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What thoughts and feelings does the full moon in the article express?
Anyone who reads prose knows that those bits and pieces of words. Where is the God in this article? Look at the moon. One is the scenery under the moon, the other is the poetry under the moon, and the third is the fantasy under the moon. Although this is around the full moon, the clue is not clear. Teacher Gao Linsheng's interpretation of the internal logical structure of the lesson "Looking at the Moon" is very enlightening to us: the scene under the moon is today's moon; The poem under the moon is Gu Yue, the moon of yesterday; The imagination under the moon is the moon of tomorrow. Today, yesterday and tomorrow constitute the internal logical structure of the text. This kind of explanation is concise, based on today, looking back at yesterday and looking forward to a better tomorrow, which is in line with the main purpose of Mr. Zhao's writing.
Let's look at this text in detail. At first glance, the first paragraph of the text only explains the time and place of writing, but careful analysis is still very meaningful. In the dead of night, it is quiet all around, and it has an aesthetic artistic conception that evokes quiet beauty and many feelings of literati for the moon. The deck of the river boat is a special place to see the moon. A river and the bright moon in the sky complement each other, which will arouse the author's beautiful reverie. This creates conditions for the integration of the author's subjective feelings and the objective environment. So the numbers in the first section are by no means idle.
In the second section, the beautiful scenery on the Xiahe River (this month) written by the author with extraordinary brilliance is the best embodiment of the integration of subjective feelings and objective environment created by the author in the first section. The moonlight at this time is bright, warm and soft in the author's pen. You see, the moon is shining peacefully, and thousands of shining spots are beating. This is not bright, soft or warm. What can it be? In particular, the word "electroplating" is used strangely. It sprinkled moonlight on the river, writing naturally and skillfully. This paragraph of writing, from top to bottom, from near to far, deducts step by step, which is very orderly and is the best model for students to learn landscape writing.
The beautiful scenery on the river under the moon awakened my little nephew in the fourth quarter (it was the moon that woke me up), as if it were connected with nature. At the same time, the fourth section shows that the little nephew is smart, studious and fond of fantasy. This is pushing the article down. If the personality characteristics of the little nephew are taken as the key analysis, it is beside the point. My little nephew and I recite ancient poems, and the article is the key point. I have heard some teachers recite poems with their children when teaching this part, just like playing table tennis. This is the performance of not understanding the article. Why can reciting ancient poems make us indulge in a quiet and spacious atmosphere? It is the artistic conception and poetry of the moon described in the poem. If it is integrated with the moonlight in front of the author and the little nephew, it will have such a wonderful feeling. And the arrangement of these poems is also very interesting. The first little nephew sang "I didn't know the moon when I was a child, so I called it Bai Yupan". It is the moon in Li Bai's heart when he was a child, and it is also the moon in his heart, which conforms to the characteristics of children. The following poems are mostly attached to the lovesickness between relatives and friends, expressing people's nostalgia for their hometown, relatives and friends, so the poems and the scene of the bright moon in front of them will inevitably produce a quiet and spacious atmosphere.
After watching today's moon and recalling the moon in the hearts of the ancients, the author suddenly turned to writing about my nephew's fantasy about the moon (the moon of tomorrow). When my nephew answered without thinking, the moon is like an eye, the eye of the sky, which is in sharp contrast with my surprise. This is worth pondering. The little nephew answered without thinking, first, because of his age, second, because he likes fantasy, and more importantly, he is eager for the distant future. He is always curious about new things, creative, eager for a better future and pursuing better ideals. The author is an adult, and his thoughts have been dulled by the heavy pressure of life; The beautiful vision for the future is fading away, leaving only the fatigue of coping with life and being in the burnout of life. In sharp contrast, my thoughts have been impacted and infected by the pursuit of an ideal life. How can I not be surprised? So I will be curious to ask, "Tell me, what kind of eyes are these?" In my nephew's eyes, the moon is like a fairy tale world. Fairy tales are the products of people's pursuit of beautiful ideals and longing for the future, which have a great influence on the author's thoughts.
In the last paragraph of the article, why did I "stare at the place where the moon disappeared for a long time and spread my fantasy wings gently …" That was the result that he was moved by his little nephew's idea. From the infection of beautiful scenery every day to the edification and bathing of Gu Yue yesterday, I wrote it step by step, slowly rippling the author's heart. Finally, the moon of tomorrow and the moon of fantasy in my nephew's eyes aroused my curiosity and surprise, completely activated the author's increasingly numb heart and aroused his infinite yearning for a better future and a better life. The author's last fantasy about the moon is the best embodiment. It may also be the author's real intention to write this article. It can be said that the last section is the author's revelation of his writing theme. Careful readers can taste it.
The language of this article is plain and vivid, guiding readers to seek deep meaning step by step, with implicit beauty. In terms of conception, it takes the full moon as the center, has coherent organizational language, and is meticulous and rigorous. At the same time, the author also created a profound and distant artistic conception under the moon for readers, implicitly and euphemistically expressed his thoughts, feelings and writing themes, and was worthy of being a famous modern prose writer.
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