Seeking answers to junior high school ill sentences

The number of words in the answer should be within 10000 words, and that's all I can put in.

Modify the answer to the classification of sick sentences

First, one can't have two things at once.

1. Whether we can cultivate new people with "four haves" is a major event related to the future and destiny of our party and country, and it is also the fundamental task of the education front.

It is said in the front that "whether it can be cultivated" and later that "it is also a fundamental task", so it is a fundamental task if it cannot be cultivated.

2. Maintaining a hard and simple life style is a major issue related to whether cadres can inherit and carry forward the revolutionary tradition.

The former "maintaining a hard and simple lifestyle" and the latter "whether it can be inherited and carried forward" also made a logical mistake of not taking into account both aspects.

3. Whether the Northern Alliance enters Kabul depends on whether the Afghan factions reach a political agreement and whether the Taliban compromise.

"Whether to March or not" should be changed to "It depends on the political agreement of Afghan factions" to take care of them.

We deeply feel that the vitality of a newspaper lies in whether it can provide readers with rich, novel and high-quality spiritual food.

It should be changed to "whether a newspaper can have vitality depends on ……".

We express our heartfelt thanks and cordial condolences to the academicians of the two academies for their great contributions to the modernization of the motherland over the years.

There is no "sympathy" for "significant contribution".

6. Practice has proved that where the scientific research team is successful, scientific farming and yield per unit area will be higher.

"Scientific farming" should be removed.

7, the great cause of the company, but also pay attention to saving unnecessary expenses and unnecessary waste.

Saving unnecessary waste "doesn't work.

8. The history of the Party shows that the implementation of the mass line is related to the success or failure of revolution and construction.

It should be changed to "related to the success or failure of revolution and construction".

9. A paper with correct viewpoints, sufficient arguments and complete structure is an important criterion to measure its quality.

It should be changed to "Whether the viewpoint is correct, whether the argument is sufficient and whether the structure is complete".

10, we can't take the positive speech at the meeting as the standard to measure a person's political consciousness.

The front should be changed to "whether to speak actively at the meeting".

Second, the misuse of related words and prepositions

1. "English Broadcasting Lecture" is very helpful to me. I think the combination of lectures and exercises is its outstanding advantage.

"Cause" should be matched with "Because". The second half of the sentence should be changed to "because it has the advantage of combining lectures and exercises."

2. China will launch its launch vehicle on the high seas from May/KOOC-0/2 to June/KOOC-0/0 at 7: 00 south latitude and 7/7/KOOC-0/32 east longitude, from the mainland to the Pacific Ocean, with a radius of 70 nautical miles.

It should be changed to "from the mainland to the Pacific Ocean as the center".

No matter how unfavorable the climatic conditions and geographical environment were, the climbers still overcame many difficulties and succeeded in reaching the top.

"No matter" is the same as "No matter", "No matter" and "All (always, always and also)", and "No matter" should be changed to "Although", which is the same as "Although" and "But (but, but, still)".

Teachers, students and employees of our school will enter and leave the school with their work permit and student ID card.

If the conjunction "and" is used wrongly, it should be replaced by "or", because teachers and students can't have two certificates.

Although the housing is only six square meters more than in the past, three generations, old, young and old, can no longer squeeze into one room, but also have a place to read and write.

The word "Dan" should be added before the "three generations" to match the "although".

6. The size of a person's talent is completely determined by the acquired study and practice.

"Because" is a conjunction, which is used in complex sentences to lead to clauses indicating reasons. There must be a clause indicating the result to echo it. It should be "decided by ..."

7. If they really learn the theory well and can graduate from the training class, it is better to say that they have only learned the empty theory of image engineering.

If "... than ..." does not match, it should be changed to "instead of ...".

8. If it is now, although the teacher has never seen litchi, he can still find out scientific materials and explain them to the pupils who are a little obsessed.

This sentence is hypothetical, and the word "although" should be changed to "even if".

9. If people's thinking declines and the social atmosphere is not good, it will be difficult for the economy to go up. Even if there is, it will not be consolidated.

The subjects of the clauses before and after are different, and the related words should come before the subjects. If people ... ...

On June 10 and March 17, six members were expelled from the IOC for bribery scandals. The next day, the world's major newspapers reported this event that shocked the international sports world in detail.

Improper preposition, "about" should be changed to "about".

1 1. When the car thief saw someone chasing him, he stepped on the gas pedal and ran away desperately. The police officers chased him down the hill before they caught him.

Improper related words, this sentence is a continuation of the relationship rather than a turning point. The word "change" should be changed to "immediately".

12. If people watch TV programs for four or five hours continuously, they will feel very tired.

If the related words are not in place, they should be changed to "If people are continuous".

13. During the construction, they handed over every important technical problem to the masses for discussion.

If the preposition is used wrongly, we should change "right" into "ba".

14. Although he was missed by the masses after his death, he was not listed as an artist in the art world.

The related word is inappropriate and should be changed to "although the masses miss him".

15, please rest assured that no matter how difficult it is, we will resolutely complete the task.

Change "although" to "regardless"

Third, the word order is improper

The name 1. Jiao may be unfamiliar to young people, but it is familiar to people over 40.

The preposition "right" is wrong, which leads to the inversion of subject and object. It should be changed to "Young people may be unfamiliar with the name Focus, but people over 40 are familiar with it".

I never thought that our class would win the championship in this basketball game and beat six strong opponents in a row.

You should beat your opponent first, and then win the championship.

Sprite, cola, mineral water and other drinks are summer drinks that every family likes.

It should be changed to "very popular with every household ...".

After the exam started, people handed in their papers one after another about half an hour later.

It should be changed to "people come and go".

The spring rain has been raining intermittently for more than ten days, and the newly sown seedlings have turned yellow.

It should be changed to "The spring rain is intermittent this year ...".

6. This matter caused extensive discussion between teachers and students.

7. The Palace Museum exhibited the newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2,000 years ago.

It should be changed to "the newly unearthed cultural relics more than 2,000 years ago are displayed here".

8. Criminals persecute children in the most vicious way.

It should be changed to "criminals treat children in the most vicious way ...".

9. What a beneficial influence Ba Jin has had on my literary hobby and literary road.

First of all, it should be "close to literature", followed by "love literature".

10, 2 1 century, people admire the interpersonal relationship in the fifties and sixties, which shows that the interpersonal relationship in the fifties and sixties really has something worth recalling and affirming.

The first is "worthy of recognition" and the second is "nostalgia".

1 1. In carrying out patriotic education activities, our school pays attention to educating students on revolutionary traditions, and cultivates students' consciousness and initiative of studying hard and observing discipline.

It should be changed to "initiative of diligent study" and "consciousness of observing discipline" "Consciousness" and "initiative" should be reversed.

12, in order to strive for high speed, we must pay close attention to the modernization of science and technology, make it ahead of production and construction, and develop our national economy with advanced science and technology.

It should be changed to "Developing China's national economy with advanced science and technology".

13, the central content of this place name census is to update, fill gaps and correct errors, that is, to supplement missing place names, correct wrong place names and update outdated place names.

It should be changed to "update outdated place names, supplement missing place names and correct wrong place names".

14. At present, fake and shoddy products are repeatedly banned in the market. I hope consumers will pay attention not to give profit-seekers an opportunity.

It should be changed to "I hope to attract the attention of consumers".

15. The Chinese patent medicine produced by this time-honored pharmaceutical factory is well-known at home and abroad for its excellent materials selection, exquisite technology, unique formula and remarkable curative effect.

It should be changed to "excellent material selection, unique formula, exquisite technology and remarkable curative effect".

16, Austrian scientists reached the above conclusion after freezing, collecting, analyzing and refining the rainfall in the clouds at the foot of the Alps.

There are two language defects. First, "rain in the clouds" should be changed to "rain"; Second, the word order is improper, and it should be changed to "collection, freezing, refining and analysis".

17, I don't agree to buy these high-end furniture, not only because these things are unnecessary for us, but more importantly, they don't conform to the principle of thrift.

The subject and object are reversed and should be changed to "These things are for us".

18, in line with international standards, changed the operating mechanism, and really felt unaccustomed to some comrades who were used to running on the old track.

The subject and object are reversed, and it should be changed to "Some comrades who are used to operating on the old track are really not used to international standards ...".

Fourth, improper collocation.

1, the relevant departments promptly criticized and educated a few incidents of disrespecting sanitation work, making troubles unreasonably, and even beating and insulting sanitation workers, and dealt with them seriously.

There is no point in "criticizing and educating events", so "events" should be changed to "people".

2. No.1 Factory is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes and new materials, driven by technological progress.

"Developing new technologies and processes" is not feasible, and it should be changed to "devoting to the development of new products, new materials, new technologies and processes".

After returning to school, Yang Hui said nothing about saving the children from drowning. It was not until a thank-you letter was sent to the principal's office that this good thing was known to most people.

Attributive and head language don't match, "this good thing" is ok, "this good man" is not, so "good man" should be removed.

I heard from the train announcer that some cities will pass along the way, including Dalian.

The verb and the object don't match. "Listen to the city" won't work. It should be changed to "Listen to the name of the city".

Some hospitals of China People's Liberation Army immediately formed medical teams to rush to the disaster area, just as they heard the sound of bugles on the battlefield.

If the subject and predicate are inconsistent, "the hospital goes to the disaster area" will not work, so the subject should be changed to "the medical workers in the hospital".

6. No matter how dazzling the color of this soap bubble looks, it will definitely burst.

Subject-predicate mismatch, it is not the color that is "smashed", but the "soap bubble", and the word "color" should be removed.

7. Shanxi Province is one of the regions with the richest coal reserves in China.

"Shanxi Province is one of the regions with the richest coal reserves in China" should be changed to "Shanxi Province is one of the regions with the richest coal reserves".

8. She has published her works in newspapers and magazines since she was 9 years old, and was selected by some anthologies.

The subject and predicate don't match. "She was selected from the anthology" doesn't make sense. It should be changed to "These works were also …".

9. Laid-off workers have been effectively organized, and welfare undertakings such as catering, sewing, unpacking and washing have been well built.

"Construction undertaking" is inconsistent, so "construction" should be changed to "establishment".

10, the disasters caused by two extraordinarily severe typhoons to coastal people such as Guangdong and Fujian have been solved by the party and the people.

"Disaster relief" is not properly matched, so "solution" should be changed to "overcoming".

1 1. High-tech parks are based on intelligence-intensive, aiming at developing emerging industries and high-tech achievements, and constantly promoting the combination of scientific research, education and production.

If the verb and the object don't match, "exploring new industries" is ok, but "high-tech achievements" is not.

12. since the reform and opening up, we have carried out a series of fruitful reforms in the economic system and made great achievements.

If the verb and the object don't match, it won't work to "transform by ...".

Verb (abbreviation of verb) is improperly denied.

In order to prevent such traffic accidents from happening again, we have strengthened traffic safety education and management.

"To prevent it from happening again" means to make it happen again, and the word "no" should be removed.

He wrote to tell me that in recent years, he missed his hometown almost all the time.

"Always" means "always", so "always" should be changed to "always" or "always".

3. We should know and master the objective laws of things, and try to avoid not making mistakes or making fewer mistakes.

"Avoid not making mistakes" is equivalent to making mistakes and should be changed to "avoid making mistakes".

4. shenzhou spaceship successfully launched. Who can deny that China has no ability to enter the international manned space technology field?

The rhetorical question is also a double negative, and the triple negative is also a negative, so the word "no" should be removed.

Countless facts tell us that there are no insurmountable difficulties, and we should strive for victory with confidence.

It is also a triple negative, and the word "no" should be removed.

6. During the exhibition of valuables, how to prevent valuable exhibits from being stolen or robbed is a headache for the organizers.

The word "exemption" should be deleted.

7. I don't think anyone can deny that this drama has no negative effects.

The word "no" should be removed.

8. Now that science is developed, it may not be possible to transplant memory.

One less word "no" becomes a negative word and should be changed to "maybe not completely impossible"

9. No one can deny that this practice of parents cannot be said to be caring for their children, but the result may be counterproductive.

If the negation is improper, the word "can't say" should be removed.

10, we have to admit that the sun does not rise and set in the west.

If the negation is improper, the word "no" should be removed.

Sixth, illogical.

1. As soon as people enter the teaching building, they will see all the pictures and posters on the west side of the corridor.

"Poster" also includes "pictures", which cannot be replaced by the coordinate conjunction "and".

Every time I borrow books from him, he looks for them in the small study in spite of his age and weakness.

At the same time, "braving the heat and cold" is also illogical.

After hard work, his average score in all six subjects in the final exam was above 90.

There is only one average score, or "average" or "all" is removed.

This year, the government should make great efforts to reduce the unreasonable burden on farmers.

"Reducing the unreasonable burden on farmers" means to make farmers bear unreasonable burdens, and the word "unreasonable" should be removed.

Many people who have made outstanding achievements in scientific research have achieved success through tenacious struggle under very difficult objective conditions.

The contradiction between "everything" and "many" should be eliminated.

6. He is a man who has shortcomings but loves life very much, which is more valuable than losing confidence in life.

Replace "more valuable" with "much better". Because it can only be said that it is more valuable than something valuable, this sentence is equivalent to saying that "losing confidence in life" is valuable.

7. Screen-like green hills, flowing water and oil-painting scenery bring tourists into a fascinating world.

"Castle Peak is like a screen and flowing water is like a stream" should be classified as "oil painting-like scenery", and "harmony" should be changed to "and so on".

9. For several consecutive hot summers, the county party committee mobilized a large number of government officials and scientific and technological personnel to go to the front line of agriculture to fight against the rare floods in history.

It is not uncommon in history to struggle with floods for several cool summers in a row.

10, the company has great undertakings, but more attention should be paid to saving unnecessary expenses and unnecessary waste.

"Saving unnecessary waste" is not feasible.

1 1, an off-road vehicle, like an arrow from the string, galloped on the Panshan Highway.

Unreasonable, "on the Panshan Highway" can't be an "arrow that leaves the string".

12, the famous old professor of ENT is the nemesis of otorhinolaryngology, and any chronic diseases of the five senses are swept away in his hands.

Unreasonable logic, "the bane of ears, nose and throat" is to knock out ears, nose and throat.

Seven, the structure is chaotic

1. He is usually quiet, but when he talks about his favorite major at academic conferences, he becomes much more active and talkative.

Either remove "more" or change it to "more active and talkative".

2. How can I get rich? The key is that knowledge plays a decisive role. The lack of knowledge will inevitably lead to the poverty of wealth, and the sufficiency of wealth is based on the sufficiency of knowledge.

Or change it to "knowledge is the key" or "knowledge plays a decisive role".

3. In addition to the staff of Peking University, the students of this short online training course also participated in the study, including teachers, students and scientific and technological workers from Tsinghua and other 15 universities.

Or delete "and" or delete "also participated in the study".

In recent years, China has accelerated the development of higher education, and colleges and universities will further expand enrollment and focus on building a number of high-level universities and disciplines.

The main body of "building a number of high-level universities" should be the country, not the "universities".

It is not difficult to see that this obvious misjudged case has been delayed to get a fair judgment, and the fundamental reason is that the party style is not doing strange things.

Is it a mixed sentence, or delete the words "at work" or "its root cause"

It never occurred to me that it takes so many people's efforts to publish a translation.

Miscellaneous sentences, or remove "published" or "to be published".

7. Indiscriminate reading is a common phenomenon among young people. Now it is time to help them solve the problem of how to read.

Miscellaneous, or changed to "... it's time to solve the problem of how to read", or changed to "... it's time to solve the problem of reading methods".

It's a pity that this masterpiece has been brewing in his mind for a long time and left us prematurely before it was finished.

The structure is chaotic, and "masterpiece" and "leaving us prematurely" are meaningless. It should be the author.

9. Although this factory is small in scale, it won the Science Conference Award twice and the provincial quality product title three times, and its products are exported to all parts of the country and Southeast Asia.

The structure is chaotic, and "product" should be awarded the title of high-quality product.

10, this workshop has also established a patrol inspection system for cadres, and regularly visits each team to check the implementation of the system.

The structure is chaotic, and "periodic inspection in the workshop" is not feasible. The word "cadres" should be added before "regular".

1 1. The main components of Ganmao antipyretic granules are prepared from Folium Isatidis, Radix Isatidis and Radix Aconiti Kusnezoffii.

Miscellaneous, or remove the "main ingredient", or remove the "preparation".

12. In order to adapt to the shift of work focus, our school has established and improved a series of necessary rules and regulations.

Or change "Our school has established and improved …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Eight, incomplete and redundant

1. At the beginning of this year, the United States and Britain assembled shocking military forces, which made the Gulf region once overcast.

"Shocking" means "frightening".

Everything depends on the masses, otherwise you can't do anything.

Redundancy of "on your own"

3. Yesterday was the last day of the transfer deadline, and the China Football Association received another 25 players' transfer applications.

"Last Day of Deadline", repeated

Do you know how much work bees do in a catty of honey? According to scientists' statistics, bees collect about 500 thousand pollen per catty of honey.

It should be changed to "pollen of 500 thousand flowers"

Everyone is generally angry that the ranger exposed the problem that the Forestry Bureau took the lead in smuggling timber.

It should be changed to "exposed by the ranger".

6. When using electrical appliances, if there is leakage, cut off the power supply immediately.

If, once used repeatedly.

7. He is cautious, thoughtful and very opinionated, and never disagrees with others casually.

Use repetition at will.

8. In order to conquer cloning technology, he even grasped his spare time very tightly, getting up early in the morning and going to bed late at night. It's really day and night, forgetting to eat and sleep.

Get up early in the morning and sleep late at night. Repeat.

9, the popularization of science and technology, is an important symbol of national scientific and cultural quality, related to economic revitalization, scientific and technological progress and social development.

Without the object preposition, it should be changed to "the overall situation about ...".

10, the person in charge stressed that it is necessary to stop paying news and buying and selling ISBN. As a long-term task.

Missing the prefix of the object, it should be changed to "the work of buying and selling ISBN is regarded as ……".

1 1, humble opinion, in the final analysis: making money is the last word.

"My humble opinion" means the repetition of "my own opinion" and "mine".

In recent years 12 and 10, the serious ecological damage at the source of the Yangtze River is worrying.

"Worry" means "worry" and "worry".

13, the director of the grain depot neglected his duty, causing 100 tons of wheat to rot and deteriorate. In order to strictly enforce the law and discipline, the superior leaders decided to give him a demerit and compensate him for the economic loss of 1 10,000 yuan.

It should be changed to "and ordered to pay compensation".

14. In order to fully popularize the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig breeding, the county held three technical training courses for farmers.

The prefix without object should be changed to "promote the technology of feeding pigs with rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake"

15, due to the limitations of Pu Songling's time and background, can not but be reflected in his works.

Abuse of prepositions leads to no subject, so "because" should be removed.

16, the municipal party Committee took effective measures to stop the masses from exposing the bad phenomenon that a few units violated the financial system to treat guests and give gifts.

The word "lack of structural auxiliary words" should be changed to "prevent the masses from exposing ...".

17. After reading this article, readers can realize more deeply that unchecked power will inevitably lead to corruption.

If there is no subject, delete the word "read".

18, the price gap between this book, hardcover and Volkswagen is more than half.

"Parallax" is an intransitive verb, so it cannot take an object. The word "more than half" should be removed.

19. It is a violation of the trademark law for a factory to use the Peony brand trademark of Tianjin factory to promote its products without authorization. Because of infringement of the exclusive right to use a trademark.

The prefix without an object should be chan to "that act of promoting one's own product".

20. Due to the remarkable teaching achievements of the school, it has been commended by the provincial and municipal committees many times.

Abuse of prepositions leads to no subject, so "because" should be removed.

2 1, corruption is not caused by the reform of market economy orientation, nor is it the product of market economy, but it is precisely because a market economy with equal competition has not really been established.

The lack of object title words should be changed to "... caused by the market economy of equal competition".

22. The purpose of this activity is to show the historical process of the formation and development of Peking Opera art, so as to carry forward the fine traditions of national culture and build socialist spiritual civilization.

If the object head word is missing, the word "the movement of" should be added at the end.

23. When I saw that your manner was so serene, your spirit was so full, and your brow was so awe-inspiring, all my doubts disappeared.

Abuse of prepositions leads to no subject, so "yes" should be removed.

This article captures grandma's smile to reflect the happy life brought by the party's wise policy to the people.

The missing object prefix should be changed to "... to reflect the theme that the Party's wise policies bring people a happy life".

25. The performance of the Royal Ballet in the Capital Theatre won warm applause from the audience and spoke highly of this wonderful performance.

The last sentence should be changed to "The audience spoke highly of this wonderful performance".

26. After careful cultivation, wild orchids are fragrant and attractive, and treasures abound.

Abuse of prepositions leads to no subject, and the word "yes" should be removed.

With the patient education and help of teachers and classmates, he finally came to his senses.

The abuse of prepositions leads to no subject, and the second half of the sentence should be changed to "he finally came to his senses."

I believe that if our sacred land is invaded by another race again, its fate will be even worse than during the Second World War.

If "once" appears repeatedly, one should be removed.

29, in order to find out the law of the disease, our hospital contacted several units, often carry out investigation and research.

"Hook" is an intransitive verb and cannot take an object. It should be changed to "linked to several units".

30. The Teachers Law stipulates that teachers' salaries are not lower than or higher than those of state civil servants.

"Not less than" and "higher than" are repeated, and the words "or higher than" should be deleted.

Nine, ideographic unknown, refers to unknown.

1, the county notice said, let Zhao Xiangchang report before 15 this month.

Is it reported on June 5438+05 this month or before June 5438+05?

He secretly deposited money in two banks behind the back of the general manager and deputy general manager.

Ambiguity can be understood as disloyalty to the general manager alone, or disloyalty to the general manager and deputy general manager.

The director told the leaders of several schools that the work in the new semester must be improved.

Ambiguity can be understood as instructing several school leaders, and it can also be understood as several leaders of a school.

This exquisite lantern is given as a gift to the guest who scored the highest score today.

The meaning of "he" is unclear, which can refer to the "guest with the highest score" himself or a third person, that is, this lantern was originally a gift from the guest with the highest score, and now it is going to be given to the third person.

I saw Bird with a black bag in his hand, helping an old man get off the bus.

Who "has a black bag in his hand" is uncertain.

He has a daughter. Working in a hospital.

It is not clear whether he or his daughter "works in the hospital".

7. You can't go to see him now. He is taking the postgraduate exam in the examination room.

I'm not sure whether "he" refers to a teacher or a candidate in prison.

8. "Heart to Heart" Art Troupe is performing together with local literary and art groups recently, and the soldiers and civilians in Gutian area are rushing to tell each other and looking forward to the arrival of their loved ones.

The pronoun "local" is not suitable, and there is no specific area in front of it, so it cannot be referred to. "Gutian area" and "local" should be interchanged.

Through studying in parents' school, parents realize that it is impossible to discipline their children inappropriately.

Ambiguous. It can be understood as "the need for proper control of children." It can also be understood as "you can't mismanage children (such as ruining them)."

10, that year, I responded to the call of the party and went to the northwest to be a new farmer without telling your grandmother and aunt. Since then, it has changed my life.

Ambiguous, is "hide from grandma" a person, followed his aunt to the northwest, or "hide from grandma and aunt" two people, went to the northwest alone.

1 1. Grandma was very happy to see us. She hurried down from the kang and took our hands to ask questions.

Ambiguous, one is "We are very happy" and the other is "Grandma is very happy to see us".

12. Since autumn, it has rained twice in Tianjin and parts of Beijing.

It is not clear whether "some areas" only decorate Beijing or Tianjin and Beijing.

13, I have many interests. I like writing, calligraphy and painting. I hope the teacher can give me more guidance in this respect.

The pronoun is used improperly, and the meaning of "this" is unknown.

10. Misuse of part of speech or word meaning

1, cadres and the masses must abide by the socialist legal system without exception.

"Legal system" refers to "legal system, including systematic engineering such as formulation, implementation and compliance of laws". It should be changed to "law and discipline" or "regulations".

This arch bridge has 56 spans, which is a precedent in the history of Chinese bridge construction.

"Precedent" is an existing example. This sentence is intended to emphasize the initiative of arch bridge, which is not available in the history of bridge building in China and should be changed to "the first case"

There are people in this city who copy fake and inferior products by any means. We should crack down on this illegal act of cheating customers to get money.

We should change "imitation" to "manufacturing" or "counterfeiting" to "famous brand".

4. At the 200 1 Beijing Universiade, China athletes won 13 of the 3 15 gold medals in one fell swoop, setting up a good image as a sports power.

Only all can be "included" and should be changed to "sealed up".

In this strike hard struggle, we should give priority to arresting those murderers with guns, because these criminals directly threaten people's lives and property.

"Priority" is a commendatory term and should be changed to "first".

About 6.7 1 day, more than 3,000 people visited the Xiamen smuggling case exhibition.

"Man-time" is a compound quantifier, which must be exact, and "times" or "many" should be removed.

7. Small classes can solve various problems of students.

"Targeted" is a noun and cannot be used as an adverbial. It should be changed to "small classes can be targeted at"

Thanks to Wang Dafu's superb medical skills, mother's anemia and dysphagia have been cured.

Change "recovery" to "cure", "recovery from dysphagia" means not eating anything.

9. The mass reproduction of rabbits destroyed the whole pasture, and the number of Australian sheep famous in the world doubled.

Quantity can only be reduced by fraction or percentage, and increased by multiple.