The facial description is 600 words.

1.600-word composition describes that a person's face is very attractive, although she is very small. Chubby little figure, walking like a heavy little penguin. On her little red face, there are a pair of crescent eyebrows, a vivid beauty blank. There are two big watery eyes hidden under long eyelashes, which often blink and blink, shining with pleasant light. Long hair is in the air, and pink hair bands jump on the head, like two flying butterflies. What is particularly pleasing is her clever little mouth, which is especially sweet, so that adults can serve her voluntarily.

Portrait description

Refers to a part or parts that describe a person's appearance (face, facial features), expression, body shape, clothing, posture, manner, etc. Use vivid and concrete language.

Portrait description does not require writing the whole picture, but focuses on expressing the character and highlighting the central idea of the article. Its function is not only to outline the external appearance of the characters, but also to convey the "spirit" by "shape", that is, to reveal the character through some external characteristics of the characters. It often focuses on characters' faces, figures and clothes to show their identity, demeanor, charm and expression.

Sample text

Indeed, Margaret is really a stunning woman.

She is a little tall and slim, but she has extraordinary talent. As long as she spends a little effort on clothes, she will cover up this negligence of nature. She wore a cashmere shawl that reached the ground, and the wide edge of the silk dress was exposed at both sides. The folds around her thick hand warmers close to her chest are very delicate, so no matter what critical eyes you use, the lines are blameless.

Her head is beautiful and a wonderful baby. It looks small and exquisite, just like Miao Sai said, as if it had been carefully rubbed by her mother.

There is an indescribable charm on a goose egg face, with two big black eyes embedded and two curved and slender eyebrows on it, just as pure as hand-painting. The eyes are covered with thick eyelashes, and when the eyes are lowered, a faint shadow is cast on the rosy cheeks; The playful little nose is exquisite and beautiful, and the nose is slightly bulging, like a strong desire for erotic life; A well-defined straight mouth, soft lips slightly open, revealing a tooth as white as milk; Skin color is like a sweater on a peach that has not been touched by human hands: these are the general impressions of this beautiful face.

Black jade hair, whether natural or combed, has wavy curls, which are combed into two locks on the forehead and dragged to the back of the head, revealing two earlobes, on which two diamond earrings each worth four or five thousand francs are flashing.

2. The 600-word scene description composition combining point and surface is very quiet late at night.

"DuDu, DuDu, DuDu." Three crisp whistles pierced the silence of the whole valley and woke me up from my dream. It's three! Emergency assembly! I'll pull the light rope. "Don't turn on the light!" I don't know where it came from Lights are not allowed to be turned on during emergency assembly.

At this moment, the barracks where we live can be "bombed". "Hey, where are my clothes?" "flashlight, take a picture!" "What time is it now? I haven't slept well! " "Don't bother, just three minutes!" ...... "Hey, come back, you are wearing my shoes!" "Hua!" "Is the bed broken?" "What are you shouting? I knocked over the washbasin! " ……

At this moment, I can't describe it too much with ants on hot bricks. I managed to piece together all my clothes at random, but I couldn't hit my backpack. My forehead is sweating. I broke it, I broke it, and I tossed it for two or three times, but I couldn't get it right. I panicked, and even my fingers were entangled. Finally, I simply gritted my teeth, "tied" the quilt and walked on my shoulder.

In the description of scenes, there must be more characters than one, with the description of characters as the mainstay and the scenes as the supplement. Scene description should serve the performance of the characters and highlight the center. Scene description can not be separated from scenery, psychological activities and language of characters.

3. I wrote 600 words on my wonderful side. I have always emphasized the independence of personality. I have a sky that belongs to me. He is a lonely persistence and ordinary firmness in my life, and a beauty that belongs only to me.

Once, because of the pressure of life, my brain was almost paralyzed. However, it awakened me from my thoughts, so I had the love of my life-literature. Maybe Wittstein is right. China people can never reach the center of thought and emotion, but only wander on the edge of thought and emotion. Yes, I can't describe his wonderful in words at all. But at least it pulled me from the edge of darkness to the bright world, holding up the starting point of my rebirth. He took me to see all the beautiful things in the world: sometimes playing on the Guo Hua Mountain where waterfalls fly down; Sometimes I live in Paul's road construction team and the environment is not good; Sometimes wandering among Liang Shanbo's heroes; Wandering in the grand view garden of emotional entanglements; Sometimes I think in the dark and humid Notre Dame de Paris ... He gave me a cool breeze and bright moon, he gave me mountains and waters, he gave me blue sea and clear sky, and he opened the boundary between me and nature.

Perhaps after reading all the wonderful things in the book, I matured a lot, and I began to face the helplessness and sadness in my life calmly. That's what I know. This is great. I learned to record my thoughts in words and send away my loneliness in words.

Indifference is my only expression, loneliness is my destiny in this life, I am an ice that refuses to melt, but I have melted into literature. He turned me into a butterfly in Zhuang Zhou's dream, dancing lightly and calmly; It is it that makes me a wild crane in the clouds among shepherds. You made my life simple, my thoughts filtered impurities, my mind returned to peace, and I retired to the countryside where "spring pigeons sang in the house and apricot flowers sang on the tree", but I felt that life was lighter than flowers, and I forgot all the insults.

His brilliance, like a phoenix tree after a drizzle, washed away the glitz and revealed the green. In the leisurely afternoon, in the sunset dusk, read with your eyes, read with your heart, and read endless wonderful literature.

4. Write the other person (composition) 600 words. My * * is * * *. She has curly hair and big bright eyes, like a lovely doll. She is a first-class model student in front of the teacher. Her math score was 100, and she won the first place in the whole grade of the Olympic math competition ... My mother always said, "Look how great your sister is!" " "Dad always said," Learn from your sister! ""And I always thought: Fortunately, she is my cousin. If we were born of the same parents, I would live in her shadow. She is a good girl in front of her family. When the guest comes, she will send a sweet smile, warm words and delicious food; When everyone is sitting around for dinner, she will give her grandparents a piece of fish, which will attract everyone's admiration. But I know there is another side to my sister.

First, she doesn't obey the rules of the game. Once, my sister and father and I played the game of signature stick. In the process of turning a triangle, my father successfully turned a big triangle. My sister was anxious and shouted, "Uncle, you did it!" Not counting! "Say, triangle deformation. Father smiled and said, "son, I won't play with you." "

Second, she is too overbearing. I play flying chess with her. I threw the number 6 and she said, "You can't play chess. 1 this number can be played. " As for her, no matter which number she throws, she can move the pieces. So, her chess pieces were unimpeded all the way, and my poor chess pieces stood still. She also said euphemistically, "Didn't your mother ask you to be a little lady?" I'll give you a chance to walk slowly, our little girl. "I stamped my foot and said," You are too overbearing and unreasonable. I'm not playing. "

Third, she can't afford to lose. We jumped rope, and I jumped twice more than her. Of course, I won. She said, "There are only two left. It should be a draw." I refused and said, "Why should I be tied to you? Obviously, I jump much more than you! " We had a fight about it. My sister's eyes were red and she cried and shouted, "I am your sister." How could I lose to you? "

This is my other side. It turns out that my sister also has some bad habits, such as cheating, forgetting things, crying and so on. I want to say to my sister, "We play games just to have fun. Let's make up! " ! It's okay to lose to me once in a while. It's normal. Don't always try to win! "

5. The composition of Lamian Noodles Wuhan 600-word Regan Noodles in Taiyuan, Shaanxi Province is well known. But as a native of Xiangfan, I think the beef noodles in Xiangfan are not inferior to Regan Noodles in Wuhan, just because the publicity is not enough and the reputation is not as good as the latter.

You can always see a long queue in front of the beef noodle restaurant on the street in the morning. The restaurant is very lively and packed, and some people even stand and eat noodles. Eat a bowl of spicy and delicious beef noodles, drink a steaming cup of soybean milk or rice wine, and have breakfast for less than half an hour. Diners will come on impulse and enjoy themselves. Use one word to describe the feeling of eating beef noodles: "Cool!" Hometown beef noodles are the favorite of hometown people.

I like beef noodles in my hometown best. I have been dealing with beef noodles since I learned to eat with chopsticks. I remember the first time my father took me to eat beef noodles. After I learned to mix noodles and beef evenly like an adult, I picked up ten or eight noodles with chopsticks and sent them to my mouth with a piece of beef. Eating spicy beef and noodles, I leaned down and ate a mouthful of noodle soup with butter. Spicy beef noodle soup * * * touched my every taste bud, and my lips were immediately flushed with spicy, so I immediately grabbed one side. Since then, I like beef noodles and peppers. My hometown beef noodles are rich in hemp, spicy and fragrant, which always increases my appetite and has endless aftertaste. As long as my father takes me to breakfast, I will order beef noodles. Beef noodles in my hometown grew up with me, and now I am a junior one student. Beef noodles are still my first choice for breakfast. After eating beef noodles, I feel refreshed, relaxed and efficient in class.

I remember the winter vacation in 2005, and our home was in Shanghai. Whenever I have breakfast, I can't help thinking of beef noodles in my hometown. I really can't get used to Shanghai rice noodles. Compared with the beef noodles in my hometown, the noodles in Shanghai look tasteless and can't hold my appetite. Later, when I was traveling in Guangzhou and Beijing, it was still like this. I still can't get used to the noodles in Guangzhou and Beijing, and I still want to go to my hometown beef noodles without hesitation. The beef noodles in my hometown are deeply rooted in my mind and unforgettable.

There are many people who like beef noodles in my hometown. As far as I know, my brother Ma Menglong, who was recommended to the Chinese University of Hong Kong by No.4 Middle School a few years ago, also likes to eat beef noodles in his hometown. He "missed" beef noodles when he was in Hong Kong, and he fell in love with beef noodles when he came home on holiday. From time to time, people in the newspaper published articles praising the beef noodles in their hometown.

As the saying goes: "One side of the soil and water will support one side." The soil and water in my hometown raised the children in my hometown. The beef noodles in my hometown are a symbol of my hometown and a fine product of my hometown. It is not only my favorite, but also the favorite of my hometown people.

With the improvement of people's living standards and the acceleration of reform and opening up, I firmly believe that the beef noodles in Xiangfan will definitely go out of Xiangfan and go to the whole country; Go abroad and go to the world.

6. A composition of 600 words describing the appearance of the characters. My classmates are all at the first grade level.

Look at her dark face, revealing an indomitable character, with a pair of glass ball-like eyes shining under her thick black eyebrows, carefully observing her opponent's every move, alert and flexible. The uneven outline outlines her unremitting pursuit of table tennis. Although she is short and not strong, she is still crazy about sports. Just like her shocking name-Thunderstorm Point, the thunder keeps coming!

Her opponent is now classmate Q. She lifts the table tennis board without weakness, shrugs habitually, twists her neck, squats professionally, raises her head slightly, reveals daunting eyes, and smiles and says softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal!

"Damn it!" She gritted her teeth, reached for the towel, wiped her sweat and threw it back.

"Boy, not bad!" She clenched the board, gently threw the ball into the air and lifted it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move.

She was annoyed and the sweat on her forehead was burning. She roared, her eyebrows sweated together, and the ball "brushed" and hit the opponent's key, and the opponent staggered back. Suddenly lost a goal!

7. About the ingredients of Lamian Noodles, 600 words. Just say Lanzhou beef noodles, which are famous all over the country. Gluten, soup is delicious, everyone applauds it, even foreigners with yellow hair and blue eyes are amazing. Today, I'm not going to talk about beef noodle restaurant. I want to talk about the unknown Lamian Noodles people in this beef noodle restaurant.

Lamian Noodles people have shown all the characteristics of Lanzhou men: rough but not savage, capable and enthusiastic. Dressed in white, standing in front of the cauldron, the cauldron is steaming, and a pair of powerful big hands wander in the white steam, blending flour and water. In a short time, flour becomes dough, and then it is kneaded continuously, and the dough is kneaded into various strange shapes. This dough is very obedient in Lamian Noodles's hands and is at his mercy. People in Lamian Noodles grabbed a handful of white flour and sprinkled it gently on the dough. Flour falls like snowflakes, like white catkins flying all over the sky in early spring, and like that pale white butterfly, it keeps falling on the surface.

Suddenly, these big hands grabbed both ends of the dough and pulled it hard, and the dough became thinner and thinner. These hands move back and forth flexibly, pulling and waving rhythmically. Dough began to dance wildly. At this time, Lamian Noodles people also became * * *. No matter how big his hands are, they are not clumsy, and his sensitive fingers pull the surface into filaments. The speed is getting faster and faster, such as strong winds, such as heavy rains, such as lightning ... In an instant, all the movements come to an abrupt end, and noodles as thin as hair slip from his hands and silently slip through his fingers. The whole process is amazing, amazing Lamian Noodles people's perfect skills, as attractive as a play.

Why is Lanzhou beef noodles so loud and loud? Because of the superb skills of Lamian Noodles people. Lamian Noodles people are highly skilled, and the noodles they pull out are naturally tough. From Lanzhou noodle people, I saw the brightness and sincerity of Lanzhou people!

About 8.600 words about the development goal, who is the pastry chef? That's my grandfather.

Grandpa is very good at making cakes, almost better than pastry chefs all over the world. However, as long as you give him a piece of dough, he can have whatever he wants. Grandpa likes to make spaghetti for me. He makes bread, Lamian Noodles and pizza. . . . . . Everyone is my favorite and often makes my mouth water. Thousands of feet, it makes people drool!

Every few months, grandpa will come from his hometown by bike for a few days. At this time, I will definitely not miss this good opportunity. I pestered grandpa to cook me a good meal. As soon as he heard that I was going to eat, he stood up without saying anything, rolled up his sleeves by hand, took out flour and a basin from the cupboard, dropped a bowl of water and a bag of flour, and skillfully closed the top strips. Grandpa first turned his hands in the basin and stirred the flour evenly. Then he rubbed the flour that had been soaked by water and turned into dough, patted it and made a "bang, bang, bang" sound. Then he picked up the dough and quickly cut the palm-sized dough with a knife. He said excitedly, "Grandpa made you bread, that's Lamian Noodles." "Great!" I cheered. I saw grandpa rub the dough into an oval shape, then put the dough on the chopping board, and then magically took out a ham sausage from his pocket and opened the package. Grandpa holds ham sausage in his right hand and a knife in his left hand, cutting ham sausage with a knife. Slices of ham are evenly spread on the oval bread. One hand holds the bread, and the other hand opens the oven and puts the bread in the oven. "1, 2, 3. . . . . . Stop! " It's time. Grandpa opens the oven, wraps the bread in a cloth, and then quickly puts it on the plate. I stared at the bread and my mouth watered. I was hungry before my grandfather mentioned it, so I ate it. I got the delicious bread right away and tasted it carefully. Grandpa smiled and said, "Is it delicious? There is also a bowl of Lamian Noodles! " I gave my grandfather a thumbs-up and said, "Yes! Skills have grown again. " "Thank you for your compliment." Then he turned and walked into the kitchen.

"Bang bang!" Applause rang out again in the kitchen. I can't wait to eat the Lamian Noodles my grandfather gave me. Ten minutes later, a bowl of hot Lamian Noodles served on the table. I have tasted it. It's really delicious. What a good pastry chef!

9. I have a strict father. He has a dark round face, dark and thick eyebrows, and big eyes, always pulling a face.

Today, last week's math exam was finished. I got 98 points, ranking first in my class. I'm so happy. On the way home, I was humming a ditty and skipping, thinking: Dad will definitely praise me and give me some rewards!

When I got home, I found my father was happy today, too. He put his hands behind his back, closed his eyes, shook his head and walked around the room. It turns out that my aunt is coming back from Beijing today.

I happily took out the paper from my schoolbag, held it high, waved it in the air, strode to my father and proudly said, "I won the first place in my class, didn't I?" After that, I handed the paper to my father. See dad stare big eyes, scanning the paper. Suddenly, my father found that I had missed the question, and immediately: "sunny" turned "cloudy", my face was covered with "dark clouds", my brow was frowning, and my eyes were like swords. My father pointed at me and asked sharply, "How could I miss the question?" Otherwise, it is 100! "I lowered my head and dared not say anything. Tears swirled in my eyes. My whole body is nervous, my mind is blank, and I feel that a storm is coming.

I said hesitantly, "I ... because ...". Dad's face is even uglier, and his eyebrows stand in an inverted figure of eight, as if two swords were inserted in his face. My heart is pounding like a rabbit, and my heart seems to jump out of my throat. "Stop it, you really shouldn't! That's careless. Can't you be more careful? Ah? " Dad went on to say, "If you go on like this, you will suffer big losses in the future!" " "Dad asked me never to make such a mistake again.

I'm ashamed. My face turned red. I think my father is right. I will never be careless again. I think: Dad is very strict with me, but he is actually very kind to me. I shouldn't make excuses.

10. My classmate's portrait description 600-word composition A successful portrait description of a boy is a key to understanding the characters and a window to see through their inner world.

There are many successful examples in middle school Chinese textbooks: A Q's old felt hat, Kong Yiji's tattered gown, Zhao's smooth and shiny big braid, and Xianglinsao's occasional eyes, all of which show their identity, personality and life experience. However, it is difficult for middle school students to learn the essence from it in their writing, and often they can neither "draw its shape" nor "vividly".

Then, how to make a brief outline to make the characters vividly presented to the readers; Meticulous description can show the spirit of the characters incisively and vividly, and achieve both form and spirit. This paper intends to make a superficial attempt from four aspects. First, carefully observe and grasp its "shape" and "there are no two identical leaves in the world". Portrait description of people can't be based on subjective imagination, so that thousands of people have one side and lack individuality.

We should carefully observe the appearance of the characters and grasp the characteristics. Objective things are inherently different and never the same.

However, many students often do not observe carefully when describing portraits, but pick up the wisdom of others and paraphrase what others say at will. Children are sweet dimples, young men are handsome, young women are slim, and old people with white hair are aging.

Is this good? There is no denying that a certain kind of characters have their own innate characteristics: from the age point of view, babies, children, teenagers, young people, middle-aged people and the elderly have their own characteristics; Physiologically, men, women and other age-related physiological characteristics also have their own characteristics; Judging from the identity, occupation, status, situation and race of the characters, they will also show some similar or even identical external characteristics. However, even in the same occupation, gender and age, they will never be exactly the same, and there will always be different external characteristics from others, even between twin brothers.

Therefore, when describing portraits, we must grasp the external characteristics of the characters in order to highlight the personality in * * *. For example, "... the biology teacher came into our classroom.

He is about thirty-four or five years old, chubby, with dark red skin, a Chinese face and a pair of gold-rimmed glasses on his high nose. Eyes through round lenses looked at us kindly.

Hong Zhong lost his voice and said,' I'll teach you biology in senior three ... I hope we can cooperate happily. ..... "This passage closely describes the portrait of the biology teacher's figure, skin color, face shape, nose bridge, glasses and other characteristics, so that the characters are clearly presented to the readers.

Second, it is really difficult to understand and perceive its "spirit" and "draw a dragon and a tiger but not a bone". The description of the biology teacher above captures the external characteristics of the characters.

Seriously, this is the minimum requirement for portrait description. Some people call it "authentic".

In fact, just doing this is not enough. If we make a thorough analysis of this description, we will find that practitioners are basically a kind of "camera" static description, and it is difficult to see their inner character, quality, experience and rich inner world through the external forms of characters.

Painting should draw the "bones" of dragons and tigers. In the third episode of A Dream of Red Mansions, Lin Daiyu enters Jia Fu, the author's description of Wang Xifeng not only depicts the appearance characteristics of the characters, but also reveals their personality characteristics and spiritual world.

The portrait description of Wang Xifeng includes two aspects: clothing and appearance. In terms of clothing, the author tries to explain Wang Xifeng's clothing with pearls and jewels, implying her greed and vulgarity, and reflecting the emptiness of her inner world from the side.

In the aspect of appearance, we focus on her "triangle eyes", "hanging eyebrow", "pink face" and "red lips", which fully shows her subtlety, cunning, good at changing machines and duplicity hidden under her beautiful appearance. Of course, if you want to improve this ability, it is not a matter of time. Usually, we should carefully observe and analyze the characters from the outside to the inside, grasp their personality characteristics and spiritual world, and "externalize" their costumes and expressions.

Third, the use of "rhetoric" to vividly reproduce the appearance of characters must be properly used, especially the use of figurative rhetoric. The above description of Wang Xifeng's portrait is a successful example of rhetorical application.

On the basis of carefully observing and grasping the external characteristics of characters, the application of figurative rhetoric must reasonably imagine and choose appropriate vehicles; Otherwise, the characters will be distorted or even deformed. For example, "... he has a pair of eagle eyes, can see through everything, look for prey, and make his classmates afraid."

He has wolf ears and knows all the gossip in the Jianghu like the back of his hand. Then it will be processed and tempered, which will become the capital for him to brag in class. In addition, he has a strong trunk like a bear, walks majestically and swaggering, and always finds people "one-on-one".

Go out to practice singing before going to bed, and sometimes you can hear his thunderous voice in the middle of the night. I can really write him into Diary of a Madman ... "This passage is very strange in imagination, but the use of metaphor and rhetoric is not appropriate. It is even a bit insane to describe the teacher as a hooligan.

If you add a hat, fancy clothes and a short dagger, won't it become a typical local ruffian? In fact, this teacher is very strong, sharp-eyed, with wide interests, rich knowledge and lively enthusiasm. Trainers seem to be able to capture some features, but the portraits written are seriously inaccurate, losing the foundation of life and characters, and there is also a serious deviation in color sense.

To overcome this situation, we must carefully observe, grasp the internal and external characteristics, reasonably imagine, carefully choose vehicles, and pay attention to the sense of color. If you are sympathetic and praising people, you will often choose something beautiful, precious and colorful as a metaphor; Derogatory, disgusting, often exaggerated, ugly, deformed, derogatory things as a metaphor.

Proper use of figurative rhetoric is an extremely effective way to "draw its shape" and "convey its spirit". Fourth, avoid fussy, "dynamic" portrait description, whether to achieve both form and spirit.

Can't speak words, can't speak.