My suggestion-write a 400-word composition about Hu Pilan.

In normal study, work and life, everyone will inevitably touch or use composition. According to the different writing time limit, composition can be divided into limited composition and unlimited composition. What kind of composition can be called an excellent composition? The following is my suggestion-a 400-word composition about Hu Pilan. Welcome to reading. I hope you will like it.

My suggestion-400 words to describe Hu Pilan's composition 1 1. Teaching requirements

1, read "Sample Text" and "My Suggestions" to understand the selection and arrangement of "Suggestions" in the text.

2. Read "Discussion on the Key Points of Practice" and understand the general writing about making "suggestions" for something.

3. According to the "homework requirements", choose things that make you feel good and keep a diary to express your true feelings.

Second, teaching time.

2 class hours

Third, the teaching process

(A) learning example "my suggestion".

1, read My Suggestions by yourself first. What did you mainly write?

2. communication.

What does the author suggest you do?

Can you accept his suggestion? Why?

3. summary.

Because the little author wrote down the reasons for going. Yes, although the scenery there is very ordinary, the author writes beautifully, writing what others have not observed and writing his true feelings. He didn't specifically write about "the most rice pond", so the students didn't want to go more?

Second, announce the content of this exercise: "My suggestion".

Spring is coming. Do you want to go for a spring outing? Where do you think is the best place to go? Please write a suggestion according to the example.

(3) Expand thinking and exercise guidance.

1 Want to know which place you know is the best place for people to stay back and forth?

Blackboard writing:

My advice

Simple explanation position

2. convince people by reasoning. Grasp the key scenic spots and introduce this scenic spot in an orderly and detailed manner. Try to introduce this scenic spot clearly and concretely to attract readers.

Blackboard writing:

At the end of the specific article, point out the main attractions.

(4) Students' exercises. Teachers' patrol guidance.

Blackboard design:

Simple explanation position

My suggestion is that the main attractions should be specific.

Point at the end of the article

Spring is like a fairy in a fairy tale. Everywhere you go, everything wakes up, trees sprout, flowers smile, and the earth is covered with green clothes. How light the footsteps of Miss Chun are! She quietly came to the farmhouse in front of General jiangling county Mountain and dressed herself beautifully. I suggest that students go there to play. I'm sure the scenery there will make you linger.

It was last spring. I went with my mother. Along the way, I saw a thriving scene. In the spring of March, the farmyard is full of birds and flowers, poetic and picturesque.

Look, a few flying birds in the washed sky are refreshing. A spring breeze is blowing, how comfortable and kind!

The mountains are constantly rolling, and trees are planted on every mountain. I only know one of the mountains, General Mountain. Although I don't know their names, these mountains are the most beautiful in my heart and eyes.

The river is very dark, and there are all kinds of flowers, but most of them are yellow rape flowers, which are so brilliant from a distance. In the endless rape blossoms, I also saw a few cows! This painting is really beautiful. Like a golden quilt, it is covered with Jiangling. There are flowers and trees next to Harmony, and the place with flowers and trees is the most beautiful. Weeping willows are like green girls tidying her braids by the river.

The fish in the river also seem to want to see the scenery. Otherwise, how could they jump out of the water?

Birds in the tree keep singing. I think they must be designing how to sing the beautiful scenery of spring.

Of course, there are more beautiful rivers, so let's go and see them.

Teachers and students hope you will listen to my suggestion and go to the farmhouse in front of Jiangjun Mountain.

Don't be ridiculous!

My suggestion-Hu Pilan's composition is 400 words. Grandpa walked slowly with heavy steps in winter, and Miss Chun came to us with a light dance. She blew gently and woke up Mother Earth, who had been sleeping for a winter. At this time, everything is revived and full of vitality everywhere. Flowers are scrambling to convey the message of spring to people. In this sunny and spring season, it is also a good time for people to go for a spring outing. I suggest a spring outing to Hangzhou this year.

In Hangzhou, there is a famous scenic spot-West Lake, and there is a landscape in the West Lake called "Three Ponds Reflecting the Moon". From a distance, green trees and flowers are in full bloom. Pavilions and pavilions are looming in the shade, just like fairyland on earth. People can't help but think of Su Shi's sentence, "The water is bright and sunny, and the mountains are rainy." If you want to compare the West Lake to the West Lake, light makeup is always appropriate. "ah!

The water in the West Lake is beautiful. Blue lagoon is rarely seen. You can't tell where the blue sky is and where the clear water is. There are many fish in the West Lake. What I see most are gold, red, orange and black. ...

There is another good place worth visiting in Hangzhou, that is Wuzhen. Wuzhen is a real water town. On both sides of the water are the houses of black brick Baiwa. Residents here also use boats as a means of transportation. ......................................................................................................................................................................

Hangzhou, like a bright pearl, is embedded in the land of our motherland. It deserves our appreciation and understanding. ...

I hope my suggestion can be adopted by everyone.

My suggestion-400 words and 4 compositions describing Hu Pilan has a place where one of our famous three friends is planted. That fairyland-like place is: ——————— Meiyuan of Guishan Han Tomb in Xuzhou City. Please take my advice.

Although there are some small ones, they are full of beautiful and arrogant plum blossoms. Look at these plum blossoms. Do you think of Wang Anshi's plum blossoms? There are some plums in the corner, and cold ling opens them alone. Knowing from a distance that it is not snow, why is there fragrance?

These plum blossom varieties are also many, and their postures are different. You see, this side of the bone is red, with five petals and a touch of "bright sunshine" in the middle. Add a touch of flattery to arrogance.

Let's talk about Bai Mei again. Although they are all five petals, their appearance is cold and aloof, but their hearts are full of blood, just like the fire under the iceberg. And can be used as medicine!

Look at that green plum again. She is beautiful and full of new ideas, as if a lovely little girl suddenly looked back at you and smiled, touching. More interestingly, the nickname of this "girl" is "sour plum". When I visited, I was shocked and thought it was the kind of edible plum.

Look at this pink plum. Cute and playful. Seen from a distance, it is like a soft and beautiful cloud falling from the sky, like a fairy descending from the earth, making people warm all over. ...

There is also a rockery that you can climb to enjoy the beautiful scenery. I sold it to you because of the time. If you want to see the true face of Lushan Mountain, please accept my advice.

My suggestion-400 words to describe Hu Pilan's composition. Time flies, time flies. In a blink of an eye, Miss Chun came to us with light steps. Like a famous painter, she paints spring in colorful colors. Spring has come and everything is revived. I suggest you take a walk in Tiande Lake Park, where spring is beautiful! I went to see it once before, but I stayed there and didn't want to go home!

Tiande Lake is in the center of the park, just like the blue eyes of the park. Tiande Lake is Miss Chun's masterpiece.

There is a large bamboo forest in the northwest of Tiandehu Park. Go in and have a look, yo! That's not bad. It's very relaxing and cool when you enter.

To the east of Tiande Lake, there is a willow forest, and thousands of tender willows spread their yellow leaves, which reminds me of He's "Singing Willow": "Jasper adorns trees, and thousands of strands of green silk hang down. I don't know who cut the thin leaves, and the spring breeze in February is like scissors. "

A breeze blowing, willow branches fluttering in the wind, as if talking:

"ah! Hello, spring has come, and spring has given us new life. "

"Yes, spring is coming again."

Only from this "dialogue" did I know that spring had really come.

Next, we will take you to a science and technology kingdom: Taizhou Science and Technology Museum.

From a distance, the sun shines on the outer wall of the science and technology museum, shining, and the whole glass is reflected on the river, sparkling, like a big diamond standing upright.

Tiandehu Park also has beaches and art galleries ... You can also fly kites, camp, barbecue and build sand castles. ...

If you want to witness the real scene of Tiandehu Park, please accept my suggestion and have a look at Tiandehu Park! I believe you will gain a lot!

My suggestion-describe Hu Pilan's 400-word composition; Grandpa quietly left in winter, and Miss Chun came to the world with brisk steps. Make the earth full of life. In this beautiful spring, I suggest you go to the ecological park to find spring.

The ecological garden in spring is so beautiful! As soon as you enter the ecological park, the first thing you see is the artificial lake. Walking on the bridge overlooking the lake, Miss Chun has lifted her white scarf. The lake is more lively, and small fish swim freely, spitting bubbles and jumping around, which is very interesting and adds a lot of life to the calm lake. The breeze blew and the lake rippled. When it is calm, the lake is like a big mirror, and the trees on the shore are reflected in the lake, forming a beautiful picture. This is probably Miss Chun's masterpiece!

Walking along the path for more than 70 meters, I saw a peach forest, standing among the peach forests and putting the Buddha in the clouds. Pink peach blossoms smile at people like smiling faces of little dolls. It also exudes a faint fragrance, attracting a large group of butterflies and seals to dance around peach blossoms, adding a beautiful landscape to the ecological park. Such a beautiful scenery reminds me of the poem written by Du Fu, "Peach blossoms bloom without owners, and lovely crimson loves light red?"

Those winter jasmine flowers are not to be outdone, opening their petals and pouring out their fragrance. A spring breeze blows, the branches flutter with the wind, and the Buddha statue dances with the rhythm of the spring girl!

Even more fascinating are the small slopes and interesting mazes! Not much to say here, let's go and have a look. It's sure to feast your eyes. I hope everyone will adopt my suggestion.

My suggestion-400-word composition describing Hu Pilan 7 Beautiful spring is coming, and the earth is full of green eyes. Everyone should go out to play in such a beautiful spring, don't waste it!

I suggest you go to Hengshan Mountain in Nanyue, where the scenery is picturesque and beautiful! At the lower part of the mountain, trees are shaded and streams are rivers. Walking on the path between trees is like walking through the Woods. You can't know where this road leads, it is full of mystery. You want to see through the whole mountain at a glance, but you can't see through it at all, just like you can never walk, but soon, you will find that the road is so short! By this time, you are halfway up the mountain. Take the cable car to the top of the mountain, and you will feel that you are in another world.

The top of the mountain is covered with snow, as if you were in a beautiful and magical fairy tale world. White and sparkling snowflakes are flying slowly and gently in the sky. The pine trees on the roadside are even more charming. There is thick snow on every branch and leaf, covering the earth with a layer of silver. Every tree is a beautiful sculpture of nature, beautiful and moving! Even there is thick snow on the wall, unified in one place, just like flying snow, so beautiful! Although it's snowing, it's not very cold, but be careful when you walk, or you'll fall down with a plop! So you must wear sandals when walking, because sandals are non-slip, but one feature is that they are useless on ice. The scenery at the top of the mountain is beautiful, which you can't see in Hainan in the south.

I suggest you go to Hengshan Mountain in Nanyue. I hope my suggestion can be adopted.

My suggestion-400 words for the composition describing Hu Pilan When it comes to Jinan, you will naturally think of the world-famous Baotu Spring. It is a natural landscape park dominated by spring water, with a history of 2700 years. In this season when the spring breeze is warming up and everything is reviving, I suggest students go to Baotu Spring Park in Jinan.

As soon as I entered the gate, the green bamboo forest swayed with the wind, as if waving to tourists. Along the my path has wound, through a sheltered hollow, green grass, green buds and colorful flowers gather in groups, competing to bloom delicate smiling faces, and butterflies dance among the flowers. Thousands of delicate willows spread their yellow leaves. In the distance, continuous rockeries and gurgling bridges form a beautiful picture of early spring.

Suddenly, it began to rain in Mao Mao, as light as spider silk and as thin as a needle. The rain moistens the earth quietly, and the flowers and plants on the ground suck with their faces upturned and their mouths open.

Go further inside and you will reach Baotu Spring. The water in the pool is very clear, and the end can be seen at a glance, and the colorful fish and aquatic plants can be seen clearly. There are three clear springs thicker than buckets in the center of the spring pool, which come up from the spring like boiling. They take risks day and night, always so clear and lively, as if they are never tired. Pavilions and pavilions are reflected in the water, forming a wonderful picture of people, fish and springs.

There are countless Koizumi eyes in the Pearl Spring next to them. They keep spitting out bubbles, like a string of pearls, as if a magic hand had lifted them to the surface.

The warm spring breeze brings happiness to people. People play and take photos in groups, praising Baotu Spring Park in this spring, and never go there for a long time.

How's it going? Are you excited? Then go and see for yourself!

My suggestion-400 words 9 "Spring is coming! Spring is coming! " With the cheers of the children, winter came to a successful end. The spring rain awakened everything. Willow grows new hair like a girl. The grass sticks its head out from the bottom of the soil and looks at everything on the earth. Spring bamboo shoots playfully drill out the soil and jack up the stones. Swallows flew back from the south and set foot on their homeland again. The little squirrel, who had slept all winter, poked its head out of the tree hole and winked at us.

What do you want to do in the season when everything is reviving? Climbing mountains, enjoying plum blossoms, going to parks, going to the suburbs ... Today, I will take you to Jiangjun Mountain to see the spring scenery.

Soon after entering General Mountain, there is a small lake around the whole General Mountain. You can clearly see the stones in the water in the clear lake. There are many weeping willows in the middle of the lake. The roots of weeping willows are covered with moss. Continue to travel in depth, you can see the rolling mountains lying on the earth like a green dragon. Soon, we will be in front of the maze bridge. The tall Metasequoia blocks the sun. Not a ray of sunshine can penetrate in. Looking at the bridge, gloomy and full of mystery. The bridge is only four meters wide, so I take every step carefully for fear of falling. Walking on such a small bridge is very exciting.

Who doesn't like a place like General Hill? After taking my advice, let's witness the beautiful scenery of General Mountain with our own eyes! Let's go!

My suggestion-400-word composition description Hu Pilan 10 In my home, there are many plants: lovely Clivia, elegant chlorophytum and tenacious cactus, but I recommend you the tough Hu Pilan.

One day, my mother took me to the flower market to buy flowers. I saw a pot of tiger orchid in the corner of the flower shop. I touched its smooth leaves and fell in love with it at once.

The leaves of Hupilan are about seven or eight centimeters wide and thirty centimeters long. From the middle of the leaves to the top, slowly harvest a small tip, four pieces in a circle. It is so tall and straight, like a soldier with his head held high, standing there motionless and dignified. The leaf margin of Hupilan is milky yellow, the leaves gradually change from light green to deep green, and there are some stripes on the tiger in the middle, which is very cute! When Hu Pilan blooms, clusters of pale green buds appear, and white buds dance among the flowers like elves, emitting a sweet smell and making people intoxicated.

I like Hupilan not only because of its beauty, but also because of its tenacious vitality. I remember one summer vacation, our family went out for a trip and didn't water the flowers for two weeks. By the time we came back, many flowers on the balcony had withered, and only Hupilan was still in full bloom.

Although Hu Pilan is small, its function is not small. Putting Hupilan at home can absorb formaldehyde at home, purify the air and reduce the harm to us.

After taking my advice, do you really want to raise a pot of tiger orchids? Then take my advice-plant it!

My suggestion-a 400-word composition describing Hu Pilan 1 1 Spring girl is walking towards us at a brisk pace. Don't think that Miss Chun just walks through orchards and fields. She works very hard. She has traveled all over the world.

I suggest you go for a walk in the park near my home. The scenery there is charming. There are beautiful flowers, green grass and swallows flying from the south. They all greeted Miss Chun happily. Sister Liu's hair has grown again. I wonder what secret magic weapon Miss Chun used to dye Miss Liu's hair? The birds are chirping, as if singing a nice song.

Next to it is a clear lake, like a mirror. The lake is crystal clear. Look, the fish in the water are swimming around happily. There is still a clearing by the lake, which I think may be a paradise for children. My friends and I often make plans to go there to play. Some jump rope, some play football, some play badminton, some play games ... Have fun.

Standing by the river and looking out, I saw a large sea of rape blossoms. The golden rape flowers are so beautiful that you can smell a faint fragrance when the wind blows! There is a peach tree and a pear tree on each side of the flower field, just like two sentries guarding rape flowers.

It is beautiful there. It's beautiful. I suggest that you must go, otherwise it would be a pity! Not much to say, I sincerely invite you to visit my community here.

My suggestion-a 400-word composition describing Hu Pilan 12 I seem to see Mr. Chun coming to us with light steps again. Her arrival revived everything on the earth, and it was a vibrant scene. I suggest you go to the Garden Expo Park to have a look and feel the nature. Moreover, the spring there is different and has a special feeling.

Last week, my parents and I went to the Garden Expo Park to play. We were all attracted by the scenery there and couldn't bear to leave.

As soon as I entered the door, I felt a warm spring breeze, blowing the willow tips green, leaving the cold, turning the grass green, wrinkling the river and blowing away the smiling faces of the children. In that garden, all kinds of flowers are blooming gradually, and they are all competing for beauty. Little Bud can't wait to poke her head out and look at this ever-changing world. Go further inside and you will come to a hill. There are some birds singing happily on the willow branches next to them, and the park is full of beautiful scenery. Grandpa Sun once again showed a kind smile and gave off a brilliant light. The children took off their heavy coats and are flying kites! "Wow, it's really high!" There are all kinds of kites floating in the sky, which is really a unique scenery.

Speaking of which, do you also feel the breath of spring? I suggest you go and see the beautiful scenery left behind. It's interesting to experience it yourself!

My suggestion-a 400-word composition describing Hu Pilan 13 I suggest going to Dashu Mountain to relax this spring.

Dashu Mountain is a tall and straight mountain. Now Dashu Mountain is surrounded by green. Every tree planted on Dashushan Mountain is tall and tall, lush and looks like a green triangle from a distance.

The scenery at the foot of Dashu Mountain is very beautiful. There is an artificially excavated pond at the foot of the mountain, which is crystal clear. The pond reflected blue sky and white clouds. The fish in the water chase and play, stop and wait, and the beauty is not very good. There is also a peach forest at the foot of Shushan Mountain, which is very beautiful. Seen from a distance, it looks like a cloud on the horizon. There is also a large dandelion under the peach tree. Dandelion has many white fluff balls. When the wind blows, dandelion dolls flutter with the wind. In front of Taolin and Dandelion, there is a neat row of willows. As soon as the wind blows, Miss Liu becomes a dancer, and together with peach trees and dandelions, she forms a beautiful picture.

Spring has come, and the grass has grown green buds, which are very soft. We sit on the grass, just like sitting on a green carpet, and we can clearly see the Dashu Mountain on the grass. It is like a makeup artist, wearing a light green coat in spring, a dark green T-shirt in summer, a golden coat in autumn and a white cotton-padded jacket in winter.

Do you all know the beauty of Dashu Mountain? I hope you find out for yourself.

My suggestion-Hu Pilan's composition 400 words 14 This spring outing, I suggest going to the scenic Cuihu Garden because-

Spring is the season when everything recovers: flowers are in full bloom; Green grass; Birds are singing on the branches. . . . . . Students must also want to throw themselves into the embrace of nature like birds, right? Then come with me to play in Cuihu Garden!

Entering the north gate of Cuihu Garden, the first thing you see is the bright red "three Chinese characters-Cuihu Garden" on a boulder, as well as rows of towering poplars, evergreen pines and cypresses and fiery maple trees. They each have their own postures, and some are like lively and naughty children winking and waving at you; Some elegant girls are dancing; Some are like dignified old people, smiling lovingly at children playing on the lawn.

Strolling through the Baihua Garden, you can enjoy those colorful irises, dancing up and down in the breeze, which is dazzling. You see, there are clusters of cannas here, just like groups of young women in the market, all dressed up and laughing all the way. Look, there is another piece that is all red, like red pepper, so red and so spicy!

After enjoying the beautiful scenery, you can rent a boat or an ocean ball and have fun. You can also go to the amusement park to be a happy little white rabbit, dancing ecstasy and being exhausted.

Students, after listening to my introduction, you must be tempted, right? Actions speak louder than actions. Take my advice as soon as possible and take the team flag to Cuihu Garden for a spring outing!

My suggestion-a 400-word composition describing Hu Pilan 15 who came to the world with light steps in spring. In this spring season, everyone definitely wants to go for a spring outing. Here I suggest you go to the ecological park to play.

The ecological park has charming scenery and beautiful environment. Spring girl came to revive everything, and the grass has sprouted and put on green clothes one by one. The ice in the river has melted, and the trees are lush and full of vitality. Some trees have beautiful buds, green and brown. Before long, these buds will bloom beautiful flowers, and the willow branches by the river have sprouted. Seeing these willow branches, I can't help thinking of He Liuzhong's poem "Jasper is as high as a tree, and thousands of strands of moss hang down". A breeze blew, and the willow branches swayed in the wind, like many Uighur girls dancing. The willow branches set each other off against the river, and the scenery is picturesque and unforgettable. The fish in the river stuck their heads out. It was also fascinated by the beautiful scenery. People don't hide in the water when they come.

In the sky, white clouds are floating in the sky, and the sky is like a curtain, which makes people fascinated. Occasionally a few swallows fall from the sky. Those swallows are actors in the curtain.

This ecological park not only has beautiful scenery, but also has a large area, where everyone can play, frolic and have a picnic. The ecological park is a place with very beautiful scenery and a good place for everyone to have a spring outing. I hope everyone can adopt my suggestion.