Sentences describing birthday scenes

Birthday

Cheng Xiaowei, Class 504, Jixi County Experimental Primary School, Xuancheng City, Anhui Province

"Wow, what a beautiful cake!" As soon as he opened the lid of the box, A two-layer cake appeared in front of me: the bottom layer was a circle of lavender lace, like beautiful ripples, and the upper layer was lined with three pink flowers, which were so delicate and delicate. A snow-white rooster crowed, and next to it " The four words "Happy Birthday" sparkle with joy. "Weiwei, are you satisfied?" Mom stepped forward and asked. "It's great, Mom!" Looking at this exquisite cake, a warm feeling of happiness spread throughout my body. "Little birthday boy, light the candles and make a wish." "Okay!" I carefully inserted the twelve candles one by one, and as soon as the light red flame rose, "I wish you a happy birthday,... ..." Grandpa took the lead in singing while clapping his hands, and grandma's off-key voice seemed particularly joyful. Amidst the blessings of my relatives, I silently made three beautiful wishes.

"Grandma, grandpa, dad and mom eat cake", pieces of delicious cake were distributed to them. Grandpa and grandma ate very carefully. They gently picked up the cream with a small spoon and tasted it slowly. "Grandma, was the cake you made when you were a child as delicious as this?" I asked while licking the cream on my lips. "Cake? Alas, there was no cake at that time! Children from poor families didn't even have enough to eat, and they didn't even know what was going on on their birthdays!" Grandma's eyes became moist when she talked about her bitter childhood.

"How could this happen?" With confusion, I turned my eyes to my mother standing aside: "Mom, do you know about birthdays?" She gently stroked my head : "I know! That was the happiest day of the year for my mother. Grandma cooked a full bowl of noodles for her, with two hot poached eggs on top. They were white and tender, and it made people drool! That's it! One day, my aunt, my aunt, and my uncle all competed with my mother to eat." My mother's voice became hoarse, and I couldn't help but stop holding the spoon in my hand.

"Eat the food quickly. The food is already cold just by talking." Dad took the lead and extended his chopsticks to the dish. "Yes, eat it quickly!" "Weiwei, it's all what you like, so Eat some." A kind smile appeared on grandma's face again. The family was immersed in a joyful atmosphere.

Coming out of my grandpa’s house, I was savoring the delicious food and cakes and strolling on the street, with the breeze blowing gently. The lively dance music sounded again in Sunshine Plaza. Looking at the happy pairs of grandparents, uncles and aunts, and seeing their beautiful dancing postures, I couldn’t help but think: Grandma and mother’s childhood has become a thing of the past, and now everyone is gradually moving forward If we are on the road to prosperity, people's lives will be happier in the future! It’s true that one generation is better than another.

Instructor: Zhang Zhongze

Brief comment: "Celebrating a birthday" is the happiest thing for a child. The author of this article chose the typical example of "celebrating a birthday" to take a close-up shot. The form reproduces the happy scene of "birthday", and then leads to the different birthdays of grandma and mother from "eating cake", reflecting the different destinies of three generations, which is the epitome of the life of our people. The article reflects the warmth and joy of the well-off life of the Chinese people in the peaceful years, and praises the tremendous changes brought about by reform and opening up to the people. The language is vivid, the levels are clear, and the narrative and discussion are combined. The discussion at the end deepens the center and is the finishing touch.