An original movie fan's feelings about the movie "Shanghai Fortress"

I am a fan of Shanghai Fortress. See Lu Han and Shu Qi starring QQ reading, the in the mind cool a lot. Lu Han? Seeing that the propaganda is a science fiction movie, the feeling of being unknown is getting stronger and stronger. Is Shanghai Fortress a science fiction? But on the day of the premiere, I arrived at the cinema early.

In fact, I am looking forward to this movie slapping me in the face and slapping my brain. Everyone wants to see a good movie. The original fans hope that the film can reproduce the touching plot in the novel. For the fans of "Another Domestic Science Fiction Movie after Wandering the Earth", they hope that the movie can really be as good as advertised, and Lu Han fans also hope that idols can take this opportunity to prove themselves to those who have no brains.

It's a pity that Shanghai Fortress didn't have the strength to fight back in the face, and being hacked is not a grievance. Call the old thief. Are you a screenwriter? Have you changed the story? Come out and get beaten.

Next, as an audience, I will talk about the background setting and plot from beginning to end. I haven't seen many movies and dare not evaluate special effects.

BACKGROUND: Humans brought back "Xian Teng" from space, and since then, science and technology have developed rapidly, but "Xian Teng" has also attracted an uninvited guest from outer space-Delta civilization. All parts of the world have fallen, leaving only the fortress of Shanghai, the last glimmer of hope for mankind.

Hmm (expressing hesitation, etc.) ... From the background description at the beginning, we can know that it is definitely not just the cities of "immortals and vines" that are attacked on the earth. From the beginning of the plot, people feel that only a small place like Shanghai is left for mankind. However, it is also mentioned in the following story that the cities around Shanghai have prepared materials to accept the people evacuated from Shanghai.

From the setting point of view, cities without bubble defense can't resist Delta civilization at all. How do these cities like Shanghai survive without bubble defense? You said that according to the original design, Delta civilization was just a city with "immortal vines", so let's make it clear from the beginning.

It may be 1. Alien soldiers kill people when they see them, and kill them when they see the city. There is no point in surviving in the cities around Shanghai. Possibility two. Foreign soldiers only stare at Shanghai with "immortal vines". Why didn't anyone suggest handing over xianteng? Why don't all cities (countries) that "immortals" fight aliens consider this method? To sum up, the details of the background are not complete.

The plot of a play

1. Emotional line

Jiang Yang fell in love with Lan Lin at first sight. That's how I feel anyway. What's special happened between these two people? Why does Jiang Yang like Lan Lin? I never mentioned it. The whole story is: Jiang Yang likes (secretly loves) Lan Lin, wants to send flowers, wants to show off in front of the goddess, and wants to confess. Is that all you showed us? Screenwriter, did you eat [beep-]?

Ok, I'll put my emotions away and talk about the plot in detail. Shortly after the plot began, Jiang Yang and Lan Lin were in the elevator together, Jiang Yang opened her bag to send flowers, Lan Lin went out, and Yang Jiannan (he has a bad memory, and forgot whether it was Yang Jiannan, I think so) was waiting for her. Jiang Yang was disappointed and returned to the dormitory. Sending a text message to the goddess, all I got was a perfunctory reply-"Have a good sleep, good night". You insist that this is Lan Lin's concern for Jiang Yang. Later, the plot shows that Lan Lin's reply to Jiang Yang is this sentence, and the punctuation remains unchanged.

Let's go to the noodle restaurant to eat noodles ... It can be understood that Jacky Jiang came to the restaurant where the goddess often came to wait for her and sent her flowers. The goddess accepted it, and Jiang Yang wanted to date while the iron was hot. Alas, the goddess agreed. great ...

There are many bugs and thieves in the subsequent bubble defense generator. Jiang Yang asked him if he had time. Everybody knows what this means, but Lan Lin doesn't. Just answer "yes". Obviously, the writer wants to put these two together. What do you mean, call someone over to fix something? Is this the place to chat and love? There is a feeling of forcibly inserting the original plot. Lan Lin's sentence "We have never talked well" is a bit strange. Who has a secret crush on who! Next, Lan Lin's reason for joining the army is like a sermon in a textbook, and similar words can be heard all the time. Besides, what are you two doing here, falling in love or repairing machines or understanding life?

In the end, Lan Lin's reply seems to accept Jiang Yang, Yang Jiannan, who was suggested crazily at the commendation meeting.

Let's talk about the story of Lu (A Zi) and Pan (Big Pig). The full text can't see any signs between (A Zi) and Pan. Suddenly, ...

To sum up the emotional line: there is no sense of cp between the main characters, the dialogue is blunt, the plot coherence is poor, and the emotional line collapses.

2. Front line

The first alien attack was fine. Nothing serious. Well, actually, I have forgotten the scene of the first battle. Of course, this also reflects a problem that there is nothing to see in this plot.

There were many problems in the second attack, and the foam defense could not hold up. A large number of alien soldiers rushed to the command center. Strangely, these alien soldiers only hurt the protagonist but didn't kill them. General, hold the command center. The mother ship ran away as soon as the cannon opened. What about those alien soldiers Miraculously, there were no alien soldiers in the war to mend the knife for the seriously injured general.

The protagonist's team is sitting in vr equipment, controlling a large number of drones to assist the battle and follow the advance.

The second attack, the strategy of consuming bubble defense energy, shows that aliens are not brainless. After a while, an alien sneaked into the command center and forcibly canceled the bubble defense. There are many bugs here, not to mention that so many people can't stop a soldier, and they have succeeded. After the bubble defense was cancelled, the mother ship did not attack immediately. What about the soldiers who swarmed when they broke a small hole during the attack?

In addition, what is the operation of blowing up the command center? Batman has finished the operation. In other words, which brain in the main system [beep-] is designed not to explode, and the backup system can't make up for it?

The third attack

There are quite a few staff members here to express their opinions. The three men were entrusted with heavy responsibilities and flew to the battlefield. An alien soldier got stuck on the plane of Lu Yiyi (Su Wan (A Zi)), and Jiang Yang blew up his plane to save Lu Yiyi (Su Wan (A Zi)) and went down to fight the alien soldier himself. Yu Zeng in the sky shouted that he couldn't stay up, and then Lu (Ah Zi) came down and gave his plane to Jiang Yang, because Jiang Yang was more capable, and then blew himself up. To save (A Zi) Lu, I really don't deserve to blow up my plane. These three people are important people to ensure the successful launch of the Shanghai cannon and the most capable people to form Shanghai.

To highlight Jiang Yang's spirit of self-sacrifice is to gild the lily.

Another, it should be said that you are the protagonist. Out of the protective warehouse, there is a powerful weapon outside. You can grab weapons one by one, or you can do something with alien soldiers. You can jump on an alien soldier and shoot a few times. The alien soldier is missing. In contrast, the soldier brothers next to him chugged with machine guns, and even the defense of alien soldiers could not be broken. Alien soldiers came here one after another. Is there such a big gap between Jiang Yang and ordinary soldiers? Or is there such a big gap between Lu Han and the extras?

Finally, Jiang Yang shouted, "Shoot." Ahem, this line is a bit embarrassing. The beam of Shanghai cannon flashed across the aircraft carrier, and countless alien soldiers swarmed in. In the violent explosion, the aircraft carrier disappeared, the alien soldiers disappeared, and so did Shanghai and .................................................................................................................................! ! So that an alien soldier can spell out the ejection bin in the plane and protect Jiang Yang from death! ! !

I don't spray on the character setting, and I don't know how to spray. How can I spray a group of people with blank information? What are Jiang Yang and Lan Lin like? What are the other three members of the Grey Hawks like? Yang Jiannan, General (forgot his name) ...

In other details, biographical lines are not catchy, such as Lu Han's hairstyle, paintings and costumes, props (Nokia explosion-proof old man machine), awkward lines and awkward accent. ...

You think I'm finished spraying? Not yet! The above is just my evaluation of the Shanghai Fortress film itself as an audience, slightly mixed with my personal feelings about the novel. Yes, it's Lu's strange name. Not evaluated (sprayed) as the raw powder of Shanghai fortress!