Mou Ding's revised composition is 600 words.

When mom and dad were young, it would be nice to put on a cotton-padded jacket, but we did. They are really three years old, three years old and three years old. Sometimes there are no new clothes to wear during the Spring Festival! If there is, it is a treasure to wear! Just like now, there is nothing strange about having a dress.

Now we are all dressed beautifully, which may not be enough, but think about the fact that mom and dad used to dress much worse than us.

2. Eat.

When mom and dad were young, it would be nice to eat rice. One year, it was dry here, and my mother's family ate bark and gnawed at roots. Father also eats pig food and is often hungry.

Now we eat well, big fish and big meat, but some people are picky about food, but think about what mom and dad used to eat. Bark, roots, pig food! Can you eat?

3. Live.

When mom and dad were young, it was good enough to live in a bungalow. Several people made a room, all made on the ground, and lived in a small bungalow made at home.

Now think about it, living in a high-rise building, children also have their own rooms, each with an area of more than 80 square meters, and some even have two floors! In the past, the living space hardly exceeded 50 square meters. Look at our new home. There is a living room, two bedrooms, a study and a balcony ... it's so different from before!

4. ok.

When mom and dad are young, riding a bike is good. At that time, all buses were 1 1 (on foot). If mother wants to come here, she must take a slow boat.

Now think about it, almost every family has a motorcycle and a car, and some families have three or four cars. If you want to go far away, you just need to fly. I have never thought about flying before, how can I compare with it now!

5. feel it.

The Party's policy is so good that China, which is so poor, has become rich in a short time. People who came back to China ten years ago didn't recognize it.

Change the composition by 600 words 2: Change (634 words)

I love my hometown. Although it is not as prosperous as a metropolis or picturesque mountains and rivers, I like it very much. I've always liked its changes. I'm afraid I can't finish talking about the changes in Bengbu for days and nights. Narrow down the scope again, and talk about Longhe Road in front of my house, which is neither long nor short.

I have lived in that area since I was a child. When I was a primary school student, I passed there every day after school. Street is the kind of potholed dirt road, which is potholed and dusty on sunny days. But when it rains, the road is muddy and difficult to walk. The clean pants that I just put on are also dirty. At that time, I would fall down if I was not careful. I feel very sick when I see such a muddy road.

Every day there are people on the road, cars, tricycles and bicycles, and there are business people on both sides. Everyone becomes a "commander". Let this side go first for a while, then let that side go first, making the already small place more crowded. It is impossible to go with classmates. The adults said they would build roads, but they didn't know when.

I look forward to the stars and moon every night. Finally, it's "a lot of good things", and I finally look forward to the road builder. The workers dug up the muddy road above, then covered it with stones and battery ash, and finally covered the "big trouble" with thick cement, as if to put on new clothes for it; Yellow street lamps have been installed on the roadside, standing high on both sides of the road, as if two rows of soldiers were guarding day and night. The road is widened, cars come and go on it, and pedestrians are safe to walk on it. Everyone has a happy smile on his face.

Dribs and drabs from hometown reflect the changes of the motherland all the time, and our life is really full of flowers-rising day by day. I must study hard now, become a useful person when I grow up, and build my hometown into a bright pearl on 9.6 million square kilometers of land.