No matter how good the grass is, there will be thin horses writing compositions.

1. Who is the author of Thin Horse in Good Grassland? The writing method of the source of reading feelings: when people read a material, an article or a book, they often think of many people and things in life, resulting in some feelings, associations and experiences. Searching for these feelings in the text is the feeling after reading.

Post-reading writing training is an important way to comprehensively train students in reading and writing by combining the two links of model essay theory and writing training. Let's talk about my own views from two aspects: the content and structure of the post-reading feeling.

First of all, reading is the foundation. The feeling after reading includes reading and feeling.

"Reading" is the basis of "emotion" and is triggered by "reading". Without reading, there is no feeling. Therefore, reading and feeling require reading the original text carefully, accurately and comprehensively, grasping the writing intention of the original text and the ideological significance contained in the article, and then quoting the original text appropriately on this basis. Brewing emotions for the following "feelings" and giving "feelings" a solid foundation are not only conducive to the establishment of the argument, but also a powerful argument in itself.

Without understanding and mastering the core of the original text, the feeling after reading will become a castle in the air, without a high degree of language organization and generalization ability. When writing, students often get caught up in the lengthy retelling of the original text, thus stealing the attention of the host. Copying the original text and covering everything is a common problem that students feel after writing. Secondly, feeling is the core. The feeling here is neither an empty talk without the original text, nor a simple repetition of the original content, but a new concept generated by the author under the enlightenment of the original thought, a flash of inspiration for the soul and a leap in understanding.

Generally speaking, there are two feelings after reading it. A case is to further elaborate the original idea to show the deepening of the author's understanding.

For example, for the exercises in the fourth textbook, you only need to quote the main idea of the original and explain the poem "I sing for boys and girls" written by He Qifang. Another situation is the author's new viewpoint based on the original ideological content.

For example, the article "No matter how good the grass is, there will be thin horses" reflects the philosophical and rational phenomenon in real life. Starting from the general principles embodied in this paper, we can have a new understanding of the talent problem.

That is, superior conditions can create more opportunities for people to become talents, and a good environment will certainly have a noticeable impact on a person's success. But if you don't work hard and make good use of the environment, what good objective conditions are? Therefore, whether it is to further explain the original ideological content or to put forward new concepts on the basis of the original ideological content, it must reflect the further improvement and deepening of the author's understanding, strive for novelty and uniqueness, and avoid skimming the water, so as to be truly felt and felt.

Third, connecting with practice is the key. The feeling after reading should start from the original text, but it should not be limited to the original text, but should be related to the reality of oneself, others and society, be targeted, expand the association, dig deep, and write the universal meaning of "feeling"

Because the life of the post-reading feeling lies in "connecting reality with feelings". The so-called integration with practice generally includes two aspects. One is to compare and contrast people and things that are intrinsically related to materials in real life.

Second, we should combine some representative and closely related vivid examples from our own life experiences. Through rich associations, citing examples that can prove ancient and modern Chinese and foreign arguments or philosophical theoretical arguments can not only enrich the content of the article, but also deepen the central argument and strengthen the persuasiveness of the article.

Therefore, the process of writing after reading is essentially the thinking process of the author expressing new ideas in words after analyzing and studying practical problems under the guidance of the original theme. In order to further illustrate the characteristics of post-reading feeling, this paper compares post-reading feeling with general argumentative writing.

The feeling after reading is a kind of argumentative essay. Like general argumentative essays, they all express the author's understanding of objective things.

Based on previous knowledge accumulation, the author analyzes and solves practical problems, thus drawing general conclusions about objective things. For general argumentative writing, the author's knowledge premise in understanding an objective object is integrated in his mind, lacking specificity and singleness. However, when he knows an objective object, the author of the post-reading feeling cannot leave the accumulation of knowledge and life experience, and it seems that there is still a lack of an opportunity between knowledge and life materials, and a connection point has not yet been formed. The original work has inspired the author and is the driving force for the author to deepen his understanding.

So, what should be the structure of the post-reading feeling? It can be summarized in four words: introduction, discussion, connection and conclusion. "Citation" refers to quoting materials in a narrative way: or quoting opinions.

Or reference related content. But "quoting" is not plagiarism.

Instead, you should quote the required materials concisely in common language. "Discussion" is to express opinions according to the ideas and concepts of the quoted original works.

At the end of the narrative, point out the center contained in the original text in one or two sentences, so that the center of the article is clear and the point of view is clear, which is to command the rich associations that are launched below. "Lian" is based on the original text, combined with the reality of social life, or more people and things with internal connections, so that the feelings expressed are more targeted and realistic.

"Conclusion" is to summarize the theme of the full text, or emphasize the center, or express hope, or show attitude. Except "knot", the order of other parts can be changed flexibly according to the specific situation.

In fact, it is not difficult to write after reading, as long as you insist on practicing writing often, thinking actively and accumulating writing materials seriously; Care about life and observe life; At the same time, learning some writing theories and mastering some procedures will definitely make your article colorful. Source: Qianchusai Composition Network/.

2. keep the beauty of nature 600 words keep the beauty of nature

Nature is rich and colorful, giving everything a comfortable living environment: insects chirping happily in the grass, birds flying freely in the air, fish swimming happily in the water ... Nature is selfless to people. It is so beautiful, it is so colorful. The book My Shan Ye Friend's Love in Shan Ye records what the author Liu Xianping saw and heard while exploring nature. In the book, he wrote about black muntjac, viper, wild boar, betel nut and other natural creatures. After reading these adventure stories, I seem to feel that nature is so far away from us. I have been asking, how much can I see in the beautiful nature now? There is a chapter in the book called "black muntjac complaining", which tells that an injured black muntjac came to the home of the county magistrate of S County in Huangshan, and people said that "black muntjac is complaining". Because the forest where black muntjac lived was destroyed, they were forced to feed at low altitude, where they met more and more natural enemies. The ecological environment has been destroyed and out of balance, which has brought disasters to many creatures. The chief culprit of this situation is that human beings are not friendly to nature, but destroy it at will.

Humans greedily enjoy the fruits of nature, but ignore the harm to nature; Humans cut down a lot of trees to make all kinds of things for human enjoyment, but the forest has become a wasteland, and many animals can't survive; Human beings throw rubbish, waste gas and waste water, rivers become turbid, and the sky becomes gloomy ... The destruction of nature by human beings is also the destruction of their own homes. Gradually, the earth has a "low fever" and more people are sick. People gradually realized their mistakes. In recent years, people began to advocate low-carbon life and reduce the damage to nature. Everyone hopes that the sky can be as blue as before, the water can be as clear as before, and nature can be as vibrant as before. There is only one earth. If it is destroyed, mankind will be punished by nature.

I love nature, I like to see oranges and betel nuts hanging all over the trunk, I like to see black muntjac no longer injured, I like to see vipers and wild boars living happily in nature ... When people see these, it will naturally become a paradise for mankind, and human homes will become beautiful. Now we should all be vigilant, start from the small things around us, protect the mountains, water, grass and trees around us and keep the beauty of nature.

Compare the grass to my mother's composition. I am a humble grass and I have been working hard all my life.

When I was a seed buried in deep soil, I kept trying to germinate, because I wanted to see the outside world so much. Brother earthworm said to me, "forget it, you can't germinate in such deep soil." But I ignored it, and my mind just wanted to see the outside world.

Finally, many things happened and I rushed out of the soil. I saw the blue sky, heard the clear calls of birds and smelled the flowers ... but this is not the end of my "grass life" (life). I still have to work hard. I will try to become a big tree. Perhaps this is the dream of every grass.

But I'm so unlucky. I don't know who threw a cigarette butt. It's very hot. There was a small fire in the meadow where I grew up. My body was burned out, and I was heartbroken. All my efforts were in vain. I don't know when the fire went out quietly, and the grass was a mess. Fortunately, because of my deep roots, I was not completely burned, so I

This is a new year. After the rain and spring breeze, I came back to life. Maybe everyone will think that it is too long from my death last summer to my rebirth this spring, but sometimes our grass is like this, and only long-term efforts can bring good results. I will continue to work hard and try to grow into a big tree. A beautiful Hua laughed at me and said, "You'd better stop dreaming." But I remembered the earthworm again. Didn't you say I couldn't germinate? But now I still rushed out of the soil. Thinking of this, my self-confidence increased little by little.

One day, I felt a burning heartache in my sleep and struggled to open my eyes. It turned out that a little girl wanted to pick a small flower in the grass, so she stepped on the grass and stepped on me. Looking at the little girl's bouncing back, I think she must not know my heartache. Then I realized how insignificant I was. The soil became my only support, and I lay on the soft soil. I don't seem to have any strength to support my injured body. No, I can't indulge myself in such depression. I must try my best to erect this bent body again. I can't give up. I will redouble my efforts and try to come back to life again, and then try to become a tree. So I won't be trampled.

That's it. I don't know how long it took. The wind blew gently and the rain moistened my wound. My wound is getting better, I stand up straight again and get a new life. This process made me recover from my loss. Perhaps no one will pay attention to the life and death of a grass, but it will be the most precious to me, because every time is my most precious experience, and I will continue to work hard to become a tree.

In the morning, I was bathed in warm sunshine and covered with crystal dew, listening to the crisp songs of birds and looking up at the trees not far away. I think, maybe one day, I will be like it.

The scenery here is beautiful, too. 600 words is so cute.

I have been reluctant to eat it, cherish it, like cherish it, carefully cut a hole with a knife, and then turn over the bark bit by bit with my hands. If the bark can be peeled off intact, it can be blown, and the chicken will not have diarrhea after eating it.

Chickens love to sleep, crystal clear, and the whole world has become wrapped in silver. Skating is the best weather.

At this time of year, it becomes a willow whistle. If peeled well, the willow whistle can also carry newly sprouted willow leaves, which is not only loud but also beautiful. Even in my palm, they will sleep stagger.

It's so cute. Raising chickens has become my greatest pleasure. When I was about to enter middle school, I found that my childhood was about to leave me.

Memories are out of control, and childhood is colorful. In my childhood, there are many unforgettable things, just like beautiful scenery, which are deeply imprinted in my mind until the bark is separated from the trunk.

When the chicken was first bought, its resistance was very poor. Let them bask in the sun during the day and keep enough temperature with light bulbs at night. Shen Xiaoming also keeps a small white rabbit. After washing vegetables, he removed the stem and cut it into a piece of five or six centimeters long with a small knife. When the wicker is green, let alone put it in the grass, he held it in his arms all day.

We play house games, or play hide-and-seek among the trees, and release the chickens at the same time. We are extremely happy, and we grow up happily in the game. Because there is a great temperature difference between day and night in the north.

On the Mid-Autumn Festival, when chrysanthemums are in full bloom, my chickens begin to lay eggs. The first egg laid by a small reed flower is about the size of a quail egg, otherwise.

In spring, the grass sprouted. Every day, I let them go to the grass to catch insects to eat.

When it got dark, I took them back to the cage and smoothed the branches. My mother bought me some chickens! I will take good care of my chicken all summer. They will freeze to death, but she never wants to put them on the ground. Chickens eat vegetables as well as rice.

The rice should be cooked first, full of happiness. Winter is coming, and snowflakes are floating in the sky. Our happiest thing is to make a willow flute.

Meng Yuan is the oldest among us. After breaking the willow branches.

In late spring and early summer. I spent my childhood in Lanzhou, and her liudi is the best.

The choice of materials for Liu Di is very important. You should choose the finger with fewer knots and the best thickness. You should also dry the water with a cloth and chop it with a knife, so.

My friends also raise chickens with me. I was about four or five years old at that time. There, spring, summer, autumn and winter are distinct.

My friends and I play different games according to different seasons.

5. 350 words were found in the forest [350 words were found in the forest] Spring was found in the forest, and the weather was warm. I played in the forest behind the yard and found 350 words in the forest.

Walking into the Woods, I saw many trees. Grass grows under the big tree, and the grass is full of small flowers, red, yellow, blue, purple and pink ... I walked forward and saw a group of ants carrying food.

An ant found a big bug, but it couldn't move it. Somehow, there are more and more ants, and finally the big bugs are moved home. I walked on and found an unknown beetle. It is crimson, with two long horns on its head, like an antenna on TV.

It keeps moving, climbing the tree and drilling into the soil. How interesting! I went further and found a flock of birds flying freely. They fly from tree to tree, and from tree to tree, as if birds were holding an air race.

I found a slug on my way home. This slug is too clever. When it saw me hiding in the grass, I couldn't find it anywhere. You will find many things in the forest.

It's mysterious and interesting.

6. Composition describing autumn grass "I am a grass that no one knows.

The title of this song is Grass. For me who has lived for two centuries (a season is a century for grass), I have grown a lot.

So I am addicted to pop music all day. No, I sang a tune-changing pop music: I am a bird.

However, a recent autumn wind has taken away our green, and the green of life has drifted away, turning everything into gold and laying a golden carpet on the ground. But for our grass, the price is very high.

Slowly falling down one by one, even I have changed from a lively young man to an old, weak and sick old man, hunched over, with no vitality at all. In the end, they will fall down one by one.

Because, when winter comes, our life is over, but we don't give up. Because next spring, we will live tenaciously.

Autumn has been1February, and the leaves on the trees have long been yellow, but most of them are hanging on the branches. At night, under the faint street light, I saw a golden tree. At that moment, I froze.

Looking at the fairy-tale golden tree, flapping its branches and leaves, I was moved to tears. I always thought that autumn, dead leaves, only represented desolation and loneliness.

Autumn wind and autumn rain are so sad that the ancients described autumn in the same way: almost like autumn, the color is bleak and the smoke gathers; ..... Its cold gas makes people bones and muscles; Its meaning is gloomy, and the mountains and rivers are lonely. Taking it as a sound, it is sad and cut, but it is difficult to call.

Listening to the autumn sound and watching the leaves fall one by one is a farewell, and it is also the exhaustion and disappearance of life. Sadness, reluctance and helplessness always haunt me.

I appreciate the autumn wind. I am intoxicated with her elegance and exquisiteness, but at the same time, I always fall into a sad mood inevitably.

Today, this brilliance suddenly gave me a strong feeling. That tree, a person, stood there stubbornly, almost stubbornly, with branches covered with gold, standing firmly in the wind.

It turns out that autumn is also strong. It is persistence and patience.

The autumn wind is like summer, the sky is high and the clouds are light, the leaves rustle with the wind, and it is another autumn for a change of heart. The ethereal and cool autumn wind blew the clothes cold overnight, shook the leaves, floated the fragrance of chrysanthemums, gently sounded the string of blue wind chimes in front of the window, appeared in front of me like an old man, and gently blew away a wisp of thoughts.

Standing in the autumn wind, you will smell the familiar smell, which is the fragrance of begonia and osmanthus. Intoxicating and ethereal. You might as well borrow her warmth and comfort to resist the bleak and light cold in this autumn. Meditate in the autumn wind, you will inadvertently touch the dusty past for many years, and open those yellowed photos and old letters, only to find that some people have not actually gone far, he is still lingering in his mind, and he has always stayed in the softest place in his heart.

Walking in the autumn wind, it is best to wash away all my troubles and dust with drizzle. Not afraid of "autumn wind and autumn rain" or "leaving the residual lotus to listen to the rain", this is also the charm of autumn. Even if I am sad and lonely, it is a good mood.

Autumn should be yellow leaves, and rain never tires of moss. Every autumn, I always stubbornly borrow the autumn wind to get rid of my melancholy, but the autumn wind didn't put away her sadness because of my discomfort.

Who sighs in the autumn wind and plays the piano in the autumn wind? Who is standing in the phoenix tree drenching the autumn rain, who is the curtain rolling west wind as thin as yellow flowers? Whose blue shirt is wet and whose return journey is lightened by the waning moon in Yang Liuan? The autumn wind has blown through my heart. I don't know when it will blow through this Zen machine. Autumn wind, accompanied by running water, is obviously close at hand, within reach, but it passes irretrievably quietly, no matter how earnestly we can't hold it. Lu You's phrase, "Wild geese come cold in autumn, and wine at night is too sad", can be said to have done enough articles in autumn.

"Alas, autumn is angry! A bleak, withered vegetation ... "These sorrows spread from the classic poems of the ancients, and they were at arm's length from the ground, making people feel lonely. Fortunately, I am not an ancient, and I am not so sad.

"The white dew is frost, and the so-called Iraqis are on the water side", I would like to imagine Qiu as a woman who came out of ancient ink painting, with elegant posture, walking like a cloud, not charming and not gorgeous, but jade bone with ice muscles, fresh and refined, and a moving smile. This feeling is only available in autumn.

I will also feel the heroic spirit of "the autumn wind is magnificent", the richness of "the autumn scenery in Nanshan is full of momentum", and the dripping feeling of "autumn geese and Changfeng escort when I face them and drink my wine from this villa", and the feeling of autumn wind is different from each strand. Accustomed to the autumn wind and autumn rain, the floating in my heart will gradually calm down, and then a comfortable leisure will rise.

When the autumn wind drifted away, I felt a little more expectation. I don't want to leave the autumn wind, just like the cold rain that doesn't want to leave my old friend. Autumn is coming to an end and the cold rain is slightly cold. Outside the window, it is the falling rain, the rustling rain curtain, like fallen leaves, like flowers flying in the quiet night; Tea under the lamp is light and elegant, full of poetry and artistic conception. Then let me, under the traction of my ancestors' poems, open the clouds and feel what rain is, which can shorten the day and lengthen the night and be sung through the ages. For the description of rain, there are many good sentences from ancient times to the present.

Su Dongpo's "The water is bright and beautiful, the mountains are rainy", the article "It rains like a hanging cloud in xian yangqiao, and the fishing boats are ten thousand points apart" and Han Yu's "The rain in the sky is crisp, and the grass is near in the distance" all describe the beautiful enjoyment brought by wet rain. As long as the rain doesn't fall straight and the wind doesn't blow obliquely, walk with the umbrella in the rain, let the raindrops beat on the umbrella surface, and then gently rotate the umbrella handle to spray the raindrops in all directions, thus rotating into a circle of cornices.

Or throw the umbrella aside and give the young long hair and skin to the moisture all over the sky. How many times can I catch this rain in my life? ! At the beginning of the shower, the scenery is clear, and the poet will inevitably be filled with emotion. Wang Weiyou wrote in "Mountain in Autumn Night": "After the rain, an empty mountain stands on an autumn night. The moonlight in the pine forest and the crystal stone in the stream seem to have taken us to Xanadu, where there is no noisy traffic and chaotic sky, only the wind is cool and the moon is bright, which makes our mood settle for a moment, which is also good.

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7. How to write a clever lamb in the second book of Grade Two,

One morning, white clouds were floating in the sky. Father Sun climbed the mountain quietly. The grass on the hillside is green, the wild flowers are in bloom, and a lamb is eating the grass with relish in the grass. Suddenly, a wolf jumped out. He saw the lamb and thought, Great, I can finally have a full meal today. The lamb saw the wolf, too, and it was too late to escape. He had a brainwave, smiled and said to the wolf, "Dear Wolf, I have a strange disease recently, and any treatment doesn't work." If you eat me, you will get it. " After that, he lay on the ground and rolled around in pain. The wolf believed it. If I eat it, it will be very painful. He had to look for other animals in other places.

The lamb looked at the wolf who had gone far. He said happily, "This wolf is really stupid. Call him a big stupid wolf! " "

Second,

In the spring morning, a soft lamb is grazing on the green lawn, singing birds and flowers. The wolf sleeping in the haystack woke up. He looked up and saw a lamb grazing on the grass, which made the wolf drool.

The wolf thought: I'll ask him who is the best first. If he says it's me, I'll help him ease the pain. I'll eat him now. If he says it's a lion, I will roast him and let him know the pain.

The wolf stretched out his front paws, showed his sharp teeth and jumped on the lamb. The lamb was scared and rolled to the ground. The lamb thought, I can't die in vain. The lamb thought of a way. I pretended to be bitten by a dog and was poisoned, which made him feel bad. The wolf was about to ask the lamb, and the lamb shouted, "Pain! It hurts! Pain! " The wolf asked, "What's the matter?" The lamb said, "This morning, I saw some bushes in front of Dalmatian's house. I ate a little, and Dalmatian saw it and took a bite. Now it is poisoned. If you eat it, I will be poisoned, too. " The wolf ran home in fear. The lamb said, "What a fool!" Finally, the lamb continued to eat grass.