Talk about how the revised sentence is better than the original sentence.

1. Follow your heart and write your own. It's easy to follow your heart.

Momentum and reading aloud are better than unintentionally.

2. The military situation in the snow is more urgent. At this time, the link to history is the Red Army's Long March, which shows the Red Army's determination not to be afraid of difficult expeditions and its ambition to fight against difficulties. Compared with the snow scene without green willows, it highlights endless pride.

Affection is more urgent-this artistic conception word echoes the sky in front of us. The first half of the sentence is a pun, which not only means that the marching environment is bad, but also symbolizes the horror and evil of war. Wubai's understanding refers to the marching environment unilaterally, but the artistic conception of the original belt is more profound and psychological with the emotion and pressure of "more pressure", which really reaches the goal of alluding to the white sky. There were many such sentences in that era.

3. Pool-free and unrestrained