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Civilization welcomes the Olympic Games

28, a special year, August 8th, is a day that makes Chinese people all over the world excited. History cannot forget, nor can China forget, what July 13th, 2 means. Samaranch's "Beijing" has brought tears to countless Chinese sons and daughters, and the whole country is jubilant. The success of bidding for the Olympic Games not only means the improvement of China's international status, but also reflects that China has gained worldwide recognition in politics, economy and culture.

Then, as the host of the 29th Olympic Games, we should not only play the role of host, but also show the elegant demeanor of a 5,-year-old civilization. We want sincere smile and first-class service, use advanced equipment to welcome guests from all corners of the world, and use heartfelt civilization to welcome the 28 Olympic Games! We have been looking forward to that day.

The slogan "Welcome the Olympic Games, stress civilization, foster a new style" must be familiar to everyone, and its meaning must be well known. Yes, someone has shouted, this is the slogan of civilization created for the Olympic Games, but it is not easy to really do this. Because civilized behavior needs to be cultivated over time, and the cultivation of civilized behavior in a big country needs the concerted efforts of every citizen. China is vast in territory and abundant in natural resources, with a large population and different personnel qualities. It is not easy to achieve civilization. If someone asks us whether we can "stress civilization and cultivate a new style", some people will proudly answer yes, while others will bow their heads and be ashamed to express themselves. It doesn't matter, as long as we do a few things, I believe that during the Olympic Games, we will make our motherland proud and the world satisfied. No spitting, no littering, no swearing, and friendly help to foreign friends in trouble. When watching the Olympic Games, we should not only cheer for China players, but also applaud the wonderful performance of foreign players. In a word, we should show our best to the guests attending the Olympic Games!