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Read the first paragraph carefully and talk about what the author uses to describe Yu’s external image. What’s so good about writing this way?
Expresses the author's anxious mood
The blend of things and myself not only describes the magnificence of a tree with flowers, but also expresses the joyful mood.
The last sentence at the end corresponds to the beginning, "Speed ??up the pace" because "I" was infected and urged by the vitality of the wisteria flower.
1. Read the full text aloud and use your experience or knowledge to confirm the sentence "Flowers and people will encounter various misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless"
2. Try to figure out the following sentences and appreciate the beauty of describing the scene
(1) I have never seen the wisteria blooming in such a flourishing way. I saw only a brilliant lavender, like a waterfall. Hanging from the sky, neither the beginning nor the end can be seen
(2) The purple Big Jump to Busan is glowing with little silver light, like splashing water. When you look carefully, you realize that it is the lightest part of each purple flower, teasing with the sunshine
(3) Each blooming flower is like a small full-blown flower. The sail was broken, and there was a pointed cabin under the sail, and the cabin was bulging; it was also like a smile that couldn't help but smile, about to bloom.
(4) The purple waterfall covers the thick branches of the coiled and crouching dragons, and keeps flowing, flowing, towards the bottom of people's hearts.
1. Zong Pu's family was deeply persecuted during the "Cultural Revolution", and "anxiety and grief" have been weighing on the author's heart. At that time, the author's brother was terminally ill, and the author was very sad and wandered in the courtyard. , I saw a tree of purple wisteria flowers in full bloom, and I was relieved to see them. The flowers grew from decline to prosperity, from sadness to joy, and I realized that although we will encounter various difficulties in life, life is beautiful and eternal. The most precious thing for people is life. Life belongs to people only once. Our students today must understand the meaning of life, be proactive, and work hard to create a better tomorrow.
2. (1). Comparing a tree of blooming purple wisteria flowers to a waterfall, it looks extraordinary and brilliant.
(2). Delicately write out the shades of different parts of each flower, making it appear bright, lovely, exquisite and translucent, full of dynamics and interest.
(3). Using the metaphor of sails and cabins, the blooming state of wisteria flowers is described in detail, making it appear full of vitality. Compared to a smile, it looks more beautiful and lovely, and also expresses joy.
(4). The blending of things and myself not only describes the magnificence of a tree with blooming flowers, but also expresses the joyful mood.
I couldn't help but stop.
I have never seen a wisteria blooming like this before. All I could see was a brilliant lavender, like a waterfall, hanging down from the sky, with neither its beginning nor its end visible. It's just deep and light purple, which seems to be flowing, laughing, and growing continuously. On the large purple banner, there were dots of silver light, like splashes of water. When I looked carefully, I realized that the lightest part of each purple flower was teasing with the sunlight.
The spring reds have faded here, and there are no crowds of people admiring the flowers, nor are there any bees or butterflies. All there is is this tree's shining, blooming vines. The flowers are bunched next to each other, one after another, pushing and squeezing each other, so lively and lively!
"I'm blooming!" they are laughing.
"I'm blooming!" they shouted.
Each spike of flowers is in full bloom on the top and waiting to bloom on the bottom. The color becomes lighter at the top and darker at the bottom, as if the purple has settled down in the tenderest and smallest buds. Each blooming flower is like a small full sail, with a pointed bottom cabin under the sail, and the cabin is bulging; like an irresistible smile that is about to bloom. What kind of ambrosia is contained there? I leaned forward and wanted to pick one.
But I didn’t pick it. I don't have the habit of picking flowers. I just stood and stared, feeling that this purple wisteria waterfall was not only in front of my eyes, but also slowly flowing through my heart. As it flows, it takes away the anxiety and sorrow that have been weighing on my heart at that time, about the mystery of life and death, and the love of brotherhood. I was immersed in the brilliance of these dense flowers. Everything else did not exist for the time being. There was only the tranquility of spirit and the joy of life.
In addition to the brilliance, there is also a faint fragrance. The fragrance seems to be lavender, and it envelopes me gently like a dream. Suddenly I remembered that there was a big purple wisteria plant outside my house more than ten years ago. It climbed very high depending on a withered locust tree, but its flowers were always sparse, and lonely bunches hung here and there on the treetops. It seemed like he was testing something. Later, even the sparse flower strings were gone. Other wisteria flower stands in the garden were also removed and fruit trees were planted instead. The saying at that time was that there was an inevitable relationship between flowers and the corruption of life. I once thought with regret: I can no longer see wisteria flowers here.
After so many years, the wisteria has bloomed again, and it has bloomed so prosperously and so densely. The purple waterfall covers the thick branches like coiled dragons and keeps flowing, flowing, Flow to the bottom of people's hearts.
Flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless. I touched the little purple flower cabin, which was filled with the wine of life. It spread its sails and sailed on the river of shining flowers. It is one of thousands of flowers, and it is the flowers that form the flowing waterfall of thousands of flowers.
In this pre-purple brilliance and pre-purple fragrance, I speeded up my pace unconsciously.
May 6, 1982
Appreciation
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1. The poetic and meaningful "Wisteria Waterfall"
The prose "Wisteria Waterfall" is a good article full of poetic beauty. This is mainly reflected in the two elements of the beauty of the image and the meaningfulness of the image.
"Wisteria Waterfall" 》The image is novel, unique, and beautiful. Look, the blooming wisteria is "like a waterfall, hanging down from the sky, with neither its beginning nor its end visible." It glows with silver light, rings with laughter, and spits out Fragrance, splashing with water, constantly growing and flowing... This is the beauty that flowering Wisteria gives the author as a whole - magnificent. If you look at it locally, from the small flowers, it will be different. You Look, the "full sail" of the purple wisteria flower sail is small, and the "cabin" is pointed. The color of the "sail" is light at the top and dark at the bottom, with a soft transition; the "cabin" is filled with fine wine, which is intoxicating to smell. This is the aesthetic feeling of Wisteria wisteria - graceful. The author successfully describes it by resorting to vision, hearing and smell, showing readers a "image" of Wisteria wisteria that combines magnificence and grace and has rich connotations. p>
"Using images to express feelings". The "image" of Wisteria is obviously integrated into the author's subjective emotions and aesthetic feelings. From the actual scene in front of him to the appearance of "sudden memory", the author carried out "taking images to convey feelings". That is, the thinking process of "things make sense". If the overall "waterfall" shape of the purple wisteria vividly conveys the author's intense flowing thoughts, then the "spreading sail" shape of the partial florets hints at the author's hard work and enterprising spirit. The desire to act.
The "meaning" of the image is inseparable from the ideological content of the entire work. Therefore, the poetic beauty of prose naturally requires the implicit and meaningful ideological content.
"Purple Wisteria" The implicit and meaningful ideological content of "Waterfall" is reflected in the following three aspects. First, the author describes the blooming Wisteria so brilliantly and uses "waterfall" as a metaphor. This strong emotion has obviously surpassed its natural attributes. Love. Wisteria has become a symbol of magnificent life or career. Praising wisteria not only means regret for the gray and bleak life in the past that may have "lost oneself" due to the times, but also means regret for the present or future. The pursuit of a magnificent life. Secondly, during the "Cultural Revolution", not only the flowers were lonely, but also the good people had to "hang on the treetops, observing the words and expressions". It was an era where "life was in danger, and people did not worry about the day or the night"! Today is a good day. The roots have been rectified and chaos has been restored. Deng Xiaoping's pragmatic ideological line and the "one center, two basic points" strategy of governing the country have won the support of the people across the country. You see, the "purple waterfall" of the purple wisteria covers the thick plate. The branches like crouching dragons are constantly flowing, flowing, flowing, flowing to the bottom of people's hearts." This is the author's heart laughing, this is the heart of the people all over the country laughing! Thirdly, the work started from "I "I couldn't help but stop walking" and stopped at "I unconsciously speeded up my pace". This echo of "stop" and "fast" contains intriguing content. Yes, "flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, But the long river of life is endless." People must learn from historical experience, muster the sails of life, and integrate this personal effort into the collective struggle of tens of millions of people, in order to form a "flowing waterfall with thousands of brilliant flowers." ".
"Wisteria Waterfall" can be described as subtle and timeless. Of course, its poetic beauty is also reflected in the author's rich and delicate emotions, concise and fluent language and other elements, which I will not discuss here anymore. The beauty of the imagery Rich, implicit and timeless thoughts are the poetic and meaningful personality of "Wisteria Waterfall".
The poetic beauty of "Wisteria Waterfall" is like the breeze blowing on the face, which is bright, fresh and thought-provoking.
("Middle School Chinese Teaching Reference" 2001.11 original author: Wu Tianzhu, abridged)
2. Talk about the artistic charm of "Wisteria Waterfall"
The artistic charm of this prose The first is the profoundness of the idea.
As a prose prose, the harmonious unity of natural landscape and subjective emotions is crucial. The scenery described in the article is not only colorful and radiant, but also exquisitely expressive. The use of purple wisteria in the work is The imitation is both concrete and abstract, both realistic and ethereal. What it presents to us is not so much a sketch about the color of wisteria.
It is like a painting about the flourishing of life. The author uses the momentum and vitality formed by the brilliant colors to perfectly describe the luxuriant and vigorous life of Wisteria after its rebirth. As for the description of the shape of each flower, it is simply a poem. A hymn to vitality. So the author couldn't help but say: This fresh life took away the anxiety and sorrow about life and death, brotherhood and brotherhood in her heart. It took away everything, so that she could gain spiritual tranquility and the joy of life. .However, the life path of a flower is not smooth sailing. Like people, it has encountered all kinds of helpless and man-made misfortunes in its historical journey. So when the author switches from visual description to taste sensation, he naturally describes it from space. Turning to the review of time, people can feel the vicissitudes of history in the review of the fate of Wisteria. The blooming and withering of flowers are linked to the ups and downs of life, and the rise and fall of the society of the times. At this point, Wisteria is no longer It is no longer a purely natural creature, but a symbol. It symbolizes the regeneration of life, the change of the times, spiritual nirvana, the immortality of beauty, and the replay of the flower of the soul. The author's praise of the Wisteria Waterfall is the subject of lyricism. The illumination and induction of natural images by the light of the soul is her call for the vitality of life, the spiritual sustenance for seeking excitement after physical and mental suffering, and the beating of the heart to relieve the burden of life in the vicissitudes of history.
Secondly, the delicate description and the exquisite structure are also the characteristics of the beauty of this article.
The description of the article is delicate and layered, with color reproduction, form drawing, and fragrance capture. , writing from the external appearance to the inner substance, from the visual image to the taste sensation, the ink is plump and the writing style is changeable.
The article is short, exquisite and clear. The structure starts from "I can't help but stop" to " Unconsciously, I quickened my pace. "Collecting the ink, echoing back and forth, connecting the beginning and the end, the meaning flows through, and the structure is tight, giving people a sense of coherence.
The above is the artistic charm of "Wisteria Waterfall", from which We can see the extraordinary writing power of Zong Pu's prose creation.
("Appreciation of Masterpieces" 1992.5, abridged original author: Xu Jiachang)
3. A brief introduction to "Purple Wisteria Waterfall" The beauty of language
Zong Pu believes that "beautiful words" are a necessary condition for good prose. She elaborated: "In fact, beautiful words are not in the words, just like beauty is not in the clothes, rough clothes are not in the mess, and the sky is not covered up. Posture is not even just about good looks, but also about temperament and cultivation of various factors." ("True Love·Insight·Beautiful Words") This shows the author's pursuit.
The elegance of Zong Pu's article, He Lian has always been praised by people. A major feature of the language in this article is the extensive use of various forms of metaphors. Needless to say, the most common similes, metaphors, and metonyms are. Here, only their special forms will be explained:
(1) Condensed metaphors
"Wisteria Waterfall", "Bees Surrounding Butterflies", "The Long River of Life", etc. convey the richest information in the most concise words.
(2)Extended metaphor
" Each blooming flower is like a small, full sail, with a pointed bottom cabin under the sail, and the cabin is bulging; it is also like a The smile that couldn't help but burst into laughter." "I touched the small purple flower cabin, which was filled with the wine of life and filled with sails, sailing on the river of shining flowers." You Fan The cabin leads to the river of flowers, and each metaphorical sentence is no longer lonely and independent. A certain connection between metaphors constitutes an artistic conception, which expands the scope of imagination and increases the connotation of language.
(3) Synesthesia
Purple wisteria "seems to be flowing, laughing, and growing continuously". "The aroma seems to be lavender, and it envelopes me gently like a dream." Mobilize communication Various feelings are more real, more complete, and more concrete, conveying the author's feelings to the readers through words.
All these colorful metaphors form a gorgeous and colorful picture, displayed in front of the readers, which is very exciting. It’s dizzying to see. The extensive use of these rhetorical techniques is not only for the pursuit of the beauty of language, but also not only for the purpose of exhaustive descriptions. More importantly, these exquisite languages ????show an emotional attitude of the author. We try to figure out the article and appreciate its language. When it comes to art, especially metaphors and rhetoric, you should note that its emotional value is always greater than its visual value.
4.
The beauty of "Wisteria Waterfall" is traced
The beauty of "Wisteria Waterfall" is reflected in the following aspects:
The beauty lies in the rendering of the blooming wisteria flowers. The author's appreciation of wisteria flowers The rendering of flowers is breathtaking. What a lush tree of flowers is before our eyes! They are overflowing with color, overwhelming and full of vitality; a brilliant lavender shows a clear color, like a waterfall hanging from the sky, showing majestic momentum , the dots of silver light on the purple banner reveal the joy of life. In the description, the author uses exaggeration and metaphors to write curves, movement, brilliance, joy, vividness and enthusiasm. This shows that beauty The wisteria flower is the main body of the whole text. The author is writing about beauty, life, and vitality, and expresses deep emotions in the description.
The beauty lies in the "lavender" that permeates the whole text. The soft lilac color permeates the whole text, full of poetry and profound meaning. The bright and soft color is not only used to express wisteria flowers. When "I" "stopped" in front of the "brilliant lavender", when "I" "Standing and gazing" in front of the purple wisteria waterfall, when "I" touch the "little purple flower cabin" full of life-filled wine, when "I" "feel" in this light purple brilliance and light purple fragrance "The pace" in "I" is definitely not just the beauty of the flowers, but also the beauty of life, the joy of life, and the brilliance of life that shine out in the flowers. , the splendor of life shocked "my" heart, making "me" feel the "tranquility of spirit and the joy of life".
The beauty is in the "flow" full of vitality. The word "flow" runs through it. The whole text is full of fiction and reality. Sometimes it writes about the beauty and dynamics of flowers, and the waterfall of flowers "seems to be flowing, laughing, and growing continuously"; sometimes it writes about the beauty of flowers that soothes "my" soul, "I feel" This purple wisteria waterfall is not only in front of my eyes, but also flows slowly in my heart." Sometimes I write that the blooming wisteria flowers bring people new, beautiful, powerful, and happy feelings, "The purple waterfall...continuously Flow, flow, flow to the bottom of people's hearts"; sometimes it expresses a profound and implicit meaning - "It is each flower that forms a flowing waterfall of thousands of brilliant flowers."
The beauty lies in the large purple wisteria that once existed. The large purple wisteria that once existed not only gives the article the color of the times, but also lays the foundation for the author's lyrical discussion. "More than 10 years ago It was a worrying time before, and the life of the purple wisteria outside the house was strangled. As a "flower", it suffered the misfortune of disappearing. But now, the purple wisteria has brilliance and splendor. Since then, it has suffered the misfortune of disappearing. On it, "I" naturally feel the vitality that the progress of the times has brought to people. It is a real feeling that "flows to the bottom of people's hearts".
The beauty lies in the final chapter. Chi. What deeply moved us in the article was the lyrical paragraph "Flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless." It makes a subtle point. Writing about flowers is about writing about people, and writing about flowers is about writing about flowers. Writing about the times. If we use the misfortune of flowers to write about the misfortunes of the times, then writing about the "brilliance" of flowers is about writing about the progress of the times, expressing people's high spirits in the progress of the times, and expressing the prosperity of society in the new era.
Beautiful articles require beautiful reading. "Looking for Beautiful Points" will allow us to gain a deeper and better understanding.
("Learning Outside Language and Mathematics" 2001.3, abridged author: Yu Yingchao)
p>5. Zong Pu’s life path and campus complex
What kind of life path has Zong Pu walked? Looking at the writer’s resume, what comes to mind is a The elegant charm of his works is similar to that of books. Zong Pu’s experience is different from that of most writers. Unlike the older generation writers such as Shi Tuo and Tian Tao, she climbed up from the bottom of China's society step by step to the palace of knowledge; nor is she like Ba Jin and Xie Bingying, who broke away from the old landlord family and moved into the city. She formed what Qu Qiubai called a generation of "bohemians"; she was even less like the large number of writers with educated youth backgrounds who emerged in the new era, who left books and their families in their youth or even adolescence, and lived in poverty, ignorance and confusion. Explore the value of life.
Even the generation of young people who grew up after the Cultural Revolution rarely had such a unique academic foundation as her. She is a pure orchid, fortunate to sprout and grow in a pure land far away from poverty and filth. As Charlotte said, she has a "stainless, inexhaustible, refreshing spring." "A pure memory. Her living environment was basically limited to institutions of higher learning and higher academic research institutions. Since she was nurtured in a harmonious, honest and elegant academic atmosphere since she was a child, she established the principles of life and writing throughout her life. She did have an enviable childhood. This is probably the reason why Zong Pu’s works always have a sense of community, a conflicting attitude, and even a frank and pure “student tone” that others cannot learn from.
On the university campus where Zong Pu lived in his childhood, the living conditions of professors were extremely superior, and there was absolutely no risk of "inverted brain and body" today. The comfort of life and the nobility of status enable professors who are devoted to their studies to concentrate more on the study of books (of course, things changed after the Anti-Japanese War began), and their children can also achieve better results than their peers in a relatively simple and clear world. Children get better education and get more cultural nourishment. Of course, on the other hand, this also makes them too simple and bookish, and they will inevitably have to endure more hardships and setbacks in their future life. I happen to have a copy of the "Tsinghua Alumni Newsletter" published in 1990. I might as well take it and pick out a few paragraphs to make a more detailed footnote to the Qingyuan world described by Zong Pu. Yu Peicao, a contemporary of Zong Pu and the daughter of the famous literature and history expert Yu Zhenyong, who was a student of Southwest Associated University in 1943, once lovingly described the calmness and elegance of Tsinghua campus in his childhood eyes in "Shuimu Tsinghua - Memories of Childhood". and the superiority and uniqueness of Tsinghua’s cultural landscape. She said, "At that time, Tsinghua only had an attached primary school (that is, the Chengzhi Primary School where Zong Pu was mentioned by Feng Youlan) and an attached kindergarten. John Ma was our principal. ... Later, he was taught by Mrs. Cai Shunli, who was also a student studying in the United States." Children who grow up under such conditions are indeed inferior to ordinary people. What was the living environment of the children at that time? "The G-shaped Hall of Shuimu Tsinghua University... was elegant, cool and smelled of nanmu. Single professors Wu Mi and Mr. Ye Qisun once had residences there." "We lived there. The south courtyard is a large courtyard surrounded by houses... The Western-style residence No. 1 is Mr. Zhao Yuanren's home...". This cultural charm that has been impressed by the ears and eyes has deeply penetrated into the souls of the children bit by bit. Isn’t the Fanghu courtyard described in Zong Pu’s "The Journey to the South" a gathering place of elites full of Qingyuan culture? French modernist female writer Nathalie Samat said: "What literature describes , can always be something invisible, what every writer longs for - the reality he feels alone. "The life and characters in the work can be fictional, but the artistic conception always faithfully reflects a person with sensitive talents. The author's special feeling for the surrounding scenery during his childhood and the impact this feeling had on him throughout his life. The unique beauty of artistic conception shown by Zong Pu in a series of works is like a wisp of smoke or a ray of fragrance. It is elusive when you experience it carefully. Only those who have personally experienced this kind of life can understand it from what seems like it. From the very plain description, we can feel the writer's extremely strong feelings, the infinite recollection and nostalgia for his childhood spiritual life. This kind of love, which cannot be written or read by anyone who has not experienced it, is the true meaning of Zong Pu's "campus complex".
(Selected from "The Landscape of the Feng Family in This Garden", "Literary Review" Issue 2, 1997, author: Hou Yuyan
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