[Excellent composition] Xiqiao Mountain in the Heart

Composition 1: "[Excellent Composition] Xiqiao Mountain in the Heart" 900 words

Dawn breaks, and the blurry and uncertain orange-red light band from the horizon quietly The ground opened the gray-brown curtain. Carrying the gentleness of the morning light, we came to Nanhai Xiqiao Mountain, the "Nantian Fujian Mountain".

Tianhu

Tianhu is a place full of southern charm. The rippling blue lakeside shimmered like gold, as bright as the stars pouring down from the Milky Way. The gemstone dragon standing in the middle of the lake, with its claws spread out and its whiskers flying, shows an aura that is about to fly and dive, as if it is showing its heroic ambition to the blue sky. Next to the willow bank of the lake embankment is a patch of dark green, and the dancing light spots on the lush and dense trees are like dancing elves. The nine-winding small bridge, the unique Yao Pavilion and the Jiangge Pavilion, and the free-flying little white pigeons are each wonderful and complement each other.

When you stand at a high place, you will feel a sense of majesty and sudden enlightenment. The entire southern land in front of us was shrouded in soft mist. The roads extending in all directions, the rows of buildings... are like a splash-ink painting of landscapes floating on rice paper, giving people the illusion of "steaming clouds and dreamy lakes". Everything is so magical and ethereal!

Skylight

It is the light well of the stone mine in the Ming Dynasty. The rock wall under the well is cut straight and is unfathomably deep. Standing at a height of more than ten meters and looking down at the skylight, the gap below is like a bottomless pit, and the eerie black hole makes people shudder. Suddenly, a spot of light swayed in the darkness, and there were clusters of weeds at the bottom of the cave, like greedy children absorbing the essence of the sunlight greedily and with difficulty. Occasionally, a burst of noisy voices echoed loudly in the cave, adding a little bit of the atmosphere of survival to the grass. After standing there for a long time, I felt dizzy. The cave was steep and dangerous, which was really daunting and made me unable to stand steadily.

Walking further, I saw a "stone screen" rising in the sky, like a long sword piercing the sky, it was amazing! Shiyanyan is a masterpiece of ancient people's uncanny craftsmanship. Look, the huge rock outside the cave is as majestic and steep as an axe. It is like a huge scenery wrapped in tinfoil, rolling towards you heavily. Walking into the cave, it is dark and refreshing; rowing in the boat is like being in a dream; whispering softly, the echo is buzzing; water drops are dripping, cold to the bones, like entering a cool world.

As the mountain road gradually progressed, we were getting deeper into danger without even realizing it! On the left side of the narrow mountain path is a bottomless deep pool, on the right is a cliff, on the back is the vast beauty of the South China Sea, and in front is a long and invisible road.

After walking hundreds of steps, the clouds returned and I sat in the cave. The forest is lush with bamboos and sparse flowers and trees; the wild flowers are fragrant, and hundreds of birds return to the forest; the beautiful scenery is elegant and wash away the troublesome dust. "There is no way out despite the mountains and rivers, but there is another village with dark flowers and bright flowers." As the dusk fell, a ray of setting sun suddenly appeared, and the sound of people gradually became louder. Everyone was relieved and smiled at each other. In the laughter, I found the precious spirit needed to face difficulties and achieve success in the future. Composition 2: "[Excellent composition] Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain" 400 words

In spring, hundreds of flowers bloom in Xiqiao Mountain: there are azaleas all over the mountains and plains, kapok in various shapes, and some peach blossoms in the peach garden are in bud. , some are in full bloom. From a distance, it looks like a huge pink carpet. The unique fragrance of peach blossoms attracts many bees and butterflies. They are very busy among the flowers. As Du Fu said: "A cluster of peach blossoms blooms without an owner, the lovely deep red loves the light red."

In summer, Xiqiao Mountain is lined with green trees. Look: the lychee trees and longan trees grow so beautifully. Lush and green; the branches are covered with unripe fruits. Look at the pond full of lotus flowers, which are really red and green. This scene is so beautiful and spectacular. I couldn't help but chant: The lotus leaves touching the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers reflecting the sun are uniquely red. Look: even the fish knows how to enjoy it, playing in the shade of the lotus.

In autumn, all the flowers have faded, but only the chrysanthemums stand upright in the wind, bloom proudly against the frost, and compete to bloom. Autumn is a harvest season, and Xiqiao Mountain is no exception: the big, round oranges bend the branches, and they look like small lanterns from a distance. The thin-skinned tangerines, heavy grapes, and green tangerines make people salivate. As Su Dongpo wrote: "You must remember that the good times of the year are the time when oranges are yellow and oranges are green."

In winter, when other places are covered in pink and jade and the cold wind is howling, our Xiqiao Mountain is still green and full of vitality! Fascinating.

The charming Xiqiao Mountain is really a tourist resort worthy of its name! Composition three: "Composition on a trip to Xiqiao Mountain" 800 words

A trip to Xiqiao Mountain

Not long after the holiday, my father and I went to Xiqiao Mountain to climb. We climbed far and saw many things.

At the beginning, my father and I went to the dining place. My father and the uncles who were traveling with us put down the beers and started climbing.

We first walked across a small bridge and came to a lotus pond. This lotus pond is very beautiful, with a large green lotus leaf and some lotus flowers in bloom. Everyone stopped to take photos and look at the scenery. This reminds me of "the lotus leaves touching the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers reflecting the sun are uniquely red."

After passing the lotus pond, we turned a few corners, walked a long way, crossed a single-plank bridge, and walked to a temple to rest for a while. I saw a big mountain on the left and a very tall Nanhai Guanyin statue on the right. We took a look and went down the mountain.

We had so much fun going to Xiqiao Mountain this time!

Writing guidance: How to make the language of composition "alive"

The ancients said: "Words have no words, but actions will not go far." Language is the "shell" of thought, and it is the article. 's "skin". With a beautiful and appropriate "shell" and beautiful "skin", an article will be vivid, touching and radiant. So, how to make the language of your article "alive"? You might as well start from the following aspects:

1. The language should be concise and accurate.

In 1986, a foreign newspaper organized a "shortest coverage competition" for a football match. Reporters from various newspapers flocked to the event, eager to win the first prize. As a result of the selection, the first prize was taken away by a report with only three words. This report is: "──0:0." It fully reflects the simplicity and beauty of language. Because the skills of these two teams were mediocre and they ended up in a draw, there is really nothing to report. Only the final referee's whistle announced the result of the game to people. The author captured this scene and wrote this report in three vivid words. This is truly a masterpiece of concise language. To make the language concise, we must be flexible, concise, powerful, and just right in word choice and sentence making. Another example is Wang Anshi's seven-line "Boancing at Guazhou" that has been recited through the ages. It is said that the word "green" in the poem "The spring breeze turns green on the south bank of the river" was changed by Wang Anshi four times when writing. First it was written as "arrive", and then it was changed to "Man" was changed to "enter", and finally it was decided as "green". The words "arrive", "man" and "ru" are good in terms of the content of the poem, but compared with the word "green", they are still abstract after all and cannot arouse people's associations; and the word "green" , the spring arrives in the south of the Yangtze River, and the vibrant and spring scene is vividly and vividly displayed, arousing people's infinite reverie. A concise word "green" makes the artistic conception of the article more beautiful and full of flavor.

2. The language must be appropriate and standardized. Composition 4: "[Excellent composition] Xiqiao Mountain" 400 words

Xiqiao Mountain

My hometown is in Xiqiao Mountain Tourist Resort, Foshan City, Guangdong Province, where the scenery is beautiful. Especially "Xiqiao Mountain".

Xiqiao Mountain has lush trees, birds singing and flowers fragrant. It is a good place to visit.

During one summer vacation, my father took me to Xiqiao Mountain. In the morning, my father and I headed non-stop to the top of Xiqiao Mountain. After a heavy rain, the mountains were filled with clouds and mist. My father and I set foot on the mountain trail through the clouds and mist. There are forests of fir and bamboo on both sides of the mountain road. Looking from a distance, Xiqiao Mountain stands high in the clouds, like a sky-piercing silver sword standing in the clouds and mist. As we drove, we enjoyed the scenery along the way. After a while, we came to Fairy Lake. The water of Fairy Lake is green and crystal clear. There is a giant dragon lying in the middle of the lake, as if it is about to break out of the water and fly into the sky. After leaving Fairy Lake, we went to Peach Garden. When we walked into the peach garden, we saw peach blossoms falling one by one, including pink, white, red, and purple, just like a goddess scattering flowers. After a while, we left the peach garden and went straight to the top of the mountain. I looked up at the top of the mountain where the clouds were shrouded in mist. The mountain was winding and winding, like a ribbon falling from the clouds. The tourists seemed to be scattered on the ribbon with white dots. , moving upward slowly.

After a while, I finally reached the top of the mountain and looked around. The vast top of Xiqiao Mountain looked like lotus flowers looming in the sea of ??clouds.

The grass on the ground stretched, raised their dewy little faces, and smiled sweetly. The words "not human" on the stone wall felt more vivid.

My hometown is so beautiful, I love my hometown.

XXX Grade 4: He Jiayi Composition Five: "Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain" 400 words

Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain

This spring, my mother took me to Climb the famous Xiqiao Mountain in Xiqiao. There are many scenery in Xiqiao Mountain, such as: Tianhu Park, Feiliu Qianchi Tea Garden... Among them, Tianhu Park is my favorite.

Let's go up the path. It's only a little over a meter wide, and it's all steps. There are many dense trees on both sides of the staircase road. It is really shaded by green trees! We finally walked up the steps to Tianhu Lake. I stood and looked at it from a distance. The lake was very quiet, as quiet as a big bright mirror. The lake is very green, as green as a piece of flawless emerald. There is a water stage on the lake, like a giant ship parked there. My mother told me: If it is a holiday, there will be a wonderful lion dance performance on the stage, and the lake will be crowded with people. There is a golden dragon next to the water stage. It is lifelike, as if watching a lion dance performance on the water stage.

In the center of Tianhu Lake, there is a winding nine-bend bridge. It is like a dragon swimming in the water, leading us to the other side. Walking through the Jiuqu Bridge, I saw many people. Some of them fished, some watched the scenery, and some played chess. You see, they are smiling, chatting and laughing, leaving all their troubles behind, and their faces are full of happiness. We quickly found a stone bench to rest on. After resting for a while, we started playing on the grass.

After playing for a while, it’s time for us to go home. Only then did I reluctantly leave. Xiqiao Mountain is so beautiful! I would like to turn into a small fish in Tianhu, stay with Tianhu every day, and play games with water plants... Composition 6: "Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain" 500 words

Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain

Last Sunday, the wind was beautiful and the sun was beautiful, and our family went to Xiqiao Mountain to play.

Standing at the foot of Xiqiao Mountain, looking up, ah, what a green mountain. The peaks are connected to the peaks, like a green ocean. We climbed up the mountain road and saw trees on both sides of the road like tall soldiers and open green umbrellas. Under the tree, colorful wild flowers are blooming, including red, yellow, purple and purple, just like a beautiful big flower bed. We walked and enjoyed the beautiful scenery without feeling tired at all. The mountain breeze is blowing, so cool!

We arrived at Tianhu Lake on the top of the mountain. This is a beautiful lake, the surface of the lake is like a big bright mirror. The lake is very green, like a green gem. The lake is surrounded by dense flowers, plants and trees. The trees are reflected in the water and appear greener; the white clouds in the sky are reflected in the water and appear whiter. We walked around the lake and enjoyed the tranquil and beautiful scenery of the lake and mountains. I also asked my dad to take some photos of me.

We went to Peach Garden. Ah, so many peach blossoms, it is really a world of peach blossoms. Each flower showed a pink smiling face, laughing and shaking in the breeze. The faint fragrance of flowers attracted a swarm of bees and butterflies. They were flying among the flowers, flying and falling. It was really beautiful. We lingered under the peach trees, and laughter floated in the peach garden.

We went to Baizhu Garden. Needless to say, this is the world of bamboo. Tall ones, short ones, thick ones, thin ones, densely connected together. There are Guanyin Bamboo, Big Buddha Belly Bamboo, Golden Green Bamboo, etc. Sifang bamboo is a specialty of Xiqiao Mountain. The bamboo body is in four directions, which is really unique.

We also visited scenic spots such as Wuye Well and Nanhai Guanyin. Every place was so beautiful.

Xiqiao Mountain is really a beautiful place.

(This article is written in the order of location transfer.) Composition 7: "The Water of Xiqiao Mountain" 600 words

The Water of Xiqiao Mountain

Xiqiao Mountain, one of the most famous mountains in southern Guangdong, is the nationally famous 5A-level scenic spot in the west of Guangdong Province. The scenery there is beautiful and magical, especially the water sources, which are extremely beautiful.

Let's just say "Flying Thousands of Feet". In front of a steep mountain, a huge stream of water pours down. From a distance, it looks like a giant curtain fluttering; up close, it splashes down. Countless pearls immediately jumped up from the water on the rocks, and the mist in the air formed colorful rainbows. The sound of rumbling water is endless.

It is no less than the feeling of "flying down three thousand feet, it seems that the Milky Way has fallen into the sky". Surrounded by mountains, there is a pool of spring water, which is the famous Tianhu Lake. The sky lake is round, like a large clear mirror, reflecting the blue sky, white clouds, and weeping willows on the lakeshore, which is very beautiful. The water of the lake is clear, and the spun gauze pebbles at the bottom of the lake are clearly visible. There are several colorful goldfish swimming around in the lake, which is very interesting. Standing on the lake embankment, waves of mountain breeze blow towards your face. It is so refreshing that you will forget all your love.

The Leafless Well is even more peculiar. Next to a small stream, there is a well built with stones. Not far away is a camphor tree with lush foliage. The yellow leaves that usually fall down never fall into the well. Even in late autumn, countless dead leaves are piled up outside the leafless well, as if they are never willing to pollute this holy water.

There are many water-related attractions on Xiqiao Mountain, such as the closely connected small lakes in Baiyun Cave, the underground river in Shiyanyan Rock, and East Lake... all waiting for you to watch and taste them carefully!

Article comments: The young author loves his hometown. While visiting Xiqiao Mountain, he observed the details and captured the most common but deepest water to describe, fully expressing the beauty of the water in Qiao Mountain. Showy and strange characteristics.

This article has a reasonable layout and clear levels. The sentence organization is hierarchical and spread out in an orderly manner. The wording is appropriate, the meaning is clear, and the reader has the feeling of being there when reading aloud. Composition 8: "Night View of Xiqiao Mountain" 400 words

Today, the autumn air is crisp and slightly cool, and our family drove to Xiqiao Mountain. There was a lot of traffic on the road, and it was very lively with people coming and going. Of course, the speed of the car was naturally much slower. Although I was a little impatient, since I was almost at Xiqiao Mountain, my mood was naturally much more relaxed. ??? This time we came to Xiqiao Mountain and drove straight up. The road was winding upwards, passing one bay and then another. There were sharp turns from time to time, and the angle of the climb was relatively large. I was a little worried at first, but slowly I was attracted by the various trees and flowers on both sides of the mountain road, and I no longer felt worried. When we were preparing to go down to Xiqiao Mountain after dinner, when we looked from top to bottom, we saw that the glittering golden world below was really beautiful. I looked to the left of the car window and was attracted by the charming sea of ??lights. . In the distance, it looks like stars, like fishing fires in the river, but it's not exactly the same. It's much denser than fishing fires, and it's uneven. The colors in the sea of ??lanterns include goose yellow, white, and white with red inside, all showing a variety of colors. This light adds color to the night view of Xiqiao Mountain! Our car turned left and right down the mountain. I saw that the sea of ??lights left behind was gone. I feel a little bit of a souvenir. I really want to take a look at this beautiful night view of Xiqiao Mountain. ． ． ． ． ． Composition 9: "Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain" 1300 words

Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain

There is a famous mountain in my hometown of Guangdong - Xiqiao Mountain ~ it is a beautiful and charming place scenic area.

Xiqiao Mountain is very high. Standing at the foot of the mountain and looking up, you will feel that it is in the clouds.

The most famous scenery in Xiqiao Mountain is the Hundred Bamboo Forest. The bamboo forest is densely covered with bamboos. The bamboos range from thick to thin, and are green, tall, and lush. The entire bamboo forest is shrouded in green. The thick and round bamboos are close to each other. The Baizhu Forest brings together famous bamboos from all over the world: slender Guanyin bamboo, tall weighing pole bamboo, simple Buddha belly bamboo, purple light green bamboo, Wanshan firecracker, golden green bamboo, Mashen bamboo and so on. In addition, there is also a specialty of Xiqiao Mountain-Sifang Bamboo. Square bamboo is smaller than ordinary bamboo, with square stems, dense and dense shape, elegant and elegant. Among such beautiful bamboos, the one that impressed me most was the green bamboo among the golden ones. The Golden Bamboo is golden yellow all over, with thin green patterns in the middle, so it is named Golden Bamboo.

Walking out of the green bamboo forest, you will see a world of peach blossoms - Peach Garden. The peach blossoms here are clustered next to each other, and they are laughing and trembling in the breeze. They are really beautiful. You see, some are in bud, some are smiling slightly, and some are in full bloom. The petals are thin, transparent, and pink. There are drops of crystal clear dew on some petals.

The peach blossom girls seem to be saying to you: "Come and look at me! How beautiful my 'new clothes' are." "Don't look at hers. I am ten thousand times more beautiful than her. Look at my pink clothes." There is also a yellow 'flower' in the middle~ How about it, it looks good... A breeze blows, and some petals fall with the wind, falling on your head, shoulders, and hands... The peach blossoms are not only beautiful~ but also It also exudes a faint fragrance. The fragrance of flowers attracts a swarm of bees and butterflies~ They add a lot of vitality to the Taoyuan.

Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain~ I love you:

Students:

On February 15, 1985, members of the Chinese Antarctic expedition team established the "China Antarctic Great Wall Station" on George Island, Antarctica, and finally raised the five-star red flag for the first time in Antarctica~

This flag is the crystallization of wisdom and science ~ This flag is dyed with sweat and blood ~ This flag is raised by the Chinese hands:

November 20, 1984 ~ Chinese Antarctic Expedition Team The 591 team members set off for the Antarctic from Shanghai. After more than a month of arduous sailing and a journey of more than 1,100 nautical miles, they safely arrived at the Antarctic on December 26. After the site for the station was selected, the expedition team immediately organized a force to attack from the two 10,000-ton giant ships. Unloading 500 tons of station construction materials and a large amount of scientific assessment equipment, and at the same time starting to build the Great Wall Station, they repaired the docks, moved materials, leveled the ground, excavated foundations, and built houses under harsh weather conditions that sometimes included violent storms and sometimes freezing snow. The installation equipment often works continuously for more than 16 hours. All excavators and bulldozers are activated, and helicopters and lifeboats are dispatched. In this way, after 45 days of hard work, a rare highway in the history of Antarctic station construction was finally created. The website construction task was completed with high quality on February 15, 1985. This is a victory of perseverance and tenacious fighting spirit:

The speed of construction of the China Antarctic Great Wall Station and the perfect quality have surprised foreign countries. Peers were impressed: It fully reflects the wisdom and creativity of the Chinese people. All the website building materials are produced in my country. It can not only withstand strong winds above level 12, but also withstand severe cold temperatures of tens of degrees below zero. In severe cold and dry conditions, the Great Wall Station is like a strong guard that can ensure the safety of the expedition team members.

The establishment of the Antarctic Great Wall Station is of great historical and practical significance. It marks that our country's science and technology has reached a new height.

Marx said: "There is no smooth road in science. Only those who are not afraid of hard work and climb along the steep mountain road can hope to reach it." The pinnacle of brilliance. "Students, although we have entered the 21st century, we should still learn from the Antarctic spirit: in front of us, there are many scientific peaks waiting for us to develop, and countless scientific mysteries waiting for us to explore:

Thank you all:

Xiqiao No. 2 Primary School 404 Xiehui Xiqiao Mountain is a famous tourist attraction in Guangdong!

In spring, Xiqiao Mountain blooms with a hundred flowers: there are azaleas all over the mountain and various kinds of trees. Some of the peach blossoms in the peach garden are in bud, and some are blooming. From a distance, they look like a huge pink carpet. The unique fragrance of the peach blossoms attracts many bees and butterflies, which are busy among the flowers. As Du Fu said: "A cluster of peach blossoms has no owner, the lovely deep red loves the light red." "

In summer, Xiqiao Mountain is lined with green trees. Look: the lychee and longan trees grow lushly; the unripe fruits are hanging on the branches. Look again at the pond full of lotus flowers There are so many colors of red and green, this scene is so beautiful and spectacular. I couldn’t help but chant: The lotus leaves in the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers are so red in the sun. Look: even the fish are enjoying themselves, playing in the shade of the lotus.

In autumn, all the flowers have faded, but only the chrysanthemums stand tall in the wind, blooming in full bloom against the frost. Autumn is a harvest season, and Xiqiao Mountain is no exception: the big, round oranges bend the branches. , look like small lanterns from a distance. The thin-skinned tangerines, heavy grapes, and green oranges make people salivate. As Su Dongpo wrote: "You must remember the good times of the year, it is the time when oranges are yellow and oranges are green." ＇.

In winter, when other places are covered in pink and the wind is howling, our Xiqiao Mountain is still full of green and fascinating!

< p> The charming Xiqiao Mountain is really a tourist resort!

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