Original songs, please comment

I heard it, first like it! You must be asking here because you want someone to point out some shortcomings. Let me share my opinions as a listener: 1. The advantage is that the melody is beautiful and the rhythm of the song is good. The voice acting is also quite good.

2. The disadvantage is that the song is a bit flat as a whole, that is to say, the expression of the verse and chorus is too flat, without major ups and downs, so that it cannot express what you say in the lyrics very well. emotions. I think it would be better if we could make up for it in terms of arrangement.

3. I feel that the lyrics are a bit far-fetched, and the meaning I want to express is not very clear, and it is also a bit confusing. The first half seems to express that you lose happiness because it is too late, but the latter part says that happiness comes too late. I really want to know whether this song expresses happiness or misfortune.

I’m showing off my shame here, I hope I can help you