy.

4. The blending of things and me not only writes the magnificence of a tree with flowers, but also expresses the joyful mood.

Three people often give some flowers and trees some symbolic meanings. Try to collect several sayings (interested students can also collect some poems chanting flowers and trees) and exchange them with your classmates.

this question requires collection. The simple way is to exchange what you know. You and I will say, make records and then sort them out. This can also be called collection. To find books to collect, we should tell students which books have such materials

Relevant information

1. Author's brief introduction

Zong Pu, born in 1928, female, formerly known as Feng Zhongpu, whose pen names are Ren Xiaozhe and Feng Fei, etc. The daughter of the famous philosopher Feng Youlan, who grew up in tsinghua campus since childhood, has absorbed the essence of China's traditional culture and western culture, and has a profound learning and unique charm. Graduated from Tsinghua University Foreign Languages Department in 1951. Worked in China Federation of Literary and Art Circles, Literary and Art Newspaper and other units. In 196, the editorial department of World Literature was transferred. Before the Cultural Revolution, his works mainly included the short stories Red Bean, Peach Garden Daughter Marries Wogu, Undisturbed Lake, Back Door, Companion, etc. Red Bean was criticized inappropriately. After the "Cultural Revolution", there were short stories "Dream on a String" and novella "Sansheng Stone", which won the national excellent novella award. In 1981, Beijing Publishing House published Selected Novels and Proses of Zong Pu. Later, he struggled to create a novel "Wild Hulu Yin" reflecting the fate of Chinese intellectuals, and his first novel "Nandu Ji" was published in 1987 and won favorable comments. Her novels are deliberately innovative, with bright and subtle language, fluent and lingering, and quite distinctive. Her prose is profound and meaningful as water.

Second, Zong Pu's life path and campus complex (Hou Yuyan)

What kind of life path did Zong Pu take? When you open the writer's resume, what comes to your face is a scholarly atmosphere that is similar to the elegant charm in his works. Zong Pu's experience is different from that of most writers. Unlike Shi Tuo, Tian Tao and other older writers, she climbed to the temple of knowledge step by step from the bottom society in China. Unlike Ba Jin and Xie Bingying, she escaped from the old landlord family and flowed into the city, forming a generation of "Bohemian" as Qu Qiubai said; Unlike a large number of educated youth writers emerging in the new era, she left books and family in her youth and even adolescence to explore the value of life in poverty, ignorance and confusion. Even a generation of young people who grew up after the "Cultural Revolution" rarely have such a unique foundation for learning and raising. She is a beautiful orchid, lucky enough to sprout and grow in a pure land far away from poverty and filth. Just as Charlotte said, she has a pure memory like "an untainted, inexhaustible and refreshing spring". Her living environment is basically limited to institutions of higher learning and academic research institutions. Because she was nurtured in a harmonious, honest and elegant academic atmosphere since she was a child, she laid a life-long guideline for being a man and writing. She did have an enviable childhood. This is probably the reason why Zong Pu's works always have a kind of everyone's spirit, a state of harmony that others can't learn, and even a straightforward and white "student accent".

In the university campus where Zong Pu lived as a child, the living conditions of professors are extremely superior, and there is no danger of "hanging upside down" today. The comfortable life and noble status make professors who study hard concentrate on the study of books (of course, it is different after the beginning of the Anti-Japanese War), and their children can get better education and more cultural nourishment than their peers in a relatively simple and clear world. Of course, on the other hand, it also makes them too simple and bookish, and they will inevitably suffer more hardships and setbacks in their future life. I happen to have a copy of Tsinghua Alumni Newsletter published in 199, so I might as well take it and take a few paragraphs at random to make a more detailed footnote for the Qingyuan world written by Zong Pu. Zong Pu's contemporaries, the daughter of Yu Zhenyong, a famous expert in literature and history, and Yu Peicao, a student in The National SouthWest Associated University in 1943, once described with deep affection the tranquility and elegance of Tsinghua campus in his childhood, as well as the superiority and uniqueness of Tsinghua's human landscape. She said, "At that time, there were only primary schools attached to Tsinghua (that is, Chengzhi Primary School attended by Zong Pu mentioned by Feng Youlan) and kindergartens attached to it. Ma Yuehan is our headmaster. ..... Later taught by Mrs. Cai Shunli, who is also a student studying in the United States. " Children who grow up under such conditions are indeed inferior to ordinary people. And what was the living environment of the children at that time? "The I-shaped hall in Tsinghua, Shui Mu ... is elegant and cool, with a smell of nanmu. Single professors Wu Mi and Mr. Ye Qisun once lived in it." The South Yard where we live is a compound surrounded by houses ... No.1 Western-style residence is Mr. Zhao Yuanren's home. This kind of cultural charm has deeply penetrated into the children's souls bit by bit. Isn't the square pot yard written in Zong Pu's "The Story of the South Crossing" the place where the elites with Qingyuan culture are gathered? Natalie Samat, a French modernist woman writer, said: "What literature describes can only be an invisible reality that every writer yearns for-the reality that he feels alone." The life and characters in the works can be fictional, but the artistic conception always faithfully reflects a sensitive author's special feeling about the surrounding scenery in his childhood and the impact this feeling has on his life. Zong Pu's unique beauty of artistic conception in a series of works is just like a wisp of smoke and a hint of fragrance, which can't be understood when he is conscious of it. Only those who have personally experienced this kind of life can appreciate the writer's actual and extremely strong feelings and infinite memories and nostalgia for his childhood spiritual life from that seemingly dull description. This kind of love that can't be written or read by someone who has never experienced it is the true meaning of Zong Pu's "campus complex".

(Feng's Landscape in this Garden, Literature Review, No.2, 1997)

Third, about "Life and Death Mystery, Brotherhood" (Zong Pu)

My younger brother went. The place where I went is a place that philosophers can't figure out through the ages, a place that various religions try to describe, and a place where everyone will go and can't come back. But now how can I get the younger brother! He is just 5 years old. He is full of energy, has accumulated rich knowledge and experience, and has a lot to do. How many things are waiting for him to do! The hospital found that his tumor was quite large and needed immediate surgery. He also wanted to attend a technical seminar and asked if he could come back after the meeting. During his recuperation after the operation, he was still reading the research papers in the institute and doing some small translations. Until he was bedridden, he still kept several international aviation materials at hand, always "wanting to see them again". He doesn't think all about work. When it was dripping water, he suddenly said he wanted to.