The story from the fingertips, Aunt Li's troubled composition?

Creative thinking: the six elements of the article should be clearly stated. The occurrence of a thing can not be separated from six aspects: time, place, people, cause, process and result of the thing, which is the so-called "six elements". Only by explaining these aspects clearly can readers have a clear and comprehensive understanding of the things described.

Aunt Li lives downstairs in my house. She is short and fat, with round head, dark brown curly hair, high nose and big mouth.

I have never had a good impression of her. Because she often quarrels with her neighbors because of trivial matters and speaks rudely.

One sunny morning, Aunt Li sat on a bench in the park and chatted with several ordinary aunts. Several children playing in the distance recklessly bumped into their little sister with a glass of juice. The juice was accidentally spilled on Aunt Li's shoes. Miss Xie felt that she was also a victim and had no juice to drink, so she pulled a long face and was ready to leave.

Aunt Li's eyes stared, and the loud northeast cavity immediately opened to the maximum volume. Aunt Li stood up with her left hand akimbo and her right hand pointed at each other's head. I may feel that I am not too tall. I stood on tiptoe and leaned forward slightly, as if I wanted to rush up and fight with each other at any time.

At first, sister Tuan was taken aback and turned pale with fear? Then her fear turned into anger. After a while, she suddenly blushed to her ears and stared at Aunt Li. At the same time, these eyes darkened. Suddenly, the light flashed like lightning and dimmed again. Then he couldn't control his anger, shouted at Aunt Li and ran away with his eyes red?

Aunt Li stood in situ and stamped her feet and cursed: "Young people now should study hard. Children are not sensible, and you are not sensible? " Is it natural for young people not to apologize for doing something wrong? " .

This is the caring aunt Li. Maybe she can educate us in another way.