Topic composition weakness _3000 words

Because the topic composition only requires candidates to write on a large scale, there are few other restrictions. Therefore, candidates can completely open their own memory bank, find out some articles they have written or read, modify them, and add some sentences closely related to the topic to complete the composition. This is the weakness and focus of topic composition. Candidates can save a lot of time if they master this. To illustrate this point, we can read an article first:

Draw an arc

(Optimized Design, edited by Ren Zhihong, College Press)

Due to the traffic jam, when I arrived at the scene, the game had already started for five minutes.

There is a slogan hanging above the gate: "Sun Cup" live painting and calligraphy contest for middle school students. I looked around and saw a teapot and an apple on the platform. I know this is the theme of the competition.

Other contestants have already started painting, and all the good positions have been taken away by them, so I have to put down the easel in the dark corner and start painting.

Observe before painting. The teapot on the platform is very ordinary, with a round belly and a long mouth next to it. Although I came late, it was a good thing that the topic was simple. I drew a lot of teapots and felt very lucky.

But no, why is the "belly" of the teapot straight? Am I dizzy? Look again, yes, it's a straight line! Suddenly I felt that the teapot was not bright and dark, and it was dark!

Damn position! Bad location! I finally understood the reason, and when I saw that everyone around me was dying, I stopped complaining. Should I draw an arc or a straight line on the belly of the teapot? If you draw an arc, wouldn't it lose the meaning of "live" the game? If you draw a straight line, you won't win the prize. After some consideration, I decided to follow the pictures I saw.

As time went on, other students handed in their paintings one after another, and occasionally someone walked by me:

"Look at the teapot she painted. It's so interesting. How can the teapot's belly be straight? " The words are small, but I can hear them.

"Are you? What a fool! He doesn't even understand this basic thing, and he dares to come to the competition! "

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I didn't look up, but I knew my eyes were a little wet. I gave this painting a title, Ugly Teapot.

* * * rang, and I was the last to hand in the painting. The teacher looked at my picture and my position and frowned a little.

"Teacher, what I see is really a straight line!" I also know that my teapot is terrible.

The teacher smiled and nodded: "Different positions, of course, are different paintings. Just draw whatever you see. "

Three days later, it was still in that hall, but the slogan was changed: "Sun Cup Student Live Painting and Calligraphy Exhibition". When I went in, I saw a large group of people around a painting and heard the teacher introduce:

The world is rich. The answer is colorful. Standing in different positions, of course, there are different paintings. The little author just caught this point, and the beauty of real description and painting lies here.

After the crowd dispersed, I was left alone in the hall.

A familiar picture, an ugly teapot, hangs on the wall, and the label below reads: Grand Prize.

The comment of "Optimized Design" on the above is: This is a masterpiece written in the form of a college entrance examination paper ... Under the introduction and praise of the teacher, the theme of "the world is rich and colorful, and the answers are rich and colorful" is clearly stated without trace.

I don't know if you will agree that this article is an excellent exam composition with the title "The answer is colorful". Now let's assume that you agree. Then, I think a little skill can completely change the old look: it can be changed into a composition with the title of "sincerity" of 200 1; It can also be changed to an essay on "rules" in Beijing in 2002; It can also be changed into a national composition in 2002 with the theme of "the choice of mind".

The following is my transformation of this article:

First, the words "right here" will be added at the end of the penultimate paragraph. Change it to "honesty". (in line with the topic of "honesty")

Second, change "some considerations" in the fifth paragraph to "I am very contradictory and entangled, and finally made a choice." (consistent with the theme of "the choice of the mind")

Third, replace the penultimate sentence "The world is rich and the answers are colorful" with the following sentence: "Without rules, you can't make a square." Painting should also pay attention to rules, but when the original rules conflict with the present reality, you must not cling to the rules. (in line with Beijing's "rules" topic)

If this exam composition can be called 2000 bottles of good wine, then we think it is still 200 1 and 2002 bottles of good wine.

Similarly, it can also be transformed into articles that meet the topics of "location" and "conditions".

Labeling the same article with different labels and writing different articles is definitely not the correct way to deal with the composition of college entrance examination, but since the topic composition has this fatal weakness and the proposer can't protect it well, why not take the opportunity to exploit some loopholes?