If I am your excellent composition

In our daily study, work and life, many people have written compositions. Composition is the transition from internal language to external language, that is, from compressed and concise language that we can understand to developed and standardized grammatical structure that others can understand. How to write a thoughtful and literary composition? The following is what I arranged for you. If I am your excellent composition, you are welcome to learn from it. I hope it helps you.

If I were your excellent composition 1 In the long river of history, those ordinary people can only slide down like sand. The glittering story precipitated was interpreted by * * with a beautiful hymn. What gently brushed my heart and moistened my soul after a long drought? What flows through my heart and brings fresh rain and water? It's you-Su Shi, you are an eternal hymn.

Your behavior, your quality and your demeanor make me envy, admire and like. Su Shi, I want to be you.

If I were you, I would be as strong as you.

No matter day or night, suffering always haunts you; Whether it is sunny or rainy, setbacks always linger around you. In the court, outside the court, there are conspiracies everywhere, conspiracies everywhere, and frame-ups everywhere. Ministers are jealous of you and frame you, and the emperor suspects you and suspects you. But everything, nothing can drown your strong heart. If I were you, I would ignore the cynicism of the officials and use my ability to refute and prove myself. Accept all challenges with a strong heart.

If I were you, I would be as happy as you.

"Back in Gong Jin, Joe is married, handsome, with a feather fan and a black scarf. When talking and laughing, it's all gone. " The suffering of Wutai poetry prison, the suffering of relegating Mizhou. On the road in Michigan, step by step, loss appears on your face; Step by step, your heartache is twitching. But sadness won't occupy your heart. If I were you, there would be thousands of people riding behind me, on the flat hills outside the city, pulling the yellow flag left, holding the sky right, raising their bows and arrows and shooting the eagle. In Michigan City, everyone is very happy ... Like you, you meet all the hardships with a cheerful heart.

If I were you, I would care about my country and the world as much as you do. But I won't complain like you, and go to Chengtian Temple at night. I will constantly reflect on myself, correct myself and make greater contributions with my meager strength. Demotion can't stop me from making progress.

Su Shi, if I were you, separated from my relatives and frustrated in the officialdom, I would face it with a calm heart, no matter me or you.

Because we know that suffering will only make us stronger.

You know, I firmly believe that only the phoenix reborn from the fire; Only after experiencing the hardships of purgatory can we realize that the world is heaven; Only bloody fingers can play the swan song of the world!

After a thousand years of history in just visiting, I seem to see you smiling at me. ...

If I were your excellent composition, I once saw a cartoon on the Internet, and I was curious. I want to see what happened. However, I don't know where to look. I looked up carefully. Oh! It turns out that every picture is marked 1, 2, 3, 4 in the lower right corner, and I read it with relish.

This cartoon simply tells a long story, and the story goes like this.

One afternoon, after school, Xiaoming and Xiaohua were on their way home. They saw a trash can full of garbage outside, but it was empty inside. Xiao Ming and Xiao Hua thought: Why don't they even take this small step? Are they afraid that one more step will get their feet dirty? Are you afraid of smelling the stench of garbage? In fact, if everyone takes this small step, the garbage will be put into the trash can. Let's pick it up for them! When Xiaohua was about to pick it up, Xiaoming stopped Xiaohua and said to Xiaohua, "If we help them pick it up this time, what will they do next time?" Suddenly, Xiao Ming said, "I have an idea! Why don't we write a slogan to remind them! " Xiaohua said, "But what should I write? Is it about hygiene? Or write, please talk about hygiene? " Xiao Ming said, "No, no, you see they don't even want to take this small step. If they do this, the garbage will not be outside the trash can, and there will be less environmental pollution, which shows that they have no empathy and awareness of putting themselves in others' shoes. Even if they feel a little bit about it, we might as well write down,' If I were you-would you throw it like this? Are you all right? "Xiaohua said," Yes, you really have a way. " So Xiaoming took out a blank sheet of paper and a pen from his schoolbag. It said, "If I were you, would you throw it like this?" . After Xiaohua picked up the garbage, Xiaoming carefully put the paper on the trash can and went home with a satisfied smile.

In fact, this is not only the inspiration given by comics, but also in life. We should think more about others in everything, and society will become more civilized, progressive and caring. Although we can't avoid natural disasters like Wenchuan and Yushu, we can try our best to save people's lives. There will be no such thing as killing children on campus, and there will be no danger of drunk driving. In today's society, it is advocated everywhere to stress civilization and establish a new style. We should start with small things, starting with me.

If I am your excellent composition, 3. Many figures have emerged in the long history, which are admired by Yao and Shun's descendants. Bobby Chen's ambition is amazing; Liu Bei's benevolence and righteousness are also praised by people.

But in this long history, there are also some deeds that disappoint future generations.

Liu Chan, the monarch of a generation, did not concentrate on restoring the country after the demise of Shu, but laughed and drank in one Shu music after another. The first emperor's teachings didn't impress the monarch at all, so Shu was destroyed in the hands of this sinus forever, and became the king of national subjugation forever, and still dragged out an ignoble existence in the enemy country. Dou! If I were you, I would restore the country generously with Wen Tianxiang's will! Never drag out an ignoble existence with humiliation, and resolutely sing "Who has never died in life since ancient times, keeping the heart of Dan, shining in history!" Remember the teachings of the first emperor and try to help the Han Dynasty.

Fang Zhongyong, a genius, had little talent since childhood. He was only eight years old and was able to write and compose poems, which shocked the world. However, at this age when you should read a lot of poetry books, even though you have natural talent, you are decadent to adulthood, which is not as good as an ordinary person. You can't help feeling that a generation of talented people has come to this end! If I were you, I would study hard, regardless of the obstacles of others, reach the peak with my extraordinary intelligence and create unprecedented brilliant achievements in literature or politics!

When the country was at war, Song Huizong, the first emperor, only knew how to write poems and draw pictures, but didn't cultivate military equipment and pay attention to border defense work, which led the Jin people to go south and became prisoners himself, which also led to the demise of the Northern Song Dynasty. If I were you, I would strengthen the border defense, temporarily put down those paintings and calligraphy, be more diligent in political affairs and step up training. And select people with lofty ideals like Xin Qiji to fight against the Jin people and achieve stability and prosperity for the country.

It's a pity that it's just if. What I can do now is to study hard so that there are no regrets and no ifs in my life. ......

If I am your excellent composition 4. If I were you. What would it be like if I were the father?

I used to think that adults were very nice and didn't have to do homework. If they have money, they can buy anything they want. But now, I find that it is not so good as an adult, but it is the best when I am young. If I were a father, I might have to get up early for work, go to the city to cook by car, and endure the sultry cooking in the kitchen at noon before eating; Then go home by car, maybe it's not as simple as I thought, but dad should work hard for the expenses at home.

Last year, my father and my uncle went to Indonesia and took on three meals a day. It is said that it is very hot there and mosquitoes are fierce. If I were my father, I might have to get up early to make breakfast for the workers. Then I began to prepare lunch. Take a lunch break when you are free in the afternoon and go to the seaside after waking up. After a long time, I may sit by the sea when I have time, thinking about my wife and children, what they are doing, and whether my children have made progress in their studies. It's time to prepare dinner again. After dinner, I may play cards, drink some wine and chat with my friends. When you are homesick, run near the signal tower and call home. Even if I light mosquito-repellent incense at night, there are still mosquitoes that will bite me and make me unable to sleep well. When I went out to buy things, I could only draw a few sentences because of the language barrier, and finally I got nothing. Because I wanted to earn more money for my family, I opened a small shop, selling wine, chicken legs and peanuts to earn some extra money. In order to buy things on a hot day, we need to learn some English to communicate. I have to cook. I think even if I am tired, as long as I think about my family, I will be full of energy immediately. When I want to go back, I may be very happy, happily pack my bags, then buy things that my children like to eat, and look forward to going home to see my family soon.

I am not my father, but since I can think so, my father may be better than me.

In fact, dad is also very hard, not only to work, but also to educate us to study hard. I want to say: "Dad, I love you! I will not live up to your expectations! "

If I were my father, if I were you.

If I am your excellent composition, everyone has his own opinion. When others do something, I will want to say: If I were you, I would. ......

"You" is a lively and lovely little girl, small, with eyes shining like black gems and long black hair, which makes me envious. "You" is especially popular with classmates and teachers. Whenever "you" are having fun with everyone, I can only watch silently in the corner. And every time I fantasize that your grades are so good and people are so cheerful, if I were you, it would be great.

I remember once, "you" played with everyone on the playground. The sun is shining, and you look happy in the sun. I also want to play with you. But I dare not. If I go, it will only set off the beauty of "you" and the ugliness of "me" Looking at you, I smiled. However, a rhythm broke this beautiful picture. "You" fell, and everyone was anxious to help you up. You still cry like a princess, and everyone comforts you.

I'm thinking: if I were you, I would enjoy the treatment of the princess holding the moon, and I wouldn't cry. Because even if I fall, I will still stand up strongly and never cry. I was injured this time. I will stand up from where I fell next time. Your grades are so good that the teacher likes you so much. You shouldn't betray everyone's love for you.

You didn't win the prize in the school math contest. Because of your carelessness, your grades are behind. You cried again, and you were sad. Everyone is comforting you, saying, don't lose heart. You must try your best to win this prize next time. It doesn't matter.

If I were you, those questions are so simple, I should take them seriously, instead of checking them casually and carefully. But even if you don't win the prize, don't lose heart. Have the confidence and courage to face it, because you missed it this time. Try to make up for it next time instead of crying blindly. Please forgive me. There are many things in society. You can't always forgive everyone, but correct your mistakes in time.

How happy I would be if I were you, but now I also have the happiness I deserve. There is no if in this world. Only by spending time and working hard can we do better.

If I were your excellent composition, I often think that if I were you ...

The spring breeze gently kisses the tip of your hair, the dew whispers to you gently, and you nod frequently and secretly laugh.

In the rain and dew, you are so green, and your little body is so pleasing. I always want to touch you and smell your unspeakable fragrance.

When a playboy's foot freely steps on your weak body and gently comforts you, I feel resentment and pain. If I were you, I would scream in pain and even drive away this annoying child in a special way ... but you smiled at me and took my hand and told me, "It doesn't hurt, their smile is my greatest happiness." Your smile, how brilliant and satisfying, your beauty, incomparable, your tolerance and your broadness make me lag behind. ...

I bowed my head: if I were you, I would tolerate them, too.

Time does not spare you, your tender and petite youth gradually disappears, your beautiful face fades away quietly, your face is getting old, and your yellow hair and wrinkles can't hide your beauty.

The blazing fire is burning your old body, and your whining makes my heart jam. Tears rolled out of my eyes like broken beads. I want to save you, but there is nothing I can do. Annoying people chat and laugh regardless of your death, leaving me sad and crying.

When the fire died down, I rushed in to look for you anxiously, but there was no sign of you. How can I face the ashes on the ground, gently lift them and say goodbye to you?

If I were you, I would accept my death safely. My life is so fragile. What's the use of struggling? The fire is fierce and scary. I still choose to bury it quietly.

I waved to you in tears and said goodbye helplessly.

Many fields are open in spring. Next spring, I will walk outside, greedily breathe fresh air and close my eyes. I seem to be dancing lightly in the clouds. What is it that pulls my trouser leg and bends down? It's you, it's you. ...

"Wildfire never completely devoured them, and they grew taller in the spring breeze." This is perfect for you.

I am ecstatic and pull you: "How did you do it? How did you do it? " You laughed again. "I long for life and sunshine. I want to climb up step by step. "

"Is it bitter?" I asked again.

"No, I'm like you, but I dance in the dark, which is also beautiful."

I smile. If I were you, I would be as strong and brave as you and pursue life.

Ah! Grass, if I were you ...

If I were your sister breeze, if I were you, I would do many things instead of you, let the earth see vitality and make mankind full of happiness!

When spring comes, I will become a spring breeze and blow all over the world. First of all, I want to wake up my sleeping brother Zhu and sister Hua in my dream and let them grow sturdily in the new year! Secondly, I will wake up Uncle Black Bear and Aunt Green Snake who are hibernating and let them play with me. I want to send my best wishes to everyone in the world, so that they can be happy and have all the best in the new year.

Summer is coming, I want to turn into a cool breeze, blow all over the world, blow away the heat of summer, let the beautiful sister Bai Yutang show her charming smile, and let the descendants of Grandpa Pomegranate show their white teeth. I want to gently blow the lake, let it ripple, let the fish swim around quickly, let passers-by play with them and enjoy this leisurely and beautiful time! I also want to take Brother Yu, let him moisten every piece of land, let him bring the sweetness of summer to people and wash away the scorching sun in summer.

Autumn has come, and I want to turn into an autumn wind, completely blowing away the heat of summer and bringing the coolness of autumn. What I want to say is that the green wheat turns golden, and I want to turn the green apple into red. I want to turn everything from green to yellow, from small to large, and turn autumn into a harvest season, so that those farmers who have worked hard for a long time can save water happily. Look! Am I very sensible? Hmm?

Winter is coming, I want to slow down, don't let people feel the biting cold, I want to make them happy, I want to spread happiness to the earth, wrap all the places I blow with a layer of snow, let the snow cover everything on the earth, dress them in white clothes, decorate their dream world with pure white, wash away the dirt of society and everyone's heart. Those lonely children can also use this piece of snow to accompany some snowmen, so that they are no longer lonely. I took this snow to organize people who have been with Zhong for a year to stop being busy, have a rest and reunite with their families. At this moment, everyone has their own happiness!

If I were you, I would use my efforts to benefit all beings, influence mankind, make everyone's mind beautiful and pure, make the earth full of vitality and make reality a beautiful world!

If I am your excellent composition, time flies, smooth our edges and corners like quicksand, and calm the heart looking far away. Looking back suddenly, I feel the dribs and drabs of the past. If I were you, what would I do?

Two years ago, a new artificial lake was dug near my mother's work. That summer, my mother took me there to play. At that time, there were a sea of people, stalls selling snacks, people taking pictures and even people swimming in the lake. Very lively! However, when my friends and I went there again last summer vacation, the lake was full of garbage and stinking. The water in the lake has turned green and there is no one around, which is in stark contrast to the scene when I was last here. What caused this contrast? It's rubbish.

Recently, a video on the Internet is very popular. I watched it, too, but after reading it, I felt like I was weighing a big stone, which made me breathless. On the ocean, some volunteers salvaged a turtle. The turtle's nose is deeply immersed in a plastic straw. When the volunteers pulled out the straw, its tragic cry was heartbreaking. When the straw was about to be pulled out, bright red blood flowed out of its nose. Although this video is only more than eight minutes, after several years, the straw has become deeper and deeper. This turtle has been living in pain for years! What caused the tortoise's pain? It's rubbish.

Do you know the fire incident in Daxing 'anling? The cause is actually a cigarette butt. But you don't know how many trees were burned because of that cigarette butt. I don't know how many animals lost their lives and homes and had to wander around. How much land has become a wasteland, and nothing grows. How many treasures nature has given mankind, and how many lives have been burned by that cigarette butt! What caused this phenomenon? It's rubbish.

Those tourists, if I were you, I wouldn't litter, bringing disaster to so many innocent creatures and crisis to the earth where I live.