What does the fifth paragraph of Zhu Ziqing in Spring do?

1. The first part (1 paragraph) is about the general writer's longing for spring.

2. The second part (paragraphs 2-7) describes the scenery in spring. The author describes the scene and breath of spring from five aspects: grass, flowers, wind, rain and people. Five sections and five paintings form a three-dimensional panoramic view of spring. This painting is not only rich in color, shape, sound, scenery and character activities, but also has a clear artistic conception, showing endless vitality.

(1) (the second paragraph) Through the mountains, water and sun in spring, I always write the modality of spring returning to the earth and everything reviving. (This paragraph can be taken as a part independently: Seeking Spring)

(2) (Paragraph 3) Describe the grass in spring in detail.

(4) Describe the flowers in spring in detail.

(5) Describe the spring breeze in detail.

(6) Describe the spring rain in detail.

6. (Paragraph 7) People who specialize in spring. (This paragraph can be used as an independent part: Spring Festival travel rush)

The third part (paragraph 8- 10) can be summarized as "ode to spring" (or "ode to spring").

(1) (Paragraph 8) Praise the "newness" of spring.

② (Paragraph 9) Praise the "beauty" of spring.

③ (Paragraph 10) Praise the "health" of spring.

The content of "spring":

Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is approaching.

Two "longings" are recurring rhetorical devices, whose function is to emphasize the author's earnest expectation for spring. "Footsteps" are anthropomorphic. "Come, Near" writes people's eager expectation for spring, revealing the joy in their hearts. In just four sentences, I wrote the author's hope and praise for spring. The sentence is short and kind, which sets a lively tone for the full text and expresses the author's longing and joy for spring. This kind of emotion always hangs over the whole article, and it is getting stronger and stronger.

Everything looked like I had just woken up, and I opened my eyes with joy. The mountains moistened, the water rose and the sun blushed.

This is Looking for Spring. Described as "all things wake up like a dream, beaming", so that spring has a human modality. "Wake up and open your eyes" are anthropomorphic, vividly describing that everything will start again. In this way, in the specific way that people wake up from sleep, get rid of all difficulties and regain their energy, it accurately, vividly and interestingly shows that everything is warm, moist and full of vitality in spring. The last three sentences are parallelism, which simply and thoroughly describes the return of spring to the earth, full of spring. "Langrun Rising Red" is a description, which depicts the awakening modes of mountains, water and the sun respectively. It is very vivid, writes the changes of spring and the author's mood, and is full of joy. "blushing" is also anthropomorphic, highlighting the warmth of spring. In this passage, the author always describes the scene of spring. And this warm emotion is full of the full text. This provides a natural background for the detailed description of spring scenery below.

Let's start painting spring. The author describes the grass, flowers, wind and rain in spring respectively, and describes the scenery in spring from many aspects.

The grass crawled out of the soil, tender and green. In the garden and in the field, look, there are many such trees. Sit, lie down, roll twice, kick some balls, run a few laps, and hide and seek a few laps. The wind is quiet and the grass is soft.

This is a picture of spring grass. First, write on the front: "stealing diamonds" is anthropomorphic, and it is written that the grass is full of vitality and grows quietly in spring; Their excavation from the grass shows humble but vigorous vitality. "Light green" describes the texture and color of spring grass and highlights its fresh characteristics. Man Yes shows the vibrant characteristics of spring grass in spoken English. The third and fourth sentences describe the joy and mood of Chuncao, which belongs to profile description. The grass is so new and tender that people can't put it down. A series of verbs such as "sit, lie down, hit, kick, run and grab" write out the joy and joy that spring brings to children, which makes people really feel "gentleness". "Play two rolls, kick a few balls and play several times" is parallelism. The antithesis of "the wind is quiet and the grass is soft" makes people feel the tenderness of spring. This passage goes on in silence.

Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees are all in full bloom if you don't let me or I won't let you. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow. Flowers are sweet; When I closed my eyes, the tree seemed to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears. Thousands of bees are buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of different sizes are flying around. Wildflowers are everywhere: miscellaneous, named and unnamed, scattered in the grass like eyes, like stars, still flashing.

This is a picture of Zhang Chunhua. The author writes quietly by being moved. "You won't let me, I won't let you", obliquely imitating your own personality, writing that flowers bloom and fall, and spring flowers compete. Catching Children is anthropomorphic, depicting the scene of spring blooming. "Like fire, like chardonnay, like snow", three figurative sentences are compared to write that spring flowers are blooming and a hundred flowers are blooming. "Sweetness" is synaesthesia. Writing about spring brings sweetness to our life. "It seems to be full of peaches, Xinger and pears." This is Lenovo. "Buzz" is an onomatopoeic word that describes the number of bees. "Noisy, Flying" is about bees and butterflies being busy, setting off the sweetness of flowers and making people daydream. There are many wild flowers in Everywhere and Miscellaneous. "Like eyes, like stars", wrote many weeds, further showing the richness of spring. Blink of an Eye is anthropomorphic, and it is about wild flowers swaying with the wind, flickering and flickering.

The level of this scene is very clear: on the tree → under the flower → everywhere; The author pays attention to the coordination of color and taste, emptiness and reality, movement and stillness: from "red as fire, pink as chardonnay, white as snow" to "flowers with sweetness", color and sweetness are linked together; From the sweetness of flowers to the fruit, combined with ethereal, the butterfly dance of bees sets off the lush and bright flowers; In addition, the author skillfully uses personification, parallelism, metaphor and other techniques to write a prosperous scene of spring flowers competing for opening and letting a hundred flowers blossom. The picture is colorful and full of three-dimensional sense.

5] "Blowing your face is not cold, Liu Feng" is good, like a mother's hand stroking you. The wind brought the smell of new ploughing, mixed with the smell of grass, and the fragrance of various flowers, all brewing in the slightly humid air. Birds nest in flowers and leaves. They are very happy. Calling friends proudly showed off his crisp voice and sang melodious songs, which set each other off in harmony with the light wind and flowing water. The shepherd boy's piccolo on the cow's back rang all day at this time.

This is a map of spring breeze. It is a famous saying that "blowing one's face without getting cold". The following author wrote the ethereal spring breeze in a tangible, audio, affectionate and vivid way: "Like a mother's hand touching you" wrote the tenderness of the spring breeze from the touch, turning the invisible wind into tangible. "Touch" highlights softness. "The smell of earth, the smell of grass and the smell of flowers" describes the fragrance of spring breeze from the sense of smell. "Happy show off" is personification, which describes the freedom and pride of birds and describes the beauty of spring from the side. "Calling friends and friends" is self-correcting in the sentence, and it is also used to personify people and highlight the joy brought by spring. "Singing and responding" are anthropomorphic, and spring breeze is written from the perspective of hearing. "It rings loudly all day" is an exaggeration, which describes the spring breeze pattern of the shepherd boy. The author uses touch, smell and hearing to describe the spring breeze respectively. Touch: quoting poems as metaphors makes people feel the warmth of spring breeze; Smell: "the smell of earth", "the smell of grass" and "the fragrance of flowers" are all brewed in slightly humid air, which makes people smell the fragrance of spring breeze; Hearing: crisp and euphemistic birdsong, brisk wind and loud flute sound make people feel the softness of spring breeze. In this way, the wind that was originally invisible was written tangible, tasteful, audible and emotional.

[6] Rain is the most common, lasting for three or two days. Don't be upset. You see, like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. The leaves are bright green, and the grass is green to the eyes. At night, the lights turned on, and a little dim light set off a quiet and peaceful night. In the countryside, on the path and by the stone bridge, some people are walking slowly with umbrellas, and some farmers are working in the fields, wearing wrinkled hats. Their houses are scattered and silent in the rain.

This is the spring rain map. Give priority to positive description and write the unique beauty in the spring rain. The spoken word "don't bother" is very interesting. "Like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament", three figurative sentences describe how fine and dense the spring rain is; "Oblique weaving" describes the lightness of spring rain. "There is a thin layer of smoke in the cage" to write a small spring rain. Bright Green describes the brightness of spring rain. "Green forces your eyes" to write the net of spring rain. "Yellow Halo" describes the softness of spring rain. These, set off a "quiet and peaceful night", but also moistened the pedestrians and farmers in the countryside, full of poetry and painting. Walk slowly writes about the tranquility of spring rain. Wearing a hat is timely to write about spring rain. Busy farmers are in sharp contrast to pedestrians walking slowly in the rain. Silence is about the tranquility of spring rain.

There are more kites in the sky and more children on the ground. Every family in urban and rural areas, old and young, came out one by one. Relax your muscles, cheer up and do your duty. "A year's plan lies in spring" has just begun, and there is plenty of time and hope.

This is a picture of "Spring Festival", depicting the happy scene of "Spring Festival in urban and rural areas, every household, old and young". Through various rhetorical devices, the author describes that in a beautiful environment, people are also full of spring and vitality, and enter nature. "City and Township, Every Household, Old and Young" uses parallelism to write the life scenes of diligent people in early spring. "Catch the children" and take care of the spring flowers, writing a lively scene of people coming and going. "Relax your muscles and be full of energy" is repetitive and antagonistic, and writing about early spring makes people flourish. In the beautiful spring scenery of spring grass, spring flowers, spring breeze and spring rain, "each doing his own thing" is full of infinite vitality and hope. "A year's plan lies in spring" quotes a proverb and writes that spring sows the seeds of hope for people. If the first four paintings focus on the "spring" of nature, then the fifth painting focuses on the "spring" of hardworking and early spring people. These five pictures, "You have me and I have you", perfectly combine grass, flowers, wind, rain and people, and give readers beautiful artistic enjoyment. Therefore, people can't help falling in love with spring.

Spring is like a newborn baby. It is new from head to toe, and it is growing.

Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.

⑽ Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms, waist and legs, leading us forward.

These three paragraphs are "Praise for Spring". Praise the novelty, beauty and vitality of spring. "A newborn doll" is a metaphor for a new spring, which, like a new life, gives people unlimited hope. "Growth" is personified. "Little girl" is a metaphor for the beauty of spring. Like a beautiful and lovely girl, it gives people unlimited pleasure. "Exquisitely dressed, smiling like a flower" is also anthropomorphic. "Strong youth" is a metaphor for spring health, like a strong young man, giving people unlimited strength. The "collar" is also anthropomorphic. Compare spring to dolls, little girls and strong young people. This ending is very novel and strange. After describing spring perfectly, the author sincerely praises it, further revealing that spring has unstoppable creativity and infinite hope. The three figurative metaphors are step by step, both progressive and imposing, which abruptly and forcefully summarize the full text and eulogize the beautiful and growing development of spring to the fullest. In this way, the author's affection for spring changed from liking to praising, from sensibility to rationality, and from personal hobby to social implication.

The full text depicts the image of spring. The author is good at grasping the things that best represent the characteristics of spring, using vivid personification, wonderful metaphor, powerful parallelism, numerous repetitions, exquisite care, beautiful description and other methods, and choosing a large number of beautiful words to describe spring, which clearly and cheerfully shows the health, magnificence and vitality of spring. Between the lines of this article, people feel a kind of warmth everywhere, and feel the spring full of vitality and interest. The artistic rhetoric of Spring deserves our reference.

Rhetoric of spring;

The rhetorical skills of Spring generally include multi-case combination, multi-case application, multi-case combination and comprehensive mixing.

(1) Multiple cases are used together. The use of multiple cases, especially a sentence or several similar sentences, uses rhetoric several times in a row. The combination of figures of speech is the most common and simple combination of figures of speech. The use of figures of speech can be divided into two types: the same case use and the different case use.

Using the same case refers to using the same figure of speech one after another in a language fragment. For example:

Relax and be full of energy.

The grass crawled out of the soil.

Like cow hair, like needles, like filaments.

Above, the precedents of "Shu Huo Shu Huo" and "Vibrant" are directly and repeatedly used. In China's case, "sneaking around" and "drilling" are used by two personification. The latter example is "like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament", which are three metaphors used together.

The use of different figures of speech is to use different figures of speech in succession in a language fragment. For example:

Scattered in the grass like eyes, like stars, still flashing.

Cheer up, call friends and proudly show off his crisp throat.

Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward.

Above, the precedent is that these two metaphors "like eyes, like stars" directly use a personification of "blink, blink". In Chinese, "cheer up", "call friends" and "show off" are several personified and self-equivalent figures of speech. The latter examples are metaphor, exaggeration, personification, etc. These three figures of speech are used together.

(2) Application of various cases. The use of figures of speech is small and big, that is, one figure of speech with relatively large form is the main one, including several other figures of speech with relatively small forms. For example:

The wind is quiet and the grass is soft.

Relax and be full of energy.

You won't let me, and I won't let you.

Above, the precedent is opposite, and a set of overlapping paintings is applied to the upper and lower couplets. China's example is antithesis, and the application of two couplets is repeated. The latter example is a circle, and the upper and lower sentences are personified.

(3) Use multiple grids. The use of multiple figures of speech means that multiple figures of speech are compatible, that is, the same sentence. From this point of view, it is this figure of speech, from that point of view, it is that figure of speech, and many figures of speech are mixed together. For example:

The grass crawled out of the soil.

Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow.

Above, the precedent "secretly" is both overlapping and anthropomorphic. The last three sentences are both metaphor and parallelism.

(4) Comprehensive mixing. The comprehensive application of figures of speech is a successful expression phenomenon and a conscious control means. Smart writers don't use a single rhetorical device. Whenever the content is expressed to the most wonderful part, the author pays special attention to the expression skills, so that a variety of rhetorical devices can cross and blend together to shine together. In a sense, the mixed technique of figures of speech is a special combination law of complex artistic rhetoric. So their expression effect is very strong, very strong and very profound. For example:

1) Birds are happy when they nest in flowers and leaves. Calling friends to show off her crisp throat and sing a melody that echoes the light wind and flowing water.

Spring is like a newborn doll. It is new from head to toe, and it is growing.

Spring is like a little girl, dressed up and walking with a smile.

Spring is like a strong young man with iron arms and legs, leading us forward.

In the above picture, Example 1 is personified as "Happy, Call Friends to Show off, Sing and Respond", which is also a self-correction of three sentences: "Flowers are young, and calling friends is fluid". Example 2 is a parallel progression, using three metaphors; Every metaphor is also personified. It can also be seen that the artistic rhetoric of Zhu Ziqing's Spring is flexible and changeable.

Reflections on the study of spring;

1. Spring painting is the focus of the full text description. Tell me how this part is arranged to describe the materials.

First of all, write the outline of spring concisely and outline the characteristics of mountains, water and sun.

Then draw the spring scenery with meticulous brushwork, and paint the colorful spring scenery from many sides.

Finally, the lively scene of spring returning to the earth and welcoming spring is written in detail and vividly.

2. What is the relationship between the five pictures of the Spring Painting Plate?

The first four pictures take natural scenery as the main body, depicting the beauty of spring from different aspects such as grass, flowers, wind and rain. The fifth picture is the attendance map in early spring, with people as the main body, in which "each does his duty." A year's plan lies in spring "and other statements, pointing out the main idea of the article. Exaggerated scenery is to highlight people. Therefore, the first four pictures serve for the fifth picture, which plays a role in setting off and paving the way.

Please find an anthropomorphic sentence in the second, third and fourth paragraphs. What are the advantages of writing like this?

"Everything is just like waking up, open your eyes happily." The image depicts the happy mood of the arrival of spring and the recovery of the earth.

The grass crawled out of the soil. It vividly shows the tenacity and vigorous vitality of grass.

"Peach trees, apricot trees, pear trees, you won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers." Kindly write the lively scenes of trees competing for spring and flowers competing for flowers.

The grass written by the author is tender and green. Can we not be "gentle"?

I can't. "Tenderness" describes the soft and bright texture of grass when it is born in early spring, which embodies the seasonal characteristics.

5. What flowers did the author write? What do you write about flowers? Why write fruit with "as if"?

Specifically, peach blossom, apricot blossom and pear blossom are the most representative flowers in spring. In addition, I wrote wildflowers.

Write more flowers: "flowers are like flowers" and "everywhere"

Write colourful flowers: "Red as fire, pink as chardonnay, white as snow".

Write the fragrance of flowers: "Thousands of bees are buzzing and butterflies are flying around".

"Full of peaches, Xinger and pears" is not the scene of early spring. This is a reminder of the future fruit by the fragrance of flowers, a pen in the distance, not a real scene. Without "as if", it is not true.

6. Wildflowers "are scattered in the grass like eyes, and are still blinking like stars." What rhetorical devices are used? What modality do you write about wild flowers?

"Like eyes, like stars" is a metaphor.

"Blinking" is anthropomorphic.

In this way, I wrote down the charm of wild flowers in Sunshine and Spring Breeze: bright and dazzling, everywhere, swaying in the wind, hiding from time to time, worthy of people's cherish and love.

7. The wind is invisible and silent. How does this article make readers feel the existence of wind?

The author writes the wind with the help of touch, which is likened to "touching you like a mother's hand", making people feel its tenderness; Writing the wind with the help of the sense of smell makes people feel the fragrance of the wind from "the smell of new soil", "the smell of grass" and "the smell of various flowers";

Write the wind by hearing, and let people feel its beauty from "birds … showing off their crisp throats and singing melodies in harmony with the light wind and flowing water" and "the piccolo of the shepherd boy … ringing loudly".

8. How does the author describe rain? What kind of scenery in the rain did you use for a brief description?

Sometimes the shape of the rain is described positively: "like ox hair, like needles, like filaments, densely woven diagonally."

Sometimes through the scenery in the rain: the outline description of leaves, grass, lights, pedestrians, farmers, houses and spring rain.

9. Can the order of the last three paragraphs be reversed? Why?

Can't exchange.

Because "a newborn doll → a little girl → a strong young man" reveals a development process from childhood to maturity. Taking this as a metaphor, the author vividly writes that spring will be mature and rich, which indicates that spring is new, beautiful and creative. )

A summary of the research on Spring;

This article is called "Spring", and its essence is people-oriented: the scenery is written with affection and characters in it; Borrowing scenery to express feelings and blending scenes; In the poetic lyrics, the author's love for the innocence of life and persistent pursuit for the future are beyond words.