Sixth grade unit 1 composition

In daily study, work or life, everyone will inevitably come into contact with writing. Writing is an important means to cultivate people's observation, association, imagination, thinking and memory. Do you know how to write a good composition? The following is the composition of Unit 1 10 in Grade 6 that I collected for you, for reference only, and I hope it will help you.

Unit 1 Composition of Grade 6 1 Stay away from the hustle and bustle of the city, return to nature and listen to her wonderful voice!

"Sand-sand-"This is the sound of the wind blowing through the leaves. Naughty brother Feng has been staying on uncle's head, singing and playing with him. "Gigi-Jichao-"Who's with you? It was a lark. She is a famous singer in the forest. She is singing with a big tree, as if she were having a concert. "DuDu-DuDu-"Woodpeckers are playing drums wholeheartedly! With her help, the concert is more handy! There are all kinds of nameless insects, trying to enter this world with songs, singing with them and enjoying happiness together.

Go to the pond and listen to the voice: "Quack-quack-"Listen, how happy the frogs in the pond are. It seems that they are having a concert! "Know-know-"Know seems to want to join this team, but he is a big fan of frogs. "Ding Dong-Ding Dong-"is the voice of Xishui girl, who is playing beautiful music with frogs. "Gung, gung-"The frog rang again, wave after wave. "There is a bumper harvest in the fragrance of rice and flowers, listening to frogs." They are singing the harvest year!

Go to the field and listen to the voice: "Hum-hum-"This is the sound of bees working hard in the field. "Crack-crack-"This is the sound of the pod cracking. "Ding Dong-Ding Dong-"This is the sound of water dripping on leaves in a puddle after an autumn rain.

Listen! This is the voice of nature. Listen! What a beautiful voice!

In order to find the material for the composition, my parents specially took my brother and me to Hengdian, and we might meet stars or something. Thought of here, my heart is full of joy. No, we bought the tickets and rushed in.

At this time, there are a few car rental people on the side, that is, sitting in one or two rows, with two or four pairs of pedals, which feels like riding a bicycle. At this time, dad generously rented the land. My family of four got on the bus and started a trip to Hengdian Qingming Riverside Map: Mom, is there a crew filming today? Today is the sixth day of the National Day holiday, and it is raining again. No one should shoot, someone should do odd jobs. As soon as my voice fell, my kindness turned into unhappiness. At this moment, I heard the sound of a hammer, and I began to be curious. We took a bus. Ah, it turns out that someone is really working, and my mother didn't lie to me. Opposite, I saw a palace with three doors. I got off the bus and walked into the gate: huh? I seem to have seen this scene somewhere. I seem to have traveled to ancient times in an instant and become a maid of honor. Please take a picture of me! Only then did I realize that I had to pick up my mobile phone and help my mother miss it. I wonder what's in this house. But these doors are locked, so I can only look out through the crack. It turns out that they are empty. According to my mother, all the furniture in the Kung Fu drama here is going to be demolished after filming, which makes me so disappointed!

Then, we came to the execution ground. When I walked in, I seemed to be at the door of life and death. I also seemed to see the blood on the ground, even the railings were red, which suddenly startled me.

This trip to Hengdian Qingming Riverside Map is really good!

Unit 1 The voice of nature is sweet. The voice of nature is rough; The sound of nature is sometimes mixed with a little childishness.

When I was a child, during the summer vacation, my father took me to my grandmother's house in the countryside for the summer. There is a stream with small fish. But I don't care so much. I stepped into the stream and stepped on the water, making a "snapping" sound. Under the setting sun and a little silver light, this is the happy laughter that nature is playing with me happily!

In winter, my family and I sit around the sofa and watch TV. There is a warm picture in the room, but the sound of the cold wind whistling outside. This is the voice of nature with "anger".

Qingquan sings and runs day and night. That voice seems to be a response to the singing of water and wind, as if it were a gentle argument between water and stone, as if it were self-absorption and silence of water, and as if it were telling many stories.

Naughty wind sits on the branches of tall green trees and dances gracefully with the leaves. Her voice is sweet and beautiful. Sing a beautiful little song with delicate green leaves. "shalala, shalala ..." Birds sing, insects sing.

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Nature is like a child, what an elusive child!

The beauty of nature intoxicated us. The sound of nature is a beautiful and wonderful melody.

The voice of nature is "rumble! Vigorous! " Loud noises spread all over nature. Every corner, a dazzling and amazing lightning seems to open a crack in the sky, followed by a deafening noise. The bird fled home in fear, and the frog stopped croaking, jumped into the pond, covered his ears, and lightning spread all over the world without restraint.

With thunderous lightning, the rain came quietly. One drop, two drops, and then it began to rain cats and dogs. The rain sounded in my ear: "Bang, bang-ding-dong." Falling in different places sounds different, like a rhythmic symphony.

With lightning and rain, there was a strong wind, and the cool wind dispersed the dark clouds. Gradually, the rain stopped and the wind stopped roaring. A beautiful rainbow appeared in the sky, red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple, and a beautiful rainbow bridge was painted.

The sunshine came out, the flowers smiled and the grass swayed with the wind. From time to time, there were animal voices: dogs barking, cats meowing, frogs croaking ... children laughed while playing with water.

The sound of nature is so beautiful, let's feel it with our hearts!

Unit 1 of Grade 6 Composition 5 Go into nature, let's listen to its voice and record its beauty!

Everything in nature is a good friend of mankind. When we enter nature, there are good friends everywhere. Hello, Dashu, your swaying posture reminds me of the beautiful dance on the stage; Hello, grass, is your bent body saying hello to me? Hello, butterfly, your beautiful wings are the most beautiful clothes I have ever seen; Hello, bee, you must be the most diligent porter in the insect world, with honey in your hand. Hello, ant, you are really a Popeye. hello ...

Sitting on the side of the road, walking through the grass. Wow, this is really an insect world!

Crickets crawl comfortably on the rocks, as if enjoying the sunshine. A pair of small beetles chased each other in the bushes, as if to say, "Come on! Come on! Come after me! " Several crickets form a circle, as if talking about something interesting. There are many unknown insects gathered together to sing loudly, like a band playing wonderful music. I quietly looked at this wonderful insect world, how I wanted to become an insect and play with them.

Go into nature, get close to nature, here is another world! This is a wonderful lesson! You will find many interesting and beautiful things here, and you will feel relaxed and happy here. Let's listen with our ears, appreciate with our eyes and feel this beautiful nature with our hearts!

Unit 1, Grade 6 Composition 6 Nature is ever-changing, and there are many spectacular or small things, among which running water, waterfalls and oceans are one.

The stream formed by melting snow on the iceberg flows down the steep slope and becomes a trickle. People are happy to catch small fish and shrimp on him. Following the current, he came to various places. He wetted the land on the road, which brought people a lot of joy and made people feel cool. The road was very bumpy and was blocked by rocks and trees. But don't give up and work hard for a farther goal.

Everyone knows the waterfall very well. It is magnificent and powerful. At close range, you will feel a biting cold, like the water of Tianhe, rolling in, which makes people can't help reciting the poem "Looking at Lushan Waterfall" by the famous poet Li Bai, "It's doubtful that the Milky Way will set for nine days".

Waterfalls are not born like this. The waterfall seems to be a faucet. The water in the tap came from other places. Once there is no water in that place, the faucet will naturally come out. So is the waterfall. Its grandeur is only integrated by collecting water from many places. In this spectacular situation, it is the river that has experienced many difficulties and hardships. After a moment of excitement, it flies away and rushes to the sea to reach a wider world.

The vast ocean surrounds many islands, and people can't help but explore his mystery. In his arms, in addition to the island, there are all kinds of marine animals and plants, which are amazing. Behind the vast ocean, he made more efforts, from the ice water in the snow-capped mountains to a trickle, to a surging river, and finally came here from all directions and merged into the sea. What these efforts finally get is beautiful natural scenery.

Behind the beautiful scenery of running water, waterfalls and oceans is the reward of their unremitting efforts. Isn't it the same in life?

The sound world in nature is so rich and charming! Sound is the enjoyment of the world, and the sound of nature is even more intoxicating. Let's calm down, listen carefully to those wonderful voices and see another wonderful world!

Boom! Was it that naughty boy who woke Grandpa Lei? Grandfather Lei yawned, scaring away all the birds singing in the tree and flying to another tree to accompany him. Spring is really beautiful. The brook "Ding Dong Ding Dong" seems to be singing for the industrious little bee, and the bee buzzes as if to say, "Let's start! Hurry up and work! " Many bees pour out the beauty of spring when they start working. Butterflies see that bees are so hardworking. They used to cheer for bees and dance for them. Everything moves in spring. They are alive and thoughtful. Look, the birds are talking to the trees about the beautiful scenery they saw in the flight. The stream is flowing happily, and bees and butterflies are dancing among the flowers. What a touching melody, what a unique and wonderful world, which makes people feel relaxed and happy. They dedicate wonderful songs to human beings and themselves.

With the rustling of leaves, I reluctantly bid farewell to the music conference. The sound world is really colorful and changeable!

During the holiday, my parents and I went to Jianchuan and saw many lion stone carvings.

As soon as I entered the gate, two monuments attracted my attention! When I saw it, it turned out to be the best in Shanghai Guinness! I looked at it carefully, only to know that it is the largest stone lion (the lion king) and the scenic spot with the most carved stone lions (more than 3,200 * *). I think, since it is the lion king, it must be very powerful. I have to go and have a look.

We began to climb the mountain. There are two magnificent stone lions squatting at the foot of the mountain, which makes people feel refreshed. The stone steps are steep and difficult to walk. But I was bent on seeing the lion king, so I rushed forward desperately and dumped my parents a lot. In a short time, we arrived at Thousand Lions Square. This square can be said to be the stone square with the largest number of carved lions in the world. The stone workshop carved more than 1000 lions from the top of the workshop, the bucket arch, the tile, the dripping water, the sparrow replacement, the hanging workshop and the drum to the base, which was lifelike. They come in different shapes: some roll hydrangeas; Some double lions play with flowers; Some people lie quietly and meditate; Some looked up, as if worshiping the lion king at the top of the mountain; There is also a lioness holding a little lion whispering ... among them, I think the most interesting lion statue is a family portrait, also called perfection: there are kind parents; Playful brother and sister; Brother and sister with hydrangeas on their feet ... but when I counted, there were only nine lions. Supposedly there should be ten. Finally, the careful father found that there was a naughty little lion hidden under his mother's stomach.

I also saw the Millennium Cooper. That tree is more than eighty meters high! It is said that a long time ago, someone secretly came to cut down this cypress tree, but when it was cut to two thirds, suddenly there was lightning and thunder, and sparks appeared on the axe. The man was terrified and died on the spot. After that, no one dared to hit a tree again. Although only one third of its roots are left, it is still growing vigorously.

We walked about 800 meters, and a huge stone loomed out of the tree-lined trees and caught my eye. I guessed it might be the lion king, so I couldn't help speeding up my steps. Soon we saw the lion king. It sits on the top of the mountain and looks at Jianchuan Dam. The Lion King was carved by a Koishiyama on site, and it took 100 years for more than two Jianchuan stone carvers to complete it! This lion king is 25m high,18m long and12m wide. It is the largest stone lion in the world at present! Its open mouth allows several adult men to stand inside, its curly mane adds heroic spirit, and its bright eyes make the lion king look domineering. Standing at the foot of the lion king overlooking Qianshi Mountain, I feel respected. How many Bai stone carvers spent several years, relying on stone masonry and meticulous carving, to achieve today's Qianshi Mountain!

Speaking of stone lions, we all think of the two-part allegorical saying, "There are countless lions in Lugouqiao." Everyone thinks that Lugou Bridge is the place with the most stone lions. Actually, it is not. After reading the Qianshi Mountain written by the author, you will find that Qianshi Mountain in Jianchuan County, Dali Prefecture, Yunnan Province is the real stone lion kingdom! The little author describes the key scenery in detail, and the stone lions in his works are lifelike, all of which come from careful observation. Describing the shapes of many stone lions, the parallelism sentence of "some … some … some … some … others …" is applied. Seeing a family photo called "Perfect", I couldn't help looking for it, full of childlike interest. When introducing The Lion King, he also used the methods of figures and comparison to illustrate the greatness of The Lion King.

The composition teaching in the first unit of grade six is an indispensable part of Chinese teaching and plays a decisive role. The following is the composition teaching plan of Unit 1, Grade 6. Welcome to reading.

Writing instruction of "I am a member of nature"

First, read the text and understand the writing.

Read the texts "Visiting Friends in the Mountains" and "Grass Worm Village" to understand the author's thoughts and feelings of loving nature, and learn metaphor and personification. Obviously, "a member of nature" refers to all non-artificial things, such as animals, plants, inanimate things or some natural phenomenon.

Second, how to make the imagination reasonable and rich in content?

1. Reproduce your life and reading accumulation. For example, if you want to be a cloud floating in the sky, knowledge about the nature, geography and myths of the sky may enter your imagination.

2. Transplantation and recombination. Sometimes imagination can be grafted and transplanted, moving beautiful scenery to a place, or combining interesting phenomena into one thing, or condensing beautiful qualities into a person. Transplanting people's thoughts and language to other things is personification, and the characteristics between transplanted things are analogy. For example, "the tail of this small tree is stuck in the sky-this is to write a small tree as a puppy." Another example is the Monkey King, which is the product of the imagination of man and monkey.

3. Metaphorical association. Metaphor is the association caused by the similarity between different things.

4. Bold exaggeration. Some things that are impossible in reality can be achieved through exaggeration. For example, "children grow into adults in a few minutes" and "eat a fat man in one bite" and so on.

3. Fantasy, break through time and space. Fantasy is bolder imagination.

Third, talk first, then write.

Student example 1:

I am a gecko.

Although I don't have the handsome wings like Sister Butterfly, the keen eyes like Brother Eagle, the sharp machete like Uncle Mantis and the hard mouth like Aunt Woodpecker, I can drive away mosquitoes and flies and bring happiness to mankind. I am also persistent and selfless. I am a little gecko in the corner.

I am a little gecko. I came to a shabby house and saw a family sleeping. Mosquitoes were biting them, so I climbed over and ate them all. After eating, I went back to my home in the corner and worked as a security guard for them.

I am a little gecko. When I came to the zoo, my tail was accidentally bitten off by a puppy. I screamed in pain and ran like hell. I stayed at home for a few days because there were many mosquitoes and I was full. A few days later, my tail grew back. The owner is going to tear down the house, and I'm going to embark on a new journey.

I am a little gecko. I came to a rich family. They all killed mosquitoes with pesticides, but I didn't have enough to eat! I'm all skin and bones, and I have no choice but to "escape". Nowadays, people are more and more modern. The built house doesn't even have cracks in the walls, and the windows of high-rise buildings don't have my place, let alone go in. I can only wander around. Now that science and technology have advanced, it is even more difficult for us.

I am a little gecko.

Example 2,

I am a grass.

I am a grass, without colorful clothes and colorful hats on my head. When Miss Chun came quietly, she gave me a green skirt to enjoy the warmth of spring in this mythical environment.

I am a grass. When Grandpa Sun first appeared from the East, I was hung with sparkling pearls. At this time, the industrious little bee hummed and flew to my side and said, "Hello, Grass!" " "After a pause, the beautiful little butterfly danced and flew to my side, saying," Grass! Hello. "

I am a grass. When the heavy rain comes, I close my eyes and wait patiently for the heavy rain to give me a good bath. After the heavy rain, my body is spotless, how relaxed and comfortable! At this moment, a group of naughty children came and stepped on me, but I didn't care at all. Only one child said, "How beautiful it is to walk on this grass!" Hearing this sentence, I want to laugh with joy.

One day, a farmer's uncle was driving a flock of sheep. When the sheep saw me, they scrambled to eat. At first, I felt very painful, and I thought, this is over. But another thought, grass is for cattle and sheep, why are you still afraid of pain? So I was eaten. After a few days, I suddenly felt a little taller. I couldn't believe my eyes when I looked at it. I have grown up again, taller than before. I just know that as long as my roots are still there, I can still live. Suddenly, I saw the farmer's uncle driving the sheep. Those sheep seem to be fatter than before.

I am a grass. After several autumn winds, the leaves slowly fall and I gradually turn yellow. An old woman gathered me and my companions to bask in the sun in the yard. A few days later, grandma put me in a laundry basket and poured me into the kitchen. I know my last moment is coming, and I wait quietly. ...

I am a grass, but how happy I am! Sacrifice yourself and bring benefits to others. I am proud of my ability to serve the public and contribute to the people.

Do composition exercises

(A), exchange dialogue, stimulate interest in the introduction

In the oral communication class, the students are very interested in speaking, as if they had walked into the magical nature and integrated into it. Students also have a desire to write and want to write down their unique feelings. In this lesson, we will sort out our unique feelings about nature, choose one of them, expand association and imagination, and then write it down, which will definitely become a masterpiece.

(B), material selection proposition, clear requirements

1, select the topic and determine the materials.

Choose one of the three topics of "becoming a member of nature, entering the sound world and reviewing summer vacation life" to determine the writing materials. There are many things to write during the summer vacation. This time, I mainly praised the great rivers and mountains of the motherland after visiting the scenic spots.

2. Bold ideas and exquisite ideas.

Simply exchange the topic of the text in this group and arouse students' positive thinking.

Teachers and students discussed some topics together:

I am a xx tree; Dialogue between a small tree and a bird; Self-report of snow; The voice of nature; Crickets are singing; Listen to the rain; Swimming XXX ...

3. Exercise requirements. (Projection demonstration)

Learn the writing methods of this group of texts and apply them to your own exercises.

When writing landscape articles, pay attention to choosing a unique perspective and let the wings of imagination fly.

When writing a diary, pay attention to describing the events in detail and express your true feelings.

The narrative is clear, the sentences are fluent, and the feelings are true.

(3), try to write the first draft, to modify.

1, students do problems, teachers tour to guide, and give individual guidance to students with difficulties.

2. Students complete the first draft and make self-revision.

3. Read and modify each other in the group.

(4), reading appreciation, exchange comments

1, each group recommends one or two students, and the teacher makes appropriate adjustments. Students read aloud in three categories to guide students to appreciate.

2. Students exchange opinions.

3. Teacher's comments. In particular, we should affirm the "sense of uniqueness" embodied in the exercise and use association and imagination appropriately.

(5) Revise it again and copy the exercises.

Revise your exercises again and copy them clearly and carefully in your composition book.

10 that day, I walked aimlessly in the Woods alone. From a distance, something is flying towards me in the sky. As I approached, I could see that it was Niels' extraordinary goose-Martin.

Martin flew up to me and said excitedly, "Friend, please help me save Niels!" " "I was shocked and said," What happened to Niels? " "He was kidnapped! "

In this way, I rode on Martin to save Niels. After a thrilling event, Niels was saved. Niels said gratefully, "Thank you for saving me. In return for saving your life, I lent you Martin for seven days. " "Really?" Niels nodded. I was so happy.

"What should I do with that goose?" Hey! Yes, I've been interested in wolves since I was a child, and I've always wanted to see the real wolves on the grassland. It is really God's blessing! The next day, I rode Martin to my dream Mongolian prairie and saw dozens of wolves lying downwind of a large group of antelopes, as if to kill them. So Martin and I carefully observed the wolves not far away. This is a group of Mongolian prairie wolves, covered in golden hair and murderous. They are as big as leopards, half as tall and half as long as wolves in the zoo. The leader is a white wolf king with large gray hair on his neck and chest. At this time, a few impatient wolves are preparing to stir. The White Wolf King growled, "How can you fight without patience? Opportunities are only given to wolves who are patient. " A fierce and arrogant tiger and wolf were shot in front of my eyes, only to see those wolves quietly fall down again.

"When are we going to break in?" A wolf asked.

The white wolf king replied, "When the antelope has finished eating and taken a nap, everyone will lie in wait for my order." As a result, these wolves lay in the snow near the antelope all night. They are motionless, even the voice of white gas is extremely light.

At dawn, the antelope has been urinating all night. When I woke up, Wang Chang, the white wolf, howled: "Woo ... woo ... woo ... woo ... woo ... woo ... woo ... woo ... hoo ... hoo ... hoo ... hoo ... hoo. ..... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... Huh ... At this time, the wolves pounced on the antelope and ate it.

Martin said in surprise, "God, I didn't expect a wolf to do such a bad thing!" " ""This is the wisdom of wolves. Mongols learn from wolves when hunting and fighting. " I said.

On the grassland, we also enjoyed the beautiful scenery of Swan Lake on the border. The lake is green and lush, and the grass is fragrant. Martin and I approached the lake to see the reeds. Just then, two big swans suddenly put their necks on the reed tip, spread their huge wings and flew less than three meters above Martin's head, which made Martin shine at the moment and almost fell off my back.

The short seven days passed quickly. After Martin realized my wish to go to the Mongolian prairie, he sent me home, and then flew out of the window, flying higher and higher and disappearing into the sky.