Teaching Design of "Back"

? "Back" is the first lesson in Unit 4 of the first volume of Grade 8, and the fourth unit is a prose unit. Choose prose "Back", prose "Praise of Poplar", argumentative essay (philosophical prose) "Why am I alive" and lyric prose "Rain in Kunming".

? The reference materials provided by teachers' teaching books of People's Education Publishing House are: 1. Perceive the image of father, especially the image of "back", and experience the deep affection between father and son. 2. Grasp the change of the emotional attitude of "I" in the text and deeply understand the article. 3. Think about why the text is centered on "Hui" and understand the narrative style of the article. The advantage of the text is centered on the father's "back": from the content, the author regards "back" as the symbolic point of father's love, the intersection of father and son's love, and the starting point of improving father-son relationship; Structurally, "Hui" is the clue of narration, the entry point of expression and the turning point of emotional change of "I". ) 4. Taste the unique language of the text.

? I feel that these learning goals can be concentrated on the third item, "Understanding the benefits of the text centered on' back'".

? Learning activity design

? Read the text and experience "reciting"

? First, read the text for the first time. (Look at the back first and sort out the clues)

? This is a short article about writing people's notes. Who to write and what to remember?

In the article, I wrote "the back" several times. When is "coming back"?

? Summary: "Hui" is the clue of the narrative of the article.

? Second, read the text again. (Rereading the text and realizing fatherly love)

? This is an essay about people's notes, written by their father. Talk about your understanding of the father image in the article with specific plot sentences.

? For example?

? "My father has decided not to send me because he is busy, and invited a familiar waiter in the hotel to accompany me. He repeatedly told the waiter to be very careful. But he finally worried that the waiter was not suitable; I hesitated for a moment. In fact, I was twenty years old that year, and I have traveled to and from Beijing two or three times, so it doesn't matter. He hesitated for a while and finally decided to send me himself. "

? This is an indecisive father.

? "He gave me a chair by the door; I paved the seat with the purple coat he made for me. He told me to be careful on the road, to be alert at night and not to catch a cold. I also asked the waiter to take good care of me. "

? This is a father who is a little wordy.

? My heart did Sarah laugh at his pedantry; They only know money, they just ask for it! Can't people my age take care of themselves? "

This is a somewhat pedantic father.

I repeatedly advised him not to go; He just said, "Never mind, they can't walk well!" I always want to do more for my children.

After a while, he said, "I'm leaving. Write it there! " "I am worried about the safety of my son's journey. The children who leave home always hold my father's heart.

? ……

? At that time, the author also felt that his father was a little pedantic and not beautiful enough, but he couldn't help crying when he saw the back of his father climbing over the railway to buy oranges for himself. As the saying goes, men don't cry lightly, but they haven't reached the sad place yet. The author should also be a tearful person, but he hasn't reached the emotional place yet. This "Hui" is the turning point of the author's emotion. Let's take a closer look at the sentence describing "back" in the article and analyze why it can impress the author and countless readers.

? (Read aloud)

? "My dad is a fat man, and it will take some effort to walk over. I was going to go, but he refused, so I had to let him go. It was not difficult to see him limping to the railway and leaning down slowly, wearing a small black hat, a big black jacket and a dark blue cotton robe. But it is not easy for him to climb the platform over there when he crosses the railway. He climbed up with both hands, and his feet shrank again; His fat body leans slightly to the left, which shows his efforts. "

? Talk about your understanding in specific words.

? Example: "My father is a fat man, and ... he stumbled towards the railway."

? The bloated posture, inconvenient clothes and stumbling steps all make it difficult to board the platform.

"He climbed up with his hands, and his feet shrank again; His fat body leans slightly to the left, which shows his efforts. "

? Climbing describes the height of Yuetai and the difficulty of my father climbing it. The difficulty and danger of climbing the platform.

? Father's clothes are "little black hat", "big black jacket, dark blue cotton robe", and he wears a "purple coat" for his son.

? Zhu Guohua, Zhu Ziqing's younger brother, has the following account in the article Zhu Ziqing and the Back:

? "19 16, my family's situation is getting worse. My father did his best to organize a marriage for Zi Qing with dignity and sent him to Peking University to study. Since Qing left his newly married wife and elderly parents to go north alone, not long after, his father's position as director of public sales was handed over, and his old man specifically told me: Don't write to tell Big Brother these trivial things, lest he be distracted from his studies. However, eldest brother already knows the decline of his family. At that time, Peking University students had to study for two years before they could apply for undergraduate courses. Since the Qing dynasty, in order to finish his studies as soon as possible and reduce his father's burden, he would "educate himself"? Change it to' self-cleaning'? I entered the undergraduate examination room one year in advance, saving one year of preparatory course.

? "Almost at the same time, a series of changes have taken place in the family. My grandmother died, and my second brother is about to graduate from high school. It will cost a lot of money to get into college. My father managed to sell some property, borrowed some usury in Yangzhou and gave my grandmother a funeral. However, the second brother's wish to go to Jiao Tong University is no longer realized. My second brother got excellent grades and volunteered to apply for the Department of Electrical Engineering of Shanghai Jiaotong University. My father didn't agree anyway, on the grounds that his family couldn't afford the tuition, and suggested that he apply for Nanjing Normal University, because this school didn't want tuition or meals. Wuhua was very dissatisfied, but she was helpless. At this moment, Ziqing received the bad news of her grandmother's death and returned to Yangzhou with her father. Zi Qing really felt the desolation of the family: his father's errand was paid, and all funeral expenses depended on borrowing money to sell pawns; There are only a few Qing Dynasty calligraphy and painting and a bamboo curtain left in the drawing room. The huge ancient clock, scarlet bottle, Jasper Ruyi and Banqiao handwriting have already entered the pawnshop, and the courtyard is full of dead branches and leaves, which is a scene of depression. ……"

? Understand Zhu Ziqing's father's preference for his eldest son Zhu Ziqing. In a depressed family, he gave his son all his best things.

? This hard and faltering "back" is the embodiment of father's love and concentration, and it is the silent confession of father's love.

This cohesion of fatherly love deeply touched the author. It can be seen that "The Back" is the turning point of the author's emotion and the symbolic point of fatherly love.

Third, read the text. (Read the text three times and taste the emotion)

? Read the text (pay special attention to the seventh paragraph of the text). How do you interpret the author's feelings for his father in specific sentences?

? The story behind

? 19 15, Zhu Ziqing's father arranged cigarettes for Zhu Ziqing's wedding, and Zhu Ziqing naturally complained, which caused the estrangement between father and son.

? 19 16. After Zhu Ziqing went to Peking University, he changed' Zhu Zihua' to' Zhu Ziqing' on his own initiative. His father was very angry when he learned about it.

? 19 17 years, my father lost his job, my grandmother died, and my family was in trouble. And Zhu Ziqing's second brother is about to drop out of school. The story in "Back" happened in this year.

? 192 1, Zhu Ziqing graduated from Peking University and joined the work. His father privately detained Zhu Ziqing's salary to ease the family's economic tension, and the contradiction between father and son was fierce, so Zhu Ziqing left home.

? 1922, Zhu Ziqing took his son home, but his father wouldn't let him in, so he had to leave disappointed.

? 1922, Zhu Ziqing went home again, but his father ignored him. Father and son began the cold war for many years.

? 1925, Zhu Ziqing's father wrote a letter to his son, telling him that "the period of running away is not over yet", and Zhu Ziqing finished "The Back" with tears.

? 1928, Zhu Ziqing's father looked back, and the father and son thawed in the cold war.

1945, Zhu Ziqing's father died.

? "Now that I think about it, I was too smart." (I couldn't understand my father's remorse at that time)

In recent years, my father and I have been running around, and the situation at home is getting worse and worse. When he was a teenager, he went out to make a living, made his own living and did many great things. I didn't know the original environment was so depressing! (Sad, sympathetic) He was so sad that he couldn't control himself. If you are depressed in the middle, it is natural to send it out (understand); Family trifles often touch his anger. He treats me differently. But I haven't seen him for the last two years. He finally forgot my shortcomings and only thought about me and his son (grateful). After I came to the north, he wrote me a letter, which said: "I am in good health, but my arm hurts badly." It's not convenient to pick up a pen, so my departure time is not far away. " After reading this, in the crystal tears, I saw the back of that fat, blue cotton gown and black mandarin jacket (moved). Alas! I don't know when I can see him again! (missing)

? It can be seen that the back is the trigger point to improve the relationship between father and son.

? Summary: "Hui" is the clue of narration, the breakthrough point of expression and the turning point of "I" emotional change. Hui is the symbolic point of father's love, the intersection of father and son's affection, and the starting point of improving father-son relationship. (writing: seeing the big from the small)

? Compare two details of the plate, product language

This paper discusses the differences in language styles between Zhu Ziqing's Spring and The Back with specific sentences.