How about the novel "The Sword Comes"?

The feeling of writing with a sword is anticlimactic, and the beginning is amazing. Other first-time writers have impressed everyone's image. In the middle period, Shuhu has been reasoning, but telling stories for a long time.

When it comes to the Great Wall War, there is no such thing as an imaginary big scene. The wars in the world are written like a running account, and a new character is opened in a chapter. When you run out, you throw it away inexplicably, and readers will feel very confused. The characters have no characteristics, and none of them are remembered.

The description of emotional lines is also not ideal. The affection between Yao Ning and Ping-an Chen doesn't need much space to describe, and they inexplicably feel in love. When this person is more suitable, it is best to show milk. He has deeper feelings for Liang Xiao and Chen Ping-an than Yao Ning. It seems to be an emotional drama that pushes the plot, which can't attract readers and make readers unable to sing.

Extended data:

The sword is coming is an online novel serialized on the Chinese website. The author is a war drama warlord.

Introduction to the story:

In the pure land of the west, there is an old monk who likes telling stories. He has nine dragons. In the wild southern Xinjiang, there was once a blind painter, driving a puppet with shining armor as high as the mountain, moving 100 thousand mountains and spreading a splendid picture.

A poor boy who grew up in the north, when one day he saw a thousand immortals with swords overhead, such as locusts crossing the border. He just wants to have a look with his own eyes, and the scholar mentioned by Mr. Storyteller, the monstrous tide in the East China Sea, the yellow sand in the west, Wan Li and the towering mountains in the south. So, one day, the boy picked up wood blade and walked south.

About the author:

Chen Zhenghua, the warlord of the bonfire party. 1986 1 1.8 was born in Chun 'an County, Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province. China Internet Writers Rich List, Popular Writers, China Internet Columnist, New Generation Popular Writers of Online Novels. Masterpieces: Ruyi Gongzi, Chen's Demon Life, Falling from the Sky, Walking in the Snow with a Fierce Knife, Lao Zi is a Toad, etc.