Help me revise and comment on the romance of the Three Kingdoms.

I feel that I have read the preface written by Mr Nie Gannu. Many years ago, I saw that the three countries of Yuelu Bookstore had read similar paragraphs, and I felt deja vu.

The structure of the article is still a bit messy, the content is still a bit superficial, and some sentences are not well chosen. I suggest you concentrate on one or two key people to express your views in detail, and don't talk about everyone in a hurry. This will make you feel superficial, general and not deep enough. After reading and writing, it is impossible to cover everything, especially the famous works like the Three Kingdoms, which contain too much content. If you want to cover everything, it will only be superficial.

For example, the preface written by Mr. Nie Gannu for The Romance of the Three Kingdoms focuses on Cao Cao, Guan Yu and Zhuge Liang. In this way, as long as we go deeper, the content will not be thin. As for the fact that Fu does not conform to the historical facts, there is no need to delve into it, because your post-reading feeling is the post-reading feeling of The Romance of Three Kingdoms, not the post-reading feeling of The Romance of Three Kingdoms.

The following will help you change the article:

You don't need too many introductory words, you can compress a little on the original basis. Also, the word "dusty" in the first paragraph was changed to "dusty". It is suggested that the first paragraph be introduced by Lin Jiangxian to compare literature and art.

There is no need to summarize the following contents. As we all know, we will not waste space. Directly say that there are many successful people, and then highlight two or three to start evaluating.

Both Cao Cao and Liu Bei are negotiable, but your opinion is too superficial. Don't just summarize their deeds, you should first think about what they deserve your praise and criticism, and then simply summarize typical cases and express your own views. For example, Cao Cao, if you say that he is a doer and has military talent, tell us about his crusade against Dong Zhuo, the reign of the emperor, and how the battle of Guandu defeated the strong with the weak. You can also talk about Cao Cao's tolerance. His "Looking at the Sea" is a good proof. In addition, he didn't kill Liu Bei and let Guan Yu go. Of course, you can also criticize him for being cunning, suspicious and cruel. There are many such things. For example, after killing the Lv Boshe family, the classic sentence "I'd rather teach me to be negative than ask everyone to be negative", such as killing people in my dreams, making excuses, making amends by breaking my hair and so on. And Liu Bei is by no means pure kindness. He also has a deep talent. You should see the essence of kindness. For example, when people suggested that he should succeed to the throne, he pretended not to. Later, when someone talked to him alone, he showed eagerness. In short, don't belittle Liu Bei too much and don't praise Liu Bei too much.

Zhang Fei doesn't advise you to write. If you still want to write, you can praise him for being crude and detailed, affectionate and righteous, cool and straightforward, and you can also criticize him for being violent and reckless.

Guan Wen stems from his loyalty and courage. Loyalty and righteousness have a thousand miles to ride alone, benevolence and righteousness have Huarong Road to release Cao Cao, and bravery and warm wine to chop Hua Xiong are all very classic deeds. Because he is deified too much, you should not praise him blindly, but also dialectically see his arrogance.

Zhuge Liang can also write, but don't be limited to his intelligence. Mr. Lu Xun said that Luo Guanzhong "looks like Zhuge Liang's wisdom and is close to a demon", so you should dialectically see that Zhuge Liang's wisdom has been deified and never praise it blindly. In addition, Zhuge Liang's "do your best, die before you die" is also worthy of your praise, which can better show his personality charm. I suggest you look at two "models" before writing him.

Finally, we can sum it up. Don't write poetry, it doesn't matter. It doesn't make sense. The ending should be strong, and more literary talent is the best. Your writing is too popular and out of step.

I suggest you read carefully the preface written by Mr. Nie Gannu to Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which is helpful for you to evaluate the characters. In addition, be careful not to swear when writing. Read it by yourself after writing, and change it until the clauses are fluent.