Twenty revised bad sentences. Bring answers.

1. Young Pioneers bring into play their revolutionary tradition.

Modify to: Young Pioneers carry forward the revolutionary tradition.

2. The summer in Xiaoxinganling is so beautiful.

Modify to: Xiaoxing'anling is so beautiful in summer.

3. After studying, everyone’s general awareness has improved.

Modify to: After studying, everyone’s awareness has generally improved.

4. What a stark contrast between the old and new societies!

Modify to: What a stark contrast between the old and new societies!

5. We must cultivate our own writing interests and standards.

Modify to: We must cultivate our own interest in writing and improve our writing skills.

6. Under the teacher’s education, I have corrected my learning attitude and methods.

Modify to: Under the teacher’s education, I corrected my learning attitude and improved my learning methods.

7. At the beginning of school, we established a plan and clarified the direction of our efforts.

Modify to: At the beginning of school, we have formulated a plan and clarified the purpose of learning.

8. My father told me that when I was a child, I had no money to study.

Modify to: Dad told me that when he was a child, he had no money to study.

9. My drawer is filled with many award certificates.

Modify to: My drawer is full of award certificates.

10. I am about to graduate and should study harder.

Modify to: Graduation is about to happen, we should study harder.