Example of excellent composition

In daily study, work or life, we often see the figure of composition. Composition is a style composed of words, which expresses a theme through language organization after people's ideological consideration. I believe many friends are very upset about writing a composition. The following is an excellent sample composition I compiled for you. I hope it helps you.

Example excellent composition 1 My father is a gentle and amiable person. He is of medium height, with a flat head, and likes to wear jeans and shirts.

Whenever my father is free, I always pester him to play chess with me, and my father can readily agree. I remember that once my father was about to win, I carried him on my back and then blew up his "commander" with a bomb. In the end, I won. Dad didn't get angry after reading it. He just touched my forehead with his finger and said, "You little brat."

Sometimes my father loses his temper with me, but it's all when I do something wrong. If I encounter difficulties in my study, my father will put down his work and teach me patiently until I understand.

I admire my father's calligraphy. How beautiful! I also admire my father's character. My father's friends all say that my father is a good man and a good friend worth making!

In fact, dad has another bad habit, that is, he never leaves his body. I'm really worried about his health. My mother and I have always had a little wish, that is, I hope my father will give up smoking.

Dad, we love you! You are a role model in my heart!

I want to learn from Barton and be a caring person. Care about classmates, have great love for society and the country, stand up when the country is in danger and become the pillar of the country.

When you encounter setbacks and endure pain, think about the example in your heart and you will regain your confidence. You will find that the forest is still green, the mountains are still tall and straight, and the sky is still blue. When a new ray of sunshine rises, take up your schoolbag and set out bravely with solid steps with your dreams!

If a teenager is successful, then people will prosper; A strong teenager is strong. Let's turn the power of example into the driving force for progress, and go forward bravely despite difficulties and obstacles. Today, we study for the rise of China, and in the future, we will contribute to creating a better tomorrow for our motherland!

Thanks to my unremitting efforts, I won the first place in this mid-term exam. I thought I was humble and no one would care about me. Who knows, my efforts and gains are all in the eyes of teachers and classmates, so I was rated as an example by everyone.

I am very happy to be an example to everyone. Not because I won the honor of "example", but because my usual efforts were not in vain.

Usually, I always take every class seriously and remember what the teacher said in class. Coupled with reading a lot every day, accumulating beautiful sentences, and scientific knowledge that teachers don't know, I have the ability to get the first place in the exam!

At the same time, I also carefully completed everything the teacher told me. As the leader of the team and the person in charge of the restaurant, I can manage my team members and my own affairs, because I believe that I can only be responsible for myself if I am responsible for her and everything.

Although I am considered as an example and the first place, the real first place is Ji. He is not only our good monitor, but also because he has an advantage over me, and his total score is only half a point worse than mine.

I thought I beat two opponents, so I thought I could sit firmly in the first place, but I was wrong. I haven't beaten the intermediate BOOS-Qi Jing. He is first and second almost every time, but he is never proud. I just got the first place in the mid-term exam, and then I got a little carried away, not to mention the back. I believe that as long as we learn from each other's strengths and give full play to our own advantages, we will be able to sit firmly in the first place.

The aura of example, for me, is sometimes out of reach, and sometimes it is on myself. I will definitely develop myself in an all-round way in the future and set an example for my study and work. Keke is an example!

The power of example is infinite, it can float into people's hearts and purify them.

When I first transferred to school, I was in the third grade, and my academic performance was not good. What I am most afraid of is writing a composition and doing complex application problems. I remember once, the teacher assigned the students to write a composition. At this time, our monitor He Yuhang seemed to see my fear and came up to me and said, "I think your composition should be better than mine. Can you show it to me tomorrow? "

I looked at He Yuhang and was very moved. He is smart, hard-working and gets such good grades. How can I write better than him? But looking at his eyes was so sincere, I trusted him again and made up my mind: I must write that composition well and not let him down.

That night, I consulted a lot of materials, carefully conceived, and then carefully wrote my composition. Then I took the initiative to show it to my mother. My mother was very surprised. When I told her what I thought, she made some suggestions to modify my composition. According to my mother's suggestion, I revised it and copied it again.

From this time on, I got to know our monitor-He Yuhang, whom I often follow as an example. He reads, and I read. He raised his hand in class, and I tried to raise my hand. He does his homework very carefully, so I dare not be careless. Under his influence, I became serious about everything and got into the habit of reading. I always asked He Yuhang if he didn't understand. Soon my grades increased from 70 to 80, and my composition became more and more fluent. An article written this semester, Magic Composition Hospital, was also published in Children's Composition 100!

A role model is like a coordinate of life and a guide to success. It brings us endless vitality, the belief that we will win, and an endless source of strength. Let's learn from the example and look up to it, and we will be invincible!

One winter morning, the cold wind with snowflakes roared like a fierce tiger, and snowflakes hit people's faces like whips. It was so cold!

I am standing in the shed at the bus stop. I can't open my eyes because of the snowstorm. I waited anxiously with my neck down. Why hasn't the bus come yet? I'm gonna be late. I looked at the distance and stamped my feet to keep warm. Finally, I got one! "Burst-"The door opened, and I couldn't wait to squeeze into the car, for fear that there was no seat. I grabbed the door with both hands for fear that other passengers would get ahead of me. The passengers were very dissatisfied and looked at me with abnormal eyes, but I didn't care.

I got on the bus and found a comfortable seat to sit down. No sooner had I sat down than I saw an empty seat in front. A PLA uncle stood by the window. He has a neat coat and hat. Although he wears a lot, his face is cold and blue with cold. A kind old man asked him to sit down, but he refused to sit down. I'm surprised, this person is really strange. ...

I put my head out of the window and looked at the snowflakes flying all over the sky outside the window and the people who were shrinking their necks and cycling to work in the street. I feel very comfortable sitting in the car.

At the east exit, the PLA uncle got off. Suddenly, a cold wind blew into the carriage and snowflakes floated in. I couldn't help shivering and looked at the window-there was a hole in it. Everyone turned their eyes to the uncle of the People's Liberation Army, whose clothes were covered with a mass of ice. Suddenly, everything became clear.

Suddenly I felt my face burning. I thought that when I first got on the bus, as a middle school student, I just ignored his feelings for myself. Is this too bad? People always say that I am a junior high school student and have grown up, but have I really grown up?

Suddenly, I also felt a driving force pushing me. I quickly got up and ran over and blocked the hole with my body. At that moment, everyone's approving eyes came to me.

In my life, there are many role models, but one is different. He is our monitor and the "leading goose" in our class. He is not only among the best in grades, but also very modest. He is-Tang Jiaxin.

As the monitor of our class, Tang Jiaxin is a classmate with excellent academic performance. Whenever the teacher asks a question, he raises his hand to answer it. Once, the teacher asked us to recite a long text. We have never recited such a long article, nor will we. However, Tang Jiaxin is different from us. He was absorbed in the text, without blinking an eye, and looked at the book in obscurity without external interference. When it was time to recite, we were almost crying, but Zhang Zherui raised his hand and asked to recite. When he recited every word, he was not proud, but modest. After class, we all asked Tang Jiaxin how to recite the text. He said it was very simple and easy: "Be careful when reciting the text. You can think of words as a continuous picture scroll, and then say the contents of the picture scroll in order. Isn't it ok? "

Tang Jiaxin, my role model, we should learn from him and be as serious and modest as him. Tang Jiaxin will always be my good role model.

Excellent composition 7 is around us. This example may be relatives, teachers, classmates or strangers ... what about my example? That was probably the last time I went home-

It was a winter night and it was very cold. I'm wearing a big, thick down jacket with my hands in my pockets, a cotton cap and big cotton shoes on my feet. My mother and I walked arm in arm to the station. There are not many people, but one person is ignored-the grandmother behind the crowd.

The old woman was pale, wrinkled, with tight eyebrows and tight eyes. She looked down and wore only a thin autumn coat and trousers. She was huddled up with cold, only covered with a broken plastic bag, as if she could leave this world at any time. Looking back, there were only two dry dollars in the small jar where she asked for money. Look at the small bowl next to the beggar. There is only half a piece of dry food in it. That bowl is so dirty that I can't stand it. I suddenly have some impulses. I just want to give some money. So I searched my pockets and found fifty cents. Although it's a little small, fifty cents is money anyway. But on second thought, forget it. Other adults don't care. What do I care? My conscience was covered by something at that time.

After a long time, the bus has not come yet. At this moment, a young man in a coat came over. He casually took off his coat. I think he's sexy. I saw him jump over the old woman, but he seemed to be thinking something. His every move below stunned everyone in the station. He hesitated, then put his coat gently on the old woman. ...

At this moment, my eyes are full of tears. This is life! I think maybe grandma will be very moved when she wakes up tomorrow morning!

He, this young man is my role model!

Example Excellent Composition 8 "Learn from Lei Feng and be a good example ..." Hearing this familiar melody reminds me of Lei Feng, who is unknown, selfless, does not seek fame and wealth and serves the people.

"If you were a drop of water, would you moisten an inch of land? If you were a ray of sunshine, would you light up a little darkness? If you were a grain, you would ... ""People's life is limited, and serving the people is infinite. We should devote our limited life to serving the people indefinitely. " ..... Lei Feng has many classic quotations. Although Lei Feng passed away, his spirit lives on forever and people will always remember him. Around us, there is also such a "living Lei Feng".

Xiao Bin is an unknown classmate in the class. He always studies silently and helps his classmates silently ... once, he was uncomfortable at the same table and suddenly vomited in class. A foul smell came to my face, and the students around me covered their noses and mouths, followed by a noisy booing. Xiao Bin was not surprised. He gently took out a pack of tissues and handed it to him. Then he got up and got a mop to clean up the stinking vomit. The students cast surprised eyes. Xiao Bin's seat was also stained with some vomit, and he didn't complain. Under his influence, several students also joined the ranks of incorruptibility. Xiao Bin's Lei Feng spirit subtly infected our class. ...

In learning Lei Feng Yue, our school organized a series of activities to learn from Lei Feng. In the activity of "I love our school, clean the campus", we launched the action of cleaning up the dead corner of the campus. Xiao Bin took an active part in this activity and carefully cleaned every tile. You see, I'm so sweaty that I can't wipe it off. Just as everyone was in full swing, suddenly there was a scream: "Ah! Kobayashi is bleeding! " Everyone greeted with concern, and he smiled gently and said, "Nothing, nothing." So he changed his left hand and went on working. ...

Xiao Bin is a good example to learn from Lei Feng. Learn from Lei Feng, start with the little things in life, and let the spirit of Lei Feng live in our hearts forever!

There are always some familiar strangers around us. They may be engaged in ordinary careers, but their lives must be extraordinary. Their collective name is role model!

One snowy afternoon, my mother and I quickly crossed the street and went shopping in the mall. When I passed a fire station, I suddenly froze. I saw a fireman standing guard outside in the heavy snow. The heavy snow has dyed his dark green hat brim white. He was covered in snow, and his clothes, sleeves and trousers were covered with snowflake footprints. His handsome face was also buried by heavy snow, and the snow was still on his eyebrows. His face seemed to be burned red. Only his upright nose is still emitting heat. I stepped forward and asked why I didn't come in. He said firmly: "It is my job to stand guard and it is my duty to protect the safety of the people." His words made me very excited. Yes! Even if it snows heavily, they should stick to their posts. What's his name? Is an example.

On the way to climb the mountain, I was enjoying the natural scenery while walking and suddenly found the most beautiful scenery. I wonder if she is a tourist or a sanitation worker. She is holding a clip stick and a small garbage bag to catch rubbish. I can't help taking a few steps closer. She is still doing her work, as if nothing had happened. I saw that she bent down step by step, reached for the garbage, clipped it and quickly threw it into the bag. In this way, all the rubbish paper flowers along the way have been cleaned up, which is really a beautiful landscape. I went to ask, and she said, "I'm just a tourist. I'm just volunteering to clean up the garbage." This concise language reveals her kindness and beauty. I asked her name. Needless to say, "example"!

I was moved by the beauty and purity brought by these familiar strangers. They are role models in my life.

Example excellent composition 10 In our life, there are many examples worth learning. We have learned a lot from role models. such as

Lens 1: In the winter morning, the north wind blows mercilessly into the faces of passers-by. One day, I hurried to school. Suddenly, a figure appeared before my eyes. Thinking: "It's so cold, so early to go to bed." Slowly, the man in orange approached me. Ah! It turns out that the aunt cleaner is cleaning. "I learned it so early!" She waved to me and asked. Hmm! Start cleaning so early! Yes! In order to make people have a good environment, it's okay to work hard. After listening to these words, I can't help feeling a little. What a good aunt cleaner! In order to keep people in a comfortable and clean environment, she sacrificed her hot bed and created a beautiful environment for people. I vaguely saw her face being blown by the cold wind. When I wanted to ask her again, her busy green figure gradually left me. Looking at her far away figure, I have unspeakable feelings.

Camera 2: Yiyang No.3 bus slowly walks towards me. Get on the bus in one step, wow! There are so many people on the bus! I'm doing it. Several people are overloaded. Suddenly, an old man groaned, ouch! What happened? The car stopped and people poured in. The next jump turned out to be an old man's leg cramp The driver is unwilling to give up his seat to the old man. At this time, a little girl of seven or eight years old suddenly got up to make way for the old man. She stood in the crowd. At this time, she is so small that no one will notice and her noble character is so dazzling. The little girl is so young and sensible. I saw the noble character of modesty and courtesy in him. He is an example for us to learn from.

In our life, there are many examples worth learning.

In the vast sea of people, there are examples worth learning in every corner. In them, I saw the excellent moral character of the Chinese nation, the brilliance of mankind and the truth, goodness and beauty of the world.

Example, not far from me, example, we are within reach, example is around us.

Example excellent composition 1 1 Life is valuable, so it is noble and solemn. At a tennis open in Australia, a bird suddenly flew into the court. A bird suddenly flew into the court and was unfortunately hit by a tennis ball. The tennis player immediately stopped the game, ran to the bird and knelt down to it. This situation touched the audience. The tennis player's action not only expressed his apology and anxiety for accidentally injuring a bird, but also showed his respect and awe for a sacred life, which won thunderous applause from the audience. This is a news I saw on the Internet. Not alarmist, our behavior, even if it is very humble, may destroy the "online direct knot." Don't do what you don't want them to do to you. Flowers, trees, birds, animals, insects and fish in nature are closely related to our survival. If we indulge our destructive behavior and ignore the extinction of species, we can only shoot ourselves in the foot. People often say: "Protecting species means protecting human beings themselves." Known as the "father of insects", Pu 'er shouted: In this world, man and nature need harmony, and man and animals need friendship. Only by learning to respect nature and fear natural life can mankind have a bright future!

Examples Excellent composition 12 Everyone has examples to learn from. Some people are great writers and poets, while others are great scientists and stars. And my role model is Douglas, a famous hero of the British Air Force. Barton.

I have read the book unusual story. It presents an inspiring picture and tells the legendary life of the protagonist Barton. Barton was born in London, England on 19 10. His childhood was unfortunate. His father died in childhood and his mother remarried. But he didn't give up, didn't give up, and tried to get into Oxford University. He actively became an athlete and graduated with excellent results. 1930 was appointed as a RAF pilot. He lost his right leg in an air accident. After he put on his prosthetic leg, he was told to use crutches, but he said, on the contrary, I won't use them, even if I walk bloody! Finally, he learned to walk like a normal person. After leaving the army, Barton worked in an oil company. 1939 When World War II broke out, Barton responded to the call of the British army and bravely rejoined the Air Force. 1940, he led the air force's 242nd squadron to shoot down 12 German fighters within one hour. Barton himself was awarded the Royal Medal for his heroic behavior and extraordinary leadership in shooting down 22.5 enemy planes and became a hero in people's minds. In an air battle at 194 1, he was captured by the Germans. During his five years in the prison camp, although he failed to escape from prison 300 times, he never despaired. Barton was rescued after World War II. He often visits veterans who are still in hospital. His extraordinary will and courage inspired many people.

Barton has always been my role model. I admire Barton for being physically and mentally strong and not giving in to bad luck. His indomitable fighting spirit inspires us to overcome the difficulties in study, and his courage to go forward inspires us to sail firmly to the ideal and the other side of success.

Example excellent composition 13 My grandfather, with gray temples, is very tall and cares for me like a mountain.

Grandpa is very frugal. Every time he eats leftovers, he is always reluctant to throw them away. I remember once, when he was eating, suddenly, his stomach ached and he rushed to the hospital. Since then, grandpa has not changed this bad habit and eats whatever he likes. Clothes seem indifferent to grandpa.

When I came to grandpa's wardrobe, the clothes in winter were average, and several clothes in summer had holes. There is a white shirt with a hole in the neckline. Large and small holes are connected together and become a "work of art". I said to my grandfather, "Grandpa, this dress is too worn. Doesn't it hurt if you wear it? "

Grandpa said seriously, "although this dress is worn out, it is cool to wear." Unlike you, you don't wear it as long as there is a small hole. Learn to be frugal. "

Mom said grandpa was very popular with the villagers when he was young. Because grandpa is like a living Lei Feng, she can't remember how many roads grandpa built and how many people built houses. During the harvest season, the villagers will give grandpa many things to show their help to their families. At school, aunts, mothers, aunts and uncles, just like the headmaster's children, are well paid.

As long as grandpa comes to school, many teachers will greet him warmly, just like meeting the leader. If a building needs to be built in the village, the village head will come to grandpa's house and ask which scheme is better.

Grandpa's life is respected because he helped many people out of trouble with his actions and sweat.

Grandpa, you are my role model. You taught me to be frugal and helpful. I want to learn from you!

Example Excellent Composition 14 "We are the successors of productism and inherit the glorious tradition of revolutionary ancestors ..." Although we sing like this, how many can we really do it? Uncle Zhu Qinyu, he is China producer party member, and he did it.

Uncle Zhu is the general manager of Hanghua No.1 Primary School. Although he has only worked in Hanghua Primary School for more than four years, his words and deeds fully reflect the demeanor of a * * * party member. "He is a real party member." All the staff of Hanghua Primary School praised him like this.

20xx 10, after the middle-level cadres of Hanghua No.1 Primary School were adjusted, Zhu Qinyu, who was the deputy director of general affairs in Huacao Central Primary School, was assigned to work in Hanghua No.1 Primary School. Huacao Central Primary School is much better than Hanghua Primary School, and it is far from working in Hanghua Primary School. Many people said to Uncle Zhu, "You are in your fifties. What are you doing in Hanghua? " Uncle Zhu said; "I don't want anything, just because I was born and raised in party member and obey the organizational arrangements." So he gave up his generous salary and handy job and went to a tabloid in Hanghua without saying anything.

The work of the General Affairs Department is complicated, but Zhu Qinyu doesn't give orders or talk big. He set an example for everyone with his exemplary behavior and infected everyone with his honest character. He leads by example, is honest and conscientious, and looks ordinary one by one, but reveals something extraordinary, which embodies a noble realm of * * * producing party member and doing small things for Hanghua.

Uncle Zhu cares and cares for every comrade. He is not afraid of trouble, and talks with the comrades in the group again and again, eliminates the factors that are unfavorable to the organization, and talks with colleagues. He believes that every comrade can give full play to his strengths, arrange his own work reasonably, and let the logistics work proceed in an orderly manner.

Uncle Zhu, you are an example for me to learn. Your noble character of honesty and dedication is worth learning. Don't worry, I will be like you, be a useful person, repay the motherland when I grow up, and repay the China * * * production party that raised us!

Example Excellent Composition 15 —— A good example of learning from Lei Feng

"Learn from Lei Feng" is what the chairman said at a meeting. The annual Lei Feng Memorial Day is on March 5th. Why does Lei Feng become a household name? Let me talk about it.

Lei Feng is from Changsha, Hunan. He was born in a poor family when he was a child. His father was poisoned by the Japanese on the battlefield. Until one day, Lei Feng's village was liberated, and Lei Feng could go to primary school to learn skills for free. When he grew up, Lei Feng worked in the countryside and was rated as the best every time. Later, when Lei Feng became the Party's People's Liberation Army, he made up his mind to stop the enemy's guns, just like Huang Jiguang. Lei Feng did many good things in the army. Unfortunately, on one occasion, he went on a mission in the field and was hit by a stake in the car and died unfortunately. So March 5 every year is the day when everyone learns from Lei Feng.

Today is March 5th, 20xx, and there is a "Little Lei Feng" in our class. These "little Lei Feng" not only helped their own class, but also helped other classes! Our Li Zherui helps the teacher type. He works hard. Shen is taking pictures of "Little Lei Feng". They look good one by one. The girls in our class put the books in the corridor, looked at them and put the same books together in different categories. Is it exquisite? Why can't we boys be "Lei Feng"? Our duty is to clean up the teachers, and we all try our best to do this. Let's unite and clean the teacher spotless!

"Lei Feng travels thousands of miles on business, and good things take the train". How can we learn from Lei Feng? We don't have to carry children and carry things for others. We can do our own thing well and make contributions to society. We can be "Little Lei Feng"!