Deficiencies in Chinese Writing of Senior High School Students

1. The shortcomings of my high school writing model essay bravely face the mistakes.

Everyone makes mistakes in life, so it's not surprising. However, it is wrong to treat mistakes wrongly after making them. It was one night when I came home from school. I threw my schoolbag on the sofa and clicked on it. When I saw it, it turned out that the TV remote control fell to the ground and broke a corner. This is bad, my mother knows.

Everyone makes mistakes in his life, so it's not surprising. However, it is wrong to treat mistakes wrongly after making them.

It was one night when I came home from school. I threw my schoolbag on the sofa and sat down on the sofa. I only heard a click. When I saw it, it turned out that the TV remote control fell to the ground and broke a corner. This is terrible. My mother will be very angry when she finds out. I regret it very much what can I do? I quickly found a place to hide the remote control. I went to my desk to do my homework. On the surface, I am doing my homework, but in fact, I am very upset. That's right! I can stick the remote control with all-purpose glue. I stood up and looked for all-purpose glue. Finally, I found the all-purpose glue. I quickly glued the remote control with all-purpose glue. I looked at it carefully and found that it was really sticky. I secretly put the glued remote control back in the old place. I'm glad I don't have to be scolded by my mother this time.

But somehow, I can't calm down. Should I confess to my mother? Confess to mom. Will she scold me? After careful consideration, I decided to confess everything to my mother. I came to my mother and told her I was sorry, "I made a mistake. Can you forgive me? " "What is it? What did you do? " I looked down and told my mother what had happened. I'm ashamed. You are such a little thing. "My mother said with a smile. My mother touched my hair and said, "Hang Hang Hang, you can know that you have done something wrong, and you can take the initiative to admit it. He's a good boy. Now go and do your homework! Mom doesn't blame you. "I am relieved to see that my mother is not angry.

2. High school Chinese composition; Regarding the advantages and disadvantages of this composition, some people think that the disadvantages cannot be compared with the advantages. But I tell you, your idea is wrong. Sometimes, people have no shortcomings. Advantages and disadvantages are advantages, but there are only two advantages. Compared with gold, they are like silver, and people tend to value gold more. For example, compared with courage, people will think that caution is a disadvantage and courage is an advantage. But I think caution is also an advantage, and courage is also an advantage.

Man is an apple bitten by God, where he hasn't been bitten is an advantage, and where he has been bitten is a disadvantage.

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Hope to adopt = =

3. Advantages and Disadvantages Everyone has his own advantages and disadvantages. Although I don't know your advantages and disadvantages, neither do you. Let's introduce it to you now!

Everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses. Although I don't know your advantages and disadvantages, neither do you. Let's introduce it to you now!

I have many shortcomings, such as: I missed the exam, my homework was careless, and I was lazy.

(the biggest shortcoming), forgetful, contradictory, easily mad, often mad and angry, half of them are out of breath. In fact, in the final analysis, it is lazy, too lazy. ..... ah! I have countless shortcomings! My mother's biggest headache is dawdling in the shower. Every time I take a shower, my mother keeps urging me to hurry. Lazy.

(the biggest shortcoming), forgetful, contradictory, easily mad, often mad and angry, half of them are out of breath.

In fact, in the final analysis, it is lazy, too lazy. And half-hearted. When I concentrate on one thing, I can't concentrate on another. For example, when I watch TV, I can't hear someone talking to me, or I can't remember what they said.

The advantage is that I will be straightforward and like to express my ideas in the most direct way. A long time ago, my friend told me that in fact, straight men sometimes offend many people. However, he likes to talk to me because I am direct and don't beat around the bush. This is one of the advantages.

I have strong self-care ability. When I am away from my parents, I can not only take care of myself, but also take care of people like me. I can always put things in my life in order and never leave them behind. Moreover, he has a correct outlook on life, has his own personality and personality orientation, likes to think independently, attaches importance to the value of rationality, and never follows the trend. Have ideals, and can work hard to realize their ideals with a positive and diligent attitude.

Finally, sensitivity. I am a very sensitive person. I don't know the exact difference between sensitivity and sensitivity. However, I am really sensitive. Oh, well, I missed something. I'm too persistent.

For example, if something is not done well, you will always want to do it until it is done well. However, sometimes, being too persistent will hurt others and yourself.

I also work very hard. In the process of learning music, in order to achieve your goals, no matter how hard and tired you are, you can persist and never give up. I am also very brave, I don't have stage fright, and my exams or performances will not be affected by nervousness.

I am an honest, kind and generous girl. (Actually, I am very modest, ahem ...) I am easy to get along with others.

In fact, on the whole, I have more shortcomings than advantages. But I believe that in the future study and life, I can try to correct my own shortcomings, continue to maintain and carry forward my own advantages and make continuous progress.

4. High school composition: pros and cons! Who is the young man with glasses in the mirror? That's me; Who's that silly boy running around on the playground after class? That's me; Who is the shy little boy who listens carefully in class? That is me.

I went to the mirror and looked at him in the mirror. I laugh and he laughs; I cry and he cries.

I waved to him and he said to me, "Hello, my name is Guo Xin. My parents want our motherland to be prosperous and I want to grow up healthily, so they gave me a warm name' Xin', but if you call me' Xin Xin', I will be happier. " I also said to the person in the mirror, "Hello, I am sixteen years old. I am not tall, with short hair and light eyebrows. I am a shy little boy. "

Alas! Actually, I'm not shy sometimes. If I am in a good mood, I will like to play with my classmates after class. If I am in a bad mood, no one dares to mess with me. My greatest feature is that I am too modest.

When I was a child, my mother asked me how I did in the exam. I opened my mouth and said, "It's burnt. It's terrible. " When I took the violin band 4 exam, I also said that I probably couldn't pass it.

I'm not sure if I can enter the key class of middle school ... Although modesty is a good thing, it's too modest for me. I have tried to correct my "characteristics" many times, but it seems that I have formed a habit and often blurt it out.

I like work very much, too. I'm in a hurry to do all the work at home. I think work is also a kind of happiness. I had a lot of nerve when I was a child. I dare to go where others dare not go and do what others dare not do.

But after watching many ghost movies last summer vacation, my courage gradually weakened and I dared not stay at home alone. I remember once, a fly scared me to cry at home.

I don't like making too many friends. Unlike others, I make friends with cats and dogs. I have high requirements for making friends! Study hard, have good morality, good hygiene and good looks.

Therefore, my friends are all elites of their peers. I cherish my time with them, and I never have any conflicts with them.

They also attach great importance to my partner. My hobbies are playing the violin and swimming.

I think only in the water can people fully stretch and show their graceful posture. Music, like learning, is an unfathomable field.

It represents the nobility, elegance and sacredness in my mind. I like music, so I made up my mind to learn the violin, which is an indispensable instrument for the orchestra. I left the mirror and he was gone.

I have neither a soft figure nor bright eyes, but I have an enterprising heart, a watery dream and lofty ideals. I firmly believe that I am full of poems and books. I don't want to go with the flow.

In The Road Not Taken, Frost once wrote: "There are two roads in the yellow forest, but unfortunately I can't set foot in them at the same time." "And I chose the less traveled one, which decided my life path from now on."

Only when I am integrated with the public can I become a real ordinary person. I don't want to follow the vulgar old road of others and live the same vulgar life as others.

While stealing from others, you also deny yourself. I don't want to go with the flow.

In The Road Not Taken, Frost once wrote: "There are two roads in the yellow forest, but unfortunately I can't set foot in them at the same time." "And I chose the less traveled one, which decided my life path from now on."

Only when I am integrated with the public can I become a real ordinary person. I don't want to follow the vulgar old road of others and live the same vulgar life as others.

While stealing from others, you also deny yourself. Me, humorous and tolerant.

I never like to see others pull a long face. I think other people's smiles are the most beautiful scenery in the world. So every day I will become a pistachio and bring them joy as much as possible.

"The ocean is wider than the earth, the sky is wider than the ocean, and the human mind is wider than the sky." Tolerance makes the narrow mind contain all the rivers, so I treat other people's mistakes with a joke.

I want to be myself. Mr. Qi Baishi once said; "If you learn from me, you will live as if I were dead."

If you can't get out of the framework of your predecessors, naturally you won't have your own world. When bubble novels became popular, I felt I was wasting my time. When online games are popular, I feel that I am wasting my youth.

Be yourself, see the real me clearly, show 12 confidence and tell yourself: "I am who I am, why should I be like him?" ! "Throw away those artificial flashy carvings, show your trump card, pursue your own personality, be yourself, be the best yourself! Me, aggressive. I am a small grain of sand, but I am not willing to lag behind and have nothing to do all my life.

I would like to be the master of life and an immortal tear. There is a long way to go in Xiu Yuan, and I will go up and down.

I am eager to go to the tower of art, the top of culture, the house of career, and celebrate the edge of success. I will live up to this era of blooming flowers, leave a solid and steady footprint, and spread beauty and love to the world ... This is me. I am in the prime of my life and full of energy. This is me, humorous and tolerant, unwilling to lag behind.

This is me. Hello, my name is Xiang Moumou. I am a freshman who has just entered middle school. Like many freshmen, I came to the sacred palace with a curious heart and a strong thirst for knowledge.

Presumably everyone is not very familiar with me! Let me introduce myself to you. I am plain: my round face is embedded with a pair of small but intense eyes; Below the eyes is a collapsed nose that is almost close to the face, which can even remind people of the "open plain"; Under my nose is my glib mouth, which often helps me bring joy to everyone! Although I am plain, my personality is very different from that of many girls of the same age: I have short black hair, which is very refreshing, and my appearance and name are very similar to those of boys. My hobbies and personality are the same as many boys. I like sports, badminton and table tennis room. My personality is similar to that of boys. I like neatness, seriousness, finish what I started, and I don't like procrastination and muddling along.

This may be my advantage! Because, since I was a child, I like to do something seriously and persistently, and I will stick to it even if I encounter great difficulties. I can.

5. Write a composition about the advantages and disadvantages of Chinese. The word count is 300 words. This time, the performance of China people is not ideal. Now let me analyze the main reason for losing points in each question: 1. Students don't pay enough attention to Chinese writing. Many students have scrawled fonts and irregular writing, and lost points that should not be lost. This is mainly manifested in the dictation and composition of ancient poems. 2. Insufficient language accumulation. In the recognition and application of words, dictation of poetry, common sense of literature and culture, etc. For example, the first part of the test paper is 1~4, which examines the font recognition, accurate pronunciation and appropriate words, with a full score of 8, but none of them got a full score in the exam, and the scoring rate is not high. Only 60%. The score rate of poetry dictation is only 70%. The score rate of the seventh sentence is only 30%. It can be seen that there is still a considerable gap in students' ability to use sentences, which needs to be improved. 3. Lack of language skills. This is not only reflected in the answers to the language use questions in the first part to examine students' ability to solve practical problems with Chinese knowledge, but also in the grasp of the general idea of the article through reading materials. Summarize the answers to the reading questions such as capturing information and writing language expression. Students will not get points if they don't say exactly what they think. 4. Poor comprehensive analysis ability of reading comprehension is an important reason for losing points in reading questions. The reading materials of classical Chinese are in class, and the reading materials of modern Chinese are outside class, including expository reading and narrative (prose) reading. From the perspective of questions, it is mainly a question and answer. Highlight the examination of students' reading expression ability and unique experience, and pay attention to the examination of reading methods and inquiry consciousness. The examination questions are examined from the perspectives of word recognition, word understanding, information screening, text generalization, the relationship between center and material, the meaning and function of sentences, and the ability to feel, experience and taste. 5. The composition is off topic, off topic, and the structure is incomplete. For students, this paper is written in the form of a semi-propositional composition. The choice of semi-propositional composition writing is wider, more flexible and more free. In the examination paper, there is no obstacle to the examination of composition topics, and the stylistic requirements are diluted. There is greater freedom of choice in the formulation of topics, the establishment of centers, the choice of styles and the use of writing methods. It advocates diversified and personalized thinking and encourages students to express their unique feelings and experiences creatively and boldly from different angles.

6. What are the shortcomings of the composition? Write some specific shortcomings casually, hoping to come in handy. In fact, for most people, writing is quite a headache.

1 The language is disorganized (all like this), mainly because it is incomprehensible;

2 No segmentation or less segmentation, and an ordinary paragraph or only one or two paragraphs at the end will make the feeling of marking papers very layered;

3 sentences lacking NB, such as prose, are annoying when they appear in vernacular Chinese. Try to write them poetically. Sometimes it is more useful to add some meaningful sentences created by yourself than to quote some old famous sayings.

Don't be too humorous. You know, the composition of 0 points in the college entrance examination is humorous and talented. ...

If you write a narrative, don't be as melodramatic as writing prose, it will make you sick, and the narrative part should be dull (but not mediocre).

Sentences are long, even if one sentence is not enough, don't lengthen more than three sentences.

Never digress. In particular, for example, if you write about the appearance of something, you write about its function. Although it is around the same thing, it is beside the point and difficult to find. It's not impossible to write something that is off topic, but it can only be written with a little pen and ink, otherwise it's off topic.

You can't write anything by looking at the topic. On the one hand, some topics are so deep (such as those in the college entrance examination) that there is no way but to bite the bullet. However, reading more good articles is very helpful to cultivate a sense of language, and writing will be much easier. That's a feeling.

7. Write the shortcomings of writing into an article. How well the composition is written is the embodiment of students' cognitive level and language expression ability. At present, many primary school Chinese teachers' comments on students' articles are lack of guidance, pertinence and inspiration, and often handle things by doodling with their own minds. There is no comprehensive evaluation from the words, words, sentences and articles of the article. Some of them are empty and abstract, which confuses students. They can't see what needs to be corrected or supplemented, and they can't see where they have succeeded. They just care too much about their grades. So, what methods should teachers use to evaluate pupils' compositions? Teachers should generally pay attention to the following aspects when evaluating students' compositions.

First, pertinence.

The first thing is to consider the writing requirements of each composition. These requirements are not only the writing requirements of students in their grades in Curriculum Standards, but also the specific training requirements summarized by teachers according to the training items of each unit and the actual situation of students. Praise the completion of writing tasks as required, point out the existing problems if they deviate from or do not follow the requirements, and let students develop the good habit of carefully examining questions and writing as required. Secondly, we should consider the characteristics of the article. Due to the differences of students' cognitive level, writing ability, personality and interest, the style and characteristics of the articles written should avoid the bad tendency of similarity.

Second, inspiration.

1. Encourage.

We should not only fully affirm the overall advantages of the article, but also praise and encourage some small advantages and some advantages of the article. Especially for underachievers, we should encourage them to use a word or a sentence well, so as to cultivate students' self-confidence in writing good articles.

2. Pointing.

If a student's article has shortcomings or mistakes, the teacher should point them out first, and then point them out. Fixed-point evaluation requires students to modify or supplement according to the evaluation instructions. You can write the added sentences on a small piece of paper, clip them on the page, or write the numbers at the end of the article. The supplement and revision with fewer words can be done directly between compositions. After revision, it is best to guide students to compare the articles before and after revision, so as to understand the teacher's evaluation and realize the advantages and disadvantages before and after revision. This evaluation form will have a significant effect on students with poor writing ability, especially those who have nothing to say in their compositions.

3. Discussion style.

Put forward suggestions or requirements for the imperfections in the article in a consulting tone, and guide students to examine and revise it with a higher standard and a broader perspective. Discussion-based composition evaluation is more suitable for students with good composition and strong interest in writing.

Third, connect

1. Contact the previous essay comments.

Teachers should praise those students who carry forward their advantages and correct their shortcomings according to the requirements of comment on writing, give full play to the guiding role of comment on writing, and let students develop the habit of reading comment on writing carefully and correcting composition problems according to the requirements of comment on writing.

2. Talk about writing in connection with reading teaching.

Students can use the new expressions, writing knowledge, even new sentences and new words learned in reading teaching in their compositions, which should be affirmed and encouraged in comments, so as to guide students to consciously apply what they have learned in Chinese class to writing and cultivate their ability to apply what they have learned.

3. Contact the actual evaluation of life.

The content of students' compositions is inseparable from what they see, hear, do and think, and it is bound to reflect their study life and express their thoughts and feelings. When writing comments, connect these contents expressed in the article with the students' own real performance, and give encouragement and praise. This is not only an evaluation of the article, but also an evaluation of students' behavior habits.

Composition evaluation is an analysis, guidance and improvement explanation of the advantages and disadvantages of an article, and it is an important link to guide students' writing training. Teachers' comments and achievements generally play three roles: first, they play a guiding role. From the comment on writing, students make clear the direction of writing articles in the future, where to work hard and what shortcomings to overcome, know the advantages and disadvantages of their own articles and evaluate their writing level; The second is the guiding role. Students can modify and supplement the article according to the problems pointed out in the evaluation opinions, so as to make the article more perfect and let students know the writing method of the article; Third, the role of education, the teacher's comment on writing analyzes and comments on the things described in the article and the ideas expressed, helping students gain a correct understanding and improve their ability to distinguish right from wrong. Proper evaluation plays a subtle role in improving the writing level of primary school students.

In short, composition evaluation should be done flexibly and moderately according to the specific circumstances of the article and the above three aspects, so that students can know at a glance where their composition is good, where there are still some problems, and how to correct them, so that students can make better use of their strengths and avoid weaknesses, practice with goals, and play a guiding and guiding role. Only in this way can their composition level be improved every time.

8. There are many people in the world who are lovely, hateful, hateful, pitiful and deplorable. Perfect people don't exist. So each of us has our own shortcomings.

Since we all have shortcomings, how should we face them correctly?

First of all, we should face up to our shortcomings. Some people will only avoid their own shortcomings, others will ask him, but he will not bother to argue. What a person! What kind of person is it? Vanity or ... then we don't know! This kind of people always treat people who put forward their own shortcomings with the mentality of "avoiding diseases and avoiding medical treatment". Others say he, and he even said smartly, "Go your own way and let others say it!" " Even though he didn't correct his own shortcomings, he misinterpreted the meaning of this famous saying. Over time, others are too lazy to talk about him. Such a person can never change his own shortcomings, which is his greatest shortcoming!

Of course, modest people will accept shortcomings and correct them. Because they understand: "Good medicine tastes bitter and is good for illness, but advice when most unpleasant is good for action." When others give it to them, they will accept it humbly and reflect on themselves. Dare to face your own shortcomings-this is the second. Modest people will give themselves a paradise for their hearts. They will not say, "It is good to cure the disease without taking credit." They will accept advice and "medical treatment" to correct their shortcomings.

By changing his own shortcomings, this man has made some progress. No matter what he does, as long as other people's views and practices are correct, he will compare his own views and practices with others, thus discovering his own shortcomings and changing his own views and practices. He will get twice the result with half the effort. But what if it is the former? Not only will you get twice the result with half the effort because you don't listen to advice, but more seriously, you may go astray, and it is not impossible.

The disadvantage is not how bad and hopeless a person is, so you don't have to be afraid of it, let alone run away from it. Perfect people don't exist. When a person says that he is a perfect person, he has a great shortcoming-arrogance. People should constantly update themselves. Only in society can you stand up. Don't ruin yourself because of some small shortcomings!

A person who learns to correct his own shortcomings is a successful "person".

O(∩_∩)o I hope I can help you!

O(∩_∩)o Please give a compliment or adopt it in time. Thank you very much (*^__^*)

9. Write the advantages and disadvantages of your composition. The advantages and disadvantages of your composition

Advantages, make people happy; Disadvantages, annoying. My advantages: I study hard, I am not picky about food, I love reading, I have strong self-care ability and am ready to help others. Disadvantages: carelessness, laziness, forgetfulness. Let me talk about my shortcomings first.

First of all, carelessness

Once, you did a math problem, and 640 was divided by 3. There is nothing wrong with horizontal writing, and vertical writing becomes 643 divided by 3. When can I get rid of my careless habit?

Second, laziness.

The biggest headache every day is that I get up at 6: 40, and my father wakes me up on time. Although I heard it, I stayed there until my father called me again, and I dawdled and began to get dressed.

Third, forget things.

I got on the school bus and rummaged through my schoolbag, yeah! I forgot my English homework. Call my father with my aunt's mobile phone in the car and ask him to send things to school. This has happened two or three times.

After reading my shortcomings, everyone must hate me, but I still have advantages!

First, love reading.

There are so many books at home that I can't live without them whenever I have time. Once at breakfast, I was reading while eating, and my mother would say that reading and eating were not good for digestion.

Second, be ready to help others

Some students forgot to bring their school supplies. What about me? There will always be extra stationery in the schoolbag, and I will lend a helping hand to make him no longer like an ant on hot bricks.

Third, self-care ability is strong.

I have lived in school since the first grade, and learned how to fold quilts, make beds, wash dishes and chopsticks. If you don't wash chopsticks at school, will the teacher help you wash them? I can also wash clothes!

In my future study and life, I will carry forward my advantages, correct my shortcomings and be a good boy with excellent academic performance.

My strengths and weaknesses.

Everyone in the world has advantages and disadvantages, and I am no exception.

Let me talk about my shortcomings first-

First: I love playing. I'm so happy outside that I don't know how to go home. I will only delay if my mother calls out to me. Second: poor handwriting. Reading pinyin and writing words before the exam is my biggest headache. For example,' coral' I will add a' grass head' to it. Wandering ""I will write Wandering "

Seeing my shortcomings, you must think I am a careless person, right? But before you think so, let's take a look at my advantages-

First: I got good grades in math. No matter what the teacher asks, I can think of it at the first time. I got more than 90% in every math exam. Second: I believe I did well in the exam. But sometimes the feeling of not being confident will come out and make trouble, resulting in a little poor grades.

These are my strengths and weaknesses. I will definitely try to correct my shortcomings and strengthen my strengths in the future. Although you can't be a perfect person, it's always right to have fewer shortcomings and more advantages!