Warm imprinting composition

The warm label consists of the following components:

I remember my parents came back late because they were busy with work. Once, I went to the door and looked up. Alas, my mother hasn't come back yet. I walked to the old wall, because it was my childhood paradise. Although only a few hay trees set it off, I always chat with the small animals here.

Then came an old man selling baked wheat cakes, probably fifty or sixty years old! A full face of beard and bloodshot eyes should be very tired. He pushed the car selling biscuits to the old wall. He turned around and saw me. He smiled at me and I smiled at him mechanically.

"Kid, why are you here alone?" "My mother went to work and hasn't come back yet, and she is hungry." "Ah, it's not good to be hungry. Come on, how about trying my craft? " I saw that he handed me a piece of sesame seed cake with his hand, and I took it with both hands and put it in my arms, feeling, feeling, and being warm. "Thank you, Uncle."

"You're welcome." I wolfed it down. Later, I ate cookies prepared by my uncle here almost every time. They were fragrant and sweet. It turned out that uncle lived alone in a broken house and got a pension.

However, he was bored at home alone, so he went to sell baked wheat cakes. Whenever I see my uncle's smile, my heart is warm. Finally, my uncle told me that he didn't sell baked wheat cakes, and he wanted to go home alone and live a leisurely life.

"Uncle, come and take a picture." "1, 2, 3, cut." In the photo, my uncle and I are talking and laughing in front of the mottled old wall. Uncle smiled so warmly, as if he were 20 years younger, and the wrinkles on his face seemed to be much less. Uncle, thank you for your warmth. That mottled old wall, that uncle, will always warm me and accompany me through every year.

How to write an unforgettable composition?

1. The six elements should be complete.

When writing a note composition, you must explain the six elements of the note composition (time, place, person, reason, process and result) completely. Only by explaining these elements clearly can the content of the article appear complete, express your writing intention and let readers know the ins and outs of the incident.

2. Choose materials around the center

To write a narrative composition, we must first establish the central idea, and then choose the appropriate events around the central idea, and choose the events that can best express the central idea as the material. As long as you observe and think more on weekdays, you will find that there are many things worth writing in life. In addition, the selection of materials should be novel, and things that rarely appear in other people's compositions should be chosen to write, so that notebook compositions are attractive and fresh.