Evaluation of Excellent Creative Composition (100)

Evaluation of Excellent Creative Composition (100)

1, you are very good at observing life and can keenly capture the perfect moment; You are a student with great potential.

It is a kind of wisdom for young people who are not deeply involved in the world to approach the huge society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is casual, which seems to lead the reader to the night of the soul. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. Understand that incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!

3. personified language makes the article more lively.

4. Use wonderful imagination and subtle metaphor.

The ending is a bit sudden and exaggerated.

6 ..... Briefly describe the wonderful places; Link the work in the selected location with the work in the whole area.

7. This article is full of passion. Reading between the lines, we can understand the author's clear hierarchy and fluent sentences about ...

8. The article is detailed, orderly and vivid, which is a masterpiece.

9. You are a student with strong opinions, and you don't lack real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but if the structure in the writing arrangement is more compact, it will be icing on the cake.

10. Although writing is not very attractive to you, you take every step like a snail and you never stop writing. Your energy is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break out of your own world.

1 1, the author's "mind wandering" has great control potential, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a bright and comfortable feeling!

12, you can associate snow with the pursuit of life. From the details of life, your innovative energy is commendable. This article shows your simple writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?

13, the metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.

14, the case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in the same strain as the previous metaphor ... Finally, the author shows his feelings for ... in a few words, which is touching.

15, from the scene, the ending is natural.

16, ... told us in a simple and pleasant tone, which is memorable.

17, situation description arouses suspense;

18, concrete image, appropriate, wonderful ending can be described as the finishing touch.

19, careful conception and profound thinking show that you are growing up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.

20. It is impressive that primary school students can have such an experience.

2 1, personification and metaphor full of childlike interest make the article shine.

22. Go straight to the point at the beginning, which makes people clear at a glance.

23. The use of parallel names adds a lot of color to the article.

24. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your pen is full of conquest and appeal. Work hard and create more brilliance!

25. Start with a rhetorical question to attract readers.

26. At the beginning of the topic, the words are very attractive.

27. Your article is like a slow stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, and personal style. May you continue to chop waves in your life on the way of writing and make your style more perfect!

28. Sorry, the teacher didn't understand this paragraph. Would you like to explain it again for the teacher? Thank you very much.

29, the transition is natural, and each paragraph is explained clearly.

30. The metaphor of ... is well used.

3 1, with attractive taste and profound artistic conception.

32. Such beautiful handwriting, clear and neat structure, can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This teacher should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in Chinese learning in the future, shall we?

Although you can live happily in your own world, the growth of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to people's lives with a brand-new attitude and conform to the growth of society.

34. The ending doesn't seem to be over. You should be able to observe carefully with the beginning, describe the vivid ending and echo the title, and point out the center.

The language of the article is very fluent, which also infects the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's confidant. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bouquet of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.

36. Naturally, the connecting link between the preceding and the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters, which is moving.

37. The beginning was very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning look lively.

38. It is better to delete the remaining paragraph to make the article more concise.

39. Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope that in the future study process, you will feel the infection and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching and good articles.

40. Add character behavior to make the picture vivid.

4 1, briefly introduce the situation, and naturally transition to the next paragraph;

This description is very touching to read.

43. Briefly explain the reasons and pave the way.

44. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot to the article;

45. The psychological description is exquisite and the figurative sentences are used properly.

46. It is more appropriate to replace … with ….

47. Writing is like being a man. From the infection of your life feelings, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really valuable.

48. The ending was simple and touching.

49. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.

50. Your article is very creative-use geometry to prove the situation of the problem to complete the idea. The full text is very literary!

5 1. As a casual feeling, your article is witty and willing. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form your own style and light!

52. The introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction of my father is also focused: focusing on my father's feelings. The characters are full of truth and life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and don't live up to his expectations!

53, ... begins with ... which is more innovative?

54. Make full use of dynamic and static writing methods, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques, and through vivid and vivid language description, make readers praise the characters as if they are at the end of a dream, and they are sincere and touching-D% w pays attention to observing specific things and developing appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper. The article is full of emotion, lyrical, and good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete.

55. Words can speak. I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.

Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of feelings, but watching the sea is full of feelings". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings, which is the greatest success of your composition.

The close-up of ... is unique and full of interest. The full text is full of childlike innocence and is very kind to read-

Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and vivid.

Briefly explain the time, place and result …

60. The quotations of several common sayings in the whole text are just right, with nostalgia as the clue. This just reflects your ideology.

6 1, this article is very ideological and artistic, and it is fresh in people's memory after reading it. Ingenious conception, using contrast method to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and natural. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love, hate and hatred are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.

62, … and … constitute a sharp contrast, highlighting …

63. The ending is implicit and points out the theme.

64, the end of the echo should be the beginning, the structure is complete.

65. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers ... The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and detailed.

66. The language of the article is fresh and lively, and the description can grasp the main features of things. Short and pithy, it is worth reading.

67. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.

68 ... is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy. Reading is exciting and exciting.

69. There are always many absurd stories in the life of teenagers; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This short article, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's childlike dreams and just-maturing self, and sails far away.

70. The beginning of the article is concise and decent, and the characters' emotions are set off by describing the environment. Very artistic, miscellaneous but not chaotic, can be meticulous and decent, with the focus on the end just right and the center clear. The language is simple and profound, which is thought-provoking.

7 1, the article pays attention to expressing emotions at the end while narrating, which not only takes care of the beginning but also summarizes the full text from beginning to end in one go.

72. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Focus on description ... leave a deep impression on people

73. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read many literary works. Such a wealth of information shows your literary skills. Only if the materials are adjusted one by one according to the necessary laws of thinking, this article will be more exciting.

74. The article can describe the things between the lines with fresh and funny language, full of childlike interest in childhood, and laughter is endless, which is a masterpiece. The details are appropriate, and the virtual and the real are the two characteristics of this article ... The more information, the more vivid it is.

75. The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.

76. This article is beautifully written, refreshing and full of philosophy. It's about "I" walking by the sea. The sea not only gave me beautiful enjoyment, but also aroused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea has given me a swimming space, and I am immersed in life for the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of pleasure and makes people think deeply.

77. This article has chosen a brand-new angle and let your thoughts run freely there, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world through all kinds of things in the world, there are always some laws that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world with the grace of dripping water".

78, using a variety of senses, the description is very detailed.

79. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. Man, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it's gold, and it always shines. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.

80. Write a scene in the narrative to measure people and compare with each other.

8 1 using rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification, vividly wrote ... This part can also be expanded to see the big and show it. ...

82. Describe passionately … The beginning is concise, the focus is prominent, and the details are appropriate. The specific articles of the materials fully and appropriately render the atmosphere of ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

83. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.

84. The ending is equally interesting.

85. The writing is sharp and the foundation is profound. Although the analysis of social problems still has some absoluteness, the article is still moving with enthusiasm and frankness. Make further efforts to study and think about history books and social reviews. I believe your article will be more mature and lasting day by day!

86. A scene metaphor is used at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception

87. The description of the appearance is very interesting, highlighting that the lovely introduction of … has been integrated into one's own thoughts and is infectious.

88. Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely play a supplementary role in writing. what do you reckon ?

89. The beginning of the article is novel, which has the effect of moving the whole body, making readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet, and the article is coherent and constitutes a complete image.

90. Fine and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom, and striving for stability and solidity is the direction of your future writing efforts.

9 1, for the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, the association touches the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.

92. Wen Neng is very happy. You can't take writing as your own burden, but you should record your mental journey with careful mind and delicate brushstrokes.

93. Starting with emotion and ending with emotion make the article coordinated and coherent, and at the same time, it can repeat the theme of the article, which is very infectious.

94. The full text is clear, vivid and compact, and full of fun.

95. Except after class, school life seems dull, but this paper is good at finding dissatisfaction from the ordinary and showing it with relish: nervous morning, fighting noon and tired night, and every time we choose a lens full of life interest to decorate it. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the youthful appearance of contemporary middle school students.

96. This part refers to the examples in the text. The language is too flat, so it can be modified appropriately to make it more vivid.

97. After reading your article, it seems that a stream is flowing before my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this writing style and express rich connotations in pure language.

98. The method of giving examples with diagrams is very vivid.

99. Metaphorical sentences are well used and full of charm when they are linked with ancient poems. "

100, the angry language of children is very interesting.