Notes on Reading Sun Shaozhen's Works: Why did he read Zhang Zhi's Singing Willow?

Reading Notes: Why is He's "Singing Willow" good?

Liu Yong (He Zhangzhi)?

Jasper dressed as a tree, hanging down ten thousand green silk tapestries.

I don't know who cut the thin leaves, but the spring breeze in February is like scissors.

In the past, people used to comment on poetry with endless judgments such as "novel conception", "clever metaphor" and "outstanding image". Why is it good? Can you be more specific?

Reading notes:

Use the noble "Jasper" as a metaphor for the trunk of a willow tree;

Use the noble "silk tapestry" to compare the branches of willow trees;

The first sentence is about the trunk, the second sentence is about the branches and the third sentence is about the leaves.

But the third sentence becomes a question, and if it is all declarative sentences, it will be monotonous;

The word "cut" in the third sentence and the word "cut" in the fourth sentence have become natural image associations: cut;

The words "cut" and "cut" in the third and fourth sentences form a unified image with the word "silk tapestry" in the second sentence: thin leaves are cut from noble silk tapestries;

In ancient times, "tailor" belonged to female red and was associated with women. Therefore, in the first sentence, it is a natural and unified association with women-related words such as "(Jony J) Jasper" and "make-up".

Professor Sun did not say what this unified association was. Willow should be described as "an elegant girl in the spring breeze".

The poet pinned his precious feelings on precious objects, which showed the poet's wonder at the beauty of nature.

The third sentence or the fourth sentence of the sonnet must change the sentence structure to avoid monotony.