How to write a personal statement in the competition?

How to write a competitive personal statement?

Opening remarks of competitive personal statements:

Dear leaders and judges,

Hello! Everyone has their own career dreams, so do I. I am very grateful to the leaders for providing us with this stage to realize our dreams and the opportunity to show ourselves and pursue progress. I'm XX, I'm XX years old, and I have a bachelor's degree. I have worked as a teller, lobby manager, accounting supervisor and account manager for XX years, and now I hold XX and XX certificates.

My personality has three characteristics: first, I am particularly strong and have a strong sense of hierarchy. After I became an account manager, I rose from the initial ranking of XX to the best ranking of XX. The second is that sunshine is energetic, dare to accept challenges, do not give up in the face of pressure, and rush ahead in marketing activities many times, and was once rated as XX. Third, cheerful, outgoing, with good coordination and communication skills, able to communicate effectively with different departments of the branch, improve the efficiency of public-private linkage, and have a strong sense of teamwork.

At the end of the competitive personal statement:

Leaders, my growth and small changes are inseparable from the platform given to me by XX Bank. If the competition is successful, I will regard warehousing as an enterprising gas station, further enhance the sense of responsibility for doing a good job, stimulate the internal potential, release more work energy and enthusiasm, and make more contributions to XX Bank.

My speech is over, thank you!