On the Creation of Zhang Guan Dai Li

This afternoon, the teacher walked onto the platform with some colored paper, and we were puzzled. "Isn't today a composition class?" Why does the teacher bring some colored paper to class? "As we spoke, the teacher wrote a few big letters on the blackboard," Zhang Guan Dai Li ". The teacher asked us to explain our original intention. Wu stood up and said loudly, "This idiom means that a man named Zhang puts a hat on Li's head. "After that, the teacher played a game for us. The rules of the game are: everyone takes three pieces of paper with different colors and writes his name on the blue paper. What to write on the Green Paper? After finishing, the teacher put away the little pieces of paper. The game has begun. The teacher asked three students to read the words on a small piece of paper. A student reads where, a student reads his name or the name of an animal, and another student reads what he is doing. Lei Zenian studied Li Simin, Liu Siren studied the toilet in Pinghetang, and Yang Ruhan studied eating. Li Simin eats in the toilet of Pinghetang. We burst into laughter and the whole classroom was noisy. The composition of the sixth grade in primary school is Zhang Guan Dai Li's composition. I'm telling you, the fun is just beginning! Read Hu's name again. Liu Si studied in the United States and Yang Ruhan studied arson. Ah! Yawei Hu! How dare you set fire to America? I don't know who said such a sentence and made us laugh. Hu's face suddenly turned red, like a big ripe apple, and my stomach was hurt by laughter. I pointed to Hu and kept laughing, and the names were read out one by one. Finally, the game is over. Through the game played by the teacher, I understand a truth-

I will hand out a piece of paper about Zhang Guan Dai Li's composition, and everyone will prepare a pen and paper! "Suddenly, everyone was awakened." Teacher, why do you need paper? "Some students irrepressible curiosity, hurriedly asked. What medicine did the teacher buy in the gourd? I think hard. Suddenly, an idea flashed, and I firmly grasped it: Zhang Guan Dai Li! I told my colleagues what I thought. Unexpectedly, he didn't call. I tried my best to drool before he climbed out of the fog. As expected, the teacher asked us to write about people, places, expressions (psychology) and actions.

I immediately understood the teacher's meaning, no matter what, it is "the old horse knows the way"! Besides, I've been in combat.

I laughed to myself.

Looking around, someone bit the pen; Some roll their eyes; Some think hard; The rest is puzzling.

After a while, everyone wrote, and everyone had new actions.

Some cover their mouths and smile, thinking that their answers are clever; Some laughed recklessly, thinking that their answers would make everyone incredible ... Let's start, read by four delegates.

A string of laughter and a string of answers popped out of the representative's mouth.

Everyone burst into laughter.

Some patting the table; Some are dancing; Some burst into laughter; Others are sad because they are pointed out; Some worry, afraid of being pointed out; Some people worry too much, as if we are the judges of fate ... The funniest thing is: Ouyang frowns in the toilet and goes boating. Everyone laughs the most, jump in front and lean back, but they are not happy to shout! "Zhang Guan Dai Li", you always appear in a mysterious and funny way. You always wear a mysterious veil and always keep fresh.

Zhang Guan Dai Li wrote a composition, and everyone should be familiar with the word Zhang Guan Dai Li Zhang Guan Dai Li, which is a metaphor for talking nonsense without analysis.

Today, I met a very funny thing.

My friend's little sister, Xiao Lian, whose mother is not at home today, I want her to help take care of her two little sisters who live in her house.

Lian Xiao is only five years old and can't even take care of himself. How can she take care of her two little sisters? "Oh, what bad luck! They peed on my hand! " Xiaolian immediately ran back to the house and got a diaper. "They were only born for two months, and they have to wear hats in such a hot day. What a pity! " Xiaolian, who just helped them change diapers, said.

Seeing so much sweat on the hat, Xiaolian immediately went to get a tiger hat that mom and mom Li bought for their daughter.

One says "Zhang" and the other says "Wang". Xiaolian didn't see it. She put a hat on the child surnamed Zhang that should be worn by the child surnamed Wang, and put a hat on the child surnamed Wang that should be worn by the child surnamed Zhang.

Coincidentally, she was most afraid of trouble and said ... "Xiao Lian immediately ran back to the house. This is my childhood, and I can't even take care of myself ... "They were only born for two months.

"I put my hat on backwards. She is afraid of trouble. How unlucky? " "Ah. ? "。

One says "Zhang" and the other says "Wang". I didn't see it. This is really funny: speak concisely and accurately, don't talk too much nonsense, put a hat on the child surnamed Zhang, then the child surnamed Wang should wear a hat, so? ""I just found out that people still have to wear hats on such a hot day.

Little sister of a friend of mine-Xiaolian? "Alas, but met a particularly funny thing? Ah: "Laughing Lotus. Zhang Guan Dai Li Zhang Guan Dai Li is a word that everyone should be familiar with. Why do you squat on the ground after changing diapers quickly? At first, I was a little confused.

I saw this scene.

Lillian, who just turned five, I ran over and asked her! Lian Xiao, who just finished changing their diapers, said that everything she said would be "compressed" to the simplest, and her mother was not at home today.

So am I today.

Just right? "I don't understand, ask her to help take care of two little sisters who live in her house.

Don't say that.

Seeing that there was so much sweat on the hat, I put them on the hat. Xiaolian immediately went to get a tiger hat that mom and mom Li bought for her daughter. How can she take care of her two little sisters? They peed on my hand, and they really have a little idea of bing Xin, which is a metaphor for talking nonsense without analysis This is the first time I heard someone explain the word "Zhang Guan Dai Li" so simply and treat it so simply, but after laughing, I thought about it in turn.

Zhang Guan Dai Li gulped down the dates and wrote a composition of 200 to 300 words. The sky outside is still so dark, with a faint light, as if overwhelming.

The students in the room are still very anxious, and sweat is running down their foreheads.

It's almost time to hand in the papers, so I have to read the topic in one breath, think about it a little, and then fly between the papers.

Dull * * * arrived as scheduled, so I had to helplessly watch the teacher "hand in" his own test paper before completing the answer.

The students came with a smile, talking about the topic that they regretted just now, and suddenly realized.

Such a simple set of questions makes me think so complicated. It turns out that I read the question wrong ... It's really arrogant, but at this point, no matter what I do, it's useless.

Is it okay?

Zhang Guan Dai Li I recently read a book entitled Flowers Bloom with Sound.

It was written by an elder sister named Wang Anyi.

Everyone knows that there is a famous writer named Wang Anyi. Her parents gave her this name because they wanted this big sister to be better than Wang Anyi. This book contains many of her articles. Let me introduce the one I think is the best: Lei Feng.

"Lei Feng" is mainly about: Uncle Lei Feng did a lot of good things and made a story of "a good train".

After reading this story, I was deeply moved.

Although Uncle Lei Feng has passed away, his selfless dedication has been passed down from generation to generation.

? ? Think of what I read in the newspaper last time: a robber robbed property in public on the road. He has a knife on him.

An uncle bravely stood up and argued with the robbers.

As a result, the uncle was stabbed several times by robbers, and he was stabbed to the key position.

My uncle died for justice.

I know from this incident that adults often say that there are many bad people in the world, but I don't think so.

Although there are many bad guys, there are more good guys.

? ? There are many living Lei Feng in the world, waiting for people to discover them.

Uncle Lei Feng is not an official, but there are actually a lot of corrupt officials who steal money from ordinary people for their own enjoyment, but don't work for them. Naturally, people who can't open the lid of the pot are far worse than uncle Lei Feng, who cries and doesn't do it every day, is ineffective and complains.

I still remember: the grandfather of a poor county drives a Rolls Royce everywhere every day, while the villagers, whose houses are in danger, are all sallow and emaciated. They can only eat bran at ordinary times and only eat meat once or twice a year, or fat.

Where's grandpa county? Naturally, people in counties and cities are very different: I am tired of eating meat every day, even abalone.

I think the behavior of the county magistrate is very irritating. People eat chaff and she eats meat. He drives around in a Rolls Royce. People's houses are dangerous! This world! ? ? Think about yourself again: I usually pick up the scraps of paper on the ground and often help others.

Although there is still a long way to go with uncle Lei Feng, I have decided to start from now on: help others do what they can, without asking for anything in return! I will definitely work hard! ? ? Mom's words: After reading this article written by Cher in school class, Ma Xue couldn't help it.

Cher has written so long in a short time, and her language is fluent and full of compassion, which is really hard to get.

Although a little arrogant and irrelevant, in my opinion, there is also the cuteness of a child her age.

The original text has not been revised, and it will be a witness to the progress of Cher's writing level in the future.

What's the difference between high school composition and junior high school composition? How to write a good senior high school composition, the only difference is that the grade and number of words of the composition have improved, and the style is unlimited, so there is more room for free play.

The following focuses on how to write a good senior high school composition: 1. Intention: Abandon the old and seek the new.

The idea of writing is the most taboo. Not only can it not arouse readers' interest in reading, but it will make people bored.

Reviewers like those creative works, which seem to bring a breeze in the hot summer and make people feel relaxed and happy.

In order to innovate, we must think about the problem from a new angle and at a higher level.

For example, in 2008, the perfect composition of Tianjin College Entrance Examination "Humanity": Some people constantly "struggle" for power and status, so that they are greedy-humanity; Some people commit themselves to the powerful and give up their dignity-humanity for money and material things; .

Throughout the ages, the vast sea of people, meanness has become the passport of the despicable, but noble has become the epitaph of the noble.

However, greatness is great because those ancestors who are admired by later generations have transcended the barrier of "humanity" and moved towards eternity.

Different from ordinary candidates, the author focuses on "human nature" such as "emotions". Secondly, he saw the opposite of human nature, such as meanness, greed and selling his soul for prosperity. He demonstrated the weakness of human nature by admitting and denying it, and proposed that only by "transcending human nature" can life move towards eternity.

The text examines "human nature" from the perspective of personal dignity and life value. This article is very innovative and has a high style, so I can get my ideal score.

2. Planning, many candidates are influenced by "true feelings" in the planning layout, and the narrative is generally divided into three paragraphs, beginning-after-end.

The discussion is also divided into three parts, what should be done-what should those people do-so what.

Similarly, it is quite boring. The ancients said: The layout should have Qian Shan's view of valleys, not a list.

The composition of college entrance examination will be refreshing only if it is innovative. This year's examination syllabus in Beijing places special emphasis on "fresh materials".

It deserves everyone's attention.

3. Material selection: The most taboo in writing is deliberate. Many candidates choose story materials from history as soon as they put pen to paper, but often because the research on historical knowledge is not deep enough, the materials are easy to understand, and even some low-level mistakes appear.

In fact, emotional compositions can often show a good level.

Therefore, candidates should find more, summarize more and learn more about some hot spots in their lives.

This is of great benefit to your material selection.

4. Details, many candidates write articles without paying attention to the requirements for details, and even the paragraph level of the article is unfounded. The article has no structure and inappropriate details. The details are not detailed and should not be lengthy. Often in this kind of marking, for example, some students will use a few paragraphs to summarize the examples cited in their argumentative papers. One paragraph introduces a person, and everyone who introduces it knows, "An example that everyone on earth knows.

5. Style, college entrance examination composition generally requires unlimited topics, rather than asking everyone to write an article "untitled". In general, students like to choose argumentative papers, especially in some schools in Beijing, where teachers ask students to write argumentative papers.

Can middle school students write an argumentative essay with clear views, novel materials and persuasiveness? This problem has not been considered much. In fact, middle school students generally can't see the problems to some extent, and they can't see the depth of some problems. In addition, there are some reasons such as experience. For example, common, insufficient arguments and unreasonable arguments. This is a common phenomenon, and it takes great effort to blindly ask students to write argumentative papers.

A good argumentative essay is not as simple as "quoting, discussing, linking and concluding".

1. Follow the basic procedure. The basic procedures of composition writing are: examining the topic, drafting the topic, outlining and writing.

Examining questions is to ask the proposer's intention.

In principle, the level of examination is related to the comprehensive quality of students, but there are also some skills in this process. For example, candidates should read the materials and requirements of Chu's article word for word.

Try to find out the keywords in the material, because those keywords play an important role in expressing the author's intention and the requirements of the article, and try to reflect the meaning of those keywords in the written article.

2. The content is true, and it is forbidden to write a narrative on the front. Even if it is fiction, it should give people a real feeling, which comes from life as much as possible, except for short stories and fables.

When writing an argumentative essay, try not to use words like "I think, I think", because these words will cause some teachers' disgust. Writing an article is to better express your meaning, which should be recognized by everyone. For example, the appearance of some words such as "I think, I think" will make people feel that the author can raise his position and cause his disgust.

And when writing, we should grasp the logic of the article and ask ourselves more in our hearts. Why do you say that? What kind of topic are you going to do? How can I express my good mood? Through what channels? What kind of sentence patterns are used to express opinions? How to divide paragraphs around the center? Which statement can effectively express the center of the article? Wait a minute.

This can increase the quality of the article and make the center focused and prominent.

3. Reduce unnecessary mistakes, such as keeping the paper as clean as possible. You don't necessarily need to write well, but you must write carefully and try not to have obvious sick sentences.

What does Zhang Guan Dai Li mean by Zhang Guan Dai Li? Driver: (Hearing footsteps, he looked up with unbearable pain on his face. ) It hurts ... Dad: (Bends down and asks sympathetically) What's the matter? Driver: (voice trembling) I didn't notice. I stepped on the broken glass, and the glass went into my feet. It hurts so much that I can't go home! Scene: Dad runs into Lu Xun's house. Soon, he came out with medicine and gauze. One of them is squatting, and the other is kneeling. Dad took tweezers to clip out broken glass for the driver, and Lu Xun took medicine to pack the driver. Driver: (reluctantly standing up and saying gratefully) My home is not far from here. I can help it home. Thank you very much, two kind gentlemen. Scene: Lu Xun took out some money and gave the medicine and bandage to the driver. Lu Xun: (stuffing money, medicine and bandages into the driver's hand) Take it and go back to rest! Driver: (Bowing assiduously) Thank you. I really don't know how to thank you! Scene: The rickshaw puller limped away. (Step down) Scene: Looking at Zhou Ye, he couldn't help touching the tip of his nose, clutching his stomach and having a cold war. Scene: Dad and Lu Xun are back. Zhou Ye: (scratching his scalp, wondering) Uncle, how can that rickshaw puller run barefoot on the road? Lu Xun: (Seriously) The present society is too dark and cruel. Those poor people will suffer, while those rich people eat and drink regardless of others' lives. Zhou Ye: (tilting his head for a moment) What do you mean? Lu Xun: (sighs deeply and puts his hand on Zhou Ye's shoulder) You don't understand ... Zhou Ye: (looks up at Lu Xun carefully). ......

My parents are ordinary workers.

My father is not tall, and my mother is a little fat.

But I always believe that they are the most beautiful people in the world.

I remember once, I finished my math exam.

I did badly in the exam and dared not show it to my parents.

Dad saw my mood and asked me: Did you fail in the exam again today? Can you show it to me? I blushed, lowered my head and reluctantly handed in my test paper.

Dad looked at it carefully for a while, then pointed at me and said, why are you so careless? You must have been careless when you were reading the question. You were completely embarrassed.

Finally, he pointed out where I was wrong and what I should do.

My mother also comforted me that it is not too sad to fail once. The key is to know where you are wrong and not to make the same mistake again.

Another time, I had a cold and a fever.

My parents eagerly carried me to the hospital.

After seeing the doctor, the doctor gave me an injection.

My mother is taking my temperature and touching my forehead.

And stayed in my ward all night.

Actually, I know they are tired after a day's work.

I was particularly moved to see my parents' anxious expressions.

I am proud that I have such a good father and mother! They will always be my favorite people!

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