How to write a small brush in Unit 6 of the first volume of Grade Three?

Unit 6, Book 1, Grade 3 The small exercise pen is written like this:

The Woods on the mountain in my hometown are really beautiful. Let me tell you something about his autumn! Once you go, you don't want to leave. The river in the forest is full of leaves, some of which are like boats, floating quietly into the distance. Some drifted halfway and became good friends with the small stones blocking the way in the current. The small stone, which stood in the same place as a soldier, saw the small leaf coming and went down the mountain hand in hand with it. Others ran down from the tree, found a place to relax and fell asleep there.

There are all kinds of trees in the forest, such as maple, ginkgo, buttonwood and so on. Their leaves are yellow, red and green. These colorful leaves fall to the ground, so let alone the comfort of stepping on them. The Woods on rainy days are also beautiful. Deafening thunder and flashing lightning passed through the treetops, forming a series of silver lights on the ground. Then raindrops fell, and raindrops fell from the branches like strings of sparkling pearls.

The rain stopped, so I went to play in the Woods and stepped on it, and the leaves made a "squeaking" sound. Smelling the fresh air, listening to the sound of leaves and the happy chirping of birds make me feel very comfortable. This is the gorgeous autumn in Qiu Guang. When you see the charming spring, fiery summer and subtle winter here, you will definitely linger for the beautiful scenery here.